Manmarziyan – My Little Queen – (Shot 2)

Hello…Its Jessie again…Shot 2…Do share your reviews my friends….It means a lot..

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My Little Queen (Shot 2)

I looked around casually just to see if anyone is noticing me,moving to her house…Luckily No..!! May be everyone were done with lighting and arranging lamps in their houses..Of course,its seemed to be a big task..,she literally spent an hour arranging lamps and relighting the blown off ones..I could see her balcony glowing bright and the Rangoli down next to my foot being decorated with more lamps..Ah..Lamps and lights everywhere..

‘c’mon Arjun..you can’..I said to myself and moved further into that apartment..

Well..its just a three storey building,not even like a apartment…but still she calls so…I found the steps to be too quirky to climb fast,her images of running in those flashed my mind..

I halted and saw the steps behind..,there are chances for her to roll down if she misses one step while hopping like a rabbit…She ran wearing that long skirt too…’Should warn her not to hop hereafter’,I decided and reached the 2nd floor..and saw her flat..It was closed,I immediately crooked a little and checked how far my balcony and my house can be covered from this view…Not bad.! She could get a good view….I saw the Rangoli she had done before her flat….Artistic..!!..She have a good choice of colors…Unconsciously I searched my mobile in both the pockets and clicked a pic on that Rangoli….The wooden door had a fancy paper decor hanging on either sides….Golden color rings kinda..I glanced it a minute…Yea..once she said she make those crafts herself..I smiled…This is how she will be decorating my house too..My house back in Goa…with bright colors and crisp decors…

As I crossed the next floor,I saw both the houses of that to turn shut..Good! I stepped ahead and closed the balcony door a little.,just to avoid any sudden disturbance…She hadn’t
spared the terrace too,the little wide terrace had few lamps on its handle facing the road and I went the other side to find her..She din’t get down after climbing the stairs..

I turned around,but was shocked with the sight before me….

There she stood with folded arms…and that guy Saral…he knelt before her with a rose…I was unable to react…I saw him..proposing in different ways and
her to smile at him..may be she is helping him,I thought..No…he pleaded her and Finally at one point she got the rose and clapped her hands and leaped to hug him….I turned around at that….I couldn’t hold that…I rushed to my home….

It killed me…her look,her smile…her blush looking me…why the hell?? I was so confident that she had feelings for me in spite of the cold relationship we had…I searched my cigarettes…Damn..I did quit for her….There it was..another better medicine….Rum!! I don’t want to..but no.,I sipped a little..I could see her to arrange more earthen lamps now…only her…It was getting darker and she collected the already arranged ones,those,throughout her place, to one balcony…few were blown off….she indeed had made the entire building to glow with lamps..all three floors….What was the need! ..There should be limits in moving with neighbors…what was the need to move like a family….Now…..its me…!! Who is suffering…I sipped again…

Her face was glowing along with the lamps and each time she smiled speaking to some one,I felt a thick pang of defeat to hit my heart…My vision got blurred with tears looking her smiling face…May be…may be …I don’t deserve her..I don’t…after the way I behaved with her every time snapping around,it was my mistake to expect her to love me…I could have been.,no should have been little polite with her..

Now what’s the difference it gonna make…The Rum wasn’t even half done,but my throat burned…It’s long time..I was trying to quit this too..I wasn’t even able to hold five sips…
My eyes still relished her every move!!….Feeling suffocated I shut the window and moved out..,Ah..Dad would have wine.! I began searching like a addicted fellow
only with the image of her lying over me…There was a champagne bottle…I made a quick move grabbing that bottle,for the room that reminded me our moments..
The bed !….the cupboard!….I descended fast sipping the drink..I locked the main door,and took the exterior stairs for our terrace…

“I have a work..Mom..pls..Shop anything of your choice”,I said irritated ,when my mom called me for Christmas shopping…This is something which we do as a family together…
but today I wasn’t in a mind to…Family…A family which became possible only because of her…Radhika!!

I starred the sky,reminiscing the past…the day I met her first….No..the very first day I got to know about her… My mobile beeped with Sam’s msg…Ten angry emoticons..I swiped it and opened the gallery..Gallery full of my family pics…My Family!!

2 years back….

