This is my first time writing a 5shot. Hope you all like it. And again, it’s a sanveer and kanchi one.
There is no isha and pragya. Sanchi and Sanchi agarwal are good friends. They did their medicine together. SA is a hot and beautiful girl, whom everyone wants to make their girlfriend. While our SM is a bubbly , sweet girl who always like helping others. SM is also behenji types. She also wears a specs. Not too attractive to others in sense of appearance since she doesn’t care much about putting on makeup and dolling up.
Veer is a fun loving and prankster who is a senior intern at SDCH. Kabir is a foreign returned senior doctor at SDCH.
The story starts with SM waking up from a sweet dream in her bed.
SA comes in just the.
SA: uth gayi maharani. What were you dreaming
SM: am so happy. Finally we will be going to SDCH. It was my and kabirs dream to be part of SDCH. I wonder where he is now.
SA: subah subah phir se shuru hogayi. Not again . All day you have nothing to speak other than kabir. It feels like I know him very well since childhood. (She sees Sanchi smiling dreamily and smacks her head) come back to your senses. Your kabir might not even remember you wherever he is. Also he might have already found a girlfriend.
SA leaves the room while SM is lost again. She sighs “ where are you golu. You promised to return soon. But what took you so long”
SA is preparing breakfast , that’s when SM runs in screaming
SA: good lord, whats wrong with you. You scared me.
SM: look at this. I got an email from kabir. He is in Delhi and wants to meet me. Tonight!!!
She screams again
SA snatches the phone and reads through the mail
SA: wow, he really remembers you. He must be really something. But how did he find your e-mail id
SM: does it really matter. I can’t wait to meet him.
SA: ask him to meet at café Cup O’ Joy.
SM mails him the address of the café. She can’t wait for night. When its night, both sanchis go to the café. They wait outside . Sanchi looks for any mail from kabir. She sees kabir has sent his numb
She writes down the number on a paper. She is about to call him when Jaya calls her. She speaks to Jaya. Jaya also asks to speak to SA. So she gives her the phone. Sanchi is impatient as Jaya is not ending the call. She finally takes SA’s phone and kabirs number and leaves the table. She feeds the numb but hesitates to call. She turns around and is speechless to see what she saw. She smiles to see a tall handsome guy across the street. “kabir?”. She dials kabirs numb and sees him pick up
SM: kabir
Kabir: Sanchi. Where are you
SM: at the café.
Kabir looks towards her and smiles
Kabir: I can see you. I’m coming towards you
Kabir walks towards SM. She smiles seeing him. He approaches her but then walks past her. Sanchi looks on shocked
Kabir: I have spotted you.
He sees SA on phone and approaches her. Both sanchis cut their calls.
Kabir: Sanchi?
SA: yes.
Kabir takes the seat. Sanchi is happy to see a hot guy sitting near her. SM tries to signal her but it goes un noticed.
Kabir: you are just like I imagined. Beautiful, like always.
SA smiles shyly at the compliment. Just then SM calls her. SA excuses herself and moves aside to take the call
SA: guess what, a really hot and handsome guy is sitting across my table. I think he is head over heals for me.
SM: that’s kabir
SA: what?
She stares kabir bewildered
SA: but…
SM: he thinks you are me. And came to you
SA: I’ll clear the misunderstanding
SM: no. Let it be. Don’t tell him anything. Just talk to him as SM and say goodbye from my side forever.
As she cuts the call, tears flow down her cheeks
SA returns to the table. She is clearly angry.
Kabir: was it someone important
SA: no, it was just my ex boyfriend. He wanted to get back with me
Kabir is surprised
Kabir: I’m sorry
SA: you don’t have to be. It’s not like I’m breaking up for the first time. So just chill
Kabir: you seem to have changed a lot. You used to value relations a lot
SA: we are not kids forever. I was really surprised when I received your mail. I didn’t think you would still remember me.
Kabir: I have been trying to contact you all the time. After you stopped sending me letters, it was really difficult to track you.
SA: I’m sorry about that. It’s just that I got busy with my studies and life. I couldn’t find enough time to write.
Kabir: do you still have the key to my box
SA: huh, I don’t know. I haven’t seen it in a long time. Do you still expect me too keep them
Kabir feels sad
Kabir: our childhood used to be so much fun. Do you still remember the name you gave me. Now ma calls me by that name.
SA: I think I should leave now. I forgot, I have another appointment. And tomorrow is also my first day to work. So bye. And thanks for the coffee. And all the best for your life ahead. I don’t think we’ll meet again.
She hurries away leaving behind a bewildered kabir. Kabir sits thinking . He takes out a small box from his pocket and stares .
Flashback: little Sanchi is seeing off kabir. They both are sad. Sanchi gifts him a tiny box. He tries to open it
Kabir: this is locked
Sanchi shows him the key in her palm
Sanchi: we’ll open it together on your return. If you really are eager to know what’s inside, you must return soon.
Kabir smiles and makes a pinky promise with her.
Kabir: and you should also promise to write to me
Sanchi: promise. No matter wherever you are, I’ll always think about you.
They part ways sadly.
Now kabir sits staring at the box.
Kabir: looks like I got late. Now I can never know what is inside
At home SM sits crying. SA gives her tissues to wipe her tears.
SM wipes her running nose
SM: I’m so ugly. He doesn’t even recognise me. Oh….
SA: forget him. You are really beautiful. He is just blind not to see you.
SM: I recognised him in a single glance. How could he not know it’s me. He just walked past me as if I don’t exist
SA hugs her and consoles her.
SA: just flush away his memories. Tomorrow is our first day at the hospital. You don’t want to report on the first day being late. So let’s go to bed.
All is in vain because SM is still wailing in the bed and an irritated SA tries hard to sleep. She screams blo*dy murder at kabir…
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