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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyan..a foodie love story one shot
Fan Fiction Manmarziyan

Manmarziyan..a foodie love story one shot

administratorBy administratorMay 30, 201666 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hey frnds..its me Ritu with my first one shot…plz plz plz have a look at it..
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Arjun was standing near a cliff…his eyes were completely filled with tears and he was just staring down the cliff as if he was trying to the figure out the height of the cliff…he was taking a step ahead to jump and again a step back to stop…Radhika who was passing by saw him and understood that he was going to commit suicide…she quickly ran towards him and when Arjun was fully prepared to jump down she shouted-“hold on hold on.. hey u…hold on..”

Arjun rolled his up and turned towards her….his vision was blurred due to tears in his eyes…he rubbed his eyes and again looked towards her…he saw a girl in some dull clothes coming towards him holding burger in one hand and pastry in the other…

She quickly came to him and asked-“hey…stop…are u mad…what were you trying to do?.”

Arjun gave her a glance then ignored her words and again turned his head towards the cliff…

Radhika-“hey man I m talking to you….tell me are u going to commit suicide….?”

Arjun irritated-“no I was going to dance…wanna join..? …..get lost from here…”

Radhika-“why are u getting angry…tell me the reason why u were going to die…let me guess…Oh..so ur girlfriend ditched u for someone else…Arey yaar…it’s a gud news..be happy that u got freedom from that b*t*h for rest of ur life..”

Arjun shouted-“what nonsense…have u run away from some mental asylum…just get lost or else I will push u down..”

Radhika-“ok fine…don`t tell me ur problem…But promise me that u will not commit suicide..listen..u are not the only on to have problems in ur life…everyone have problems…and it is good..u answer me one thing..if I ask u to eat daal chaawal daily will u eat that…?”

Arjun frowned-“u will not go na..”

Radhika-“first answer my question then I will definitely go..”

Arjun gave her a killer look

Radhika-“answer my question or I will keep asking u…

Arjun irritated-“ahhhh…..no I will not..how can one will eat same thing daily..”

Radhika-“exactly…no one will…life is also like that…if it will only have happiness then it will become boring…so, to make life interesting we have problems and issues..simple..”

Arjun gave her a disgusted look-“are u nuts…?do u think life is a daal chaawal..”

Radhika-“off course not…that’s what I am trying to explain…life is like an icecream…enjoy it before it melts…”

Arjun lost his temper-“I answered ur question na..so now leave or else I will write ur name in my suicide note…”

Radhika-“but u don`t know my name ..so, how will u write…”

Arjun-“I will write that a foodie daal chaawal girl compelled me for suicide..

Radhika-“wao… foodie….i love the name…u impressed me with the name so let me give u some gift..u take this burger… she offered her burger to him…

Arjun was now completely irritated..his anger was at the peak…he snatched the burger from her hand and threw it down the cliff..

Radhika made a pout face and turned her head down…

Arjun-“now before I throw u like this..go out from my sight..”

Radhika`s eyes got filled with tears. …Arjun noticed her sad face and felt bad for his act-“hey u r upset for that small burger..ok fine…tell me the price of that burger..I will give u ten times more…and after that u can happily have ur burger..

Radhika ignored his words and started walking away from there…

Arjun hold her wrist to stop her-“I asked the price of the burger…tell me…was it of 50 or 60…”

Radhika looked straight into his eyes-“u want to know the price na…see the price…she pointed towards her cut elbow and knees…

Arjun confused-“what…”

Radhika-“this is the price…I stole that burger and pastry from a bakery shop..and in the process of escaping I fell down and got hurt..

Arjun-“are u out of ur mind…what if they would have caught u…and what was the need of stealing..”

Radhika-“because I have not ate a single thing from two days…was very hungry and when I saw burgers I was not able to control myself…”

Arjun heart pained hearing her words-“why… u don`t have money…”

Radhika-“no dear…I live in an orphanage…I used to sell newspapers to earn money…but due to rain yesterday my all newspapers got wet and was destroyed …the manager of the newspaper shoves me for being careless and didn`t gave me a single penny…but guess what I am thankful to him for not paying me…atleast I enjoyed the adventure of stealing..saying so she gave a big smile…

Arjun was completely surprised with her this carefree attitude…His POV- “god have given me everything..home ..money….parents.. but yet I blamed him for my every single problem…I was going to end my life just because I suffer some loss in business….and look at her…she don`t have anything..no home…no money..no parents…yet she never complained about anything….she finds happiness in almost everything….she is right…every person in this world have problems…but it depends on us whether we scare our problems or let our problem scares us… Arjun Mehra now no more daal chawal..only icecream…”

Radhika shook Arjun-“o prince charming…what are u thinking so deeply..”