I came here after my Masters in Business.,to invite my mom and sister for the inauguration of a new wing of our retail chain restaurant….To invite mom!! Sam!! They were here in Chennai…While we..,Me and dad stayed in Goa..That was a mutual agreement between my parents…My parents..Dad being a Christian and Mom being a Hindu married against their families will….breaking the religious barriers into pieces and glorifying their love alone…their love which had the power to withstand only 10 years…that’s how I would say….I remember,it was Samaira’s 5th birthday when my aunt,My dad’s sister Samantha Samuel stepped into our lives…The day I wish to erase from our lives….On her very first day of arrival itself.,she managed to create a unsolvable misunderstanding between my parents…Sam slept with tears watching my dad and mom to scold each other…My aunt being my dad’s baby sister.,did manage her best to break our family…All I could do was,only to watch.,plead.,cry..and at last console my sister…Days passed.,months but not a year..,they both came up with something called Divorce…All,me and my sister knew was.,we both aren’t going to be together.,no cute fights.,chasing.,water games.,and Sunday family lunch…I tried hard to explain my dad but it had no effect on him…

Apart from this.,he is a very good person..In fact.,a best dad! and my mom too..She is no less..She got a job and moved completing a valuable term of endurance…She was at no fault..I knew…!! But what’s the use..,they decided for a Mutual divorce..and even got it…We got chances to meet our parents in a swap mode..When Sam comes here.,I would meet Mom..they weren’t ready to have both children together..My Aunt showered unconditional,unnecessary love on me and one day Sam informed me about her being ill treated when she visits dad…Things went on its way.,until I listened My aunt and uncle’s plan for property..Ah..Just for the money..They broke our precious family…May be the separation gave a enlightenment I guess.,that my dad listened to my words against his own blood,for the very first time..

My Aunt planned another wedding for my dad.,which only added fuel to the fire.,and the moment which I awaited arrived…The final face off day of My dad and My aunt…She turned furious.,she spat venom.,and blurted her plans which left my dad shocked…and finally revealed that I was mentioned as legal heir in my grand father’s will…I was 13 years old then..My dad being too much engulfed with guilt said,he will not claim any of the properties.,and was ready to sign the No Objection Certificate..,only on one condition that she should reveal things to my mom too…how to believe a snake?

Even my dad signed but they asked me too..and that’s when I tore the papers…After all.,that lady deserves to rot in hell..How to gift a luxurious life??After the hell we went through for 3 years..I have no belief she will keep her word…My persistence made my dad to think…A mom is a mom! She will definitely listen me….Whats the need of an another lady in between us….My dad called her as ‘Satan’..I still remember me laughing hearing that..Even Sam called her once…

That Christmas.,was indeed a lucky one….Our family was free from evil../.We went to meet Mom and Sam….But Mom wasn’t ready to accept dad,back in her life..Her sufferings as a single parent and much more,leading a life as a single woman turned her against my dad….She believed he is responsible for all the insults she went through….Even my tears failed to get her back…After few months.,only because of us and for us.,they decided to be in talking terms..still.,It was the same.,Sam with Mom and me with Dad…We lived as a family only when we meet in vacations….Dad was allowed but Mom won’t speak a word with him…A Cold relationship…We were a family..broken into million pieces inside…There will be a complete silence,though we four dine in a same table..Hell !!….Dad at times used to scold Mom even at that situation…

When Sam was on her 12th grade they came to Chennai….12 years passed with a little progress on the same card…Dad and mom to respond in monosyllables to each other.. But.,there was a immense change in our behaviors..I,the exact replica of my dad’s anger and Sam of my mom’s tears…The one thing which never changed was our wish and
our belief to be back as a family….the real family.,what the word actually means…

All these years.,we did face,receive numerous advises for how to be a happy family,as though every other family had no quarrels.,only we had….I was fed up listening them,even from a day old friend of dad…One such day happened,when I came here.,after my Masters.,where a lady of this.,the same neighborhood advised my mom to give up her stubbornness for our sake..Stubbornness!! Really..What the hell the lady knew, she advised my mom…Being enraged I scoffed them and that’s when I heard a meek voice speaking with my dad…”Uncle please…Listen to me..”..

Have we become that worthless.,that a little girl advises my dad.,and for what….who the hell are they to worry about us….what they think actually.,poking nose into other’s family issues….I was about to scold but my sister spoke,”Radhu…leave na..dad won’t understand”..

Nonsense!!..My blood too,lost her sense..?!..She speaks in favor of a stranger….

“Shut up,Sam….there is no need for strangers to get inside our family issues..And better stop publicizing about our family…will you?”,I asked her high…

“And you..Get outta here.,now”,I spoke to her knelt down back..and walked away…

I thought its over..But not..I did listen her voice.,speaking one thing or another on a feeble note..What was the need?

“Sam..!!!”,I called high…”Don’t let passers by to take advantage of our situation..Later.,you may regret”,I said with a cigarette in my hand, stooping a little from the stairs..

