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Home»Fan Fiction»Meher’s RagSan one shot “LIFE BEYOND DEATH”
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Meher’s RagSan one shot “LIFE BEYOND DEATH”

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Hello guys.. Shocked to see me with rag_san one shot.. Lol don’t worry I was also shocked ?? but for a change “aaj kuch toofani karte hain” ??? tysm nita baby ?
Here we go

“LIFE BEYOND DEATH”

“ONE SHOT ”

Sanskar’s pov

Life is unpredictable… That’s why it is life… Everything was perfect.. But one day changed everything… We were going to Kolkata.. For meeting her family… But we couldn’t reach to our destination.. Instead that journey changed alot in our relationship.. We reached to a pious level…

I still remember that day when I first met her… She was a model struggling to establish herself… Whereas I was a bit stable in my career… My last fashion show was a hit.. So I decide to arrange a show on a bigger level… I was sitting in my cabin n deciding about my next show.. There she entered my cabin.. Lyk a storm.. She shouted at me.. Continously “What the hell is this.. I was waiting for my turn for audition.. But ur bl**dy staff is not paying heed to my words.. They were so rude towards me.. M struggling model it doesn’t mean that I will listen to ur staff??” oh man this girl is burning in anger… ?

“drink this first ” I passed a glass of chilled water to her

She drank that In a go.. I thought she must be thrusty afterall anger dries the water content in body… Lol?

” now tell me ur problem… But plz.. Don’t shout… Hv some mercy on my ears?” I said in pleading tone

“I want to give audition.. That’s it.. But they are not allowing me as according to them… I hv not filled the online registration form?” She said with puppy face…

“ok so tell me why should I allow you.. U hvnt compeleted the formalities either?” I said while sitting in boss style

” cz m best.. U wont get a better option them me..? “she said straight looking in my eyes

” hmm… Pretty confident.. I lyk this ?” I said

I gave her chance and I was happy as hell… Damn this girl is beyond my expectations.. Her neat walk.. Poised toe.. This girl knows how to carry style.. A true style diva..

” u r my show stopper” I said to her

“are u kidding me.. U want me to be a show stopper..u want a struggler to be a show stopper??? ” she was shocked

” I don’t like to repeat myself? “I said n left

That Girl had a unique charm.. Which attracts me towards her… Slowly we became friends…

Then I came to see her new shade.. A naughty ragini… I hvnt thought even in my worst dreams that she could be so naughty…

Once she asked me out on a date “sanskar let’s go out na.. M getting bore here?”

“ragini m bzy.. I hv a meeting.. Will go afterwards ” I said

But ragini was fuming with anger so she plan a revenge.. N poor me I was unaware of that…?

In meeting I sat on my chair n that was my biggest mistake.. As soon as I sat there I along with chair.. Which is now no longer a chair.. Fell on floor with a thud.. Yes!! This girl has dismantled my chair… Well I took a deep breath n let that go.. But ragini was in full masti mood… I dissmiss the meeting n came home in full anger… As soon as I open the door bingo… A bucket full of chilled water n small ice cubes fell on me.. Now this was it for me I shouted “ragini” ???

She came n I got awestruck Seeing her she was wearing a simple red saree.. Which undoubtedly I had designed for her but I never gather courage to present that to her… I was drooling over her.. ? I checked her out from head to toe.. Oh man this girl is eternal beauty.. Then I realized my position n I composes myself… “you were saying something sanskar ?” she said

“I luv u?” I said in flow… Without realizing what I said
Here heat reached to her cheeks n her face turns crimson… I realized what I said n I avoid the eye contact…

“I luv u too “I heard a feeble reply…

Voo hoo ??I was dancing in happiness… I was about to hug her but she stopped me as I was fully drenched.. I kept a pout..

” hw u find this dress ragu” I asked her after changing

She came towards my ear n said “itz a secret”

“achha ji ” then I start to tickle her n she laughs wholeheartedly..

Life was perfect… I hvnt imagine that I will fall for a girl like her.. But our destines were entangled… She moved in with me..

