Manmarziyan-A new story (Epilogue)

Hey!! Or should I even be saying it? Ok let’s not be rude in the beginning…If I’m not able to keep up with not being rude, I apologise now… looonngg tiimmeee.. And I ain’t here to give an explanation.. So here’s the epilogue.. For once I wanted to complete one story of mine… i took one year and I’m not ready to let it go just like that.. The last update of this story.. Haters feel free to get yourselves pizz.. Or get me your address in the comment box below I’ll send them for you.. Get up and jump people

Update dedicated to all the so called “PROUD SILENT READERS”

So as usual like how you’ve all been doing and for one last time… Please do bear with my typos and grammatical errors..

Happy reading ??

Days passed and it was all going well. Radhika’s health improved which shocked most of the doctors as she was supposed be bedridden. She made it to work. Arjun and Nandini made sure that they took care of her well. Radhika kept pouting and throwing more and more tantrums everyday as her food cravings kept building up and she was not able to fit in her old clothes. She took over maternity clothing way before than she had planned. Sam was utilizing every second she had with Jai. That little one was a bundle of happiness and joy. His smile in sleepand all cute antics would make Sam laugh out and lose herself. Neil made sure to click as many pictures as he could cause he got only the evenings with his son. Niti was put under Ankush’s surveillance as it was only him who could tackle her. Taking her to as many doctors he could. He wanted her to be treated by the best. She grew nervous as the days were nearing.

“It’s gonna be fine. I won’t let anything happen to you” Ankush whispered.

“That’s why half of my fears are reduced” she smiled “i’m going to kill Akash” she snapped.

“Why?” he chuckled.

“For taking my best friend away from me” she muttered.

“They just fell in love, let them have some time” he smiled patting her hand.

“That doesn’t mean he doesn’t let Manha pick my calls. I’m not going to be such a bone. I know he made her join the hospital again, but.. Aaahhh” she screamed in frustration.

“But that day.. We can never forget” he laughed.

“I know. The moment he went on knees and confessed, she chased him all around throwing her heels at him and slapped him hard. But in the end she accepted” she laughed.

“Now he has her all for himself” he smiled.

“Like i said I needed a share” she rolled her eyes.

“Woman you’re impossible” he chuckled.

“I know” she smiled a fake one.

“How’s riya?” he asked.

“All good. With daadi. Ahana’s so used to used to her company” she chuckled.

“They don’t have much of an age difference” he smiled.

“True” she agreed.

“Where is that guy?” he raked his fingers through his hair frustrated.

“Who?” she asked.

“Me” came a voice from behind.

“Hey Karthik” she smiled.

“No hello for me?” came another voice.

“Oh hi Anitha. Sorry didn’t see you” she grinned.

“That’s alright” Anitha smiled.

“Now happy?” Karthik asked.

Anitha pushed a card to ankush and he looked confused. Niti opened it and smiled. Finally. No wonder the two of them were out of sight for the last few days.

“You two sure know to give heart attacks” she smiled.

“What?” Ankush growled.

“They got married” she smiled showing the card.

“We get the invitation three days later” Ankush scoffed.

“It happened suddenly” anitha smiled.

“How?” she asked.

“He confessed. We married the next moment” anitha blushed.

“Finally the sheriff got the guts to get his girl” she laughed.

“Forgiven. Everything’s fair in love and war” Ankush smiled.

“How’s Radhika?” Anitha asked.

“Doing good. Eating and snapping at Arjun bhai. I really pity him now” Niti chuckled.

“Women and hormones” Karthik blew a breath.

The four of them left after a hearty conversation and Ankush drove Niti to Sam’s house. Niti spent some quality with her little nephew and returned home with Neil.

The day of the surgery and it was tension eating everyone. They tried to look normal, but it was impossible. Niti was sedated hours before as her blood pressure was not constant. Ankush slipped in a ring and let of her after he kissed her forehead deep. Surgery was a success and she was asked to come for further checkups for the next five to seven years. Worst part, losing hair. Radiotherapy was the only cure. And she decided to marry once she was completely fine. She knew she was putting his patience on test, but he was ready to too.

One more shocking news was Bonnie’s recovery. She entering Bird song with randhir. His dedication and love was more than enough to pull her out of her fears and forgive Arjun. Her happiness knew no bounds when she met Riya who was a replica of her sister. And meeting her best friend Niti. Seeing Bird song happy with Arjun happy in life with radhika expecting his children and Sam with Jai and Neil.

