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Home»Fan Fiction»Mera KABIR FINALE
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Mera KABIR FINALE

mysteryBy mysterySeptember 22, 201727 Comments4 Mins Read
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So guys you all supported me very much thanks a lot….this story is going to end today so I hope I will get more n more comments…..ucan also read my swasan ff if u miss me…..n yah I will be back soon…..

Sanchi( soul) :- kabir ….u always give me whatever I wish….so give me this happiness too…I want to see u n our daughter happy….VO MERA ANSH HAI
HUMARE PYAAR KI NISHAANI HAI….

I still remember that day when we came to know about my pregnancy

Let me clear one more thing I know I took 7 years leap….but sanchi is four years as I believe that a couple should have baby after 3 -4 years……so that’s y

Ha to kaha this mai

Fb

Sanchi:- mummyji….u tell kabir

Kusum:- me….no u should tell him

Kabir came home…

Kabir:- sanchi u collects ur reports ?

Sanchi:- yes…

Kabir:- so let me check it

Sanchi:- m also a doc…..its good…don’t worry..

Kabir:- but

Sanchi:- no but shut

Kabir:- hmm

Kabir:- all were smiling n happy in the hospital ….n congratulating me….I don’t know y

Kusum:- u will know soon

Sanchi:- kabir aap…

Kabir:- hmm

Sanchi:- aap papa banned wale hai….

Kabir :- achha……wait what???????

Sanchi:- u r pregnant…… No I mean I m pregnant

Kabir hold sanchi ‘s shoulders.

Kabir:- sach!

Sanchi:- hmm….

Kabir hugs sanchi …..

Fb ends

Kabir:- I thought that was a good news but it was….

Sanchi ( soul):- kabir when I take our baby in my arms for first time …that feeling was magical…..

Sanchi:- first n last time……

Kabir:- sanchi that day …

FB

Sanchi was having labor pain…..kabir n pragya were operating her….

After sometime ….

Sanchi gave birth to a twins

Pragya:- congoooo……

She informs everyone …..

All were happy……kabir lift the girl baby n kiss her head…..he sat beside sanchi.

Sanchi:- look at him …he is staring u as u do not take him……he is jealous

Kabir laughs…….

After sometime…..

Ssanchi was sleeping …..n a cylinder get blast in the canteen area……the whole hospital is shaken

Kabir….veer …isha …pragya came to take sanchi n the babies…..

Kabir hold sanchi …..veer hold the baby boy….n sanchi takes the baby girl in her hands…..all were outside ….only sanchi kabir n baby girl were left as kabir was also helping an old woman .. Suddenly a piece of building falls….n sanchi shout kabir …she slips …..but unable to stand as her leg get hurt kabir ran but sanchi throw baby girl on him…….n the wall falls on sanchi…….then other piece also fall….kabir give the baby to isha….n veer also give the boy to pragya…n all present there start removing the wall..
Fb ends

Sanchi:- I save her….as I m her mother I can’t let her die…..kabir u thought if she was not in my arms then I got save but kabir…..its destiny…..if u were on my place then u would also save sanchi ….

Kabir:- u n everyone thinks that I hate her….but no sanchi…..its not true….actually I m afraid that I will loose her also……like I loose u…I can’t save u…..I was a bad hubby….so

Sanchi:-kabir

Kabir cries…..

Fb

Sanchi in kabir arms lying …her full body is bleeding

Sanchi:- isha pragya….will u promise me something …?

Isha:- hmm…( both were crying )

Sanchi:- mere jaane k baad mere Dino bachcho ka khyal rkhna…..

Pragya:- nothing will happen to u

Veer:- kuch nhi hoga tumhe…..

Sanchi:- tum sbko pata he ….its my end time…..veer plzz take care of kabir

Sanvhi:- Kabir. …..I love u….

She dies after saying these words….n kabir sit as it is for hours….n all were shocked…..

Kabir scream:- SANCHIIIII

FB ENDS

Kabir:- plzz sanchi plzz….don’t ask me to met sanchi( daughter)

Sanchi:- so y u met sabir?

