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Home»Fan Fiction»Mera pehla pyaar (Part 18)
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Mera pehla pyaar (Part 18)

MounikaBy MounikaMarch 16, 2017Updated:March 16, 20172 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys mouni is back. Thanq all for comments.

Recap

Game is on.

Now

While playing ayaan & david are protecting swara.

Once she had cleared my team she ran full speed down the field ahead of them by atleast 2 yards… she was amazing.

She threw the ball down hard on the floor & flung her arms up in the air , “TOUCH DOWN “.

Her face split in half from her perfect smile. I licked my lips , oh how I wanted to fling my arms around her waist. How her body will feel close to mine.

Damn, i have gotten hard just from thinking about the warmth of her body. I couldn’t take my eyes away from her. I needed to win. I needed her to be mine.

Swara’s p.o.v

The scores were now my team with 16 & laksh’s with 18 & we only had 5 more minutes. All we need a touch down & that would score us 6.

I gathered my team in a huddle & we need a good plan to win.

“Ok guys we all need a touch down so here’s what we are going to do…” I looked around the group all eyes on me, all the eyes of hot, who have risked their body to mine. They respect me & it almost brought tears in my eyes.

They were covered in mud, blood & bruises …yet i didn’t have a scratch on me.

“Laksh so far hasn’t gone for me & won’t because he doesn’t want to hurt me. So we are going to use that to our advantage. I will pass the ball back to jay who will then fake pass it to ayaan who is going to run up the right side, where as i will run to the touchdown zone up the left & when i get far enough jay throw it to me. David will you protect me?” I smiled to david who gave us a charming smile.

“Sure darling” he winked & we all smiled & broke from the huddle.

We got into position one more time. I crouched down infront of laksh, who mirrored my action. I put the ball on the floor between my legs & sharply inhaled. ..

We followed the plan down to the last detail. ..until i was running up the left side & i turned to see laksh right behind me. SHIT! I tried to run faster but laksh picked up his pace more, closing the space between us.

David came charging towards laksh , but laksh just jumped over David’s attempt to tackle him to the ground. The space between me & laksh have got less & less, but i was so close to the line. Just a little. ..

My thought was cut off by a great forced to my back, laksh tackled me. Owwwww.

I was under laksh’s body, angry at first with the pain but then his warmth seeped into me & i was comforted for being in his embrace, healing the pain.

The whole crowd gasped. I felt laksh got upand sat next to me & said nothing.

WHY? WHAT? HAD WE WON OR LOST?

I lifted my head to see where i have landed… slowly more & more light entered my vision until i had the ball in my sight..

Precap

WINNER?

Thanq guys please comment. Love you all. Take care.

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    2 Comments

    1. kittu on March 16, 2017 8:17 pm

      Amazing.. Waiting fr next part..

    2. mariya on March 16, 2017 8:28 pm

      Nice . eagerly waiting for winning team that is next part .

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