Our daily routine was like
Breakfast
*laughing *
lunch
*teasing *
dinner
*romance *

One day while having dinner I said “ragu I want to give an auspicious name to our relationship”

She looked at me with confusion

“I want to marry u.. Only if u r comfortable… Cz this decision Will affect ur career alot and “before I could say anything more she hugged me tightly n said” m ready to marry you… I don’t give a damn to my career but I want to be with you ”

I was shocked ?with her decision as I was expecting a refusal cz in our profession being married for a model is just lyk a declaration of ending her career…

We decide to go to Kolkata… Finally I was meeting with her parents… I was nervous lyk hell…

“ragini shekhar uncle marenge to nahi na mujhe?? ” I asked her in nervousness

” na na he will not kill u.. He will only throw u off the howrah bridge?? “she said with giggle

I gulp in fear ? n her small pranks were lighting more n more fear in me.. Ofcourse I was scared of him.. He was an ex army man…

We were in train.. Ragini was preparing me for the test.. She was literally behaving like my teacher

“sanskar if dad ask u to drink water drink that slowly.. If mom offers u sweets then don’t refuse I know you don’t like sweet but still.. Took a small piece with an ear to ear smile”

” okay mam any more Instructions ” I asked

” ha most important thing.. Focus on voice modulation ” ragini said

And I was giving her” are u serious ?”look

” aree don’t stare me.. I mean be polite.. N don’t raise ur voice..u kno once my bf came to meet me.. N dad put rifle on his head n he ran with Usain bolt’s speed.. But don’t worry show that u r confident… N be a man” ??she said n winks

“no m not a man.. U r scaring me”?? I said while gulping in fear

She look at me n laughs… That was her last whole hearted laugh… After that
We heard sound..
It happened so abruptly that we can’t even understand what was happening… It was shocking lyk hell.. Soon everything turns upside-down n we came to know that are train had been derailed… It was indeed a big accident last thing which I remember was holding her hand tightly…

I open my eyes i was on hospital bed and my each n every body part was not moving.. Wait what was that… Itz me…hw can i see myself lyng on hospital bed. It.. It means what.. No.. Hwz this possible…

There I saw mom dad n uttra crying miserably… But why are they crying… I am not getting anything what’s happening… Mom dad plz don’t cry I can’t see u crying I put my hand on mom’s shoulder.. N.. N it go through her shoulder…

I was taken aback… I shout lyk a mad… I was screaming… I was crying but no one can listen to me.. Hwz it possible… I finally broke down

“itz possible ” I heard a known voice

I turn n saw ragini.. I hugged her tightly…

” hwz this possible… Hw could you listen to me… Hw could you touch ” I asked her in utter confusion…

” cz we both are dead” she said

“what!!! ” I was shocked like hell…

” we… We.. We are… D.e.a.d ” I was taken aback

” yes we are ” she said with a smile..

Now I can understand why no one listen to me..
So now we are dead.. We couldn’t reach to Kolkata.. But we hv reached to the eternal level of luv.. Now we are blessed that we can safe guard our loved ones…

Death is peaceful… Indeed it is… No pain.. No suffering… Just luv.. Endless togetherness…. But now our responsibility increases as we hv to protect our loved one from all odds… N when me n ragini are together we can overcome anything…. Just lyk we over come the vicious cycle of life and death….

THE END

Ahh done with my first ever ragsan one shot.. Ok I know u want to kill me for killing them.. But when I start I don’t know how m gonna end that.. Except a broad outline…

And m soo sorry guys no ff from my side today… M not sure whether I will be able to post that tmrw or not… Itz aunvoidable.. Otherwise u kno my crazyness for being regular.. But don’t worry… I will bring sanskar in kuch iss tarah 2 in 2 episodes…

Luv u all ??

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142 Comments

  1. Eva on May 21, 2016 12:13 pm

    Mugdha 1….or 2 sacchi bhul gayi hu..?? tu toh bohot talented hai..sab couples peh kitna accha likti ho…and yeah u r right..i want to kill u right now for killing them..ahhhh….? koi nehi woh kahito jakar mile…btw sacchi batana..Ragsan os likne ka idea tere iss chote seh cute seh dimaag mein kese aya???

    • Mugdha on May 21, 2016 1:42 pm

      I’m Mugdha 2 teri saas..?

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:53 pm

      U mean humari saas.. ????

    • Anjali on May 21, 2016 6:01 pm

      Meri pagalon…. sacchi… I swear ur both mad….??