Arjun gave her a big smile and hugs her….Radhika was surprised but she obliged the hug….he broke the hug after a minute-“thanks u..thank u..thank u so much…yeah u r right…life is surely an icecream…and I promise I will enjoy its every bite…”

Radhika-“so u will not commit suicide right..?

Arjun smiled-“of course not miss…..

Radhika-Radhika Mishra…and u..

Arjun-“Arjun Mehra… and now plz come with me..I want to take u somewhere”

Radhika make a pout face-“where…plz don`t send me to jail by writing my name on ur suicide note…”

Arjun laughed watching her face-“ok I will not…but on one condition…”

Radhika-“what condition..?”

Arjun- first come with me..he took Radhika to his car ..made her sit and drove off towards her orphanage by asking the address from her…on his way he purchased burgers,pastries, ice creams and balloons for everyone…After reaching Arjun helped Radhika getting out from the car and handed her all the items..she asked him to come along with her…they distributed all the things among the people of orphanage and was very happy watching the excitement and happiness of everyone….

Arjun asked Radhika about the name of the newspaper she used to sell.he made a phone call and asked the person to buy that news paper agency and make Radhika Mishra the copywriter…

Radhika was surprised at his words..she asked him how he gets to know that she wanted to be a writer..”

Arjun smiled-“u compelled the stubborn Arjun Mehra to change his decision by your words and thoughts…only that moment I understood u had a great talent of thinking and writing…”

Radhika was very happy..tears started flowing down from her big brown eyes…she pinched herself to confirm it wasn`t her dream…she had never imagined that her dream to become a writer will ever come true..she hugged Arjun-“thanks Arjun…thanks a lot for giving me so much happiness..”

Arjun wiped her tears and pulled her close-“no Radhika…I should say thanks…thank u for making me realize the true meaning of life…”

Everyone clapped watching them..Radhika broke the hug and blushed..After some chit chats with her and others..Arjun left with the promise to come to meet them everyday..

Arjun went straight to his office…called his PA and asked him for the file of the deal in which he suffers huge losses…he started working day and night to compensate the loss and finally his hard words gave fruits…he was awarded with the Best Entrepreneur award…he thanked everyone and dedicated his award to the true owner Radhika..he went to Radhika`s news agency and took her to the same cliff where the met for the first time..he made her eat burger ,pastries and ice cream and got on his knees and shouted-“I love u Radhika…thanks for coming in my life…this place is the most luckiest place of my life..I will never forget the lesson u gave me on our first meet..

Radhika shouted more louder than him-“I love u too Arjun…thanks for making my dreams true and for everything…but listen I love u but not more than pastry,burger and ice creams…

Arjun laughed at her… he got up.. pulled her into his embrace and they kissed deeply….
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That’s it guys…hope u all lyk it…I was so desperate to write a one shot that I myself don`t know what I wrote…plz spare me if I bored u all..loads of love..…take care…

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66 Comments

  1. bisha on May 30, 2016 6:45 am

    Omg! A very sweet foodie love story. Beautuful thoughts instilled here too. Keep writing. People would rreally love if they get such angels in their lives.

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:32 pm

      Thnx bisha..I was very much scared before posting this ff..glad that u liked it..

  2. Rg on May 30, 2016 7:43 am

    Hi ritu. Beautiful yet funny joyful foodie love story. It was delicious. I loved it.

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:32 pm

      Thnx a ton dr..

  3. Kavina on May 30, 2016 8:26 am

    I loved it

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:33 pm

      Thnx kavina

  4. Hope on May 30, 2016 8:29 am

    It’s so fluffy… I’m gonna die… He he.. Cute.. Me too a foodie.

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:35 pm

      Thnx hope..and same pinch dr.. m also a foodie..

  5. Gauri on May 30, 2016 8:36 am

    Ritu this was a cute love story with a big lesson 🙂 loved it 🙂

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:35 pm

      Thnx dr..bless u.

  6. Roshni on May 30, 2016 9:01 am

    It was really cute and fun.. Enjoyed it

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:37 pm

      Thnx dr.. Love u..

  7. pankh on May 30, 2016 9:30 am

    Ritu dear..it was just superb..I am not able to explain my feelings right now after reading it…loved it to the core…plz continue to write infinite os like this…

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:39 pm

      Thnx dr..will try and write more os..luv u..

  8. harna on May 30, 2016 9:41 am

    awesome…

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:40 pm

      Thnx harna

  9. Sweetie on May 30, 2016 10:42 am

    That’s a cute love story.. 🙂
    Please write more.. Stay blessed and be happy.. 🙂

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:41 pm

      Thnx dr..love u..take care

  10. deeva on May 30, 2016 10:57 am

    Hey ritu it’s beautiful……. emotions are there yet spirit of living….. the livelihood of a girl…. loved it so much dear…….. hope u entertaine us with more short stories which is really a living spirit and motivation to life….. love u dear love u a lot take Care

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:42 pm

      Thnx dr..m really glad that u guys liked it..take care

  11. Jessie on May 30, 2016 11:01 am

    I liked it to the core… A complete ride.. superb Ritu.. pls do give us more such pleasant shots.. have a nice day..

