Hii friends , I got a story in my mind , so am writing it up as an one shot in three parts..please do tell me if its good or bad .

.Next day ,
Morning..oberoi mansion ..
Soumya : hmm I am really feeling hungry….
She stands and moves towards the kitchen when rudra comes to her .
Rudra: if you are going to the kitchen, I will also come with you..
Soumya: then you will have to help me in preparing the food…

They both enter the kitchen .they are surprised to see shivaay preparing food for everyone…
Rudra:bhai you…….so your conference.
Soumya: you are supposed to be there right now bhaii..
Shivaay smiles at them and continues his work.
Dadi comes there hearing rudra and soumya.
Dadi : beta …how come you are here..the meeting was really important for you right.
Priy: did it get cancelled…
Shivaay finishes the work and calls everybody to the hall..
Shivaay: I did not skip the meeting neither it cancelled..but the point is that I had got the remaining votes from the Arora’s..
Om: bhaiyya ..seriously are you telling us that the same Arora’s who wanted to destroy us , supported us right now..
Jhanvi: can that be possible ..
Shivaay: even I was shocked . I had been there early morning ..

Fb shown********************
Shivaay: is everything ready Mr .Bose (bose is shivaay’s secretary)
Bose: yes sir..
Suddenly bose gets some call and says to shivaay that mr. arora is arriving..
Shivaay greets arora ..
Arora: I am ready to give my two votes..
Shivaay: that’s nice of you..but you never supported us these many years ..and why now.
Arora: I know that, I am sorry for that..but now I want to know how you know this girl..
He was pointing at the family picture taken by rudra , which was posted on rudra’s fb…
Shivaay : that’s wedding planner..
Arora : ok any way I am leaving now..we will meet next week for the schedule meeting..
Before shivaay could shoot any questions further , mr.arora leaves..
Fb ends **************************

Jhanvi : how does he know anika..
Rudra : he might have been searching for a wedding planner..
Soumya: that’s not the reason he gave the votes..there is something else..
Suddenly anika enters humming a song ..
Anika greets dadi..she is surprised to see everyone staring at her ..
Anika: what happened to everyone..
She see’s shivaay there ,smiling at her.
Anika : your meeting is today right..
Dadi : beta we got the remaining votes ..
Anika: that’s great news .
Shivaay shows the picture of their board members to anika ..
Shivaay: see if you can recognize anybody in the picture..
Anika eyes through the picture ..suddenly her eyes gets fixed on something..she sits back on the sofa with a shock..
Anika: papa …
Tears fell off from her eyes..

Everbody gets shocked hearing her ..
Shivaay :what .arora is your dad..
Dadi:anika beta , are you alright..
Soumya: do you know mr.arora personally dadi…
Om: dad and mr.arora were close friends , and we always visited their house , and had a great bonding with his daughters..but a accident changed the deep friendship to hatred ..his both daughters died ..
Shivaay comes near anika and turns her , he has tears in his eyes..tears of happiness .anika is surprised too see him like this..
Shivaay holds her hand and says: niaa..

Next part: anika reveals the past incidents…..ishana entry …childhood memories ..

Ok guys ..i know that it isn’t as good as the other os’s . but forgive me as its my first attempt..

  1. Tht was sooo nyc dear….plz continue… dey r frnds…..n luvd it a lott

    1. Cuteprincess

      oh ..thank you tulasi ..
      and yes they were friends..

  2. Rocking starting!!! Post next part ASAP

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks jhanvi ..I will try to update the next part soon..

  3. It was nice upload asap

  4. nice ff plz continue and make little longer

    1. Cuteprincess

      thank you sri ..and I will make it longer in the next part..

  5. Interesting update soon

    1. Cuteprincess

      thank you sunithi ..

  6. Its just awesummm. …!!!!!and pls..pls.. post the next one soooon

    1. Cuteprincess

      thank you so much niharika…

  7. I really love your ff ,i am waiting for your next ff

    1. Cuteprincess

      thank you kutti …

  8. Dear princess …. First of all around of applause for you’re attempt it isn’t boring at all but interesting and I am happy with it ….
    Please continue writing as I personally feel that you’re a nice wait…
    Awesome writer … Dear… And I feel that u r writing better than mine…
    Best of luck …

    1. Cuteprincess

      shama dii ….your words are giving me a lot of encouragement .dii you are elder to me and I respect your words …. but I feel your writing is better than mine.

  9. Dear princess …. First of all around of applause for you’re attempt it isn’t boring at all but interesting and I am happy with it ….
    Please continue writing as I personally feel that you’re a nice wait…
    Awesome writer … Dear… And I feel that u r writing better than mine…
    Best of luck …
    Title and dp of story is awesome

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks a ton dii..

  10. Yazhu

    It’s an amazing epi cuteprincess…loved it so much….waiting for the next one….

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks yazhu..

  11. Very nyc epi..upload new asap..

  12. Is dis a new 1..

  13. Soooooo good waiting for next one

    1. Cuteprincess

      I will be posting it soon dear…

  14. Awsome yaar plz post soon …..and a request plz give some shivika romance ….I will love to see that

    1. Cuteprincess

      hmm ..ok let me see what I can do…..
      thank you safaq

  15. Sat

    Hey Ann, you rocked it dear, really very nice at your first attempt.
    It was awesome. Shivaay’s????oh my god , he really showed a great feeling towards annika, really loved it
    You are really a cute princess. You showed great skills of writing Yar.
    And sorry for the late comment as I am in hospital for a treatment.
    Anyways I am really in a feeling of bursting out of happiness when you said that I am your inspiration.
    A great welcome to ishqbaaz writers family.
    So how many parts in this is, can I expect

    1. Cuteprincess

      thank you so much sat…
      I want to end it in 3 parts.. but I may make it longer in case I get good ideas…
      but its always good to keep it short and sweet , being a starter in the field…

  16. Shaza

    It’s awesome…loved it ♥️..eagerly waiting for the next one ..pls post it ASAP ..,and ur an amazing writer ???

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks shaza……..

  17. so good pls post next one and also shivka romance pls

    1. Cuteprincess

      I will try…and thank you ..

  18. Superbbbbb yrrr….post next soon…waiting…

    1. Cuteprincess

      I will post it soon..thanks dear..

  19. Jazz1

    It was really good. I really liked the way you wrote it. Plz continue and sorry ? for late comment

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks dear…and its fine…

  20. Tany

    a very good one…. whens the next???????

  21. Tany

    a very good one…. i am waiting for part 2

    1. Cuteprincess

      I wont be making you wait for long…
      I will upload it soon..

  22. Ayath

    wow…awesome….dear plz upadate next pat soon…

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks a lot ayath…

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