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Home»Fan Fiction»MERE DIL KI DUNIYA – part 1
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MERE DIL KI DUNIYA – part 1

Lasya Priya KBy Lasya Priya KMarch 17, 201710 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi frnds…as I said u the surprise is my new ff which is MERE DIL KI DUNIYA . Hope u guys live this also like u loved ‘u r my life’.

So we’ll directly get into the first part without any prologues nd intros… as u ll know by the story.

Nd the episode starts with…New  York city… the big apple is shown. All around the city the city looks beautiful in its night lights….then in background a voice speaks ” itni  salon mein pata nahi kaise main kaise inn aasuon  ko band ke raka hai(in these many years don’t know how I ve saved my tears)… toda mushkil hai par (yeah I know its somewhat difficult).. voh toh meri farz hai (but it was my responsibility)…aur ab nahi (but no more now). Ab bas meri khush hone ka samay anewala hai ( now my happy time has been coming)…jald main apni pyaar aur pariwaar ke paas jaungi…pyaar paungi ( I will be going to my love nd my family soon…nd will be loved )” just then a girl is been shown writing her diary. She smiles… nd wipes her tears. Then calling bell rings. She goes nd opens the door.
Courier boy: do ms. Ishita live here ?
Girl: yeah its me.

CB: mam… u ve a courier.
Ishita: oh thank u…(she signed the papers nd took the box into the house closing the door.) Hope ki she likes this.
She opens the outer cover nd takes a coffee mug out.
Ishita: hmm.. colour is gud nd looks perfect for my baby. OK then..( she places a letter in the mug nd packs it back in the box nd wraps with gold cover.) Now its perfect.

Just then a girl came running to her nd hugs from back.
Ishu: ahhh… Sara..!!!
Sara(ishu’s frnds cum roommate): ishu..baby..!!
Ishu: what r u doing her didn’t go to dinner with George (Sara’s BF) ?
Sara: no. I just fought with him.
Ishu: arey but y…?
Sara: coz he didn’t but me ice cream… as I’m having cold.
Ishu laughs: oh…that so bad of u Sara… see he care for u nd u fought with him…for not buying ice cream ?
Sara: hmm… OK say me what’s this gift. For me?
Ishu: no… this is for someone so special.
Sara: oho…!!! I know who it is.

Ishu: then will u help me… in posting to India.
Sara: of course.
Ishu: ok gud night baby…. I’m sleepy.
Sara nods..ishu goes to the bedroom.
Now in INDIA… Delhi…
A girl s sleeping sun rays fall on her face nd she keeps n irritated face…”Coffee…!!! ” she shouts. But there’s no reply from anyone. So she got up nd opened the door nd a bucket full of water fell on her. She shouts “RAMAN….!!!!!”
Raman: HAPPY B DAY  Shagun …!!!!

toshi angrily: oye.. bhai aise bulate hai kya ..? ( will u call ur brother this way?)
Raman: rehne do maa.( let it b na maa) she is sleepy na… she forget.
Shagun: ha maa..!!
Toshi: chal teek hai..Happy b day beti…!!!! (They both hug) OK… Go get ready.. I’ll get u coffee cake… I ve tried new.
Shagun: phir se nayi experiment..? Maa yeh sare experiments app apne ladle se kyun nahi test karvati .. main hi nazar aati hoon kya inn cheezon mein? (Maa again new experiment..? Y don’t u try them on ur lovely son.. instead on me)
Raman: oh hello.. plz ha don’t involve me.
Toshi: u luv coffee na that’s y.

Shagun: bahana doondo tum har baar.( u every time u try to escape) OK I’ll go nd get ready.
She goes.
Raman: acha maa… I’ll leave for the office.. its getting late.
Toshi: arey wait till she come let’s ve breakfast together.
Raman: u know na maa.. she take hrs to get ready… nd I’m getting late nd papa will b waiting for me.
Toshi: OK then go.
Raman hugs her: bye maa.