“You smoke?”,My mom asked surprised…

“What else you expect.,when you stay away from me…Why did you punish us for dad’s mistake?”,I asked aloud and that’s the first day I raised my voice to her…

“Arjun..”,my dad raised a warning tone…

That was something new…but still I obliged..I moved in silence..only to hear the girl to say.,”Aunty..I said isn’t…If not parents who will teach morals to children..you should have been with Arjun”.

“What the F**k…God damn little minx…..Shut your mouth and get outta here…I should never hear your voice till I stay here”,I screamed at the top of my voice from the first floor..I waited to catch the glimpse of that girl.,when she comes to doorway..but No..she stayed the same place…

“Sam…Ask her to…”

“Arjun…will you stop it….Where is your manners? how could you speak like that”,my mom asked as she climbed the stairs and my dad came behind her…I was already drunk..what if my mom gets to know…Just 3 pegs..still..,I feared that,the smell would let me to get caught…

“She is Radhika..Sam’s bestie…and I know her for years…You shouldn’t have..”,she stopped looking me..I tried to avert my gaze… “Arjun..Look me”,her shocked voice was enough..I know she found me drunk… “you are drunk”,she asked with tears..”At home??”….

“I do that frequently Mom….We have no one there…”,I stammered a little but said as clear as I could.,expecting to have a change in them even at that minute…

“Samrat…What’s this? You left my son this careless?”,she accused my dad… Good!! They both conversed a lot..,and finally argued…

“My son?..Mom…Just now your remember me as your son..Why not before?”,I asked… She stuttered to reply…My dad came to her rescue..Again argument.,at one point when I raised my voice on my dad,my mom slapped me..First time..!! I wasn’t angry…but was happy.!!..

“Thank you Mom!”,I said with tears and hugged her when she broke into tears after a minute….I din’t know why she cried..but I too did…The same evening I saw Sam and the girl to speak.,I again scolded her for which my sister cried surprising me…

“Am sorry Radhu”,Sam hugged her…The double plaited, little girl.,turned to me.,but I turned my face in annoyance..How come someone could be this shameless!!…Radhu !!…this girl has already got taunted by me a month back…When I stayed here for 5 days..If not wrong.,everyday I did sarcastically remark about her visit here…..

I moved away…Minutes later.,when I went to convince my mom.,I heard her speak to my dad..,”They said.,being fatherless is a sin..”, My fingers clenched into fist…but what she said next…!

“I think….I have done a unforgivable sin in my previous birth….that’s why am fatherless…Its a living hell uncle..Please don’t give that pain to my friend….I have no rights other than one,that being the survivor of that hell…..What is our mistake?…Sam heard my uncle taunting me…If you leave her.,she will definitely ponder on those…She is emotionally challenged…She is already being teased as cry baby in college….Please uncle..A girl needs her father…at this stage….at every stage….till our death….we need dad…”,she sobbed…

I stood rooted,but heard my dad to sob hugging her..”Radhu..look me…who said so..you aren’t a sinner beta…”

I could only hear her muffled cries….My dad tried to console her..”Then speak with aunty…Stay with sam”,she spoke crying…

“That’s different”

“What’s different..Tell me..”,she cried…I could only smile a humorless one…Did she really think she could do something which I was struggling to do for years… But she did !!..

She spoke ‘God knows what’ in tears and did melt my dad and mom…”They call me and my mom as orphans”,she said at last….which silenced my dad and me too….

For a moment I feared,will those ridiculous neighbors and rest of the world address my mom and sister on the same note…

Next day…Sunday.!!..After a long time….We went to church as a Family….like a Real Family!!…Sam with dad and My mom in between me and dad…My dad promised and apologized with tears which made my mom to rest her head on my shoulders with tears…I was sure.!!..My Family won’t be a broken one anymore…Sam jumped in happiness and ran to the door…I stood dumbfounded looking the Lord before…Its been 15 years I stepped inside a church…Being in a place,where every street to have a church I never bothered to go or pray..Only because my faith on him was eroded..but today.,he did show me what a Miracle is..what he can do…When we all were silent.,he sent someone to speak….How come a stranger girl’s tears turned more valuable than ours,to my parents?…I had this doubt….I saw my mom….My dad helped her with his reading glass as my mom had left hers at home..They both scrutinized on our holy book…My dad to nod his head while my mom read it…She finished and they both prayed together..My wish! My wish!! I saw The Lord with tears..I knelt unknowingly..and bowed my head a little after a prayer..Asking forgiveness for my behavior….Thanking him..,and at last Feeling Blessed!!….

“So..will he come directly?”,I heard a girl of 5 years to ask a question after listening the prayer…

“Lord sent his angels for us”,an elderly man said..

“Do angels exist?”,she enquired and I turned to see that girl..

