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my married life – episode 20 (Ragini’s Revenge)

AstraBy AstraMarch 17, 201751 Comments5 Mins Read
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A dark room…

Laksh opens his eyes. He realizes his hands and legs are tied. He shocks.

“Hey..!! Anyone there..?? Plz help me..!!”
He shouts.

“Lucky…!! Is that you..??” Sanskar voice.

“Sanky..?? Why are we here..??”

“How we came here..??”

“I will tell…!!” They hear a lady voice.

Suddenly all lights get on one by one.

Then a music plays, (if you guys remembered it… it’s Akashavani radio starting music..)

Ti ti di.. ti ti ti di… ti ti…. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97bpv2qdvu0)

Ragini enters…
“Ragini..??” Sanlak shocks.

Rag:: not just me..! There is a special guest with us.

They looks. Ap comes out. Sanlak shocks again.

Laksh:: so, our LaSkar secret is out to mom too..??

They both take a gulp.

Ap:: Ragini, start your game now..!

Laksh:: maa, you both became one party..??

Ap: it’s better to have a bahu like Ragini, than son like you..!

Laksh: maa, what did i do..? as you asked i became topper in college, got many gold medals..

Ap: but, started drinking too..??

Sanskar: badi maa, not only drinking…

Laksh: chup bey..!

Ap: Ragini, start your game till they change..!!

Sanlak: no maa..!! help us plz..!!

Ragini holds a current plug… ‘let’s start the game..!’
Sanlak takes gulp.
she keeps plug in the socket.

A screen is on.

Sanky: are you going to show movie Ragini..?

Ragini: yes..! a great movie.

Laksh: wow.. you are so sweet…

Ragini smirks.

Then scene starts on screen,

‘Ye sehar ko ye huva kya… (what happend to this city..?)
*that no smoking add in every theatre we face..!!* oh..horrible.

Laksh: umm.. Ragini skip this part know..!!

Ragini: no..!! this is the movie..!!

Sanlak shocks.

*smoking is hazardous to health* the add finishes. Sanlak takes breath.

Sanskar: but Ragini, we don’t smoke. We just drink..!

Ragini: sanky, you are not understanding one point..! smoking-drinking are like brothers. Same like you..!! (she points finger to them)

LaSkar looks at each other.

Ragini: by the way, do you know who Mukesh is..?

Laksh: is he any actor in movies..!?

Ragini: yeah.. see this clip..

‘Hai my name is Mukesh. Consuming tobacco has made my kidneys spoiled…’

Laksh and Sanskar starts crying. Ragini cuts the video.

Laksh: oh, he is Mukesh.! We know him very well..

Ragini: so, you know everything and you are drinking still..??

Sanskar: but that was about smoking know Ragini..!

Ragini glares at Sanky.

Rag: oh, do you want to see on drinking..? just wait..!

LaSkar looks on what is she going to do.

She plays an old television serial in which a husband has come home drunk.

He beats her wife. Sanskar gets tears in eyes, ‘hey, don’t beat her..!’

Then wife cries, ‘my husband is drunkard..!’

Laksh cries keeping kerchief in his mouth.

Ragini: see, drinking kills human relations..!

Sansky: but Ragini is enough to kill human beings..!

Ragini glares at Sanky.

Ragini: so, I’m presenting a gift to LaSkar today…!!!

San lak looks at her.

Ragini: the three hours show of…

Laksh: show of..??

Ragini: these three clips repeated..!!

Sanlak shouts, ‘NOOOOOO’

Ragini starts the video.

‘Ye sehar ko ye huva kya…’ (in telugu- ee nagaraniki yemindi..?)

‘Ragini..!! plz.. they both shouts..!!’

Ragini goes out of room. The scene keeps repeating. They both are tied and can’t escape.

‘Ye sehar ko ye huva kya…’ after that.. ‘my name is mukesh…’ and later.. ‘my husband is drunkard…!!!’

Those three scenes keep repeating.

Laksh and Sanskar beats their heads to chair. They keep shouting… ‘Ragini plzz..’

