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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyan- Taming The Heiress (Prologue)
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Manmarziyan- Taming The Heiress (Prologue)

ShreeBy ShreeOctober 5, 201633 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey people!! Here am back with another story!! Mind keep railing away… but is the one I love the most… had it planned a long time ago.. but found This was the right time to do it

Do let me know how it is … please

This update dedicated to Sathya ka, my baccha Supriya, Jessie and Riyadcruz

Thank you guys so much!! For letting know of my OS being copied as an ff on another page on TU… Commenting on her page and I complained to the website on the security issues… This is a thank you gift for you people… love you forever ??.. hope you like this update

As usual… please do bear with my typos and grammatical errors

Happy reading ??

Radhika and Arjun were going around his under construction building. It was going in well. The structure of the building had come out well. The interiors were left to be done.

It was a beautiful twenty five storey building. Radhika was the architect-interior designer. The multimillion project was taken up by her father’s company. Both of them were going around the building. Radhika was instructing the workers instructions and kept looking around the building. It was all grey. Coated with cement. Needed paint. She was not going to let Arjun control her this time. She was going to give it contrasting colours and not the plain white or some light shade in different varieties of grey and white which Arjun wanted. She was going to everything. She has the strength and energy to control him.

Arjun kept walking behind Radhika, watching her look around the place. The whole area on the fifteenth floor. She would time and then brush her fingers gently against the grey walls and let out a sigh. He had his hands in his pockets and followed her. He loved her so much. She was the cold heiress of the Mishra Constructions. Dilip had her as the heiress though he too worked there. He had stepped down from his position to let his daughter take over and show the world that his daughter was worth and capable of handling the company that was known all over the world and had it’s name established.

He watched her from behind as her hair swayed to the wind from the slots left for windows. His hands itched to grab her and kiss her hard. No girl had casted such a spell on him. She refused to accept that she she loved him. But he knew that she did love him.

Radhika knew of his intense gaze on her. She just kept walking. Why her?

Why?

Why did he have to fall for her? A girl like her. She was not right for a good guy like him. He was a perfect gentleman. Made with calmness and patience and always had this seductive, drug addicting smile plastered on his face. Which was perfect. Which made her legs go jelly. But she felt something wrong. She could feel something that was wrong. She turned around and saw him watching her with his smile that was just for her, his body crossly supported to the wall with his arms crossed. Her eyes widened. There was a red laser dot that was pointing at his chest and it kept moving. Then was focused right where his heart was. On the left side. She realised it was a gun that was being aimed at him. She looked around and saw the sniper.

Arjun stiffened seeing her frightened state. She pulled him away at the right time. The bullet fired, but pierced through the wall on the right side. Radhika hugged him tight and shivered in his strong band of arms. His one hand held her tight and the other patting her head and played with her hair.

She pulled away still in his arms and cupped his face. Arjun cupped her face in one hand and kissed away her tears. She pulled him to her and kissed him hard. Arjun stood shocked as he held her to him. He knew she was frightened.

“Kiss me back you idiot” she whispered against his lips.

He crashed his lips to hers and slipped his tongue in her mouth drinking in her sweetness. He let go when he found her falling short of breath. She pecked his lip and stared at him with love.

“You ok?” she whispered as tears flowed down.

“I am heiress” he smiled.

He buried his face at the crook of her neck planting soft kisses. Her toes curled up and she felt something deep down her stomach. She pecked his lip again and laughed cupping his face. She pecked his lip for the third time and hugged him tight.

Okies.. that’s it… here’s the prologue… hope you all enjoyed it… bye for now… will try to be back soon.. love you all loads.. tc.. keep smiling.. bear hugs to all of you ??

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    Love exploring new genres in writing... Geminian!! Loud music!! More of a bathroom singer... Hates being in the so called reality and loves her own little bubble

    33 Comments

    1. Roshni on October 5, 2016 9:08 pm

      I just wanted to comment before reading.

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:43 pm

        Hehe

    2. hemalattha on October 5, 2016 9:21 pm

      fabulous dear.so nice.

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:44 pm

        Thank you so much!!

    3. Dev on October 5, 2016 9:25 pm

      Nc start off shree…..waiting as always….

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:45 pm

        Thank you so much!!

    4. starz on October 5, 2016 11:15 pm

      hi shree akka…super duper post….loved it…eagerly waiting…love you and take care

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:45 pm

        Thank you so much baby!!