“Of course yes..I met yesterday”,My dad said and I raised my head to see my dad….but saw a girl in light yellow Saree,trying to cover her head..biting her lips,,and looking everyone with a fear and…and…confused look…

Her brown orbs halted looking me…She kept starring me and her features melted..I wasn’t sure why,until I felt my tears to cross my lids..I quickly wiped and got up….

“Am here isn’t..Stand beta..”,I saw my dad to hold her shoulder….She dared to look me now…

“Do they really drink wine at prayers..when I studied in convent…girls said so…”,she asked feeble and I saw a aunty to turn our side…

I couldn’t have a hold on my smile…but later wondered…Is she new here or isn’t a Christian itself…

“Radhu…Am gonna sing..Listen..okay…”,Sam said and ran to her group…

I was stunned…Is she Radhu….Radhika…!!

She stood adjusting her saree over her head,and smiling to Sam…Listening intently,to the songs..and finally she prayed our Lord…when she averted her gaze….Our eyes met….Mine surprised and hers shocked..I noticed the little stone bindi on her forehead…

“Where is your angel”,the girl in the elder man’s arm asked pulling my dad’s collar…I smiled…Stubborn kid..!

“Here”,My dad wound his arm on her shoulder..

“And she is a Naughty angel”,my mom corrected….

They laughed when she pouted,”Dont scold her pls”,I heard Sam’s voice as she passed behind me with few girls…

I gave Sam a mock glare and turned to my dad’s side only.,only to see her head to raise a little and her eyes to roll in fear,as she got to see me turn her side….

My God!!….What was that look for!!…Why did she see me like that!!..

“Careful”,we both turned our heads to see my dad to hold my mom’s shoulder when she stumbled…I saw Sam giggling like a kid standing afar..and passing a flying kiss to me…No..to her,who now stood behind me…

I turned a little and saw her mumbling something with closed eyes…Prayer! I smiled looking the Lord..

“Angel”,She turned to my side when the lil one called..and she smiled radiantly….she gave a quick glance sensing my stare on her…I smiled at her…while her eyes widened with surprise and lips pressed close in fear…

Arjun Fernandez.!!..your angel is here..!! I smiled bright at her..

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So….so…how was it…their first meet….Do share your views…I got late a little…..sorry my dear friends…Laptop issue is still on you see…Ok..Don’t forget to share your likes and preferences too…For I love to read it…Love you all loads and Take care…

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61 Comments
  1. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Jessie

      Hey Kavina…Thanks a lot dear…TC

  2. Sathya

    Jaaazzzzziiiiiiiiiii, semma interesting ah iruku. Semmaya narrate paniruka. Wow…i m spell bound reading this. You know what…intha story ya easy ya relate panna mudiyuthu..coz it is a happening one. I too studied in convent and christmas time le school la function vappanga…naanga line la ninnu appam vaanguvome…atha wine la thottu than kudupaanga….i remembered all those…nee eppavum enoda malarum ninavugal la thara…i spent my schooling from KG to 10th in convent only.

    Ok now coming to the story, as i said, it so close to reality and i like the way arjun’s perception on Rads changing slightly but strongly. Oh god he is smoking and drinking too… Mr. Arjun Fernandez enna than kovam irunthaalum ipdiya veetlaye kudikarathu…bad boy…ayyo i love this story a lot dear 🙂 post next soon

    1. Jessie

      Thanks satz….. me to convent girl na…. lol appam…satz…neenga engayo poiteenga…appam and wine…hehe flashback..glad dear…am glad…I too remember my school days….lotsssa prayers they conduct…

      not strongly…his character…Said clearly…he is kinda rebel..isn’t…yep..smoke and drink…lol
      Arjun Fernandez arrogant boy….he was angry on his parents na…bad boy..heheh….you love bad boys ,…rofl…thanks a lot…love you loads dear….will do…

  3. Wow …. superb….. fantastic..

    1. Would Arjun tell it to Sam?
      Coz Sam knows the heart of Radhika…
      What ll happen when Radhika sees the shattered Arjun…
      Jess what are you ? So many fantastic story you are writing…. that too together
      ..
      You are really a great person…. super girl..
      Always be happy n blessed my dear…
      Coz you are the reason of happiness to others… bye take care….