      Kya hua tum dono ko??

      Mujhe bhi dekhni h sautan vs sautan. ???

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:37 pm

      Dono m kon kon aata hai plz specify anji ???

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:56 pm

      Ha to Meher bula.. Afterall teri sautan hoon.. Actually firstly I want to kill ragini.. Then I thought to make her blind bt finally maar dala dono ko ???

      Idea ese aya mne ye raglak pe likha tha then.. Pta ni q bt RagSan dimag m aa gya.. Fir Nita se kha ek choose kr usne RagSan kia.. To Bas hote hote ye ho gya… ???

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 2:00 pm

      Nehi..ab Mugdha ka koi problem nehi hai..Mugdha 2 toh hamari SaaS bangayi hai unhe mammiji kahungi and tujhe…Meher….btw mein uski first wife hu..aur Tu second..

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 2:03 pm

      Btw Meher mere liye plz ek os likhegi Jaha swalak aur swasan dono ho? Mere liye itna karle plz akhir mein teri eklauti sautan Jo hu…

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:14 pm

      Tere liye kuch b.. Bas ye bta last m swara kiske sath chahiye tujhe… Ab apni underage sautan k liye itta to kar sakti hoon.. ???

      Sahi kaha na maine mummy ji ?????

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 3:07 pm

      Last me…..oho…mujhe toh dono pasand hai…plz Raglak maat karna….baki sab tum decide karo…agar unko mar bhi dalogi tabhi chalenga..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 3:57 pm

      Mai fir swasan rkhungi… U know na I hv height issues with swaLak ?????

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 5:51 pm

      What height issues?

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 5:54 pm

      Make sure ki Laksh ka character bohot accha ho…Ragini ko Laksh ki behen banana….

    • Anjali on May 21, 2016 6:03 pm

      Lol… meri evu ko Raglak bilkhul pasand nhi…. ????

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 6:10 pm

      And whats your fb id?

    • Vaishnavi on May 21, 2016 6:30 pm

      U both r so self obsessed and lame…matlaab….kya lame topic chuna hai…Sanskar?Useh kon husband ke roop mein chahega?Sanskar was the one who came here for revenge…he provoked Ragini too…..and u both…seriously….Fight for Laksh….he is better than Sanskar..

    • Mugdha on May 21, 2016 6:40 pm

      OO meri bahuo…suno….i’m gonna select my son’s wife….so first challenge for u both Eva bahu u write a os on Raglak(I know u hate them isi liye) aur Meher bahu…u write one on swalak(Ragsan dena chahti thi par u wrote already0Phir meh decide karungi ki mere Sanskar ke liye kon zada accha hai…dekti hu mere Sanskar ke liye kon kya karta hai… 😛 (Mujhe saas banaya hai na tum dono ne…lo abb saas banke hukum chalaogi mein)

    • Mugdha on May 21, 2016 7:30 pm

      Vaishnavi..stay out of this convo..u r not a part of it and no one wants to know you opinion..u like Laksh we like Sanskar its ok…don’t call my daughters in law lame…we r friends…so plz u don’t understand anything be quiet ?

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:43 pm

      @vaishnavi dear we luv sanskar from bottom of our hearts n let me tell you why…

      1. I agree he was the one who had provoked ragini… But he was first one who realized that he was wrong
      2. When ragini’s truth came out n laksh being legally married to ragini wants swara back who was that tym legally married to sanskar… Sanskar back off from that scenario
      3. Sanskar dint kidnapped anyone for the sake of revenge
      He luvs swara selflessly
      4. Sanskar didn’t ditch his bride at mandap

      That’s my pov…I luv namish.. No offense…. N yup m swasan n raglak fan… ?????

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:45 pm

      Mummy ji plz swaLak nhi… I hv height issues with them… N m desperate about that… Swara bhut chhoti hai laksh se… Eva ka theek dia hai… ???

      M swasan pe likh lungi… Eva raglak se khush hai ????

