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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»masquerade a shraman os (ek duje ke vaaste)
Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

masquerade a shraman os (ek duje ke vaaste)

MarieBy MarieJuly 13, 201650 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello my frnds…!! 😀
MARIA– here wid anothr os…… named…
—-masquerade—- 😉
Hope u lyk it…

—a girl is sitting in sm cafeteria reading a novel—-
—suddenly a boy cms to her n sit on d frnt chair of her table—–
—girl didnt notice n is busyy—-
—-boy knocked on her book—
Boy: hello??! 😀
girl give a wat expression n again strts reading her book…. 🙂
Boy again did same….
Hello??!
Girl realize that he will nt let her read peacefully so she keep hr book aside on d table……
Girl wid full attention: wat??!!
Boy: ooy chill yr….i m just saying hello…. 😀
Girl: r u nuts?? Dont u have any work…..go away…
Boy: haww so mean yr….. m just saying hello n u……aftr all u r here alone……(he flirts wid her) so u knw i m giving u cmpany…..
Girl: look mister i dont knw who u r? wat r u doing here….n yeah 1 more thing their is no rule of here that u have to sit wid a patner…..

Boy : who said? 😀
girl : m saying….
Boy: i dont believe u….. 😀
Girl: its ur dad’s cafe…??
Boy: no….
Girl: bt its my dads cafe….. (she points her finger on a pic)
Boy c d pic n is shocked to c her standing wid d owner…..
Girl: my dad…….mr arshad mehra…..
Boy: u r suman…mehra..?? (shockingly)
Sumo nods…..
Sumo: now get lost….!
—-boy silently gets up n goes away—-

Sumo is bit confused by his behavior…..
Pagal….!
The boy cm to his home….
Sits on couch in shock….
Boy: oo my god… 😮
FLASHBACK:
ram boy father came to him n discuss abt his alliance…..
Ram: so shr u agree…..dont say no she is my best frnd arshad mehra’s daughter…. 🙂 🙂
Shr: no dad….i have no prob u happy m happy…..n wats her name suman na??
Ram: yes.. (he pats on shr shoulder n goes)
After he goes shr: kuch karna pade ga mai ye shaadi aadi nai karoo ga…

PRESENT:
shr to himself: gadha pagal……who said u to go n flirt wid her….aahhh
—–whole ni8 he thinks abt her—–
How can i face her tommorow…..
Ahh she will cm n……wait a min y m thinking so much abt her i dont want to marry my plan os gonna succeed……but….
——he thinks abt her n smiles——-
Oooy wats happening to me?? 😮

NEXT DAY MASQUERADE PARTY…….AT SHR HOME…..
all cm include sumo family…..
Malhotra family welcoms mehra family…..n introduse shraman to eachothr…. shr is guilty n sumo is so shocked to find dat shr (flirty) is d guy whome she is going to marry……..but poor sumo cant deny her parents wish…… 😀 😀

she grabs shr by hands n take him out…..
Sum: u r….!!! ??? 😮 i cant believe i said yes….how can i said yes fr marring u….??
Shr again flirt: aww y?? look m handsome dashing rich well educated young man…..what else do u want ?? 😀
sumo: shut up…u…u will say no…just go inside n say dat u cant marry me….go….
—–she pushes him inside but he grabs her by waist n pulls her close—–
Shr: u talk too much yr……be quite…..
Sumo: ooy leave me i said u….u flirty…..shr…
Shr: yr quite nai toh!

Sumo: nai toh wat?? Huh??
—-shr face cm closer to her—-
Shr slowly: nai toh…..u knw….wat will happen…. I can make u quite….
Sumo: ooy…… 😮 u……..
—–she pushes him—–
I will nt marry u at any cost…….go to hell……
Shr laughs….bt i will only marry u (he shout)
—she gives him wat ever look n goes inside—-

IN PARTY EVERY 1 IS ENJOYING N NOW ITS TYM TO DANCE……
everybdy arranged in two pairs shraman are in same…..
They dance……
Sumo strts to go….
Shr holds her hand fr back n pulls her close…..

Sumo: i dont want to dance wid u……leave me…..
Shr: but i want…or waise bhi…its ur dad’s place??
Sumo: no….
Shr: but its my dad place so quitly dance wid me…..
Sumo: hahahah vry funny…..u knw wat tommorrow my dad will finally ask my ans n u knw i will say no…..
—–she goes awy—–

PARTY IS ALMOST OVER SO SHR CMS OUTSIDE FR SM FRESH AIR—-
—-he sw sm boys r bullying a girl—–
—-n d girl in non othr dan sumo—–

—-he gets vry angry n beats boys vry hard—–
Shr is vry angry knw: how dare u touch her…..?? i will kill u all…..
—they all ran away—-shr atrts go aftr dem but sumo stops him—-

Sumo: stop it shr……r u crazy (she cares fr him) oo my god look blood is cmming frm ur lower lip….. She rubs d blood wid her finger (shr closes his eyes) i can handle y did u……

Shr: cause i love u……( sumo stops) n looks at him…..