      1. Jessie

        Savera…..Teddy hug… Thanks a ton dear…everything went out of focus reading your words for me…for me alone…!! I cud clearly feel the impact of this write up…..I would say..thanks for making me to feel blessed…I din’t expect this surprise…Love you my friend…of all the wishes.,being blessed is the best! and You are one gem of a person.,to wish that best for a fictional author..!! Wish you all happiness in your life dear….Take care sunshine!! hope you like this name..! Love you loads…

  4. Amazing

    1. Jessie

      Hey Aayushi…Thanks a lot dear…TC…

  5. loved it…totally 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya Neetz….thank you so much dear…TC and stay happy…

  6. Brin

    Outstanding episode, love the way Radhika brought Arjun and Sam’s parents together, really enjoyed reading this story, you nail it Jessie, well done. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Brinzzeee….thanks a lot dear…am glad that you pointed it….so happy that you enjoyed yaar…love you loads…TC…

  7. arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling mind blowing and outstanding episode….. I loved it…. And finally arjun got his angel right… Superb, excellent and marvelous episode jessie darling….tc loadz of love

    1. Jessie

      Arti…Arti..Thank you…Thank you…am happy ….Arjun got his angel! yea…thanks a ton Arti darling..am so excited with your words…TC and loads of love….

  8. Jessie you updated….!!!
    Ah !! This saral always creates rift….argghh his stomach isnt full being thrashed in very story…stupid…idiot…!!
    Arjun Sam suffered a lot…but Radz indeed an angel…a pure soul…am sure ardhika misunderstanding would clear out soon…n would be a real happy family….when Jessie is writer…
    Their first meet ….woww !!!…loved Arjun melting n lil girl did great realising him Radz as his angel…
    N i loved the most…Arjun knelt…praying…asking mercy…n the feeling of being blessed …just wonderful…the real happiness…..
    Love you Jessie for an awesome update…teddy hugs….muahh

    1. Jessie

      Aasthaa…..Teddy hug…Saral..argh.. he isn’t that big villan here..so relax dear…Yep..Arsam..painful one…yes..will be…woo..me being writer..yea..am so stuck with happy wala ending…you liked it ! yay!! Aastha….lil girl’s role…you noted it…clever you! that my 2nd fav scene in this chap…he knelt and praying….Aastha…will tell you..have a note on this scene dear..Its my fav..so I won’t leave it..hehe..yes..the real happiness…! I agree…Glad with your likes..and mostly,thanks for pointing the prayer part…muaahhh…Love you tons…
      thanks a lot dear…TC…

  9. Awesome dear

    1. Jessie

      Hey Devika…thank you so much….TC..and loads of love..

  10. Awesome episode.. loved it post soon and please post seasons of love soon..

    1. Jessie

      Hi Priti…Thanks a ton dear…will post soon…Seasons of love..2 days plzz….love your support…TC and loads of love…

  11. Jewel

    Jez, this is amazing…. Their first meet, nice. And saral, here also, arjun don’t decide anything plz, confirm first plz…. U wrote this beautifully jez. The part where arjun smoke and drink infront of his parents, that part was narrated nicely, and his heartbroken state also. I liked those parts a lot. Waiting for next dear…. Post soon….

    1. Jessie

      Shonaaa….Teddy hugs… saral..leave him..lets shoo away the fellow soon… yea..Arjun..confirm.. thanks a ton Shona…hey thanks for saying in precise…It gives his character sketch dear..glad you noted..it do happen in reality…happy with your likes..you brought the emotional points..love you tons…for always giving me boost..yumm…Thanks a ton…will post yaar…TC and love you loads..

  12. our hero was completely immersed in rads thoughts n was finding her presence in each little thing …ahh this idiot saral came in between and spoiled evrything whn he was about to propose her!!!
    RADS…naughty angel…she solved the problem in her smart n naughty way!!
    and church scene was lovely…lol..Arjun gave her shock by his sudden change.
    clear his misconception soon n bring back Arjun to lover boy mode again!!! I’m missing his romantic version already!!
    lots of love <3

    1. Jessie

      Hey Swathi…. thanks a lot yaar…. in everything..yes…woohooo…Glad for pointing those…
      sweeto moments of Arjun in this chap..yep saral…I will push him out soon…naughty angel…yea..church scene ke liye thanks…I did expect views on that..shock,,yea….Zor ka jhatka swathi..lover boy done dear…love u loads..thanks again…do share your reviews for next shot too…TC..

  13. Amore

    See… I knew u r gonna do it… I won’t b surprised if u make Saral as radhikaz parents’ choice although I feel them to have a bro-sis relationship… Now arjun will be a typical Devdas (although only for a epi or two). Jessie why do I’m having a feeling that there will be the entry of some more STUPID-FUNNY moments???
    Will Sam create a drama and kick arjun after she gets to know proposal misunderstanding??? (scene which i want to see terribly is RaSam thrashing him hehehe hehehe).
    Will radz get to know about this and what will be her expression???
    Okay fine fine… one last one… who will be dumber??? Radz or Arjun??? I’m damn sure parents’ gonna have a tough time uniting these DUMBHEADS….

