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Home»Fan Fiction»Meri Manjil Maa ki Sapna Aur Anjan Rishtey Mae Bandh Ho Gayi Meri Kahani Part-15 (Veer met his Yam Raj Mama)
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Meri Manjil Maa ki Sapna Aur Anjan Rishtey Mae Bandh Ho Gayi Meri Kahani Part-15 (Veer met his Yam Raj Mama)

Sakash.By Sakash.September 24, 201732 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thank u so much.Thanks for ur Support and Love.
All ur comments made my day.A warm welcome to my FF.

I met u all after a long time!I missed u all a lot…

Note : Today’s part will start from Veer, before Kaanchi’s marriage,Veer suppose to act like Pragya’s boy friend before Rahul And Saanchi suppose to act like Pragya… Unfortunately Veer strucked in his Hostel room.
So for 2 days no Kaanchi scenes.
The story run around Pragya and veer for my next 2 parts.

The story starts :
Veer : Yaar yae door bhi abhi lock hona tha kya?

(Veer : Yaar!Now only this door must lock or What?)

Veer : I can’t give up,there Saanchi,Pragya,
Isha r waiting for me.I must open this door.

Veer ran back and suppose to hit the door saying JAI BAJRANGH BALI…

Just then Garav came and open the door.

Due to force Veer’s head hit to the wall.
And he falls on Ground.His hand too get fractured.

Just then Pragya,Isha too came and witnessed whole incident.They were shocked to the core seeing their CUTE PRANKSTER VEER’S condition.

(Pragya in mind : Why i am feeling hurt?
That too seeing USS NALAYK Veer’s condition!I never feel this before?He got hurt why my eyes become wet?I can’t see him like this?But why my heart feeling like this?)

Isha called Pragya more than 20 times.

Pragya is not in this world.She strucked in her own thinking.Pragya came back to the world hearing Veer’s hurt voice.

Pragya rushed towards Veer and scold Garav…

Pragya : Abhae…wo…Garav dekh kya rahi ho bae tumhari Maasi yaa Chachi ki wait kar rahi ho kya?Chal SDCH Hospital mae?

(Pragya : Abhae…wo…Garav U r waiting for ur Maasi or Chachi or what?Move fast we must take veer to SDCH hospital?)

Garav,Isha : Abhae…wo…we suppose to say this from minutes…U r scolding us…

Pragya : Sorry…Sorry…

Garav,Pragya,Isha rushed him to hospital.

SDCH Hospital :

Pragya to Veer :

Pragya : Abhae…wo…Itna jaldi kya thi bae  door kolnae ki?Thodae dher rukh nahi sakthi kya?

(Pragya : Abhae…wo…Why that much fast to open the door bae?Can’t u wait for few minutes?)

Pragya asked Veer while cleaning his head with cotton…

Veer : Sirf tumharae liyae?

(Veer : Just for u?)

Pragya : What???

Veer : Yes…AaaaaaaHhhhhhh it’s paining.

Veer hugged Pragya in pain…Pragya freezed for a second…After some time.She came back to her senses.

Pragya : Veer just listen to me,U will be fine…

Veer calmed by Pragya.

Pragya dressed his wound,She gave some injections,and At last she tie  bandage…

Just then some goons with Pragya’s father came,

Pragya’s father name as Naveen Yadhav.

Naveen Yadhav kicked room door.Veer stood up and Pragya in shock seeing his father…

Naveen Yadhav : Pragya beta…So he is my DAMADH JI…!!!

Pragya : Wo…Papa…Wo…

Goons moved towards Veer.Pragya scared.

To the shock,
Naveen Yadhav : Wah beta!Kya naam hai tera?

Veer : Veer Malohtra…

Naveen Yadhav : Beta i am bahut depressed…U r so uperb…

Veer : What?

