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Home»Fan Fiction»Mere Rehnuma (Epi-1)
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Mere Rehnuma (Epi-1)

ShrukarBy ShrukarMarch 3, 201730 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys this is shruti shruti kirloskar. I am so glad meeting u all. I got a story in my mind on my fav couple swasan so i want to present it to u all. Please encourage me with ur comments.

Now story starts.

A big house naming maheshwari’s where two children are playing are playing carroms. They are playing so seriously.

They are swara & sanskaar.

Swara: Sanky see i only will get the queen.

Sanskaar : In your dreams shona. Queen will be mine. Just watch.

Swara: Ha ha see i got the chance. Now i will win.

She plays but misses queen.

Sanky: Yeh yeh see u missed it. I told na queen is mine.

He plays & he won. He jumps in happiness

Swara: No no no this is cheating. I will not agree for this. U played wrong.

Sanky: U only cheater. This is 3rd time today playing this game & everytime u are saying excuse for your failure. This time its sure u lost.

Swara: Never swara bose never lose in game or in life. Wait i will tell to mamu about you.

She runs inside calling her bade mamu durga prasad maheshwari. He comes to her & she making fake cry hugs him tight.

Swara: Bade mamu see na this sanky defeats me in game by cheating.

Dp: Oh my princess dnt cry. U know na u are my darling please stop crying. Wait i will talk to him.

He calls sans.

Dp: Sanskaar what u did with shona? Y is she crying?

Sanskaar : No papa she is lieing. She has lost in game & she in reverse blaming me.

Dp: Just shut up my princess will never lie.

Then sharmishta comes there.

Shomi: Bhai y are u interfering in children fight? They will sort out na. By the way your princess is not innocent. As a mom i know her well. She is a drama queen.

Swara: Mom are u my mom for real or not. U have to support me na.

Shomi: Shut up shona. When you got failure in anything u have to accept it. Day by day u are becoming stubborn. I am sure sanky is saying truth.

Sanky:Thanks mami atleast u understood me.

Swara:Shut up u cheater. U are separating me & my mom. I hate u.

Sanky: u shut up lier. U seperated me & my dad. I hate u too.

They both fights so much & that reveals their hate towards each other.

At night in dinner.

Swara with her mom & dad, sanskaar with his mom & dad are having dinner.

Swara: Bade mamu please pass that soup na.

Dp: Sure dear take it.

At same time sanky takes it from dp & eats it & teases her. Swara gets angry on him & pours glass of water on him & runs from there. He also gets angry on her runs to catch her.

Shomi gets worried by their fights. Shekhar observes it.

Shekhar: what happened shomi y u look tensed?

Shomi: Dnt know Shekhar these guys are day by day becoming enemies. If this continues then what will happen to our relations.

Dp: Shomi u are my sister & i promise i will never let our relation to spoil. And coming to these guys they are kids dnt take their fights seriously.

Shekhar: Ha shomi dp is right. U are thinking more.

Ap: Relax shomi we can explain them. I promise one day shona only will be our bahu.

Shomi gets happy seeing their support & gets relaxed.

Later at night shekhar takes shomi to shona & sanky room & shows her there sleeping holding each other hands.

Shekhar: See mishti how cute & close they are. From morning they are fighting & when it comes to night they forgot everything & sleeping peacefully just like besties. Unnecessarily u dnt get worried jaan.

Shomi: I wish this bonding should be same even when they become elders shekhar.

They kisses the both kids & goes to their room. Here in sleep swara leaves sanky’s hand & moves aside from him.

Thats the end. How is the episode guys? Please comment.

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    30 Comments

    1. Sus on March 3, 2017 4:09 pm

      Awesome

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 8:57 am

        Thanq dear sus ?

    2. Sanji on March 3, 2017 4:19 pm

      interesting…

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 8:57 am

        Thanq sanji dear ?

    3. Navi on March 3, 2017 4:46 pm

      Superb??

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 8:58 am

        Hey navi thanq i think navi means navya right ?

      • Navi on March 4, 2017 4:33 pm

        Nope shrukar?

    4. sweeta on March 3, 2017 6:33 pm

      Very interesting. ….i likeed it ????

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:01 am

        So sweet of u sweeta thanq ?

    5. anu on March 3, 2017 6:38 pm

      nyc

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:01 am

        Thanq anu

    6. Jannatul.Nayma09 on March 3, 2017 7:04 pm

      Interesting

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:03 am

        Thanq nayma by the way ur name is also intresting ?

    7. Diyaaa on March 3, 2017 7:07 pm

      Awesome dear….But had a confusion
      If dp is Swara’s mamu then shomi Shud be sanky’s Bua……???

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:05 am

        U r right diya i thought bua or mami is of same relation sorry for that anyways u r the one who noticed clearly. That means u read my story with concentration & i like that. Nice name diya. ??

    8. a on March 3, 2017 8:08 pm

      nice..

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:06 am

        Hi a thanq

    9. Simi on March 3, 2017 10:46 pm

      Nice

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:07 am

        Hey simi thanq

    10. Arshaanya on March 3, 2017 11:38 pm

      Nyc

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:08 am

        Thanq dear. Intresting dp picture. ?

    11. bharu on March 3, 2017 11:59 pm

      yipee..a ff on my cute pairs swasan..hey jolly…nice start dear..soo swasan are children..then wat is their age dear??I think we r gonna have a great time with uu..waiting for next dear..keep smiling..bye take care

      • Shrukar on March 4, 2017 9:10 am

        Hi bharu. Yes swasan are children & their age is about 8 years. Sure we will have great time. Thanq for the comment.☺☺

    12. Pramudi on March 4, 2017 11:39 pm

      Awesome.. ?

      • Shrukar on March 6, 2017 1:24 pm

        thanq pramudi ☺

    13. Shifa96 on March 5, 2017 1:00 am

      Nice

      • Shrukar on March 6, 2017 1:25 pm

        Hi shifa thanq?

    14. mica on March 5, 2017 1:13 am

      awesome story dear

      • Shrukar on March 6, 2017 1:26 pm

        Thanq mica nice pic ha?

    15. vyshu10 on March 7, 2017 12:25 pm

      interesting

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