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Home»Fan Fiction»Mein Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga RagLak FS (Episode 3)
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Mein Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga RagLak FS (Episode 3)

RakshullyBy RakshullyJune 5, 2017Updated:August 17, 201761 Comments8 Mins Read
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…I am glad that many of you are appreciating my story. Thank You so much friends for all the support, means a lot to me. Love you all Loads. Chalo now we will move to 3rd part. This was supposed to be TS as per the title but I am changing it as FS now.
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Days past, but Laksh couldn’t forget Ragini. He was himself confused that how can he fall for a girl this much just by looking at her photo and meeting her once, and that too turned worst when she rejected. He started involving himself in work. (Note: Laksh don’t have his own company, he works as an employee in one company and hence wants to start his own company). He started working on his dream project. Not now but he thought gradually he will forget Ragini. He succeeded too in it but only when he was busy in office or his project. At night he would always remember Ragini. (‘Uff..so much Love..haha’).

On the other side Ragini too felt bad for Laksh. Though she didn’t know that he had started loving her but she thought that she was too rude while speaking. “I think I was too rude to him. He was talking so sweetly and I…Sorry toh chodo I didn’t even say thanks to him. He has done so much for me, took all the blame on himself. I can’t even ask his phone number from dad as he is angry on him. So what should I do God ji” she said to herself while pouting. “I hope I meet him again. Sorry thanks bol dungi. Please please God ji, Wapas milva dena”
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“Maa, you go and come fast, I’ll wait here” said Laksh. “Laksh, you have come till here, at least come inside na. This is temple, you no need to pay any fees to go inside” “Maa, I am already getting late. So you go fast and come” “LAKSH” “Okay, meri maa, Ill come” He folded his hands as namastey and touched them to his forehead. They got down and started moving towards the temple. While climbing the steps he saw something which made him freeze on the spot. He saw Ragini, who was looking like heavenly angel in white anarkali suit while descending the steps. Her hairs were coming on her face again and again. She was talking and laughing with her dadi while descending. She looked at him suddenly, she seemed very happy to see him there and she hurriedly started getting down, and exactly at the time when she reached him her leg got twisted and she was about to fall but was been saved at nick time by Laksh. He caught her in his arms and started his staring session.

Iss lamhe ko rok doon
Yaa main khud ko is mein jhonk doon
Kya karun.. kya karun.. kya karun…
Iss lamhe.. main kuchh bhi jaanu na
She opened her closed eyes, which she had closed due to fear of falling.
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Bann gaye silsile
“Hello, Mr Laksh.. Are you listening…Hello” She waved her hands in front of him. She then clapped hands in front of him many times, when she didn’t get any response. Lastly she shook him hard by holding his shoulder and he came to reality. He saw her and then his hands. “Was he dreaming?” he thought (Duhh.. this Laksh was seriously dreaming…day dreamer) “What, what happened?” asked Laksh after composing himself. “I think I should ask you that Mr. Laksh. What happened? Why were you so lost? Any problem?”
He looked at her and again got hooked up in her eyes. He lost in her beautiful brown orbs.
O sudh-budh khoyi hai khoyi maine
Haan jaan gawaayi, gawaayi maine
Haan tujhko basaya hai dhadkan mein
Saanware…
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile
“No..not at all. I am okay” he said slowly. “Okay..Anyways I was hoping I could meet you and see God fulfilled thi wish of mine” Ragini said smiling brightly. Laksh somewhat started feeling happy that she was praying to God to meet him but…“Sorry and thank you so much for helping me. I couldn’t say it the other day as everything happened in so much hurry and I didn’t even had your number so… ” “Aaa..It’s ok Ragini, I understand” He said giving a fake smile. “Ok then…I’ll leave. Dadi must be waiting for me. Bye” “Bye” “And Yaa, You are very nice person Laksh. Thank you once again” She said and smiled at him.

Khud ko kho kar tujhko paaya
Iss tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
O….
Khud ko kho kar tujhko paaya
Iss tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
Teri lagan mein sab hai gawaaya
Iss tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
Teri hansi, meri khushi
Meri khushi tu hi…
She turned and left.
Tose naina jab se miley
Tose naina jab se miley
Bann gaye silsile
Naina naina laage…
“Ragini” Laksh called out Ragini and she turned. He came towards her “I just wanted to ask you one question” “Yes…sure” “Why did you tell me to reject?” Ragini’s face fell and she answered furiously “That is none of your business Mr. Laksh. And why does it matters to you, I talked with you nicely that doesn’t mean that we are friends and I will share everything with you. Good bye.” And she left. “It matters Ragini, it matters. But why do I feel something is wrong. I will have to find out.” He looked determined towards the car in which Ragini just left. “Ek baar chod diya Ragini, dubara nahi. I will find out what is the problem you are going through.”
Laksh started following Ragini everywhere she would go. Home, music classes, shopping malls, market, restraunts everywhere. He just stared at her lovingly. He had deeply fallen in love with. He had also stopped going to his office, without giving any leave application.

