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Home»Fan Fiction»MarJawa Main Tere Nall Kanchi (Part-1)
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MarJawa Main Tere Nall Kanchi (Part-1)

yaashi23By yaashi23September 11, 2017Updated:September 12, 201730 Comments5 Mins Read
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Marjawa main tere naal….Kanchi One shot
Hiii guys….i am yaashi…a big big AC of sdch and kanchi lol…i like to read ff on kanchi and i m loving all the writings on kanchi….so an idea popped on my mind and here i m sharing it with u..please share ur views….so without wasting ur time,here we go
A man around 27-28 was standing near bar counter asking for one more drink.he is none other than kabir.hansome hunk and hearthrob of almost every girl in the bar..in full talli voice
Kabir:i am warning you,if u didnt give me the drink ,then i am going to break ur face…
Bar tender:sir please try to understand i cant give u more drink.u r almost full..
Kabir:abe o bakwas band kar.aur drink de .otherwise be ready to be landed in hell.
He threatens bar tender…why dont u understand i need a distraction…distraction from that feeling…guilt..(he said to himself)
But why the hell i m feeling guilty by..by killing someone..yes i m the sharp shooter and i can do anything for money…i can kill anyone for money…but what is this..why i am feeling this much bad today…..hmmmm may be sanchi effect …no.no..pyaar ke side effects..”yaar ye ladki bhi na,mujhe sudhar ke hi chup bethegi” he smiled to himself…

Kabir pov
Well, i am kabir…kabir kapoor.. the contract killer and nowdays metamorphizing into sanchi’s lover…my sanchi,my angel,love of mine…. exactly three weeks before we met in same bar..i was fully talli like today and just my eyes were just roaming in this room where i caught her first sight.she was wearing beatiful pink suit i remember…i was watching her with my mouth wide open and she caught me staring her.ho gaya siyappa i thought.
She started taking step toward me and with her each step my vision was getting blurred.effect of alcohol or what?? I dont know.finally she approacjed me and i was landed on floor..lol our first meeting..
Then i got to know from somewhere that she helped me to reach home that night and i even didnt remember..dumb me.then i saw her in mall again..and to my surprise,she smiled at me and i was just standing like statue admiring her in mind…getting no responce from me,she left from there..again idiot me.
So this way we met second time.but then i said sorry and we used to meet onwards.she liked me and l loved her i guess.
But conclusion is we are together now and sharing everything .i mean room ,things and rest u know.ahem ahem…in short we are combo of beauty and beast…
She is very good person and me?? You all know.. but she loves me and i luv her..wait she doesnt know about my profession but i will tell her soon..then she will decide our future and i will respect her decision…yaa thats me ..i m saying this …i told u na i m changing.rather her eternal love is changing me…
But what will i say?that i m a murderer.i kill peoples for money??? but will promise her that i will leave all this for her.and will do hardwork to make her happy..
But lemme clear ur confusion ,yes i killed a girl today and i m feeling guilty for that.seriously???i mean i even dont remember how much peoples are landed in heaven by me…but i never felt guilty for that..
Actually u know i m contract killer,so some mr.malhotra wanted me to kill his daughter..salaa kamina..khudki beti ko marna chahta he..but mujhe kya?? i got advance money and will get remaining money tommorow…
But this guilt is killing me… so malhotra told me that his girl is going to some disco wearing red short dress and i have to kill her

Flashback:
it has been three weeks he met with sanchi..and he lied to her that he going to attend his imp meeting. So she went with her frnds to have some fun.
Kabir reached the disco at around 11 pm..his eyes started searching for that red dressed girl ..his target ..and there she was,dancing with some random guy..
Kabir was facing her back and he pointed gun at her.at first he felt strange,but then he concentrated on his target and
DHADUMM… the girl fall on the floor
he ran out of disco …….
Fb ends

he got up from the bar chair and goes outside..he decided to to tell sanchi everything tommorow since she wont beleive him today because he was drunk
He came out of bar.then sat in his car and left for home ..
“My angel must be waiting” he thought…