“Arjun I hope you have sons to hit you on my behalf” Bonnie laughed.

“On our behalf” Radhika came from behind.

“What did I do?” Arjun pouted.

“Riling us up” radhika fake grinned.

“My princess will protect me” he said frightened.

“We’ll see that” Bonnie laughed.

“How is Randhir treating you?” she asked.

“He’s the best husband. And I have a surprise for him” she winked.

“Don’t tell me” Radhika gasped.

“Yes it is” she winked.

“Love you so much for making me an aunt” Niti hugged her from behind.

“Neetz don’t test Ankush” she said.

“Please” niti whined.

“Ok. Chill” she smiled.

“Look your so called handsome hotness is here” Niti smiled heaving a sigh of relief.

“You won’t change” Randhir pulled Niti’s ear.

“Not my sister’s ear” Arjun snapped slapping Randhir’s hand.

“The world will end if I change” Niti poked her tongue out hiding behind arjun.

“Looks like no one missed me” Neil walked in.

“You’re a workaholic” Arjun smirked “no disturbing workaholics” he smirked again.

“Ok, time for us to leave” randhir said.

“Off to?” radhika asked.

“Switzerland. Permanent settle” he grinned.

“Lucky ass” Arjun blew a breath.

“Oh i think Bonnie has something to tell you” Niti winked and Bonnie facepalmed herself.

“What is it?” he asked concerned.

“I think you’ll wanna hear it all alone” she winked and walked out.


“No way!” came a high pitched shrill voice.

“Ahana listen” came the other voice.

“No Riya” she snapped.

“What do we do then?” Riya asked.

“Maa’s gonna kill me. I don’t want to marry Nihaal” she sighed.

“Why is bua rushing?” Riya frowned.

“I don’t know” she replied.

“Can’t Radhu bua do a thing? Arjun mamu? Neil mamu? And of all.. Did you talk to papa? Your so called best friend?” Riya rolled her eyes. She had so much help. Still, the girl sat not knowing what to do.

“You love someone?” Riya asked and Ahana choked on her drink.

“No” she replied immediately.

“Sanskaari bacchi” Riya rolled her eyes.

“Now can you help me?” she cried.

“When the “Fantastic Four” is always available, why worry?” they heard a chorus.

“Hundred years to the demons” Riya muttered under her breath.

“Here come my angels” Ahana’s face lit up like a christmas tree.

“Riya di sorry” said a twenty year old Jai holding his ears.

“For?” Riya snapped.

“For hiding your project” he mumbled “and for calling you adopted” he sounded awfully sorry.

Riya had been legally adopted by Ankush. Niti had claimed to be her biological mother as she didn’t want the tiny tot to suffer when she had no one. Being a high profile doctor helped her change things and claim full right on her. But after jai knew he taunted her with all the chances he had. He never minded the fact that she was three years elder. Hurt her and made her life screwed to the gut. Riya always took it with a smile though all knew. She was strong, but this time it was too much. Too much to take. He had called her an orphan and homeless. But he was a sweetheart to all. Was secretly in love with Komal, one of Arjun and Radhika’s twin, which the other twin Naira was totally against.

Jai was a replica of Neil, handsome, tall and not to forget those dimples. But was short tempered. He had the guts of sam and handled business with ease. Komal was a replica of Arjun in looks, but she was Radhika when it came to handling things.. With love and was gentle, of all.. was Arjun’s pet. Naira was a replica of Radhika, but it was Arjun who ruled every cell of hers. The most short tempered daughter of the family and it was hard to tame her. She could do anything for her loved one. Hated Komal for her quietness. Hated it more that Jai loved her and her sister did too. Last, but not the least.. Akriti, the youngest and the most loved the kid of the family. Ankush and Niti’s ten year old daughter. The most innocent of all. Was the quietest one of all and the most obedient one. Even after jai taught her naughty tricks, she always turned her elder brother in to Sam, who gave him a good dose. She hated Jai because he never left a stone unturned in hurting Riya. Riya was like second mother to her and could do anything for her. Was Neil’s little sweeto and the only one who was against Arjun who loved her just like his children. God knows why, but she didn’t like him from the start.

“Ahu tell” Akriti smiled.

“I don’t want to marry Nihal” she sighed.