    Shitt… so many questions… damn girl I so hate you for making me curious like this (pout).
    Hehehehehe just joking keep it up…

    1. Meen

      Nhiiiiii thr little queen……muuuuuha & jaadu ki jhappi for this update……smoking Arjun…..hot….hot….I could imagine him……heartbroken Arjun……smoky hot…..hehehehehehehehehehehe…..saral……hmmmm…..here he comes to become d third wheel in there love story……hehehe…..hai devdaas Arjun…..damn hot…..hehehe…..sorry what to do all d while reading d update his image of smoking kept running in my head…….
      It was a blast Jess…..I love u…..muuuha
      Keep ur little queen safe otherwise my MAFIA KING will take her away….
      & yup keep this smoky hot Arjun somewhere safe otherwise I’ll take him away…..hehehehe

      1. Meen

        Hey sorry Jess I was writing a comment but by mistake I clicked on rply

    2. Jessie

      Amore! Love!!.. I will surprise you… 😉 means…kuch aur hai meri kitty bag mein.. stupid funny moments hona hai kyun ki..Jessie is the author… *Puppy dog eyes*…wont you love it?
      Arjun devdas…Nahiiiiiiii……Rasam..hehe..well its only Ardhika the most here..dumber..as of now…Its me…I guess…..lol… RElaxxx…. Jessie kya karegi…arjun aisa hai…*confused pout*
      thank you dear…Love you loads….TC and stay happy..my curious amore!!

  14. Really superb…vwait 4 next…

    1. Jessie

      Hey Saran…Thanks a lot yaar…TC and stay happy..will post soon…

  15. Meen

    hiiiiii thr little queen……muuuuuha & jaadu ki jhappi for this update……smoking Arjun…..hot….hot….I could imagine him……heartbroken Arjun……smoky hot…..hehehehehehehehehehehe…..saral……hmmmm…..here he comes to become d third wheel in there love story……hehehe…..hai devdaas Arjun…..damn hot…..hehehe…..sorry what to do all d while reading d update his image of smoking kept running in my head…….
    It was a blast Jess…..I love u…..muuuha
    Keep ur little queen safe otherwise my MAFIA KING will take her away….
    & yup keep this smoky hot Arjun somewhere safe otherwise I’ll take him away…..hehehehe

    1. Jessie

      Tesoro Mio….Awwiee…Jaddo ki jhappis se Jess khushi ho gayi!! wow…Meen…aaja mere saheli….you found him hot with cigar…well ..me too…lol….I did had such a dp for me sometime back…smoky hot!!!! heart broken wala!! I guess he would have never thought of being smoky with a heart break…third wheel…lol….devdas damn hot…girl…you are on a roll..Meen…I too had that pic in mind..else I would have made him good boy..lol…Thanks Meen…hahahahahh…Mafia king already have his regina on lap..lolzzzzzzz……Mafioso re ke baare me mat bata…dil garden garden ho gaya..!! 😉 😉 😉 hahaha…

      Smoky wala ko bi safety nahi…Meen..tit for tat I guess…seee…your regina and my lil queen gonna stay in ladies hostel while I loot Mafioso re and you take Smoky one..rofl…..Kya zamana hai….Do read this and reply…Mafioso re’s knife play made me flat…ab kya kare…. Love you tons….Muaahhhhhh…TC…

      1. Meen

        That seems quite a plan Darling……we’ll lock thm both in a hostel……thn….thn……mafioso re is all urs…….& I’ll flew away with my smoky …..haiiiii…..sochke hi dil garden garden ho gya…..hehehe….love u

  16. Wow….something new again Di
    …good …Di liked the name….so cute…loved it …
    But not when radzz said about a sin for being fatherless… felt bad for her …but at some extent its true I believe ciz u don’t get that happiness nd warmth for which ur craving nd which only can be given by our fathers…they r really impo…..
    Arjun smoking nd drinking …very bad…tell him not too…nd the divorce 1 also u explained very well…bcoz its always their children who suffer the most ….which makes their life living hell…..a growing child need his or her parents …every now nd then nd if they r not even for 1 single tym their mind thinks several things at a tym which leads to a disaster ….
    Ok kuch zada hi hogya aaj….sorry
    But very tochy scenes somewhere loved it….waiting for the next
    See u…
    Bye muahhhh