While Mukesh add coming, Sanskar who’s eyes were red and he was panting,

Sanky: abbey mukesh bhai…. leave us..!!

Then that serial scene comes..!!

‘My husband is drunkard…!!’

Laksh crying, ‘sister, plz don’t cry..!!!’

Suddenly the video stops. LaSkar drops their heads in sigh. After few seconds,

They hear again…

‘Ye sehar ko ye huva kya….?’

They both raise their heads and shout… ‘NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO’

***** After three hours *****

The videos were still playing… many times played videos give a slow sound right, they are also coming like that.. ‘my..name is… mukesh’

Ragini enters.. Sanskar and Laksh have dropped their heads down, they were sleeping.

Ragini offs the video and then she plays other video.

‘Washing powder nirma… washing powder nirma…’

Laksh and Sanskar shudders their face and wakes.

Laksh: Ragini, what is your intention..?

The akashawani tune plays again…

Ragini: promise me that you will never drink again..!!

Sanky: 1st stop that music Ragini.. it’s…

Ragini: haa.. it’s..?? today I’m going to take revenge for my moti cheetah and princess too..!!

Laksh shocks..!!

Laksh: Ragini… no Ragini.. plzz…!!

Ragini: so, i hated boys bcz of you and i have married again you..!!

Laksh: i didn’t do it intentionally Ragini..! leave me… plz…!!

Ragini: sanky… your punishment is over..! you may leave..!!

She removes his ropes.. Sanky runs away.

Laksh: lucky guy..!!

Ragini clears her throat. Laksh looks at her. She sits in a chair before him. He takes a gulp.

She was holding so many papers.

Laksh: what are those Ragini..?

Ragini: poetry which i wrote..!

Laksh: wow.. do you write poems..? even I’m a poet..!!

Ragini: Laksh, till now no one survived after listening my poetry..!!

Laksh shocks.

Ragini: that’s why i always locked them in my closet.

Laksh takes gulp.

Laksh: not survived means, what actually happened Ragini..?

Ragini standing, a serious English movie music plays… ‘a man has forgot his name, a woman has forgot her husband name.. a boy has forgot his motor bike and a girl has forgot the ATM pin… I don’t know what you will forget….’

Laksh shocks…

So here my poetry starts….

She opens 1st page… Laksh looks with big eyes….

—————————– can’t predict what happens next.. let’s pray for Laksh—————–

You guys enjoy the music… ti ti di… ti ti ti di…. ti ti……….
Akashawani………

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    51 Comments

    1. dharani on March 17, 2017 2:49 pm

      omg!!!!! it is an awesome revenge ee nagaraniki emaindi oh god and that mukesh ki kahani i was laughing like hell and the poetry it is just awesome
      aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee see how much i liked the episode that i am not able to control my excitement

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:51 am

        hahah… thank you so much dear..

    2. Darshini on March 17, 2017 3:13 pm

      Hehe…asthu I was laughing all the way while reading…
      Oh no ap maa also joined in the mission uh…poor LasKar…sanskar is really a lucky boy…lol..
      Poor laksh…i thnk ragz wil mke him gone through evn mre..hehehe…
      Totally blockbuster…akashwani music…? ?

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:52 am

        thank you so much darshu…

    3. Akshata on March 17, 2017 3:13 pm

      hahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!! ROLF, i am rolling, afraid that i will fall down my chair. omg, what was that? i am seriously feeling bad for sanlak… oops LASKAR….. poor they. i cant even imagine their situation god even i get irritated while watching that, “Is shehar ko hua kya hai” and its really disgusting to see you know, then mukesh ad, poor fellow died becoz of smoking habit. hindi serial scene omg worth to watch their faces now.

      how can i forgot that washing powder nirma hahahha. still laughing, crying also.
      sansku is really lucky compare to luchky right now. he has to bear more punishment, becoz of her moti cheetah and princess….. the best part is AKSASHWANI music.
      Awesome and so damn hilarious update.

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:53 am

        hehehe… even it is horrible add for me.. is seher ko.. haha.. thanks a lot dear..

    4. ??? on March 17, 2017 3:14 pm

      Too Short… but enjoyable…..