“Good. Don’t marry that donkey. I’ll tell bua” Akriti smiled.

“But bua will not listen” she sighed.

“Di just try” Komal said.

“I’ll talk to paa” Naira said.

“No talk to papa. Ahu is papa’s pataka” Akriti smiled.

“I think that’s the only way. But i don’t want to hurt maa. She’s always chosen the best for me” Ahana sighed.

“I saw Nihaal kissing a girl in park, near my school. He is bad man” Akriti huffed.

“Let’s go” Riya got up, taking her phone and clutch.

“Aku, you want chocolate?” she asked.

“Yes. Twix” Akriti jumped.

“Ok come” she smile and took her little sister’s hand.

“Di I’m sorry” she heard Jai again. She turned to see him truly guilty.

“Fine” she snapped and turned around walking.

He sighed. He knew what he had done was wrong. She had worked days and nights on that project. It was to give her career a boost. She could have been recruited by her dream company, but she lost it all because of him and he was going to make it upto her and get her forgiveness too.

They reached home and heard mixed voices. The elders were arguing. And they understood, it was on Nihaal.

“Ahana is so young, why riddhima?” Arjun asked.

“That guy’s a pervert. Did you cross check once?” Neil asked.

“Neilu” a happy Akriti ran to him “I saw him kissing a girl near my school” she said gorging on her chocolate.

“And who got you this chocolate?” Ankush asked.

“Didu” she smiled.

“Mr. Mishra, no arguments” Riya shook her head.

That hurt him to the gut. She had been calling him “Mr. Mishra” for the past two weeks. He loved her the most though she wasn’t his blood. She was Niti’s darling.

“Riya” Niti glared.

“Not you too, Mrs. Mishra” she said in a low voice.

Neil and Sam glared at the culprit.. Jai. the cause for all the damage in the happy go girl’s life. What if she was not related to them by blood? They had a connection that was way beyond description, way beyond blood relation… a connection by soul. How was it her fault if her parents had died?

“I’m going back to Jodhpur” she snapped “at least there’s someone who respects me there” she walked to her room and shut it with a bang.

Everyone just landed on the sofa with a thud. Akriti curled up in Neil’s arms holding her half eaten chocolate. Riya walked out with her bags and when they walked to her, she stopped them with a glare. For the first time she was opening up. All her her hurt and anguish was clearly visible. When she was sbout to walk out, there came a group of people.

“We’re from Trinity Builders. Does Riya Mishra live here?” asked an old man.

“Riya. Just Riya” Riya snapped.

“We’ve come here to inform you that we’re hiring you as our head architect. When can we expect you to join?” he asked.

“Sorry to say, I decline it” she said and walked out with her bags, with everyone’s jaw kissing jaw kissing the floor.

Niti made a call “daadi” she cried.

“If Riya is coming, let her. I’m not on your side this time. Give her time” the old lady said “i’ll take good care of my great grand daughter” she said and hung up.

There was an awkward silence. Niti glared at Jai and he looked down. For the first time parting from Riya hurt him. He always wanted her out. Now nothing was in his hands. He only prayed for her to come back soon.

“I hate you Jai” Akriti snapped hopping off Neil and slammed the door of Riya’s room after she entered.

“So, this means, the wedding is called off” riddhima sighed.

“Maa, I know you love me the most and will choose the best. It happens, we can go on further and look for another” Ahana smiled.

“Riya will be back. Just give her time” she said when they still looked upset.

Little did she know that hat she had hoped for was wrong. Once Riya had decided, it was decided. She was not returning.

Jai sat next to Komal and laid his head on her shoulder. She wanted to get up, but he caught her and held her in place. The four of them looked at the kids and sighed. They knew they loved each other and had already accepted them. But all that worried Neil was his frequent mood swings and hot headedness. It was like seeing another another Arjun Mehra and Radhika Mishra. Looked like history was repeating. Naira glared as she looked at the two of them and walked walked to her room. She only wanted one chance to punch Jai. And she was going to do it for sure if he hurt her sister. Ahana smiled at the two of them, wishing for the best and walked out with Riddhima, Ankush and Niti for some fresh air.

They all had to move on. It was going to be hard without one member, but life doesn’t stop. End to something always led to a new beginning. A new story.