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 6:04 pm

      Hawww kbi ni… Ragini n laksh bhai bhn… Huh… No way…

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 7:17 pm

      Ja baat nehi karungi..tu meri baat nehi maan rahi hai..deklena..agar last mein Raglak dilhaya na toh meh..meh…ummm..ha..mein Tera saar phor dungi..sacchii..?? Raglak bhai behen chahiye..apni Underage sautan ke liye itna bhi nehi karsakti tu..abb toh tu definitely meri nanand hii hai..sautam nehi?? kattiii???

    • Anjali on May 21, 2016 7:17 pm

      ??????

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 7:38 pm

      Mammiji mere exams hai…baadme pakla likhungi Raglak pe..zada mushkil nehi hai..swasan peh likhungi…phir meri behen useh change kardegi..EVA CAN NEVER WRITE SOMETHING BASED ON RAGLAK ONLY..SWASAN KE LIYE RAGLAK KO SIDE CHARACTERS BANASAKTIHU..BUT THATS IT..NOT MAIN LEADS..?

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:47 pm

      Underage sautan k liye kuch b bt raglak bhai bhn ni… I luv them as a couple… They look so cute… ???

      SwaLak os likhungi ye km ni h tere liye…. ??

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 9:13 pm

      I have a perfect reason for hating Raglak..cause Ragini’s love won…as in negativity won…which I don’t support…btw mein Raglak par likhungi aur Tu swalak pe likh..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 11:26 pm

      Hum pehle court marriage kr chuke hain secretly ???

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 11:32 pm

      First wife is always first wife Meher…and I’m Sanku’s wife…

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 9:38 pm

      Mummy ji gussa na karo… BP badh jyega… ??? sansku Hume dantega ????

    • Mugdha on May 21, 2016 11:02 pm

      Useh toh mein datungi..mujhe binabataye Eva seh shadi karli ush nalayek ne…ab tera kya hoga beta? Tu Suju seh hii shadi karle…???

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 11:30 pm

      Mammiji…plz mere Sanku Ko nalayak maat kaho..woh bohot ache hai…aur ha sujju aur Meher ki shadi jaldi karao…

  2. Sara on May 21, 2016 12:13 pm

    So beautifully written meher…
    I loved it

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:56 pm

      Thnku so much dear

  3. poonam on May 21, 2016 12:16 pm

    awesome yaar thanks for ragsan……..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:57 pm

      Thnku for reading this ?

  4. chaitali on May 21, 2016 12:17 pm

    It was cute as well as emotional.But it is really a shock that u came with ragsan!!!

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:57 pm

      It a shock for me as well.. I never ever thought of RagSan… I am swasan n raglak fan…. ?

  5. Aashi on May 21, 2016 12:21 pm

    This was just perfect!!……this was best ragsan ff I had ever read!!……
    Just fab dear!!…..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:58 pm

      Thnku so much dear…

      I hv never written RagSan.. But m glad that you lyk it

  6. lovely on May 21, 2016 12:23 pm

    nice

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:12 pm

      Thnku

  7. S priya on May 21, 2016 12:25 pm

    Thanks fr ragsan…its gud tat u killed both…if one s alive ten it ill b v sad…

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:15 pm

      Thnku… Nxt tym I will kill one only ??? lol just kidding

  8. Sindhu rm on May 21, 2016 12:26 pm

    Emotional one meher nice

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:20 pm

      Thnku

  9. Sonya on May 21, 2016 12:26 pm

    Superb dear
    You’ve written so well
    I feel like I was actually watching all those scenes
    It’s ok atleast they r together even after the death
    Once again amazing

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:21 pm

      Thnku so much

      M glad that you lyk it ???

  10. Dhara on May 21, 2016 12:27 pm

    Nice and sad

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:21 pm

      Thnku

  11. Bisha on May 21, 2016 12:31 pm

    Yipwee!! Yahoo!! Yay!! *dances madly with joy* . MEher is back with a wondrful RagSan os! Okay!i know i am a bigg drama queen. Kya karun haii, ye dil jo udta hai!! 😀 xD ♥♥
    I dint feel crying when I gotta know they r dead bcz they r together. And wo speech Swaragini jaisa tha, jab RagSan r together they can obercome anything!! Great! Tumhe compliment ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Do bar to mar chuki ho… aur bhi marti rahogi, but still Love You A Lot sweety sis!! Keep writing.♥♥♥

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:23 pm

      No way u r not biggest drama queen… Itz me ?