S: wat……..
Shr : frm d frst day i saw…u ……i have gone crazy abt u….i dreamed abt u……u r niw became my lyf…… I knw its hard to believe dat a flirty boy lyk me can love smone.
But plzz. believe me…..

Sumo steps backward n goes home……
Shr to himself….. ullo… phirse….?? now its urclast meeting ab kar enjoy….she will definately say no…..tomorrow… 🙁

NEXT DAY…..
Shr n his family goes to mehras home for roka…..
—shr in mind—-
Kai ka roka…? She will say no…
They reach there….
Arshad makes ram eat sweets : ye pe dost sumo finally said yes fr d marriage 1 n final…
—–shr eyes widen in shock he is so happy n surprised—–
Shr: uncle can i….meet her..??
Arshad: hahahha ab toh wo teri hi hai beta…..ja..
—shr happily goes to hr room—

he sw sumo is trying to wear necklace—-
—sumo saw him n gets shyyy—-
—-he cms near her n makes her wear necklace—-
Shr: y did u said yes?? U were saying…..
Sumo: ok than i say no…..(she strts to go but he agin pulls her close)
Shr: i will nevet let u go……..kabardar jo mujhse door gai dobara…
Sumo: mai ja bhi nai sakti……
—-he leans closer to her to kiss her she dont want the kiss but cant resist—-
—-instead of kiss her on d lips he kiss on her forhead—-
—she opens her eyes n look at him with much surprise n love—-

Shr: first stage of relationship…..respect eachothr…..
—-they happily hug eachothr—–

—–THE END—–
So guys how ws it..??
Is it goid or just waste of tym..??
Guys agar ap ne itto sa bhi lyk kia toh plzz cmmnt…..! 🙂 🙂
N silent readers u tooo (dont stay silent) 😉

By by….!
LOVE U ALL 😀

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    50 Comments

    1. WeirdSister on July 13, 2016 7:10 pm

      Oh god maria…now I hve no words left….all good words hve gotten over…I can’t say anything else…it was amazing…u r d queen of is….!!
      🙂

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 8:44 pm

        Awww this means a lot to me dear…..!! Thank u sooo much fr such an awesome blossom cmmnt dear….!! 😀 🙂 🙂 😀

    2. Nikita on July 13, 2016 7:17 pm

      It was damn amazing.. Love you.. Maria di, u and ufaq.. Best os’s writer..

      • Nandu on July 13, 2016 8:27 pm

        Seriously i agree with you. They are the best!

      • LovelyLady on July 13, 2016 8:49 pm

        me too agree wd u…….

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 8:45 pm

        Thank u soooo much nikki dear….! Mre ally glad u lyk it…!! 🙂 🙂 Hehehehehehehe dear maria Bhi toh Mai hi hoon….. 😉

      • Nikita on July 13, 2016 9:08 pm

        Sorry.. Apko maria di* bulane ki habit ho gayi hai.. By maria I meant you only

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 9:52 pm

        Awww no prob yr Jo tujhe acha LAGE I WS joking dear…… 😉 kuch Bhi bula le pyaar se maria di* ya maria I won’t mind 🙂 🙂

    3. sona on July 13, 2016 7:19 pm

      Wwwooowwwww……..????☺☺☺☺
      Lovleyyyy…..???☺☺☺☺

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 8:46 pm

        Thanks a lot fr ur lovely cmmnt sona di…!! 😀 😀

    4. lily on July 13, 2016 7:37 pm

      soo sweet…i must say your os are very good…………………

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 8:47 pm

        Thanks a lot dear fr ur lovely cmmnt 😉 😉

    5. Shiny on July 13, 2016 7:44 pm

      Simple ..sweet …i loved it…yr how do u get such nice ideas …i really luv d way u write…plz write more …

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 8:49 pm

        Aww shiny thank u so much fr such a lovely cmmnt yr…..! Bs chota sa dimagh chal parta hai hehehe 😀 😀 !

    6. Nandu on July 13, 2016 8:29 pm

      LovedX100 it ! It was awesome

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 9:44 pm

        Haha thank u soo much fr cmmnting Nandu dear….!! 🙂

    7. LovelyLady on July 13, 2016 8:46 pm

      kya pucha h tumne…. is it waste of tym???
      nyc joke.. it was jst fab….. so cute,n lovely…. kya likhti ho yaarrrrr…….
      keep wrtng n loving me…. i kn u love me jst like i lv u….. am i rt???

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 9:42 pm

        Hahahahhahah nails I truly ask 😀
        Aww di itni tareeef m blushing….. Heheh 🙂 🙂
        Ye toh di koi pooochne ki baat hi nai hai……!! Of course i love n I know u love meee tooo!!
        Love u most…!!!! 😀

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 9:50 pm

        U r my best di…!! Muahhhh 😀

    8. Marie on July 13, 2016 8:51 pm

      Haha 😀 thank u so much fr ur sweet cmmnt dear…!! 😉

    9. Prettypreeti on July 13, 2016 9:02 pm

      Maro I don’t liked it but loved it so wonderful so sweet idea aacha tha kya khoob Liya Teri is and ff Dono hi awesome loved it and keep writing

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 9:49 pm

        Hehehehehehehe thank u….thank u..!!! Fr praising my OS n ff….!! 🙂 🙂 tu boht tareeef karti hai yr……!! 🙂 😀

    10. Khushi on July 13, 2016 9:59 pm

      Amazing Maria….kamaal dhamaal bemisal….loved it very much….kya likhti ho yr tum….and I also agree with all u and ufaq are OS queens….love u both….