    5. Brin on October 6, 2016 1:29 am

      Awesome story, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:46 pm

        Thank you so much!!

    6. Jessie on October 6, 2016 9:19 am

      Awesome start.. prologue of pecks..? why he was aimed.. ?? Loved it to the core.. and its intriguing..!! Bring it soon.. And Loved the gift.. Thanks to TU for supporting the right and supporting a writer’s hard work!!

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:49 pm

        Nandri ponne!! I’ll reveal why he was aimed… Hehe thanks to you all for letting me know.. I’ll update soon

    7. Gummiebear on October 6, 2016 9:20 am

      Mamma fabulous plot… So intriguing… Loved it…my mamma z so smart….love u mamma…mommy waiting eagerly for the story to shape up in the most amazing way anyone cud think of….loved the update too much….
      But you make me wait too….don’t do that mamma otherwise baccha will start pestering….hehehehe that I always do….muaaaaaaaah…. Loads of love??

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:52 pm

        Thank you so much baccha!! Hehe… Thank you so much!! I’ll do soon.. I know you too well..

    8. Aasthu on October 6, 2016 9:36 am

      its nyc dearie……………but I’ve one complaint……u start of with these interesting works but nver update them as frequently as ur main ff…….I frgt its name….I’m ‘vng trouble remembering names……..hope u wnt mind………..when’ll u update “MATE” ???????????? I’m dying to read it………………….

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:51 pm

        Thank you so much baby!! I’ll update soon.. I’m not having time… The thing is I wanna finish it off soon… I’ll update Mate soon

    9. S.v on October 6, 2016 9:56 pm

      Prologue eey semaya irukke so who pointed the gun ?? Why so many questions next part soon ponney love u so much.

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:47 pm

        Thank you so much ponne!! I’ll reveal that soon… I’ll update soon

    10. rossy on October 7, 2016 12:54 am

      Why i feel something fishy here,in Arjun especially…but prologue was hot hot…lol what will be the whole?? update mate n that ss…plz plz plz

      • Jessie on October 7, 2016 9:25 am

        Hifi on tat Rossiee… I too felt tat while reading…Arjun!! Kabhi nahi sudrega..!! Lol.

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:52 pm

        Lol Jess

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:53 pm

        Lol maa… Fishy fishy… Thank you thank you thank you!!

    11. Sweetie on October 7, 2016 3:51 pm

      Lovely prologue and it’s just so interesting to know both love each other but kept distance for some odd reason..Will wait to know what that reason might be.. 🙂

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:55 pm

        Thank you so much sweetheart!! I’ll update soon

    12. subha on October 7, 2016 5:57 pm

      awesome……

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:53 pm

        Thank you!!

    13. Bhabya on October 8, 2016 11:59 am

      Shree di I m finally back and of course it’s just awesome

      • Shree on October 10, 2016 12:54 pm

        Hey baby!! Long time… Thank you so much!!

    14. Fanficoholic on October 10, 2016 9:19 pm

      Wait kiss in the prolouge itself? Arjun is becoming shameless day by day. He needs to be controlled????????????????????
      Amazing start di. And its okay. I love ur brain railing away cause it gives us mre ffs frm u. And yah arjun is being aimed? Yyyyyy? Its a million folalr question. And y did arjun think that she is nt ryt fr a good guy like him? Wellll sooo many questions. And these wll be anwered once u update. Soooo update soon and let me knw the story.

      And yah here are ur chocs fr starting a new ff.
      ????????????????????????????????????

      Love u loadssssssssss
      ??????????????????????

      • Shree on October 11, 2016 4:12 pm

        vaishuuuu!!! happy to see you here… lol hes not shameless.. he just fulfilled her command… hehe thank you!! youll know why he was aimed…youll get your answers soon.. ill update soon

    15. _Ritu on October 12, 2016 5:56 pm

      Wow Shree…Lovely start…Arjun getting pecks after pecks ??? his heart must be thanking dat Gun man I guess ?? 😉 bt y was he targeted… ?? Intriguing story…waiting for nxt..loads of love 🙂

      • Shree on October 12, 2016 7:15 pm

        Thank you so much!! Lol I think he might be thanking the Gunman… I’ll post soon

    16. Roma on October 17, 2016 10:18 am

      Shreeeeeee. ..wowwww awesome plot n outstanding narration. …love you soooooooo muchhhhhh. …missed you a lotttttttttt. …take very good care of yourself my dear. ..love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug ♡♡♡

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