Pragya : Papa saying that he is impressed
…And u r superb…

Veer laughs…Just then Naveen Yadhav put Gun on Veer’s head and says,

Naveen Yadhav : One shot ur head will blast like ater millon…

Veer : Uncle ji…it’s water melon…

Naveen Yadhav laughs and says i am joking Beta…

Naveen Yadhav : Now what r u waiting for?Now laugh…

Goons laugh…

Veer : Wah Uncle ji…What a joke?It’s From super to duper to bumper hit and Veer laughs.

Naveen Yadhav pat him on shoulder…

He fired in air saying…HE IS MY DHAMADH JI…It’s Pinal…

Veer hide under bench and corrected him saying it’s Final…

Precap : Veer : Uska Baap mera yam raj bankar naach rahae hai…Baap aisi tho beti shaadi kae baadh…Mein tho gayi seedha yam poori mae?

(Veer : Her Dad came like Yaam raj and dancing in my life…Her Dad like that means his Daughter after marriage?I am gone directly to yam poori…)

Veer : Noooooooooo….Mata Rani apna baccha veer ko bacchao…

(Veer : Noooooooo…Jai Mata Rani… Please save ur child Veer from that Yaam mama)…

I hope u all liked this…Please give ur valuable comments…I hope my FF brings a beautiful smile on ur faces..

Did u all like this part?
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    32 Comments

    1. Amnaa on September 24, 2017 4:15 am

      Sweet…. Nice to read from u …. Update the next part soon

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 9:45 am

        Hi Amnaa.I am glad u liked it dear.That’s so sweet of u dear.I will post ASAP…

    2. Anuradha123 on September 24, 2017 6:27 am

      Wow wonderful

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 9:47 am

        Hi Anuradha.Thank u so much for commenting dear.A warm welcome to my FF.

    3. Sakash. on September 24, 2017 8:56 am

      Sakash really u r an Amazing and Tremendous writer.Ur writings are so apathetic from others
      Ur writings r just magical.Superb update dear Post next ASAP…And yes ur update bring a beautiful smile on my face.
      Yaam raaj mama…So funny and Superb i laughed reading whole update…Bye Take care.

      • Sakash. on September 24, 2017 9:03 am

        So sorry all of u…This comment was given by my naughty sister.She don’t know all the processor how to comment?So she gave comment from my account.So sorry…Don’t feel weird…I am not that much great to praise myself…Sorry once again behalf of my sister.

    4. Priyanshi on September 24, 2017 10:44 am

      Good to see you back. You nailed it brother.
      Ye to super se bhi uper tha.
      Precap seems to be interesting.
      After reading precap I can’t stop my laughing.??????????????
      Pls update soon bohot wait karwaya aapne.
      Ab jldi se next wala episode update karke apni choti behen ka request jldi pura kariye

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:21 am

        Hi Priyanshi.I am so glad u liked it dear.I am so glad my FF brings a beautiful smile on ur face.
        I will update soon dear.Yes i awaited u much so sorry for that but i will post soon.My sweet sissy’s request accepted.

    5. Abhilasha on September 24, 2017 10:59 am

      Oh god u made my day by making me laugh to hell….seriously my stomach is aching ….and initially I got surprised that how is this possible that u comment urself …ur sis …..hehe….my bro is also too naughty like this!loved ur updates!!

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:25 am

        Hi Abhi.I am so glad u liked it dear.And i am so glad my FF made u laugh.Oh god ur brother and my sister both r naughty…Baap rae mera chotti behan naa…Oh god she is cute and as well as naughty…

    6. niyaaa on September 24, 2017 11:19 am

      Hey saksh super duper epi hehehe bechara veer gaya kaam se and pragya k dad ki english ne to o my mata kar di sach me …. Post nxt asap dear i can’t wait any more

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:34 am

        Hi Niyaa.I am so glad Niyaa u liked it dear. Thank u so much for commenting dear.Yes Veer has gone and Pragya’s father English will be funny.I will post ASAP dear…