      Mne nhi maraa sachhhiiii ???????

      Luv u loads ???

      BTW I hv msged u on fb check out…

  12. Emz fasa on May 21, 2016 12:37 pm

    Awesome 🙂 superb mindblowing amazing os meher i loved it alot pls write more os on ragsan i love them 🙂 and coming to this os ending iam happy with it bcoz both are died or else if any one of them were dead then i would sad

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:24 pm

      Thnku so much dear…

      I can’t say whether I will write more or not… But I will try ??

  13. Sree on May 21, 2016 12:41 pm

    That was an amazing one shot. I dont know why nost of the os end up killing the lead and it really makea me very sad. About ur os fron first i was laughing and suddenly i was on the verge to cry still u made me smile with ragini’s smile. I loved this os di. But i am very sad as i wanted to read ur ff today. But its ok. Post tomorrow atleast di. This is the first ragsan os i read. But i am very happy that i read this. Love u di and tc. 🙂

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:27 pm

      Chhutki.. I was supposed to post this on Sunday but.. Kal scene ho gya to I can’t write episode… This was almost compeleted so I Complete this n post this..

      Luv u loads ???

  14. priya on May 21, 2016 12:45 pm

    Wow tq for ragsan os di…….n this os is emotional n funny too… I love ragsan?????n tqs for ragsan os once again….

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:27 pm

      Thnku dear for reading this ??

  15. priya on May 21, 2016 1:00 pm

    its awesome meher 🙂 <3

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:28 pm

      Thnku dear

  16. Shipra on May 21, 2016 1:18 pm

    Meher di One Shot is Awesome. But Where is Episode of Kuch iss tarah 2 and Yeh Dooriyan. You dont know it is very difficult for me to wait 24 hours to read second part. Today you have not posted episodes. Jao Katti

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 1:29 pm

      Sry babu.. I hvnt written any of them till now.. But I will post tmrw… Dono k bade bade post karungi… Sryyyyy baby ????

    • Shipra on May 21, 2016 2:17 pm

      Jao Maaf Kiya. Par ho sake to shaam tak post kar dena. Please Please…Mugdha 1 di …???

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:28 pm

      Ok baby ???

    • Shipra on May 21, 2016 3:16 pm

      I am not a baby. You are very bad. You are telling me baby. I am 11 years old. So I am not a baby. By the way what is your age di? Di Where are youfrom?

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 3:50 pm

      Aww my 11 yr old baby ???
      BTW m just sweet 18 n m from delhi…

      BABY ???

    • Shipra on May 21, 2016 6:07 pm

      Which is u r favourite ff? Mugdha 1Di….

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:49 pm

      I dreamt a dream by sindhuja?????

  17. Anjali on May 21, 2016 2:03 pm

    Arre.. meri one shot rani… superb as usual… first even i was like.. .whaaaat… meher wrote ragsan os!!! ????

    But anyways I read it… and ?? it was awesome…????

    Waiting for kit2 ??

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:34 pm

      I was also lyk… Sach m RagSan ???

      Tysm baby

  18. Mughda on May 21, 2016 2:11 pm

    it was awesome actually I’m a silent reader. I never commented on any ff plz di me her di can u tell me which browser u use to visit telly updates n to post your submission. bcz my browser is not working plz its a request.

  19. Mughda on May 21, 2016 2:12 pm

    it was awesome actually I’m a silent reader. I never commented on any ff plz di me her di can u tell me which browser u use to visit telly updates n to post your submission. bcz my browser is not working plz its a request. I’m talking about phone.

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 2:35 pm

      Thnku dear…

      I use uc browser ???

  20. SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:51 pm

    Pehle toh mai tere se bht gussa thi…
    RagSan os…
    Mujhe wo dono bhai behen lagte h…. kya karu…
    BT phir tune likha tha… toh padhna pada…
    Sanky ko maar diya ??. ..
    Kitni muskil se padhi hu mai… Mujhe hi pata h…. ragsan imagine hi nhi hota… so maine ragini k jagah swara ko imagine kiya

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 3:04 pm

      Lol. . I too can’t imagine RagSan.. But ye galti Nita ki hai use bol… ?? mne Sanskar ki jgh laksh le k likha baad m edit kia… ????