He goes toshi smiles. Shagun gets came out of bathroom after n hr. She’s in blue anarkali…nd is combing her hair looking at mirror. She then gets a call… looks at the mobile nd cuts the call. She is continuously geting call but ignores. She came out nd sat near the dining table had breakfast. Meanwhile calling bell rings..
Toshi: Shagun go nd open the door baby.
She goes nd opens the door nd gets surprised seeing Aakash. She smiles… he smiles..
Toshi: who s that Shagun?
Her expression changers nd keeps n angry face.
Shagun: a stranger came to meet u maa.
Aakash shocked. Toshi came there nd Shagun goes in sat on the sofa.
Toshi: arey shagun… r u mad saying Aakash a stranger. Come in Aakash…u don’t mind her (They went in) Aakash u sit here I’ll get u coffee.
She goes… Aakash came to Shagun nd took her to her room
Aakash: am I stranger. ?
Shagun: the one who doesn’t wish first for my b’day is a stranger to me. I don’t know him.
Aakash: arey that’s y I ve called u many times na.
Shagun: when…when all my bro mom nd dad wished me… then that too on phone.
Aakash: I don’t know abt ur timings.
Shagun: where the hell were u at 12?

Aakash: with ur bro. Acha leave all that. I’m sry baby… OK fyn.. give me any punishment u like.
Shagun: plz.. u just don’t waste ur time.
Aakash: arey its ur b day my love.. I will do as u really.( he hugs her from back)
Shagun: first u say me what did u bring me… my gift??
Aakash: I’m sry I forgot…

Shagun: plz don’t say that…
Aakash: I forgot to give u…close ur eyes…! (She does) now open.
She opens her eyes nd finds a fairy princess wala pink nd violet colour framed mirror.
Shagun: mirror…??? I ask a gift for me not for ur to b daughter. This is such cute one but..
Aakash: actually.. I thought to give u something special.. but what to give… as ur brother nd ur dad has given u everything u want… so I thought to give u what I like in u… that is u.  I love u Shagun… so thought to give u to u.
Shagun smiles: I’m impressed Mr. Rawat. Nd thank u.
She hugs him nd he kisses her forehead.
Aakash: Happy b day…!!

Precap:
Aakash msgs Raman.
Aakash: yaar.. plz manage there.
Raman: acha… u r asking me..?
Aakash: plz.. yaar. Help me… I’ll help u when u will b in my situation for sure.
Raman smiles nd looks on at the statement.

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Lasya Priya K

    ISHRA....!!! meri pehli PYAAR jo hua tha.

    10 Comments

    1. jyoti on March 17, 2017 4:00 pm

      superb story pls continue soon

    2. Supriya swathee on March 17, 2017 4:53 pm

      Awesome………!? I like the update nd last msg precap simply rocking……!? interesting waiting for ur next epi …..!

    3. Isuri on March 17, 2017 5:30 pm

      Superb dear waiting for next epi update soon

    4. Reshma_Pradeep on March 17, 2017 5:45 pm

      Interestingggg!

    5. Rashita on March 17, 2017 8:13 pm

      Interesting………. priya your new ff wow……..does ishu have a fb..????first I thought Raman and shagun are together but bro and sis wow…..liked their conversation……… nice shaakash scene wishing of bday..,,,,, plz continue…….

    6. Ishan on March 18, 2017 2:32 am

      i like your surprize very much… superb episode dear…eagerly waiting for next one…

    7. kumud on March 19, 2017 4:33 pm

      Awesome

    8. Rashita on March 20, 2017 7:04 pm

      This is a message from zaira’s side…. Actually we both are classmates and best friends…..she’s not able to comment because her phone is in repair…. But she read your ff and liked it soo much…she just told mee to convey this to u…..she said sorry for not commenting….plz make a note of this lasya…

      • Lasya Priya K on March 21, 2017 11:10 am

        thank u zaira..thats so sweet of u.

    9. Parichary on March 22, 2017 12:21 pm

      Nice story! New one and am surprised that Ishu is in New York and living alone.
      Raman and Shagun becomes sibling.

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