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Home»Fan Fiction»Meri ajab prem kahani… Shot 5
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Meri ajab prem kahani… Shot 5

ZiyarasheedBy ZiyarasheedDecember 23, 201711 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi guys…how are you. As promised here’s the new episode. I wanted to make it a five shot. But I’m going for six.hope you don’t mind. ???
Veer wakes up in the hospital bed and smiles seeing Sanchi beside him. He slowly strokes her head. She wakes up and starts scolding him
Sanchi: who do you think you are. Jumping in the middle of the road. Are you spidern or superman
Veer: no, I can’t be them. Because you can’t see my lal chaddi outside my pants.
Sanchi hits him
Veer: ouch….that hurts

Sanchi gets worried again, “ I’m sorry”
Veer laughs
Sanchi: you are always joking. Do you know how worried I was. I thought I’m gonna loose you. Don’t do this again
Veer lovingly tucks a tangle behind her ear and holds her face
Veer: I won’t ever let anything happen to you. I’ll always protect you.
Sanchi feels flustered for a moment.
Veer: now you have to do all the things you promised god…
Sanchi is shocked,” what promise…”

Veer: didn’t you promise youll fulfill all my wishes. And what were you saying..?
Sanchi: ( counting on her fingers) I’ll not complain on your nagging, I’ll buy you food, I’ll always….(she sees the mischievous smile on Veer’s face and understand she’s been fooled to confess about her prayer)…aargh..you are again nagging me. Why do you trouble me always
Veer: you are breaking your promise. Remember…no complaints
Sanchi: you need to take rest. I’ll meet you in the morning.
Veer smiles at her and longingly looks at her hoping for her to stay back.

Veer holds his heart, “why does it feel weird in . should I get an ECG done.”
Sanchi is preparing to go to bed when she recieves a call and rushes outside.
Veer waits outside sanchi’s hostel.
SM: what are you doing here this late
Veer: I needed to tell you something
SM: you could have told me tomorrow at the hospital
Veer: I want to tell you now
She stares at him blankly

Veer: I ……
Sanchi looks into his eyes
Veer: its hurting
SM: I told you to take medicine and rest. You never listen to anyone
Veer just grabs her hand places it on his heart
Veer: it hurts here. ( Sanchi just looks at him, lost for words). You…..it’s time you stopped having a crush on him.

Veer holds her both hands and pulls her closer to him
Veer: I think….I am in love … With you
They are lost in each others eyes.
( Kuch toh hain jo dil ghabraye….) Plays in the bg.
Sanchi breaks free.

SM: I should go inside. It’s cold outside. Please take rest.
She runs from there but ends up hitting a pole. She apologises to the pole.
Veer laughs seeing Sanchi thus.
The next day at SDCH, Sanchi tries hard to avoid veer. He enjoys seeing her panics and makes sure to appear before her from time to time.
Meanwhile kabir comes to the nursing station to take a file from nurse Fernandez. He notices sanchi’s key with her

Kabir: this key?
Fernandez: oh, it’s not mine. Veer had asked me to return it to Sanchi. He was having it when he was brought in for operation.
Kabir thinks why would veer have sanchi’s key. They are not even close.
Kabir: give it to me. I’ll hand it over to Dr. Agarwal

Fernandez: no sir this belongs dr Sanchi Mishra.
Kabir: oh, ok I’ll give to dr Mishra.
Kabir goes to his cabin and sits thinking. He remembers all the instant when he felt SM was his mishri. Suddenly someone knocks on the door.
Kabir: come in Sanchi
SA: why did you want to see me
Kabir takes out the box from his draw
Kabir: you remember this Sanchi
SA: yes. I gave it to you

Kabir: don’t we need to see what’s inside.
Sanchi starts sweating.
SA: the key
Kabir takes out the key.
SA: how did you get it.
She gets nervous. “ oh god, did Sanchi tell him the truth”
Kabir: nurse Fernandez found it. She wanted me to return it to its owner
Sanchi is relieved

SA: let’s open it together. Like we promised
Kabir: no, before I open, I want you to tell me what is inside
SA: why don’t you look in yourself.
Kabir: no, first I want to hear it from you.
Sanchi breaks down

SA: I’m sorry kabir, I can’t answer that. Because it was not me who put it in there
Kabir: what do you mean
SA: I’m sorry kabir, I didn’t want to hurt you. It’s just that, I fell in love with you. And I didn’t want to lose you. Please forgive me
Kabir yells at her : get out of my cabin. Now.
Sanchi just sits there on the floor crying. Kabir leaves his cabin in anger.
Sanchi is walking through the corridor when she gets kabirs call
Sanchi: now what does this khadoos want.