      U know mujhe b vo bhai bhn late hai.. Bt kya karu.. N sply vo jail wala jb se aya tha merko dono twins lgne lage the.. ???

      No offense plz..

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 4:19 pm

      Yâar mai yaha zyada nhi bolunngi bcz ragsan fans will c… n may be they will be offended so… no more bakwas??…. bt nita tune ye Acha nhi kiya…. waise be aaj kal 10 mai se 5 ragsan ff hote h…. aur tune ek swasan writer se b ragsan likhwa diya

    • Nita on May 21, 2016 5:39 pm

      Hai Ram…. bill mere naam ka phat raha hai…..bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha…. gor kalyug hai kalyug….

      even i m a swasan fan yaar but i thought it will be a new venture for Meher….

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 7:00 pm

      Aur nita kalyug ki ravan hai meher…. n sorry haan meher ravan ka female gender nhi pata so male se kaam chala le….
      By yâar nita… raglak se b kam chal jata tune sanky ko q beech mai ghusa diya…

    • Nita on May 21, 2016 11:11 pm

      Sahi kaha Sujata…. Lady Ravan…. ??…… Ramji ke ghar mein Ravan…

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 6:39 pm

      Hehehehe thank god bill Nita pe Fata… ????

      Luv u loads Nita for saving me ????

    • Nita on May 21, 2016 11:13 pm

      bill mere naam ka phado n khud sare wows m awesomes leke jaao…. yeh kaha ka nyay hai???

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 12:46 am

      Sujata ki bachhi… Tu pehle nxt chappy post kr fir dekhte hain ravan n all..

      Nita bby ye meher ka nyay hai ???

  21. Nita on May 21, 2016 2:52 pm

    its awesome baby…… congrats on your first ragsan shot…. n i m very angry on u for not posting any of the ffs today….. i have been checking for update since 11…. ??…. i want one tomorrow atleast….

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 3:52 pm

      Thnku baby n pairing ka credit terko…

      N pakka kl post kr dunga that too bade bade chappy??

    • Nita on May 21, 2016 5:41 pm

      thx …..
      n if u dont upload bade bade chapy 2moro u r dead baby……

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 6:40 pm

      What if kl b na post karu to??

    • Nita on May 21, 2016 11:06 pm

      mujhe kuch khaas karne ki zarurat nahi padegi…. baki ki janta kafi hai….

  22. Crazygirl on May 21, 2016 3:03 pm

    Amazing os made me cry

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 3:53 pm

      Thnku dear n don’t cry ?

    • Crazygirl on May 21, 2016 10:37 pm

      I had cry cause it was awesome?

  23. Serena on May 21, 2016 3:06 pm

    OMG!??? Dhyan se dekho is masum chehre ko Jo RAGSAN os ke saath aaya h…well Di ap rag-san likho ya swa-lak main toh swasan samajh ke hi padhungi???? coz I don’t know why I can see ragsan as siblings only.???.well about os it was awesome…???
    And as I read it sa swasan it was more awesome?????????
    But bura lava baad me dono ????ban gaye.

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 3:55 pm

      Look kisi ne to mana k m masoom hoon… ???

      Dear mere puch kaise likha hai mne… Merko b vo lo ese he lagte hai… Bt koi ni… For a change..

      ?????

  24. Abdul hafiz(uma). on May 21, 2016 3:48 pm

    Ot teri ki, tum aur ragsan ff, am I day dreaming??.By the way, tum story likne me No.2 ho yeh mujhe pata hai (cholly No. 1 pe koi aur hai, lol).Ab marne or marwane mai be top kargayi, hats of to you.Har shot pe swasan ko marti ho, ab ragsan ko b mardi, vo b first shot pei, great.Tumne har shot pe hero or heroine ko mar neki kasam li rakki he kya???You killed them, now I want to kill you.But no worries, I am not gonna kill you, bcz If I kill you,then Eva apni sautan ko degi, or mein yeh paap nehi kar sakti.After all, I am also human, I have also right to see ‘SAUTAN VS SAUTAN’game.I am going to enjoy it.I am playing silent audience role, lol.Too much fun is waiting for me.Yehhh, hurray,

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 5:56 pm

      Oyyeee..Uma..maar de iseh..mere raste ka kata hata de…

    • Abdul hafiz(uma). on May 21, 2016 6:04 pm

      Nehi re di.Yeh galat hogi,after all, vo apni parents ki loti bacchi hai, aur bacche bagwan ki roop hote hein.BTW how is riya now??? Any improvement?