Tadaaaa.. Yey for once I’m happy that I completed.. Sad that I gave the worst of epilogues ever.. One year just goes down the drain… ok I give a damn.. There was someone who asked for a sudden epilogue and here it is.. Tadaaaa.. I don’t wanna say the name and embrass… new story just got ever.. Typed something.. Mixed and brought it to an end..

I thought I’d stay quiet.. But I just couldn’t.. That “Manmarziyan Really?” thingi.. Lol.. i’m like.. Where are we and what are we doing? Lol.. all right here.. We just had our writer system forcefully shut down…. Lets cut the “we”.. Keep it was me/i.. Because of you all.. Do we look like dolls only made for typing mmz ffs n posting?

And when my friend sent the link.. I got so angry and my siblings turned alert.. Poor gadgets always be the victim of my anger.. They pulled it all out.. So alert they are… and i made it a point to reply and i give a f**k if was being snappy and b*t*hy..

So called proud silent readers and haters to this story.. Do you know the damage this has given? Im this little sensitive person and was put to depression soon.. N m on pills now.. Not to blame you all.. I have college works and work related..

Have you all seen the side of a writer? How much we struggle to bring up a plot and make it live? We draft.. Delete.. Ask our friends to proof read.. Et their heads up for suggestions.. Then edit.. Read a zillion times before posting..

I started this story on december 6 2015 and made it upto 63 chapters.. There was good response in the beginning and then it just dropped.. Got messages to end it.. I know i was this stupid to take up and plan such a complex plot.. Now im made to hit epilogue forcefully… all half and half.. What ive typed over there is crap and i literally cringed.. Yet im posting.. Why? Because it was needed and you people don’t deserve it at all…

And i read.. What have we given? Let me get that straight.. We give our full.. Heart and soul.. To make it good and for you readers to enjoy…

Let me say what ive given in this one year…

Manmarziyan-A new story (complete)
Mate-A werewolf love story (40%.. Incomplete; discontinued)
Just one chance (two chapters; discontinued)
Taming the heiress (one chapter; discontinued)
Why do you want me( i don’t why on earth i started it.. Crap.. i stopped.. Lost interest.. Gave maybe one or two updates)

Os…each of 5000-8000 words
One surprise
I have always loved you
Its all about the bells
Pen pals
This tamil best friend of mine
Mine forever
Did my brothers forget my birthday?
Maanu dis little princess
Sweeto loves khadoos
It happened
Lastly, falling for my neighbor (25 pages written.. I think it was one of the most loved one shots of mine)

Two more pending..
The mystery
Please help

I may or may not post them

Then two more one shots which are not on mmz page

My life.. Not mine
Your first love is never yours

Now tell.. This much in a year.. Lord.. looks headspinning.. I myself didn’t know i had given these many.. Ive given 3 in 1.. 4 in 1 updates n all my friends would be shocked.. They’d check my fingers to see if i have bones or springs.. Its impossible to type n i made it.. Managing engineering and a big company is not easy.. Making time from all this is a big thing.. And family is there too

Anusha called herself dyslexic.. I dont think so at all.. and other silent readers took the pain and time to comment… why? To rub it on our face that we’re not entertaining you? Or is it just now that you remembered us? I really wanted to just forget this page after seeing that post and commenting.. But i wanted to show what ive given.. We’re not payed to post.. Even if we do.. We cant give everyday and every second.. Were humans..

When we were writing all we expected was a good.. One comment that’d make our day.. But no.. so stubborn you all are.. N i love it.. Keep it up.. In this way you hurt us all and loose writers.. I wanted to post this to just say how i felt.. You hurt a writer.. You lose one

This story and the others will be updated on wattpad after further editing…therell be a sequel and spin off to this story which will be put up on wattpad.. After a while.. I’m making it clear that im leaving and will make sure to never look back.. And i hardly care if you read this or comment.. Crap.. i give a damn

  1. Baby nailed it.. but it’s epilogue.. I cry

    Sneha good girl…no long comments.. so bye

    Take care.. love you

  2. Baby maa.. you know who you are why hurt yourself.. this page is been cursed and I see zero updates here.. move on baby.. s*xy place.. looks like our whatsapp group chat… REVAites are flooding here

    Epiloge kizhi kizhi

    Take care baby.. miss you

  3. Lo behold.. this girl toh.. kill you Dhana.. just ended it.. apdiye… podi

    Telly updates lost a writer!! Where’s the champagne? Where’s the loud music?

