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Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

Meri jaan tumme hai (os)

PrettypreetiBy PrettypreetiOctober 21, 201620 Comments4 Mins Read
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I m again here with a new os.it is my fifth os.Thank u for loving my first four os.now read this.

Our sumo was standing on beach. .She was seeing the beauty of sea.A boy comes and hugs her from back.
Sumo:shravan.
The boy is shravan.
Shravan:yess sumo.
Sumo:jaad hai kaise tumne mujhe is beech pr propose kiya tha.
Shravo:nhi.bilkul nhi.
Sumo:shravooooo!!!how bad.
Shravo:bilkul jaad hai my chipkali woh yehi jagga hai yaha pr meri zindagi tabah ho gyi thi.
Sumo:shravan!!leave me.
She brokes that hug and goes to other side.
Shravo:oh ms suman malhotra rudho mt hmse woh suhana pal tha and I cant ever forget it.
Sumo:OK 1 sharat PR.
Shravo:why????
Sumo:u have to propose me again as u did that time.
Shravo:what??phirse aafat ghale dhalon.
Sumo:shravan.!!!!!
Shravo:sorryyy joking.
Sumo:so propose.
Shravo:OK.
Sumo: start.
Shravo:oh miss suman malhotra noo noo that time tiwari .again.oh miss suman tiwari tujhe dekha tu mujhe ho gyi bulne ki bimaari,kya tum hmesha ke liye banogi hmari.
Suman I love uuu.will u marry me??
Sumo:aww nooo.
Shravo:u r already.
Sumo:shravo u still remember.
Sumo goes and kisses on his cheek.

After some days.Shravan was sitting in office.He got a parcel.he was shocked seeing something.
He was in dilemma not knowing what to do.
Shravo:yeh sumo ko pta nhi chalna chiye.but mai uske sath aisa nhi kr skta.we both have to seperate
He went home.he get in fight with sumo.he was not happy but he did.sumo was not able to understand what suddenly happened but she controlled herself.
Now shravo fought daily with sumo.sumo cried but she loved shravo and never wanted 2 go away from him.
But shravo want her to stay away for her happiness.
He one day brought divorced pprs.
Sumo:shravan yeh kya hai.
Shravo:I m tired listening u.I m fed up.I don’t want to stay with u.u r a problem for me.
Sumo:shravan!!!wht r u saying u can’t do this.I love u.
Shravo:just shut up sign the papers.
Sumo:shravo we could discuss..
Shravo:just sign I don’t want to listen.
Sumo: say this looking in my eyes that u don’t love me.wht is issue .u r not telling me.u r lieing to me.
Shravo:don’t say anything.
Sumo:I want ans.at least pls tell me the truth.I m ur wife.
Shravo:I don’t love u.
Sumo:u r lieing say this looking towards me.
Shravo was not able to say.
Sumo:why quiet .pls tell me truth.
Shravo was quiet.
Sumo:tell me..
Shravo:tum bs chup rho and sign pprs.
Sumo: tell me truth.
Shravo:I can’t.
Sumo:u have to.
Shravo:i want divorce.
Sumo:I want answer.
One voice comes.
Voice:mai btata hoon.
Shravo:ram sir u here.but u can’t .
Ram:I can.listen sumo ur husband is a undercover agent.
Sumo:wht)??
Shravo:sir what u did.it was not in our rules.
Ram:but wht u did u r breaking ur relation.
Shravo:for my country I could do anything.
Ram:pr suman ko.
Sumo:shravo yeh kya hai.
Ram:actually he agent he was in mission when he fall in love with u.now he have to go for a mission related to terrioism and if they got to know about family relations ur life can be in endangered.
Sumo:(emotional)shravo itni c baat for u anything.
Shravo:sumo but.
Sumo keeps finger on his lip.
Sumo hugs him.
Sumo:I love u.
Shravo:me too.