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:53 am

        thank you…

    5. Mintu on March 17, 2017 3:18 pm

      Amazing sis..

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:54 am

        thank you mintu

    6. prathi on March 17, 2017 3:57 pm

      soooooperrrrr akka. enjoyed a lot while reading. can’t stop laugh.

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:54 am

        thank you so much prathi..

    7. Sinni on March 17, 2017 4:00 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:54 am

        thank you

    8. shilpa-saraj on March 17, 2017 4:18 pm

      It was hilarious

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:55 am

        thank you dear..

    9. Priya Durai on March 17, 2017 4:38 pm

      Awesome, funny, hilarious, mindblowing….. I am running out of descriptions Astra. Keep rocking.

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:55 am

        thank you so much priya..

    10. Ashnoor on March 17, 2017 5:19 pm

      Ohhhhhhh Gosshhhhhhh ?????jhahahahahahahahahahah it was dammn funny update….that add scene was like really ?????? ( no words ) n it continued for 3hrs ……. hour’s…..hoursssssssss………????
      By god ….. that Mukesh n drunken add was hilarious……????????????????……….. My godd from next time they will never hide something from ragini…. not even in there dreams ……. ??????????……..awww sanskar ran away ……
      “JAAN BACHHE TOH LAAKHO PAAYE ….. LAUT KE BUDDHU GHAR KO AAYE “……???????? this is what came in my mind by thinking about Running sessions of Sanskar……… ?????????????????? ………Hahahahahahaha……..supper amazing update……

      Muuuaahhh?? Astra
      Love u di ????
      Bye ……

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:56 am

        hahaha.. that was a sooper dooper comment ashnoor… thank you so much…

    11. lovely7 on March 17, 2017 5:35 pm

      Baboi tough punishment

      Difficult to imagine ?

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:57 am

        haha… avnu.. chala pedda punishment.. haha..

    12. Sindhura on March 17, 2017 5:41 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:57 am

        thank you dear..

    13. Tigeress on March 17, 2017 6:37 pm

      Hahahahahaha hilarious …..,??????????????? Damn awesome dii

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:57 am

        thanks a lot dear..

    14. abi on March 17, 2017 8:11 pm

      Super super
      Awesome punishment….
      Tell me where are you living??
      I want to complete my mission

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:59 am

        thank you abi.. you want to know where i live… ok, i will tell you… come on take a pen and book.. i live at………………..

        nah,.. nah…nah…

        i won’t say…..

    15. Asw on March 17, 2017 8:27 pm

      Rocking yaar ?? bechara laksh have to listen proms?? keep going

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:59 am

        haha… thank you dear..

    16. Ammu on March 17, 2017 8:39 pm

      It’s outstanding episode dear and me too can’t control my laugh

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 8:59 am

        thank you ammu..

    17. asra on March 17, 2017 8:59 pm

      Ohhh myyy Godddd astu i didn’t control my laugh dear….tears r flowing out….Once bcz of u am embarrassed infront whole bus….now am embarrassed infront of my junior astu….They r seeing me like a mad person….ohh thank god one of my frnd save me…she s not interested in any serial….but today she also join with me to read thz….bcz of her only am saved…she told me whenever u read thz ff told me I also want to join with u….otherwise my warden thought me am mad….
      ffffaaaabbbbuuuulllloooouuuuuussssss
      update astu dear……loved loved loved loved loved it alot…..
      poor laskar feeling bad for them…omg what a punishment….ragini s different….ap also join with ragini….omg poor laksh…he is going to tolerate our ragu poem….chooooo sad for him….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 9:01 am

        hahaha…. poor asra dear, you have to face lot bcz of me… hehe, what can i do yar..? this ragini naa, too crazy….!! and, now your friend also reading…? I’m so happy… tell her thanks dear…. and thank you so much dear..

    18. gayu on March 17, 2017 9:02 pm

      OMG…ROFL. Astra I just have no words to say dear. No one would have taken a revenge this way. Sanky has escaped. My poor Lucky boy.. but still he deserves for hurting my Ragu…will there be a spl punishment in Kavya and kavitha matter too..lets wait and watch..lol

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 9:01 am

        haha… thank you so much gayu…

    19. tëìtō kUn on March 18, 2017 12:12 am

      Hilarious One…
      What a Revenge Yaar ?
      Can’t Imagine what will happen to Laksh after listening to Poetry ??