    This was a cute one but ending hurt to the gut.. did you put yourself in Riya? Girl I still wonder if those are fingers.. they’re something magical

    Now let go of this.. we comment cause we love this story and love you more

    Take care.. will try coming home tomorrow.. love you

  4. sheetal Shinde

    Debhi!! For some random people you killed people who love this story.. not fair at all.. I understand how hurt you were and how much you doubted your skills after it.. still you made it and put this up.. for a satisfaction.. I know this was not how you planned it but it was lovely

    Take care.. no more office for you.. love you baby

  5. Kavina

    Loved it. I understand. Please tell me your wattpad

    1. Shree

      Hwy.. my wattpad id is Shreemayi

  6. sree kutty as usual mindblowing update………… god always with u..god fulfill all u r dreams………u r wonderful writer …………ella writer kum vara problem than unakum….. kavalai padatha….eppovum santhosamma irru ……………unnai wattpad la follow pannuvan da.thank u

  7. Nanda Kishore

    Let’s zip up.. because morning.. I’m not in a mood

    This was good.. only you can pull such stunts

    REVAites killing it here.. haha.. this is fun.. will ask others to do too

    Take care

  8. ShreeDee!! Haha hope you had a good time listening to my tracks.. let’s go get low and talk dirty to me.. lol.. cheer up ya.. you’re one awesome awesome crazy kickass personality which only a handful know.. and we’re not ready to share this awesome piece of craziness..

    Epilogue bang on.. you didn’t forget anyone.. gave them all the required exit.. lol heels.. poor Akash.. see me too Akash, so I pity him to the core.. Bonnie was funny… hit Arjun.. the end hurt… Riya leaving

    I give a damn to rudeness cause you’re cute… so forget it

    Take care

  9. Plzz sister.. don’t leave from here.. your stories are soooooo beautiful.. This is 1st time I comment here.. Plzzzz come back sooon sis

  10. Whoop whoop!! See I have never commented but make it a point to spam you on WhatsApp.. now that all are here I’ll come too..

    This was so cute.. sudden ending.. but you pulled it perfectly.. lol James is so right.. we don’t want to share your craziness with anyone

    Take care.. stop being a spring.. love you

    PS: I be the worst friend.. I live next street and never visited

  11. Adi paavi.. see you always have this way of grabbing attention.. this link is with every REVAite..

    When I love the epilogue without reading a single word from before.. it means you’re wonderful.. stop doubting yourself.. I tell you after joining literature team, you’ve gone worse.. take a break Dee..

    Take care

  12. Dhanshree!! You’re the talk of CS.. damn you girl.. this was a wonderful epilogue.. lol I’ll read the rest later.. you’ve given a big list there.. I wish you had springi hair to give me company.. but you have it on your fingers.. saakamma saaku..

    Take care.. Love you

  13. Dippy!! Okay.. first of all get out of home and come to CCD in the evening.. will meet.. one big note that was and it was worth it.. lol James talk dirty.. invite us too.. you know love spreads by sharing..

    Epilogue was mast.. now waiting for sequel and spin offs.. this is making me crazy… pizza for me too

    Love you Dippy.. panda hugs

  14. Diiipppyyyy!! My hero!! See your Madhubala is here!! Tantada.. lol I’m rolling here.. the way I do things.. Rose and Khushi are like have you gone nuts? Anything for my hero.. to make her smile.. Madhu will do everything she can..

    This one was cute.. the end hurt.. some have to come and go for life to go on..

    Love you my hero.. Rose told CCD.. come.. I’ll be there too

  15. Dhanu!! Lol this place has half of REVA.. have a gala time reading this okay? Hope you feel better soon..

    Small comment.. I don’t want to trouble.. this was the cutest and you’re a wonderful writer..

    Love you.. CCD… bhoolna mat

  16. Dippy!! Lalala.. Me aa gayi.. hahaha.. now laugh loud.. Omkar too commented? This is news..

    Let go of the idiots.. you’re wonderful and you know it.. so throw all that to the bin

    This was wonderful.. Jai and Komal.. good.. waiting

    Love you.. me too coming to CCD.. one big jhappi I’ll give

  17. Lol.. one great author’s note that was.. but yes could see the hurt too.. but you know what you’re doing so we can’t say a thing.. this update was wonderful.. I can say nothing more

    Now be a good girl and study well.. take care

  18. Now I really wanna laugh at you.. such a coward you are and I never knew.. where is the Dhanshree I saw on the first day of college who fought me.. didn’t even see the fact that I was super senior..