She picks the call
Kabir: long time not seen Sanchi
Sanchi: what are you saying. Didn’t we just meet in the morning in your cabin
Kabir: long time no see mishri
A tear escapes her eye
Sanchi: long time no see golu

She turns around and finds kabir. They walk towards each other. Kabir hugs her and cries
Kabir looking at her: why did you lie to me. Why did you send SA in your place
SM: I did not lie kabir. It was you who assumed her to be mishri. I came there in the café to meet you. But you just walked past me. You looked with your eyes. Not with your heart.
Kabir: I’m sorry mishri. My heart always felt that you are my mishri. But my mind played games with me. Whenever you were around, I felt attracted to you. I thought I was doing wrong. And that’s why I always got mad on you. I love you mishri
He hugs Sanchi. Sanchi also hugs him back. Veer watches from the corner and leaves sadly with a melancholy smile.

So guys, who do you think Sanchi should choose. Who is her true love
Please post your suggestions without any prejudice. For the time being let’s keep aside our fan love and choose the right person who truly deserve Sanchi. And please don’t get mad at me for always doing this to you guys. (Actually, getting a little mad is ok??)

So that’s it guys. Hope you enjoy. Happy holidays…

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11 Comments

  1. Aafiya on December 24, 2017 12:03 am

    Superbb….Being a Kanchi fan definitely Kabir is her true love…. Waiting for the next update.. Post as soon as possible…. Take care.

  2. XYZ on December 24, 2017 12:14 am

    I’m in dilemma but still I choose childhood love kabir did mistake for that sanchi should not forgive him fast but at last kaanchi should be together I know veer did a lot but still….

  3. Priyanshipp on December 24, 2017 12:20 am

    I’m in dilemma dear. Amazing episode. Keeping my fan love aside. … the situation you have created here according to that saanchi deserves veer, infact in first episode only i felt bad for kabir’s behaviour. But I would never want saanchi veer to be paired because I’m mad for kaanchi ???. Post as soon as possible sweetie. Luv u loads ???

  4. riyarocks on December 24, 2017 12:30 am

    Ziyu, maine toh apna opinion pehle de di thi…………& ab, jaisa tu chahe plot ko aage le……..coz tujhe hi sabse achhi tarah pat hai ki tu kisko choose karegi & we’re with u for whatever decision u make………amazing epi……….emotional epi………..luv u sweetieeeeeeee………..bye………..tc

  5. Anu88 on December 24, 2017 8:09 am

    Though I am kanchi fan reading this story i think veer is her true lover……………but I want only kanchi yaar…………. episode to pura dhamaka dar tha yaar………..

  6. Srija on December 24, 2017 8:18 am

    Well..veer did a lot for Sanchi and he loves Sanchi truly…but I think Kabir also loves her,ab mistakes toh ho jaati Hain…being a diehard kanchi fan I won’t say make sanveer a pair..but this time I’m confused..u portrayed veer’s character so beautifully…its Ur decision whom u will pair with Sanchi..but pls the next one asap

  7. swethaa on December 24, 2017 8:26 am

    amazing and i hope sanchi choose kabir they are childhood lovers and kabir did a mistake but itna bhi bada nahi hai aur jaldi use realize bhi hua baki tumhari marzi and now eagerly waiting for next part dear

  8. Kajal on December 24, 2017 8:28 am

    Its really hard to decide which pair it should be now. I had already convey my feelings in ur earlier update. It’s time to show ur magic dear. Till then luv u dher Sara And of course forever dear

  9. Sanveer on December 24, 2017 9:21 am

    Great one dear! And From my opinon I have no Disappointment with kabir, if he gets paired with Sanchi m I’m fine but As an SANveer and Kanchi Fan I think Veer deserves Sanchi m! And SANveer should be the pair! Veer was always by her side while Kabir couldn’t realize That Sanchi A wasn’t His love Sanchi!!!!! And he knows about her! So I think Veer anways ur choice

  10. Dhruviii on December 24, 2017 11:19 am

    Keeping my fan luv aside, i think veer deserves sanchi…..so it was amazing & update soon

  11. Negisanyukta on December 24, 2017 4:52 pm

    Pehle toh kaan pakad ke sorry dear….maine fourth part par comment nahi kiya na.???But i read that nd that was wonderfull.
    This part is fabulous.I just loved it to the bottom of my heart.????
    I think Veer deserves Saanchi .
    Keep writing dear nd eagerly waiting for next part.

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