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After marriage life is colourful episode-07

b.k.mahaBy Updated:60 Comments5 Mins Read

Thank u friends for ur lovable comments…. I am really overwhelmed because of ur response…. I replied all of ur comments… Pls check it in my previous episode….Let’s get into the story….

In evening oberoi mansion….
Om doing something in his laptop at the time Gauri enters the room… She knows he is working but she asked what are u doing…
Om: I am playing football⚽?…. why u want to play with me…
Gauri: no I am not interested in football…. U carry on…
Om: looking at her in disbelieve and comes to her and touch her forehead to know temperature…. And eyesight then says come we have to go hospital?…. To check ur eyesight…

Gauri: excuse me…
Om: I think u lost ur eyesight that’s why you can’t see me I am working…
Gauri: I know u are working… But u only said I am playing…
Om: oh madam believe me whatever I said… You think this room is like playground….I forgot u don’t have brain na I am sry….
Gauri: what I am don’t have brain… U only don’t have brain….
Om: you…
Gauri: you… This fight is continue for fifteen minutes… After sometime… Gauri says ok stop it…. I have one idea to know who has brain…
Om: what a joke who has no brain gives idea…and laughed at her…??? Gauri angrily looking at him…?
Om: controlled his laughter and says.. Ok cool down say me what a idea u have…
Gauri: first I will do one action u must guess what I am going to say… If u find the word correctly I am agreed u also have brain… If u can’t find the word correctly u will agreed u don’t have brain…. This game is same for me also…
Om: ok I Will prove u… U don’t have brain…
Gauri: let see… First I will give u a word by action..
Gauri take one finger to pointed..
Om: one letter word..
Gauri do the action like flying… And then take her hand to caress her hair… Om shouted crow…

Gauri pouted and says I agreed u have brain…but I give u small word and also I do the action is good… Even a blind also easily find it…that’s why u also find it…
Om: I know u can’t accept ur defeat….and one more thing how blind can see ur action…. From this u can get ur answer…. Its ur turn.. I know u don’t have brain…time is also there for u if u accepted u are not have brain I will forgive u…
Gauri: i will show u Gauri can do anything..

Om takes his four finger to mentioned the no of words… And he takes his hand to near his heart and he pointed her….
Gauri think what he is trying to say… If I can’t find it he will surely teases me… I think Gauri u only give ur mouth to retouch……( un vaya kuduthu neeye mattikita) godji u will give me a brain na pls help me to prove him…
And he asked u can’t find it… And he start to count.. Gauri says I think maa is calling me I will be back saying this she tries to move… But Om pulled her towards him and says I am not heard….
And first u say the answer then u can go…..she lost in his eyes….. And His eyes give her the answer… Gauri reads it and says “u are my heart” ( this words only om saying by action)… They are lost in each others eyes….

After sometimes Gauri gets reality…. She pushed him and goes… om smiles at her and says…. I know u will find the answer not by action but by my eyes…. We don’t have any action or words to know what we think in our mind…. I am also find the words by the help of ur eyes only… Ur eyes says me always…. This is true “u are my heart” and “I am ur heart”….. U can say me u hatred me but ur eyes are show me how u are love me…. One day u are come to me with my old lovely and nauty Gauri…. Waiting for that day…

I will end here guys…. Today I have no mood to write but when I see ur comments my mood is changed…. I want to know one thing with u guys… Can u pls tell me….. One girl says me, I am not capable of writing a ff and also I insulted the language…. I don’t want to say her name…. If u also think my English is not well…. Her comments made me feel so bad…she says me in my another ff ( love makes life is beautiful DBO) That’s why I can’t concentrated it and also I think not to wright but when i saw ur comments it made me to wright… I think to share with my pain to u that’s why I saying… It will hertz u pls forgive me….if u also feel so…

Pls give ur valuable comments…. Sorry for today not giving Rumya and Shivika’s scene….

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  2. Masha on

    dont feel bad for here comment u know what ur english very very better than mine and u r a verY good writer also and u writer from ur heart thats y it touchs our heart so dont feel bad on someone saying frnd andpls update soon yar

  4. Eva on

    Hi Maha…i was a silent reader of ur ff till yesterday…But today after reading your comment i thought to reply you..Dear dont mind on someone’s words or deeds if they are not respecting you and your work…just switchon ignore mode..there are many who admire and encourage ur work….think about them…we love ur ff…if u have a hater Eva then think about me i am ur fan EVA…???