      Aise hi post karti rehna aur bhi OS…..love u dear

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 10:43 pm

        Awwww thank u sooo much my khushi……!!!
        Dil Khush kar ditta Tussi…! 😀 heheh
        Yes u r ri8 UFaq API is a queen of OS…! 😀
        Love u dear…..!!!! Most.. 🙂 🙂

      • Khushi on July 13, 2016 11:32 pm

        P.S this is from sumo di also….??

      • Marie on July 14, 2016 12:32 am

        Thank u thank u…thank u!!! Sumo di…!!!!! Fr such a lovely cmmnt n thanks alot yr khushi tu di ke msgs transfer karti hai…..love u both !! Muahhhh ! 😀

    11. Sneha on July 13, 2016 10:09 pm

      Wow superb fabulous n i am having no words to show my feelings very nice carry on Marie di

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 10:45 pm

        Awwww thank u shooooo much sweeto..!! I m vry happy to c ur cmmnt here keep commuting dear….!! 😉 😉

      • Marie on July 14, 2016 12:33 am

        Thanks alot ishq…!! Fr ur lovely cmmnt…..! 🙂 🙂 keep cmmting dear…!!

    12. Anamika on July 13, 2016 10:12 pm

      Awww….. this was soooo cute….. jus loved it Marie….??

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 10:46 pm

        Awww !! Thank u so much fr such a lovely cmmnt anamika dear…!! 🙂 🙂

    13. Naina on July 13, 2016 11:11 pm

      It was good i really liked it ??????

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 11:37 pm

        Aww thank s tone fr such a lovely cmmnt dear…..!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    14. ufaq on July 13, 2016 11:15 pm

      Knock knock Mario
      How r u???
      One shot was ammmmazing I really loved it it was awesome
      Or one shots r better than mine guys do u agree????
      Gud one
      Take care

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 11:40 pm

        Opening door…………..
        M fyn alhamdullillah how r u api??? All fyn ?? 😀
        Thank u soo much fr tareeef….!! 😀
        N I don’t agree never…… U said dat I m better dan u evn u r better dan me now m not asking m telling….! 😀 😀
        Thanks di…..!
        I will tc u tooo take care of urself….! 😉

    15. Fatimagulesarfraz on July 13, 2016 11:16 pm

      Ohhh God dear !!!!! What a mind blowing story … very very nice ? … every dialogues … ufffff yr simply awwwwesome … this story was awwwwdorable????? .. luved it from the core … ???? … kitna zyada talent koot koot k bhara hy apky andr ? … very well done? … keep it up, up nd upppp ..

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 11:41 pm

        Awwwwww itni ziada tareeef yr Fatima m blushing heheh tum bht ziada tareeef karti ho m on cloud 9 😀 well thank u soooo soo much fr ur sweet n lovely words dear…!!
        Hehehehehehehe zaroor…!! I will go up up n upppp bs keep loving me lyk dis..! 😉

      • Fatimagulesarfraz on July 14, 2016 12:33 am

        Btw there is no cloud 9 ????? … bt agr ap pohnch gyi hn to may b hoga ?????

    16. Ishq Forever on July 13, 2016 11:41 pm

      Simply awesome I just loved the story Maria

      • Marie on July 14, 2016 1:38 am

        Thanks alot fr dis lovelg cmmnt dear! 😀

    17. rooktima on July 14, 2016 12:40 am

      superb??

    18. Marie on July 14, 2016 10:42 am

      Thankd alot rooktima..! 🙂

    19. HarSHaN on July 14, 2016 12:35 pm

      Superbb Maria(e)..Nycc Starting with “TokTok”in a book..Hope U present the next part soon..

      • Marie on July 14, 2016 2:03 pm

        Thanks a lot harshan yr dis is an OS I can post nxt OS but fr part I can post parts in my latest ff pyaar dosti hai…..!!
        I will be vry glad to c ur cmmnts on next OS or nxt parts of my ff also….!! 🙂 🙂
        N thank u sooo much fr ur precious cmmnt..!

      • Nandu on July 14, 2016 5:54 pm

        Haan toa us ff ka next part jaldi post karo na maria dear. Waitng for it cuz aaj bahut hee kam ff post huye hai.

      • Marie on July 14, 2016 7:38 pm

        Hahah Nandu dear kar dia 🙂 😀 thanks fr being so desperate ! 😀

    20. sss on July 14, 2016 5:42 pm

      nice awesome os..
      loved shraman also the tittle liked it

      • Marie on July 14, 2016 5:47 pm

        Thank u sooo much fr ur valuable cmmnt SSS !! 🙂 🙂
        Keep commenting dear…!! 🙂

    21. Marie on July 14, 2016 6:54 pm

      : joy:

    22. Marie on July 14, 2016 6:56 pm

      :joy:

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