Kabir:- because pragya lied that someone kidnapped him

Kabir:- but both sanchi n sabir don’t know that m their father….for sanchi isha n veer is her parents n for sabir pragya n satish

Sanchi:- u have to meet sanchi also

Kabir opens his eyes….yah he was sleeping on sofa….he was dreaming….sanchi came in his dreams……

Sanchi ‘s pic was in his hands

Kabir n kusum went inside a big house

Veer:- kabir sir

Kabir:- I came to met sanchi

Veer:- achha….come

Sanchi came n give a card to kabir

Kabir get confused

He open the card n reads it:-

Mumma sanchi n sabir love u papa

He look at veer

Veer:- we told them…..they can accept it as they are only for….

Sabir also come n both call kabir:- papa

Kabir weeps n hugs them…..

At last

Veer …isha….pragya…n kabir saw sanchi( soul) n she smiles

Sanchi:- now m happy…..love u all…

The story ends

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    27 Comments

    1. Anonymousaa on September 23, 2017 12:10 am

      I have no idea should I feel sad or glad.
      Nothing is immortal in this world so I can understand but still dil hai ki manta nahin.
      It was a happy ending though tragical. Pata nahin mein kya bakrahin hoon.
      I laughed when Sanchi said u r pregnant yet I am in verge of crying now.
      At the end I can say come back with a new ff series.

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:25 am

        Thanks dear…I will be back soon

    2. Premamohan on September 23, 2017 12:31 am

      Apne muje rulathiya it’s too touching I am not support the feeling of heartbreaking BT the ff was awesome…
      Pls come back with some new episode of kanchi with happy ending…

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:25 am

        Thanq….I will be back soon…

    3. Dhruti on September 23, 2017 1:03 am

      superb story with happy ending …………. l just love the conversation between sanchi(soul) and kabir
      keep writing come back with your new one ff/os…………………………
      A big hug for you !!!

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:26 am

        Thanq …take care dear….I will be back

    4. Palak.Sharma on September 23, 2017 1:04 am

      Amazing!!! But really sad that Sanchi died?

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:27 am

        I can understand….

    5. Priyanshi on September 23, 2017 3:24 am

      Pls agli baar se aise story mat likhna.
      ??????????????

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:27 am

        Ohkzz??????

    6. RuCh23 on September 23, 2017 5:49 am

      It’s so beautiful Mystery ??? so heart touching ???

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:29 am

        Thanq

    7. Mrunmayi on September 23, 2017 7:44 am

      Awesome dear mystery just fabulous fantastic nd don’t know what to say wished sanchi was also there with them bt it’s good nd plzz be back soon dear.

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:29 am

        Thanq…..I will be back asap

    8. Ashnita on September 23, 2017 7:51 am

      amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing fantastic and sad sanchi died and I will miss u

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:30 am

        I will also miss all the reader…..but don’t worry I will be back asap

    9. Alia on September 23, 2017 7:53 am

      Amazing fabulous story

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:32 am

        Thanq

    10. Sanjukta on September 23, 2017 9:03 am

      Its a heart touching ending…feeling hppy as well as sad…awsm…

      • mystery on September 23, 2017 10:34 am

        Thanq

    11. niyaaa on September 23, 2017 10:19 am

      Really heart touching story mystery happy ending bur with tragidy kaash sanchi bhi hoti i know nothig is immortal per kya karien dil h ki manta nahi came bck soon sis with new ff or os …lovvv u aloads

    12. Abhilasha on September 23, 2017 10:47 am

      Dear it was really heart touching story I don’t know why but in my most of the fvt stories heroine dies ….be it ek villain ghajini and many others ….and this was one of my fvt an look heroine dies but ur story is awesome and love this!! Luv uh!!

    13. riyarocks on September 23, 2017 11:27 am

      Angel dear, u just literally made me cry…….a really heart touching plot……plz dear, don’t stop writing & come back soon with another osm plot……….luv u loads………

    14. Jessicca on September 23, 2017 2:55 pm

      It was so nice story… So heart touching…. Amazing… Loved it…

    15. Divya on September 23, 2017 3:30 pm

      Wow awesome fabulous episode

    16. Amnaa on September 23, 2017 3:41 pm

      Awesome….. Loved it much…. Comeback with something new soon

    17. Anee on September 23, 2017 4:04 pm

      Mystery Dear amazing ending.

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