After some days shravo went to mission.sumo was afraid.everyday she had nightmares.she was not having enough relief.
One day sumo was standing on beech (same beach). She was remembering her moments spend with shravo.
One boy comes and hugs her from back.
Sumo knows he was shravo .she was overjoyed.
Sumo:shravo.
Shravo:sumo.
Sumo:I know u will be back.
Shravo kisses her for head.
Sumo:shravo I m proud to be wife of u.
Shravo:and I as husband of my wife.
Sumo:I m so happy u r back.
Shravo:ha tumne toh soch liya hoga ki shravan.
Sumo:dhravan shutup not a word more like this.how would I live without u meri jaan toh tumme hai.
They hug each other.
The end.

Do u all like this.

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    20 Comments

    1. vaishu on October 22, 2016 6:27 am

      Very nice frd

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:44 pm

        Thko vaishu friend.
        Lots of luv.
        Take care

    2. Maria on October 22, 2016 7:49 am

      Short and sweet?????
      Love you..
      Vaise what’s your age? Because you call me di Na so I want to know☺☺

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:44 pm

        Dido thanks.
        I m 13.
        In Feb 14.
        Lots of luv

    3. sona on October 22, 2016 8:50 am

      Hey…
      Preeti..
      One more OS..?????
      Thanks ya….??
      Aaj kal tho ffs bahut kam hogayi hai..??
      So..I’m very happy reading ur OS???

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:45 pm

        Aww di thanks.
        I m happy to make u happy.
        Haan .
        Thanks again.
        Lots of luv

    4. ufaaq on October 22, 2016 9:34 am

      hey my bhangre wali whats up?????
      kese h tu?????
      tere 5 ke 5 shots ere amaziiiiiiinnnggggggggggggggg sorry agar maaine kisi pr comment nae kiaa sorry for that han
      they were much more than amazing
      awesome
      miss u yar
      love u
      tc

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:47 pm

        Hey my ufffu merit bhangra queen.
        Oh raabba thnko tu jaan le li.
        I m happy reading ur comment .
        Be with us.
        Alwaysssssssssssss
        Lots of luv

    5. AnShIta on October 22, 2016 11:25 am

      Hey di!
      LOVELY is the only word that I can think of and possibly say after reading this OS!
      It was soooo cute!
      Loved it!
      Loads of love!?????

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:47 pm

        Hey ans such a lovely compliment.
        My sisso I m happy reading ur comment.
        Thanks.
        Lots of love

    6. WeirdSister on October 22, 2016 3:22 pm

      amazingggggg preeti..
      Love ya..
      ??

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:48 pm

        Hey weirdy.
        Thanks ya.
        I m happy u liked.
        Lots of luv

    7. Fatimagulesarfraz on October 22, 2016 3:23 pm

      Hey prettypreeti !!!!!
      All i can say is this was just wayyy tooooooooooooo CUTE nd BEAUTIFUL one ???????????????????
      Great job ✌✌?
      Take care
      ????

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 4:49 pm

        Hey fati.
        Thanks dear.
        I m glad u commented.
        Thnko.
        Lots of luv

    8. sami on October 22, 2016 7:41 pm

      omg it was so sweet cute nad romantic
      don’t tell me u r 13
      I m 16 and cant even imagine of writing such amazing os
      love u
      sermistha

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 9:43 pm

        Oh di its a big compliment.
        No j can.
        Thnko.
        Lots of luv

    9. Fatarajo on October 22, 2016 9:49 pm

      This is too good Pri loved it to the core

      • Prettypreeti on October 22, 2016 11:00 pm

        Hey jo thanks a lot.
        Lots of luv.
        Take care

    10. Ariana on October 23, 2016 8:04 am

      Awww… Cuppy sry so much for a late comment. I’m bad girl 🙁
      But the os was so cute!!! When Shr started being rude with Sumo, my heart shrank so much, but when u there, y would I worry? Ending toh happy tha after all! Beautiful
      pls make more os even if I comment late
      u rock
      love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
      take care

      • Prettypreeti on October 23, 2016 2:20 pm

        Ohhhh aru cupcakes.
        Thanks for this yummy cupcakes.
        It was so tasty.
        And obviously thanks for ur comment.
        I m glad u commented.
        Lots of luv.
        Take care

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