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Home»Fan Fiction»MANMARZIYAN: Roots of Friendship and Love (epi 4)
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MANMARZIYAN: Roots of Friendship and Love (epi 4)

administratorBy administratorMarch 24, 2016Updated:March 24, 201617 Comments3 Mins Read
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A BIG THANK YOU TO ALL WHO COMMENTED…we shall directly move to the epi..
Neil and Sam are waiting outside radhika’s house. They had planned for a movie and small party at CCD. Sam is wearing a deep blue jeans and a black crop top wid white hearts printed in it. (t

Neil is wearing a blue jeans and a deep blue T-shirt wid white stripes.

S: Bandar radhu kaha rhe gayi??
N: how m I to know?? U girls and ur makeup…!!
S: shut up…we don’t do make up all the time…
N: oh REALLY?? Then what is this?? (Pointing her face)
S: oh thissssssss?? Arey I applied a bit of blush..Mascara ….nd lip gloss!! Makeup kaha kiya??
N: nehi nehi..tu kaha makeup karti hain….(funny sound plays at the back)
Neil to himself “ oh god she is telling she has not done makeup..yet I can see her wid so much makeup..I wonder what if she actually had done that…” (Lol!!!)
Meanwhile radhika comes out..she is wearing a red jeans and white shirt. (The link of the dress is as follows)
RADHIKA:

S: omg radhu!! You look stunning….
R: (blushing) thanks sam…u also look beautiful…

S: I knw…haha
N: agar aap dono ka ho gaya toh hum chale??
S: -_- -_- ha chal…
Three of them leave for the movie…
In front of the hall..neil goes to buy the tickets and sam goes to buy popcorn …radhu was standing alone. Suddenly she gets hit by someone….she falls down… “ouuchhh”
R: cant u walk propery?? Can’t see a girl is standing…..
The guy is shown wearing a black T-shirt wid green border and a sunglass.
nd y are u wearing these glasses…are u blind?? M sure u are…coz u cant see
The guy opens his glasses nd “ you……”

R: what happened?? Bolti kyun band h??
The guy “ don’t u mess wid me….”
R: m messing wid u?? How dare u hit a girl?? U shud be sorry..bt u…showing attitude…
Neil and sam hears rads voice…they rush towards her.
N: yeh kisse baat kar rehi hain…??
S: dumbo..woh baat nehi kar rehi..ladai kar rhi hain…
N: whatever..bt who is it??
S: idk…
N: lets go nd check…
They move towards her but in vague…coz by that time the guys had gone.
S: chala gaya….
R: arey tum dono..
N: kisse lad rhi thi tu??
R: choro yaar..batameez kahika…..

(ok i hope by now u know u was the guy..its none other than our ARJUN)
Three of them leave for the movie.
After the movie they go to CCD. They order cold coffee wid ice-cream. They all r chatting and having fun…suddenly sam hits neil wid her elbow…neil signs “what??”
Sam points out a guy standing outside….radhu was sitting opposite to them..she smells something fishy… “what happened guys??”
S: kitna handsome h ….
R: are kaun…??
N: (irked) humare school captain…ARJUN…
R: kaha??
N: tumhare peeche…
Rads turns back and is shocked!!

SCREEN FREEZES

PRECAP: Aradhika meeting….formal intro…and lots of fun…
Guys plzz tell me if u r liking the story….like rosie said that friendship is well portrayed…hopefully I can portray love in the same way….bt plzzzzz tell me if any improvement is required…any part u don’t like or something which u like,,all suggestions are accepted….

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17 Comments

  1. Bhabya on March 24, 2016 5:19 pm

    Nice epi. Please do write longggggg.

    • tara on March 24, 2016 5:38 pm

      thanks bhabya…u r always the one to comment first….nd yeah i ll write longer ones…

  2. Hayathi on March 24, 2016 6:03 pm

    Dont mess wid me how rude

    • tara on March 24, 2016 6:45 pm

      UMM yeah he is…bt u will soon knw y he is like that..

  3. subha on March 24, 2016 6:07 pm

    super episode……….precap interesting…..update soon

    • tara on March 24, 2016 6:45 pm

      tysm subha

  4. Brin on March 24, 2016 6:17 pm

    Good episode. 🙂

    • tara on March 24, 2016 6:45 pm

      thanks brin.. 🙂

  5. susi on March 24, 2016 6:36 pm

    Superb yaar ….

    • tara on March 24, 2016 7:48 pm

      tysm susi..

  6. rosie on March 24, 2016 6:43 pm

    It’s a very cool update….sweet story dear…keep it up…update soon…??

    • tara on March 24, 2016 7:48 pm

      thanks alot rosie….

  7. suga on March 24, 2016 11:05 pm

    I not much familiar Hindi dear 🙂 🙂 pls try all dialogues in eng 🙂 🙂 🙂 nice ff 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • tara on March 25, 2016 7:39 am

      okay suga..i will write in eng nd if i use hindi dialogues i ll translate them…
      thanx..

  8. gopika on March 25, 2016 10:36 am

    amazing episode♥♥♥♥♥…….waiting for next episode eagerly

    • tara on March 25, 2016 11:00 am

      oh gopu…thanks dear

  9. Roma on March 30, 2016 8:11 am

    O wowwww. ..ardhika encounter was very fantastic. ..loved it…precap is interesting. …love you loads

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