    And about the other Eva….Hey Eva…..
    Dear..please dont be rude to anyone like this….because hurting someone through insulting will make u characterless dear…so use words wisely…..and please dont waste ur precious time, moving ur precious fingers while scrolling for reading and ofcourse using ur precious eyes for reading something which u dont like..go and do something u like…
    And allow Maha to do what she like….she is doing her work perfectly for us …her ff fans…
    So kindly jeeyo aur jeenedho…
    Sorry if my words hurt anyone ….couldn’t stop from saying this much…still i kept decency as much as can..

    Thank you..eagerly waiting for ur next update Maha….

    the same message i uploaded on ur other ff too..

  5. Ahaana on

    who the hell was she who told u that… just say to her that she don’t have brain..
    i m telling u write really fantastic. .

  6. Keerti on

    Hi …I am silent reader of your ff pls don’t feel bad of her words ……Your stories are very nice…..I think that person doesn’t have any brains..Pls don’t take any negative comments as Ur weakness….You are a very good writer..Pls post the next part soon….Pls reply to my comment..

  8. jane on

    Nice one..enjoyed reading… Don’t listen to other.. Sometimes people will criticized you but take it positively.. Some people never learn to appreciate other or may be they don’t want to see you doing good in life.. You are really a creative writer.. Just follow your heart and keep writing.. No one is perfect we learn from our mistakes.. So whatever they say don’t take it seriously… Waiting for the next episode eagerly… And thank you for taking time to reply to all comments..

  9. nikitajai on

    It is nice one dear…. Keep going dear.. Don’t pay attention to any one said dear…

  10. sanjanagarg on

    hey maha u r a really gud writer and i tell u one thing that ki jab aap kuch acha karne jaate hai toh kayi sare log apke sath hote hai but kuch log aise hote hai jinhe faltu mein criticise karne ki aadat hoti hai.just ignore them agar us ek ladki ne aapki insult ki toh kayi aise log bhi hai jo apko praise karte hai for ur ff and believe me it is really beautiful.

  14. Ashi on

    If English is your problem, u can improve it, but don’t stop writing. dont let language be your barrier, because your thinking could create beautiful stories n we want to read it…n liked the part unvaya kudutthu neeya mattikitha’

  17. Sri on

    Come on dr.. don’t worry for those dumb ppl.. at least u r trying ur level best.. language is just for communicating purpose.. its not knowledge.. we can understand what you are trying to Convey us..

    May be she may not have that much brain to understand this.. so u just ignore tat brainless dumb eva’s comments.. u have many lovely followers.. keep going dr..

    and I really liked today’s because it has only my Om’s part.. loved it

  20. Haridhra on

    Maha ka ..plz neenga romba naala katha vachirukinga .. Yaaro evavo kevano oruthavanga sonnaganu varutha padathinga… I tnk better u ignore such type of bad comments n focus on ur work .. Becoz ur such a good writer ..the story is so thouchy .. N coming to today’s epi it was really a cool one .. But dunn’t worry I dunno whether I have the right to give suggestion s to u becoz I’m to young .. Ennoda masula patadha ungala ennoda Akka mathuri ennachu sonen …

  22. Shraddha on

    It’s so nice ya, felt like watching each scene in front of my eyes. Good going and ya I think CVS should include you also in the tram. Keep going dear.
    I’m a Malayali, but know Tamil too. Try making tamil dialogues and give English translation.

    Also can u give a link to read all the episodes.?

  28. Arthi on

    Dear dont underestimate yourself……. Jus take those comments as positive then u ll knw that u r not bad writer….. Even I felt that my writing is not good but that doesn’t mean am a bad writer am jus begginer so u too take it in a spiotive way and continue there is still a lotta things to be seen in coming days so jus keep smiling dr …….. I couldn’t type coz my hand is injured even though I wanted to make you feel you r best……So go ahead and continue dr….

    • b.k.maha on

      Thank u so much Arthi…. I am very happy and also feel bad.. Because I very happy u give me confidence… Feel bad for because of me u typed with ur hand… Take care dr… Keep reading….