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“Simran…I think you should not sing it that way. Wait let me teach you” said Sanskaar not liking the tune Simran had picked up. Ragini and her friends were practicing in for their upcoming competition. And there, there was Laksh standing outside the class stating at Ragini through the window. Ragini was playing guitar, and suddenly she looked outside, Laksh immediately ducked. Ragini got some doubt, but shooed away her thoughts and resumed her work that is playing guitar. Her eyes again moved towards the window and Laksh ducked once again but he was late this time. Ragini had already seen him. “Laksh beta, today is not your day. Just go from here now. But before going I’ll just take a glimpse of her” saying he moved up and saw inside through window but didn’t find her there. “Arey, just now she was there and where she went now” he said to himself confused. “Because she is behind you” He widened his eyes in shock and slowly turned behind. He saw Ragini standing there in front of him giving deathly glares to him. “What the hell are you doing here? Are you following me?” She shouted.

“I just wanted answers to my questions Ragini” “I have already told you Laksh, it is none of your business” she shouted again. Hearing her shouts all her friends came out to see what was happening. “What happened Rags? Is he troubling you?” asked Sanskaar looking at Laksh, and almost moved forward ready to beat Laksh “No Sanskaar please stop, let me handle this. And Laksh you, you want answers na then meet me tomorrow” she took his mobile phone from his hands and saved her number in it. “Decide the place call me. And now please leave.”
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Ragini was waiting for Laksh on road (jahan koi ata jata nahi). Laksh came after 10 mins, and instantly got down from his car. “Sorry sorry, I am late…who actually” “I don’t have time to listen to your stupid excuses…” “I just wanted to tell you that” he again got interrupted “that you are in love with me right” Laksh looked at her stunned. How did she come to know. “Don’t look surprised, no guy follows a girl after rejection. And too for simple answers. Look Laksh, I don’t love you. I love someone else” “But that person loves someone else” now it was Ragini’s turn to get stunned. She composed herself and said “So if you know now then just stop following me” “Never” “What? But I love someone else” “It’s ok. It doesn’t matter. Main phir bhi tumko chahungo” “Are you insane? Knowing I already love someone else you are still saying you will love me?”

“Yes, Ragini because I truly love you. And the one you love doesn’t even look at you Ragini. Why are you wasting your time and love on a person who doesn’t even care for you” Ragini felt hurt little bit and thought for some time. “Ok, you love me na and you also want to marry me. But marrying me is not that easy. You don’t know me. I am very ziddhi. Will you be able to take my responsibility all your life without any tantrums?” “Yes Ragini, I would do anything for you.” Laksh got a little ray of hope to get Ragini into his life forever. “Then you have to prove your love. You have 10 days. You should do everything whatever I tell you to do. Agree?” “Agreed” said Laksh firmly.
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To be continued…..

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    61 Comments

    1. aleeza on June 5, 2017 8:10 am

      Nice

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:01 pm

        Tysm dea

    2. Naymaz on June 5, 2017 8:23 am

      I am in love wid this ff
      Continue soon

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:02 pm

        Tysm dea Naymaz.. ill update soon?

      • Naymaz on June 5, 2017 4:04 pm

        Hey do call me polly and friends??

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:09 pm

        OK.. sure..Polly
        AM rakshanda.. u can call me Rakshu☺
        and yeah.. friends???

    3. lovely7 on June 5, 2017 8:40 am

      Amazing

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:03 pm

        Tysm dea?

    4. amul on June 5, 2017 9:30 am

      nice

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:03 pm

        Tysm dea?

    5. Naagin on June 5, 2017 9:39 am

      Love it

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:04 pm

        Tysm dea?

    6. Asw on June 5, 2017 10:53 am

      Nice poor laksh ragini going to difficult task ? keep going

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:05 pm

        Tysm dea?

    7. avika on June 5, 2017 10:59 am

      nice waiting for next part

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:05 pm

        Tysm dea?