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 9:01 am

        hahaha… have to wait n see…

    20. Amore on March 18, 2017 1:42 am

      hahaha… hahaha.. ye… ye.. hahaha ye id…idea hahahaha… idea hahaha… idea aata kaha se hai bachha??
      kaise karti hai ye sab hahahaha aur… hahahahaha aur.. aur ek.. baat.. baat bataa k…

      hahaha humphh! *pet dard kar raha* hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *huuuhhhh!* *extra DEEEEEP breath*

      bata toh ye punishment dimaag me aaya kaise?? yaar aankhe soojh gayi hain mere rotey rotey… han rotey rotey coz jo yahan par jis raftaar se ganga jamuna beh rahi hai isse toh lagta hai k bahot jald hi sharks and whales aa jaayenge yahaan par ocean samajh k..

      dekh beta bht pitegi tu… itna koi dukh deta hai kya??? weapon hai iska matlab ye thodi hai k apne talent ka ias tarah se istemaal karegii. log hathiyaaron ka istemaal apni hifazat k liye karte hain tu toh khud drumsticks, flute, guitar ban k baithi hai sabka orchestra bajane ko….

      aur yaar plzzzz mujhe ragini ki poetry nai sunni kahin aisa naa ho k mai poems likhna chhod du..

      Aur ye… hahaha ye hai kya??? “A man has forgot his name, a woman has forgot her husband name.. a boy has forgot his motor bike and a girl has forgotthe ATM pin… I don’t know what you will forget”

      LITERALLY?????

      yaar mai paagal ho jaaungi…. infact ho gayi hu… coz pata hai ye padhke dimaag ka toh aisa haal taq nai hai k dahi ban sake fir v 8 baar padh chuki…

      ek request hai plz plz plzzzzzzzz k naa mujhe maaf kardo koi galti ki ho toh par plzzzz aisa kuch mat karna k mai poetry vul jau… agar vul gayi toh mere career ka satyanaash karne k jurm me mai tujhpe case thok dungi… fir headlines hongi

      “EK ZAALIM CHHOTI BEHEN NE KIA APNI HI ‘BHOLI SI, BHAALI SI, PYAARI SI, MASOOM SI, WORLD’S BEST BEHAN’ K CAREER KA KIA SATYANAASH”

      *tu toh meri tareef karne se rahi toh maine tere behalf pe khud hi kar dia… waise v sach bolne me kaisi sharam 😉 abb bata hu na best??*
      aur news me aayega TOH BATAIYE K KYA SAZAA MILNI CHAHIYE AISI ZAALIM BEHEN KO

      1. Haath pair baandh k gud-gudii karni chahiye
      2. Usko laughing gas se bhare room me band kar dena chahiye
      3. Ya ek zor ki jaadoo ki jhappi deni chahiye

      APNA JAWAAB DENE K LIYE TYPE KAREIN “ZAALIM KI PUNISHMENT (SPACE) A/B/C” AUR BHEJ DIJIYE 1111 PAR

      *Note – agar jawaab ‘C’ ho toh mat bhuliye ga k jhappi dete waqt chupke se shirt k andar 5 ice cubes daana zaroori hai*

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 9:11 am

        omg… omg.. omg… that’s a very very very big bigger biggest comment my sissy, i took at least 5 min to read it… hahaha, itna taklif diya mein thum ko..?? awwww…. I’m cho chorry my sis… hehe, btw… torture acha laga kya..?? hehehe…. and poetry,, ya.. i want to take pity on you, but this ragini is un stoppable roller coaster.. so i can’t help yar… lekin, hamare behen career bhi muje important hei.. so, i will try to stop Ragini… don’t worry…
        if in case…

        in case…

        i can’t stop her then………..

        hehehehe…. i can’t say..