    1. Jessie

      Anaaaaaaaaa….lil sissy…Teddy hug…you like the name..yay!! Anaa….sweeto…you read that one so intently..and am so overwhelmed with your view on Radz dialogue dear…am reading it again….very well said…thats the worst part of that pain…Arjun smoking drinking..
      common in broken families….will tell him…Smoking already quit.so oly drinks..My god…Ana..its long time..I got such precise..point blank reviews from you..kuch zyada nahi and no need of sorry..am indeed loving this reviewer side of my lil sissy…well said about divorced parents and the childern’s pain…touchy scenes ko notice kiya…Bear hugs…love you tons…Am so happy with your review….will post soon..TC…Muaahhhh…

  17. Dipika

    Jessss darling this is sooooo beautiful yarrrr… You narrated everything so smoothly that i felt like m actually feeling tht things going in there.. N y tht blo*dy saral proposed her.. No no.. This cannot happen na…
    The flash back.. God it was amazing n loving part.. Their first meet.. Soooooo much lovely… That stupid aunty broke such lovely family.. Arjun did good job toring tht ppr…. Radz words.. Its touched my heart yar.. Being daddy’s girl i can’t even imagine world without him… But felt radz emotions.. I like tht the way she united his family.. N the last but not the least arjun realisation.. Its amazing… Pls post soon yarrr.. M eager.. Jb.. Love u lots ? ? ?

    1. Jessie

      Judwa behana…thanks a lot dear….woo…thats so lovely yaar….glad with your likes Deepz..first meet..hehe….yes..stupid aunty..JB ..you loved 13 yr old Arjun’s angry bird avatar..am super happy… Radz words ko mention kiya..thanks a lot…I really felt hard to bring it…..Am so happy with your view deepz.. Deepz…you said all your fav..wow..Arjun..Arjun..Arjun..heheh..kya kare usse…lol..will do dear… love you loads…TC

  18. Aasthu

    Its really nyc……..I think maybe Saral was practising with Radhika………..she is truly an angel……poor girl….she too had to suffer…….Arjun was too rude to her………..will Arjun say anything to her when she comes to sing X’mas song with the Fernandas’s?? maybe you have kept something even more amazing ip ur sleeve……..but I really wish to see ardhika proposal and maybe share a ……. in the next shot…………plzzzzzz update soon…….and ya my confusion is regarding Rads’s behavior……..one day she shed out her heart to Arjun and the next day she is all rude and sarcastic………what happened to Arjun now?? who filed the case…….I liked angry Rads in car…..and Arjun’s liplock……..wished it had stayed for some more time………..Sam??? why did she say softly that Piyali was being a fool???? what happened in Jai’s b’day party???? where is he now??????? I hope he is alive…………….bye…………..love u…………thanks……..mmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh…………

    1. Jessie

      Chinnuuu….combined msg…!! what to do with you…!! thanks dear….saral wasn’t practising…Arjun himself brushes off….hmmm..yea…But Arjun too had his own reasons…. nope he won’t…ardhika..ok dear…we have next ones..

      Sweet mistake…well..i hope the confusions wil be cleared with upcoming 2 or 3 chaps.. well.. do notice the change…but dint get why?.. the scenes defines dear.. none filed the case..she said she may file….lip lock..more time..lol…naughty chinnu…sam..she is saying to herself….chinu..her mind screamed was the note…you read a lot yaa..relax…exams easy hoga…jai ke baare me…no comments.. 😉 bye dear…thanks and love you loads..Muahhh…

  19. Jessie , I’m in a spell created by story, its dam good, waiting for next update,,,,,

    1. Jessie

      Hey Delfy….thanks a lot dear….woo..spell..arjun’s charm…Am like…Jessie did it..!! thanks for that…will post soon..love your words…TC and loads of love

  20. Sangee

    Hi j.. Super ma… I loved it…. Antha saral paiyan vanthu ellathaum kalachi tan… Poor arjun…. I loved the flashback…. Angel… Naughty… Radika…. Arjun Fernández ur angel is here…. I loved it Sry for the short comment…wait till few more days for thirai vimarsanam love you J ???????????? take care

    1. Jessie

      Geet chellam… nandrigal…..poor a…sari..! idha naa note panikuren..note panikuren.. glad dear….FB..wow…haa..last dialogue..Pudichuteenga…thanks again ma…parvailla Geet….love you loads..will be waiting….TC….stay happy…

  21. Sulbi

    Oh my god… fantastic my jazz kutty… unbeatable… is really Saral propose Radhika? And she accepted… no pls.. dnt do that…