    This was a cute update… all fit well

    Now quit business.. take care and study well

  19. Adi kutty ponne!! This is not the one we saw in college.. the one who fought us… see you need to fight.. not give up like this.. being hurt is different.. you need to show you never care

    This one was cute.. sequel and spin offs.. you have it all planned.. all the best

    Odamba patuko.. come back to REVA soon

  20. Dumboshree!! See you always get attention.. lol look REVA is here.. why? because we love you and practically Akash can pep up moods..

    Lol finally Karthik is not single.. Ankush got Niti.. all in place.. and you ended with Riya walking out.. bad. could have been a happy family..

    Anyways.. now take care

  21. Yo babe!! How do you manage to grab so much attention? LOL.. CS.. ECE.. Mech and Civil are all here.. heights of popularity.. Ms. fresher you be..

    Finally the guys got their girls.. *sigh of relief*.. it was cute


    You take care of yourself.. cause I need to empty your wallet

  22. Danny!! My mood pepper.. when you’re low it’s like boom.. no wonder I screwed internals.. lol.. now I understand why it’s raining so much..

    Coming to the story.. ended abruptly.. it’s okay.. we have mafia.. and you ended without forehead peck.. the queen of forehead pecks ends without it… chaaa.. now I’m running to watty to read them again.. so beautiful they are

    Haters go to hell.. they’re meant to hate.. let them be.. else the world will end

    Take care cutie.. will meet you soon

  23. Oye Queenie!! Queen of forehead pecks.. I think I saw just one peck.. oye people read her mafia on watty you’ll cut your tongues for the words.. so beautifully she’s penned it..James crazy as always.. talk dirty.. lol

    You’re crazy.. only you can give crazy ends.. lol okay

    I’ll not eat you up.. take care.. love you

  24. Dhanshree!! I swear you’re one crazy b*t*h to type an epilogue.. thanks to Tintin for forwarding me’s so pretty.. I agree with Likith… Queen of forehead pecks.. love Ajay so much.. people don’t understand you and yes.. we’re not sharing you

    This was a crazy epilogue.. I didn’t read before.. but will read all starting from now.. pizza for me too

    Take care.. love you

  25. Me aagayi.. Shree tum kaha ho? I’m waiting with stick for breaking my heart.. for ending this one.. and now I have to create watty account to read further on..

    This was one crazy epilogue.. like lightning you finished.. lol REVAites filled this page.. love it..

    Mafia beku.. Ajay my darling.. I love Ruhi too.. all the silent readers and haters go read it.. You’ll not know what to do.. she’s a wonderful person and you put her down… she’s writing after three years and all she gets in return is this… wow people.. applauds for you

    Take care di.. will meet up soon

  26. Baam!! It ended like it was never there.. bad nanad of mine.. I wanted more craziness.. *pouts annoyed*

    But this was cute.. Manha threw chappal!! Yey!! Like me… Nikhil is super pissed

    Love you Dee

  27. Okies.. now I’m confused.. some random people told some crap and you stopped.. we are no one right? Only these make sense.. what about all the plans? Haters and the other people.. go read her mafia.. she’s the queen of forehead pecks.. no one can describe them so beautifully..

    Dhanshree.. now epilogue.. it was okay.. but for the situation amazing.. Riya leaving hurt..

    See.. I’m commenting because you’re important to me and I love you

    Take care.. don’t stress

  28. Oh hello!! You forgot Teji, Zubin and Krutika.. bad girl.. I’ve told you not to take these in mind and you did.. so I’m not sympathizing like others…

    Epilogue was cool.. kids grown up.. life’s hurdles..

    SR ko we’ll take care.. you chill.. take care.. miss you

    PS:I love your dp

  29. Hi pls don’t leave. It’s beautiful…. you have kept it as lovable as u always do.


    Gona miss NEW STORY.,,,,,is was so beautiful….. Just because of some useless people who have not a f***king work in earth other than bashing people it ended like this….bt still…..i as usual loved it….. When i read “a twenty years old jai”…. Goooooood, abhi bhi the episode of his birth is fresh in my mind…..i know I’m speaking crap now…..sry 4 late….was messed up with my “SO EASY LIFE”….I’ll wait 4 this story in wattpad…..plz try to post soon there………take care….

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