    • Shipra on May 21, 2016 6:13 pm

      Nahi…… Meher di ko kuch mat kaho. Nahi to sanky ko jaldi nahi layegi. Dusra tyre bhi Puncher kar dengi… Fir hum log ko aur wait karna padega..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 6:47 pm

      Tu to jlti hai mrse cz sanskar mujhe zada pyar karta hai ?

    • Anjali on May 21, 2016 7:20 pm

      Heyy uma… I’ve seen u many times here in tu… hope I don’t mind my intervention…

      Actually riyas sister had posted saying that riya has come out if the coma now..with no side effects or any thing… she’s fine now… but she needs 2 months physio therapy and complete bed rest…

      So our riya is angry…???

      But otherwise she’s fine..???

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 7:20 pm

      Zada seriously nehi le liye yeh tunne?? Riya is fine now..

    • Abdul hafiz(uma). on May 21, 2016 7:57 pm

      Thank you so much for the information.I like you and love your ff also.I am silent reader of your ff.So, no need to hesitate.Tum meri saath kabhi bi baat kar sakti ho.Thank god, riya is fine now.Thank you once again.

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 6:46 pm

      Esa kuch ni h k mar deti hoon… Look mne 16 one shot likhe h n sid or sry 3 m swara ko mara n 2 m sanskar ko… Esa thodi hota hai…
      Sautan vs sautan lol… ????

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 7:35 pm

      Sanskar mujse zada pyar karta hai…tu mujhe maar ne ki planning kareh useh pehle tujhe maar dena zada accha hoga…kk mujhe marne ki koshish karegi na tabhi mera Sanskar ake apni Eva ki bachaeja….??

    • Anjali on May 21, 2016 8:14 pm

      Hawwww…. Meri one shot rani ko kuch mat karo… kya h yeh…. ????
      Eva… tum ragini jaisi mat ban…. ya phir parineeta jaisi…
      Wanting to kill ppl…??

      Jk.. ik my sis is too sweet for that.

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:52 pm

      So guys congrats… I don’t know riya but itz osm that she is fine…. ???

      I luv u shipra ?????

      Thank God kisi(uma) m to Akal hai…

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 9:16 pm

      Meher supports Ragini’s crazy love..matlab ki raglak..so I think Ragini ke kadmo par chalke mujhe Sanslar miljayega…u people can support Ragini..then thoda support mujhe bhi karlo….?

    • Shipra on May 21, 2016 9:27 pm

      Love u too di. By the way di Can we friends?

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 9:13 pm

      M tujhe q marungi.. Pgl tb tk teri shaadi ki umar hogi… Tb tk hum shaadi or chuke honge ????

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 9:14 pm

      Dekh le anji is underage sautan ko….

      Sab mujh masoom k peeche peeche hai… ???????????

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 10:02 pm

      Tu masoom ke alava sab kuch hai..?

    • Anjali on May 21, 2016 10:10 pm

      Tum masoom bilkhul nhi ho…. par evu… ise pareshaan mat kar… bechari!!! ???

    • Nita on May 21, 2016 11:17 pm

      Like Meher n bichari…. who says so!!!!! ???

    • Mugdha on May 21, 2016 11:22 pm

      Meher bhi Eva Ko preshan kar rahi hai…agg dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai…lets enjoy it..Meher agar tujhe meri bahu ki sautan banna hai toh apni madat khud kar…fight for yourself…patni ka title to woh legayi..ab sautan ka bhi title lejayegi..don’t be a cry baby??? mere Sanku koh nehi pasand..

    • Anjali on May 22, 2016 12:29 am

      Tum sab… sacchi… ill go mad if I listen to u all… both mugdha 1, mugdha 2 and underage sautan…??????

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 9:00 am

      U mean if u read all this hai na anjali ??

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 9:48 pm

      Oo underage sautan I never support her crazy luv… But I luv ragu… N more than that I luv teju…

      Bhool Ja koi terko support krega ??????