    Arjun past was misery… Radhu explained so clearly if a dad or mom either one parent was not life their life will be like hell… hats off… the way you portraied was so natural… Arjun lost his childhood days with his mom and Sam lost her days with dad… which wont cme bck in thr life… really FATHERLESS IS A SIN JAZZ… Tears were oozing frm my eyes culdnt cntrl it… that was true 200%… this world is cruel and mean… i hate it… anyways jazz will skip to episode… this one perfect… frst meet i loved it… and want to know more… now Arjun is hell hurt… oh no… am so curious jazz baby… waiting for nxt part… love you aloads jazzzzz…. tc… stay happy 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Sulbi jaan…..Thanks a ton dear….TEddy hug…ok wont do that…..Arjun’s past…my challenge… exactly dear..few things can be never ever brought back..once lost..its forever….Jaan…that was one dialogue which i framed even before choosing the title…Am glad to have a reader like you…I had the same feel while reading it altogether when i was about to post…cruel world…leave it…..Bear hug… Fatherless isn’t a sin Sulbi jaan….I won’t leave it as such…Thanks a lot…Jaan….glad with the likes…and thanks for pointing that emotional part in particular…love you for that….will post Jaan…. love you loads…TC and stay happy…

  22. Rossy

    Hiii…jazzzzyyyyy…little queen…Arjun deserve what he did unknowingly…how can you expect someone to love you when u had no good terms with her…lol…saral ?? What’s he doing here…is he cousin…kyuki u said radz had no dad…what will happen next…update sol,msm,lq …jaldi se

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya lal…haahh…how can he expect…well wait for next chappy lal….saral..wo to bina address jaane yahan aagaya…..lol….no cousin…will post soon…lal..all three..jaldi se…??
      Sweet mistake is updated….pity this jazz..lol….one by one i will..love you loads..TC…

  23. Vasuraj

    Omgggg Jessie
    Fantabulous update
    Radhika Fernandez s sounding good na?
    I know m so fast what to do
    Still it sounds a lil lovely?
    This chapter s juz wowwwy woww jessie

  24. Vasuraj

    Hey Jessithe update s so good and fantabulous
    Radhika Fernandez sounds good na
    I know m so fast to ask in the second update itself….
    U delivered the story in a well manner yaar
    Pakka masssss

    1. Jessie

      Hey Vasuraj…thanks a lot yaar…RAdhika Fernandez…do you wanna listen that…We have after 2 chaps..may be 2nd from now on…fast…Vasuraj..am too fast…I framed till end..hahah…so hi5 for our curiosity level…lil lovely? tooo lovely…..Someone just gimme laptop…I will just type back to back and bring you that part…thanks a lot for pointing about the story delivery…Thats one distinct mention…Thanks for your support…TC and stay happy

      1. Vasuraj

        Hi5 Jessie
        M so excited…?

  25. Tweety

    akka story semma superb…interesting one…..!!!
    waiting for ur next update :heart_eyes:

    1. Jessie

      Tweeetieeeee……Love you girl…thanks for dropping in…glad dear….thank you so much ma…will post da…twinkle in my eyes too….TC and stay happy…

  26. Spentabulous???? each and every thing is beautifully written,.arjun worrying for her hopping like a rabbit,radz convincing Samrat,Angel..nah naughty angel.. Sooper cute dear.. For a change the great bold Sam is cry baby here.. And Arjuna let his bad habits for radz..good boy.. Why is Saral here.. He is always Kabab me haddi type of character.. But I think there s some misunderstanding.. May be he was just practicing.. Kuch bhi sochthi hu.. Chalo teeke,although u have Laptop issue ,you are trying hard for us.. So sweet of you jas,hope it will get fixed soon..love you loads??

    1. Jessie

      Chinmayi…Thank you ..thank you…thank you so much…Loved your likes…hopping like a rabbit point…love ya…sweet one and glad you liked it…saral..yep…misunderstanding…Practice..no…! yes..chinmayi…this laptop one makes me sad..Its like am always on a edge of something….thanks for being understanding dear…guess..I should opt for new one…Its been a month and am not getting a clue for that..hardware spare.. lets hope the best..well I poured out…love you loads…TC dear….Stay happy

  27. awesome. Awesome

    1. Jessie

      Hey Mona…Thanks a lot dear….TC and loads of love

  28. _Ritu

    Jessie…u said to comment about our lyks..If we start to point dat out den d length of our comment would bes more Dan d article itself.. 🙂 coz everything written is jst brilliant 🙂 nd u know what m so damn jealous from u guys … ? coz I don’t get such ideas…bt I get one idea often nd dat is ?? okay okay don’t make faces.. Will not give u dis ?? waiting for nxt..loads of love 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Oh..my punch queen…..kya dp hai…kyun itna angry..hehe…clever answer ya..but Jessie is Jessie you see…so point atleast one lyk… 😉 hehe… thanks a ton my dear…y jealous…you continue you revenge saga…am so eager for it…a small chap atleast…aise kyun punish kar rahe ho…argh…punch..lol…thanks dear..do update yours….love you loads….TC

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