    7. Ashnita on September 24, 2017 11:25 am

      wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome and beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond everything waiting for next part

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:36 am

        Hi Ashnita.I am so glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much for commenting.All ur words made my day and it means a lot to me dear.I will post ASAP dear…

    8. riyarocks on September 24, 2017 12:26 pm

      finally bhai, u r back……….wow, veer ka yamraj mamu ke saath encounter…….hehe……..will be really nice to read it………..I’m really looking forward to it(will it be somewhat like as in the movie..Vaah!life ho to aisi????I really liked the movie a lot………..)can’t wait for the nxt one……..pls bhai, update nxt episode asap……..

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:45 am

        Hi Riya.Yes dear i am back.I am so glad u liked it and enjoyed it dear.Yes Yaam raj mamu baandh baaja dhega veer ka!Actually it’s my thought dear…Not from movie…I will post next ASAP…

    9. Alia on September 24, 2017 12:41 pm

      Nice

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:47 am

        Hi Alia.Thank u dear.

    10. Anee on September 24, 2017 1:32 pm

      He hehe….yamraj really hilarious….ur sis is really naughty…..but sakash…USS ne comment toh bilkul sahi kiya….even I agree with her…..keep rock dear..

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:52 am

        Hi Anee…I am glad u liked it dear.Yamraj yes it’s funny…And yes my sister is too naughty sorry for that dear and Thank u so much ur words means lot to me…

    11. Ashwinee on September 24, 2017 2:41 pm

      Hilarious update Bhai…and your choti chirayya is too naughty (I know… after this meri bajegi )

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:54 am

        Hi Ashu.I am glad u liked it and thank u so much for commenting.Yes meri chotti chiraya bahuti naughty hai.Tum sahi kaha dear and nahi bajega…

    12. Moonlight25 on September 24, 2017 8:22 pm

      Bhaiya …..finally you are back……your epi was superb……too good….awesome…..splendid….excellent….just loved it….keep writing more and with the precap…i can’t stop laughing…..update ASAP………take care

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 10:57 am

        Hi Tania dear.Yes i am back.All ur words means lot to me dear.I am glad u liked it.Thank u so much.I will give my best dear.
        I am glad my FF made u laugh whole heartedly.I will post ASAP…Take care…

    13. Divya on September 24, 2017 8:42 pm

      Bhaiyya I missed u a lot ok episode was awesome super mind blowing fantastic and sooo cutee update soon can’t wait

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 11:00 am

        Hi Divya dear.I missed u too lot my dear sweet sissy.Thank u so much dear.All ur words made my day dear.I will post ASAP…

    14. Dhruti on September 25, 2017 12:48 am

      superb Sakash finally u back hmm…this ff was super duper specially pragya’s father and veer’s conversation and precap is interesting update next one soon….. bye bye

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 11:02 am

        Hi Dhruti.Yes i am back dear.I am glad u liked it and enjoyed it dear.I am so glad u liked the conversation between Veer and Pragya’s father.

      • Sakash. on September 25, 2017 11:02 am

        Hi Dhruti.Yes i am back dear.I am glad u liked it and enjoyed it dear.I am so glad u liked the conversation between Veer and Pragya’s father.I will post ASAP…

    15. Jessicca on September 29, 2017 4:17 am

      Finally you’re back… Sorry for commenting late.. But bro honestly i love your ff a lot.. It’s one of my most favourite ff.. And this part was super duper amazing.. Keep going

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 11:42 am

        Hi Jessica.Yes i am back.No need to say sorry dear…U comment now it means a lot to me…I am so glad u like my FF…And u said, it is one of among ur favorite FF…I am so glad dear…

        And i already updated next part dear…If u got time u can glance once…

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/meri-manjil-maa-ki-sapna-part-16-veer-married-pragya/

      • Jessicca on September 30, 2017 3:31 am

        Thanks bhaiyya for the link..

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