        hahah.. zaalim ki punishment hmm… u only decide it.. and at last, even i was laughing so badly after reading ur comment dear. and from my eyes too ganga yamuna aagayi… and it formed a big ocean.. not only whales but submarines also travelling… hehehe…

        a million tons of thanks dear…

    21. Amore on March 18, 2017 1:45 am

      hahaha… hahaha.. ye… ye.. hahaha ye id…idea hahahaha… idea hahaha… idea aata kaha se hai bachha??
      kaise karti hai ye sab hahahaha aur… hahahahaha aur.. aur ek.. baat.. baat bataa k…

      hahaha humphh! *pet dard kar raha* hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *huuuhhhh!* *extra DEEEEEP breath*

      bata toh ye punishment dimaag me aaya kaise?? yaar aankhe soojh gayi hain mere rotey rotey… han rotey rotey coz jo yahan par jis raftaar se ganga jamuna beh rahi hai isse toh lagta hai k bahot jald hi sharks and whales aa jaayenge yahaan par ocean samajh k..

      dekh beta bht pitegi tu… itna koi dukh deta hai kya??? weapon hai iska matlab ye thodi hai k apne talent ka ias tarah se istemaal karegii. log hathiyaaron ka istemaal apni hifazat k liye karte hain tu toh khud drumsticks, flute, guitar ban k baithi hai sabka orchestra bajane ko….

      aur yaar plzzzz mujhe ragini ki poetry nai sunni kahin aisa naa ho k mai poems likhna chhod du..

      Aur ye… hahaha ye hai kya??? “A man has forgot his name, a woman has forgot her husband name.. a boy has forgot his motor bike and a girl has forgotthe ATM pin… I don’t know what you will forget”

      LITERALLY?????

      yaar mai paagal ho jaaungi…. infact ho gayi hu… coz pata hai ye padhke dimaag ka toh aisa haal taq nai hai k dahi ban sake fir v 8 baar padh chuki…

      ek request hai plz plz plzzzzzzzz k naa mujhe maaf kardo koi galti ki ho toh par plzzzz aisa kuch mat karna k mai poetry vul jau… agar vul gayi toh mere career ka satyanaash karne k jurm me mai tujhpe case thok dungi… fir headlines hongi

      “EK ZAALIM CHHOTI BEHEN NE KIA APNI HI ‘BHOLI SI, BHAALI SI, PYAARI SI, MASOOM SI, WORLD’S BEST BEHAN’ K CAREER KA KIA SATYANAASH”

      *tu toh meri tareef karne se rahi toh maine tere behalf pe khud hi kar dia… waise v sach bolne me kaisi sharam 😉 abb bata hu na best??*
      aur news me aayega TOH BATAIYE K KYA SAZAA MILNI CHAHIYE AISI ZAALIM BEHEN KO

      1. Haath pair baandh k gud-gudii karni chahiye
      2. Usko laughing gas se bhare room me band kar dena chahiye
      3. Ya ek zor ki jaadoo ki jhappi deni chahiye

      APNA JAWAAB DENE K LIYE TYPE KAREIN “ZAALIM KI PUNISHMENT (SPACE) A/B/C” AUR BHEJ DIJIYE 1111 PAR

      *Note – agar jawaab ‘C’ ho toh mat bhuliye ga k jhappi dete waqt chupke se shirt k andar 5 ice cubes daalnaa zaroori hai*

    22. IQRA222 on March 18, 2017 11:32 am

      awesome episode astra di
      that was really really funny

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 12:59 pm

        thank you dear…

    23. Arjuna on March 18, 2017 8:49 pm

      AWESOME

      • Astra on March 19, 2017 11:26 am

        thank you

    24. A.xx on March 19, 2017 3:45 am

      Fab and poor lucky xx

      • Astra on March 19, 2017 11:27 am

        thank you

    25. Rehna on March 19, 2017 8:52 pm

      Ha ha ha ha superb dear, what a revenge

      • Astra on March 19, 2017 9:21 pm

        thank you rehna..

    26. jazzy on March 26, 2017 3:43 pm

      Uhahahhahah too good yaar

      • Astra on March 26, 2017 4:01 pm

        thank you dear

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