DING DONG
he rang the door bell,
She opened the door. “Aagaye tum” she said in low voice..
“Hmmm…missed me??” He replied
“Alot” her reply.
She was wearing pink dress,he noticed..and she was looking beautiful …but wait why her eyes are swollen as if she cried…
I asked but she just ignored it every time
..”btw pink suits you”i tried to make her happy and she smiled at my gesture..by god her smile
And i placed my lips on hers.. when we parted her face shade was matching with her dress…
Later we had dinner toghether.i dont know why she made my fav dish today….we finished our dinner and went for sleeping.
Though i was trying to behave normal,she sensed my uneasiness and asked me if everything is alright…i again lied with her…so sorry my jaan.but i will tell u truth tommorow
she pulled my head on her lap and stared caressing my hairs. Her soft hands were running through my hairs..for me this is the most comfi and more safest place in the world..soon i dozed off…

Phew!!!!done with first part..all the chappals ,rotten tomatoes and eggs are always welcome…please drop ur comments ,should i continue or not…and one more thing this is my first ever post on telleupdates and that tooon kanchii..ufffs

PReCaP:kabir meets malhotra and gunshot…

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    30 Comments

    1. Ashnita on September 12, 2017 12:16 am

      wowwww this is marvelous fabulous waiting for next part

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:34 am

        Thank u for commenting dear…

    2. Premamohan on September 12, 2017 12:48 am

      Ohh god yaar pls make sanchi as that girl or even died pls update next soon thus episode is mind blowing…..

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:32 am

        Thanx dear

    3. Dhruti on September 12, 2017 1:24 am

      yashi it was superb [;ease continue this and i am curious when sanchi knows about kabir’s profession what she will do ?

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:33 am

        Thank you so much…

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:36 am

        Thanx for comment and u will know it in next part …

      • Dhruti on September 12, 2017 5:58 pm

        i’ll wait please update soon

    4. Jessicca on September 12, 2017 1:42 am

      Dear it was awesome mind blowing… amazing concept … Will be interesting to watch how will Sanchi deal with him after knowing his truth. Plz do continue .. Can’t wait for more updates..

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:37 am

        Big wala thanx

    5. riyarocks on September 12, 2017 2:38 am

      Yaashi dear, this was really amazing……..I just luv the stories which hv got some action thriller in it, so I’m enjoying ur plot a lot………keep writing & eagerly waiting for ur nxt one………..

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:37 am

        Thank u and i will update soon.

    6. Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 2:41 am

      Dear this plot is really interesting…cant wait to read further….and the epi was superb and awesome…i enjoyed reading it a lot….post next ASAP….am eagerly waiting….love you loads dear

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 8:38 am

        Ooo thank u .i m glad u liked it.will post soon.

    7. anu on September 12, 2017 8:35 am

      Nice yaar……

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 10:02 am

        Thanx…

    8. niyaaa on September 12, 2017 10:53 am

      Hey yashi ist of all welcome on tu.. Happy to see one more kanchi fan.. this is amaz dear nice plot m curious to know whom the girl kabir shot and how sanchi deals situation when she knows kabirs profession … Hey sweetie post nxt asap…

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 11:16 am

        Thanx for welcome an sure…

    9. Abhilasha on September 12, 2017 12:53 pm

      Wowww its a superb fabulous fantastic plot and really u rocked it and loved it a lot!! Waiting for next!!

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 2:07 pm

        Thanku yaar. Will updare soon

    10. Neha7873 on September 12, 2017 3:10 pm

      It was really nice dear ..Would really like to read more from you..It was awesome…Continue soon

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 6:51 pm

        Thank u dear

    11. Trisha139 on September 12, 2017 4:40 pm

      Awesome dear
      Loved it to the core

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 6:53 pm

        Thanks alot

    12. Sajnana900 on September 12, 2017 4:59 pm

      It was amazing yaashi keep writting

      • yaashi23 on September 12, 2017 6:53 pm

        Sure and thanx.

    13. Divya on September 13, 2017 7:10 am

      Awesome super fabulous

      • yaashi23 on September 13, 2017 12:25 pm

        Thanx for reading dear

    14. AnahitaAnnie on September 13, 2017 11:31 am

      Woow, awesome start Yaashi. I was enjoying each and every scene. Ur writing is very lively. The dialogues are very well written and the concept is really well throughout. Loved every bit of it.. Would to see more from you. Congrats on starting writings on kaanchi.. Keep going!!?

      • yaashi23 on September 13, 2017 12:28 pm

        Thank u dear.ur words means a lot to me.

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