    8. jaan on June 5, 2017 11:09 am

      Amazing???

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:06 pm

        Tysm dea?

    9. Megha on June 5, 2017 11:34 am

      Awesome

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:07 pm

        Tysm dea?

    10. Bela on June 5, 2017 12:44 pm

      Aww my Laksh?????
      This Ragini is going to eat her words when the 10 days get over. And how dare that stupid Sanskaar come to beat my Laksh????

      Fabulous update dear???

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:12 pm

        No no Laksh is mine????

        Just joking .. and Tysm dea..
        Aur sanskaar ko uski saza zaroor milegi..
        hope to see your cocktail soon dea.. your fans are waiting.. unko iss tarah se na tadpa..!!??

    11. Arjuna on June 5, 2017 1:20 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:13 pm

        Tysm dea?

    12. Sherin on June 5, 2017 1:28 pm

      Awesome

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:14 pm

        Tysm dea?

    13. Ankita on June 5, 2017 1:50 pm

      Nice eager to see what will laksh do

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 4:15 pm

        You will get to see soon ??
        thank you?

    14. Soumya on June 5, 2017 2:07 pm

      Superb di

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:53 pm

        Tysm dea soumya ?

    15. Anju on June 5, 2017 2:11 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:53 pm

        Tysm dea ?

    16. Aamy on June 5, 2017 3:49 pm

      Awesome

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:54 pm

        Tysm dea?

    17. Malu on June 5, 2017 4:20 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:55 pm

        Tysm dea?

    18. Elizebathlovely on June 5, 2017 4:44 pm

      Awesome

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:55 pm

        Tysm dea?

    19. Ammu on June 5, 2017 6:48 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are superb. Eagerly waiting for Raglak love story and please post next part ASAP

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:57 pm

        Tysm dea Ammu?
        I’ll try to post dea as soon as possible☺

    20. Monisha on June 5, 2017 7:09 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Rakshully on June 5, 2017 7:58 pm

        Tysm dea?

    21. Ashly on June 5, 2017 8:06 pm

      Awesome amazing superb fabulous

      • Rakshully on June 6, 2017 8:32 pm

        Tysm dea?

    22. Vennila on June 5, 2017 8:28 pm

      Superb part

      • Rakshully on June 6, 2017 8:36 pm

        Tysm dea?

    23. Monu on June 5, 2017 9:14 pm

      Awesome

      • Rakshully on June 6, 2017 8:38 pm

        Tysm dea?

    24. Vini on June 5, 2017 9:22 pm

      Simply superb

      • Rakshully on June 6, 2017 8:39 pm

        Tysm dea?

    25. Pearly on June 6, 2017 7:23 pm

      Awesome

      • Rakshully on June 6, 2017 8:40 pm

        Tysm dea?

    26. hafsana on June 6, 2017 9:13 pm

      Awesome dear ????❤❤❤❤❤Loved it ???

      • Rakshully on June 7, 2017 3:10 pm

        Thank you dea Hafsana.. and Happy Ramadan..!!!?

    27. IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 11:27 pm

      rakshu di !!! soo sorry for the late comment!! actually Ramadan are going on and i hardly get anytime but still i try to come to TU. hope you will forgive me!!
      coming to the episode it was truly amazing wonderful and mind blowing
      loved it too much
      lucky’s love for ragu and ragu’s wish to meet him was too cute loved that part
      raglak meet god i am flying it was too awesome
      lucky was following ragu wow!!
      i am eager to see how he is going to gain her love in 10 days!!! too much excited!!!
      waiting for the next part
      take care
      love you!!

      • Rakshully on June 7, 2017 3:15 pm

        Hi Iqra.. Thank you so much dea?
        Never be sorry for late comments and all please… Always God comes first Dea..
        and whenever you may comment you will always bring a bright smile on authors face (My P.O.V) with your lovely comments so never be sorry next time..
        A very Happy Ramadan To You..
        God bless you.. take care..?
        and yeah love you too..!!!

      • IQRA222 on June 7, 2017 3:58 pm

        aww so sweet of you!! your reply really brought a big smile on my face!! <3 <3

      • Rakshully on June 7, 2017 4:36 pm

        hehe… keep smiling?

      • Rakshully on June 7, 2017 4:37 pm

        hehe… Keep Smiling ..?

    28. hemalattha on June 7, 2017 11:43 am

      Nice

      • Rakshully on June 7, 2017 3:16 pm

        Tysm dea?

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