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 9:50 pm

      Pgl ye b puchne ki baat hai… U r my baby ???

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 10:00 pm

      Seriously? Tu shadi ki baat kar rahi hai.mene toh Sanku seh bal vivah karliye tha…meri toh shadi pehle hi hogayi..tu apni chinta kar..mein apne pati ko dubara shadi karne nehi dungi..??

    • Shipra on May 21, 2016 10:10 pm

      Thank You So much di. Di what is u r real name? If u Want u can tell?

    • Mugdha on May 21, 2016 11:00 pm

      Hain? Mere jigar ke tukre mere bete neh mujhe bina bataye shadi karli? Nehiiiiiii..yeh sunne seh pehle mein behri kyu nehi hogayi..???

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 11:43 pm

      Bal vivah illegal hai.. . My pyri underage sautan….

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 11:44 pm

      My name is mugdha

    • Eva on May 21, 2016 11:52 pm

      Legal illegal ki chinta tu kar…mein toh bal vivah karchuki hu…ab kuch nehi hosakta..

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 12:21 am

      Sasu ma u mean padhne se pehle andhi q ni ho hogai ????

  25. sherin on May 21, 2016 3:52 pm

    Awesome yaar those pranks were really cute

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:03 pm

      Thnku

  26. Anu on May 21, 2016 3:53 pm

    Omg what! U wrote a RagSan OS ??
    I was laughing for half an hour after realizing its thr truth. But after reading this ???
    But Acha hai, at least they are together even after death ???

    Love you ???

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:05 pm

      Itz ok after writing this I was also laughing ?????

      Luv u too baby ?

  27. JANVI on May 21, 2016 5:30 pm

    oooommmmgggg……
    meher u wrote ragsan ff…. i really cant believe…
    bt after reading ur update i was really happy that there was no separation…..
    overall i luvd ur tufani update…..lol…..
    its hard fr me to imagine ragsan… they r more lyk siblings..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:06 pm

      Same here I imagine raglak… ???

  28. mugdha on May 21, 2016 5:43 pm

    Omg mehar…u nailed it…m mugdha of raglak swasan a tale of pure love.. U r amazing… Seriously… Loved…no…actually i looooooovvvvvveeeedddddd ittttttttt..

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:07 pm

      Aw thanks ???

  29. kumu. on May 21, 2016 6:35 pm

    awesome..loved it..:)

    • Meher on May 21, 2016 7:53 pm

      Thnku

  30. Piyali on May 21, 2016 10:12 pm

    wow……….meher dii………………………..seeing your one shots i am sure you are elder to me……….dii this was awesome………i loved sanskar’s dialogue ” ragini , papa mujhe marenge to nahi……….” seriously i was laughing………….and dii……………i have read most of your one shots on swasan………actually i couldn,’t comment as i was late in reading them………………..when you wrote them i was away from tu for one omnth (due to my exams ) thats why…………but di…………………….i always used to be like………..how can somebody write so well……….seriously dii……….you are mind blowing………………………………….i love your one shots…………………………….. keep writing………….be happy di…………..

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 12:22 am

      Wait m 18… Now u know whether m elder to u or not …. My all one shotz n ffs were on swasan this is first ever RagSan shot…

      Thanks so much..

      Luv u loads

  31. Afa on May 21, 2016 10:24 pm

    its just awesome…mind blowing…amazing…I don’t know how to say…It just……….. love you dea

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 12:23 am

      Thnku so much dear ????

  32. sneha on May 21, 2016 10:52 pm

    Awsome di!!! lovd it…nd sorry fr the late comment… 🙁

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 12:23 am

      Don’t be sorry baby.. ???

  33. Aami on May 22, 2016 3:13 am

    hlw mehar……. ??? rrally i bcme shoked by hearing ragsan but really ur story was tooo funny ???but on the last??….. why u killed thm…. r u habit of kiiling the couples in last……. its not fair dear….. ??? but i lvd ur stryyyy….. ???
    love u lotz….

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 9:01 am

      Sachhi meri habbit ni hai… Look I hv told uma k sabko nhi mara mne ???

  34. anamica on May 22, 2016 5:58 pm

    wow it was a good one shot! very nice! funny and emotional!

    • Meher on May 22, 2016 8:31 pm

      Thnku dear

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