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:43 pm

      Thnx a ton dr..take care

  12. priya on May 30, 2016 11:22 am

    awesome

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:44 pm

      Thnx priya..love u

  13. Rosie on May 30, 2016 11:25 am

    Ritu dear this is superb…do give us this kind of sweet funny OS more n more…i totally enjoyed it..very nice n well narrated..??

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:46 pm

      Thnx dr..loads of love..take care

  14. Khushi on May 30, 2016 11:39 am

    m speechless dear..not finding words to describe my happiness..it is a really a cute love story…loved aradhika a lot..

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:47 pm

      Thnx Dr..stay blessed

  15. Brin on May 30, 2016 12:03 pm

    Awesome, you did an excellent writing on one shot, well done. 🙂

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:48 pm

      Thnx a ton Dr..

  16. swasan fans on May 30, 2016 12:07 pm

    wao..what a cute foodie love story… i enjoyed every part..hey dear can u please give us some wonderful os like this on swasan..its a request.

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:50 pm

      Thnx dr.and about swasan..then m not a regular viewer of the show..but if I get some ideas will surely post one on swasan..love u

  17. susi on May 30, 2016 1:26 pm

    Oh ritu my darling……this was mindblowing yaar…..very funny n heartouching…..dhaal chaval …icecream….wow..I loved it so much yaar….keep it up…pls write another new one….love u lot …tc…

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:52 pm

      Thnx Susi dear..m glad that u liked it..love u too..

  18. aarti on May 30, 2016 1:40 pm

    amazing..one of the best os I have ever read..u rocked it

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:53 pm

      Thnx dr…stay blessed.

  19. vini on May 30, 2016 3:18 pm

    that one was really cute Ritu 🙂 🙂 .. it will motivate many people ..

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:55 pm

      Thnx for such a lovely comment dr..

  20. Randhir on May 30, 2016 3:24 pm

    awesome yr…i was literally crying reading it..hope that oneday i also get someone like Radhika who would make me realise the true meaning of life, love and happiness..fingers crossed..hats off to u

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:57 pm

      Thnx dr..and I really hope u get ur angel soon..take care

  21. aarti on May 30, 2016 4:33 pm

    thnx dr….yes everyone wants an angel in their life who give them immense happiness and support..take care

    • aarti on May 30, 2016 4:47 pm

      sorry dear..I was giving this reply to bisha..don’t know how it got posted here..sorry

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:58 pm

      Its absolutely fine dr..no issues..

  22. subha on May 30, 2016 5:33 pm

    lovely story………..awesome.i love it……..tc

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 5:59 pm

      Thnx subha…love u

  23. Sam on May 30, 2016 5:48 pm

    Awesome loved it

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 6:00 pm

      Thnx dr..bless u.

  24. Gianna on May 30, 2016 6:29 pm

    Awwwww so romantic loved it so much Ritu. A foodie love story indeed. Loved it so very much ???

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 11:50 pm

      thnx dr..loads of love

  25. mithra on May 30, 2016 6:44 pm

    its really awesome dear….
    love aradhika lot u have beautiful thoughts and amazing skill of writing pls write more os like this …when will u update your ff eagerly waiting for that

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 11:54 pm

      thnx for such a beautiful comment dr..will try to update my ff tommorrow..love u..

  26. Jerly on May 30, 2016 7:00 pm

    awesome…..mind-blowing…… superb….fantastic………don’t know how to describe it more……..loved ur OS to its core……..and ofcourse THANK UUUUUU for the wonderful message u delivered through this story…….. THE MEANING OF LIFE…….Wow….thanks yaar…….thank u…… love u ………

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 11:56 pm

      thnx dr..m very happy after reading ur comment..love u..take care

  27. dipika on May 30, 2016 8:19 pm

    Oh my god Ritu seriously first i have ever read such cute but equally very inspirational love story.. means honestly i didn’t found a exact word to praise you..foodie radhika,her daal chaval nuska n ice cream wala chaska..all is really very awsome..pls continue ur writing… want to read more stories like this..love you loads..tight hug

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 11:58 pm

      thnx a ton dr..u guys are just awesome…very motivating and supportive..love u…take care..

  28. Ada on May 30, 2016 9:17 pm

    superb os..i don’t know how many times I have read it

    • Ritu on May 30, 2016 11:59 pm

      thnx dr..loads of love..

  29. aradhika nesam on May 30, 2016 11:43 pm

    awesome….loved the way radhika stopped Arjun from suicide..

    • Ritu on May 31, 2016 1:53 pm

      thnx dr..

  30. suga on May 31, 2016 6:21 am

    ritu darling its fabulous??? loved it?? specially d way explained abt d life ✌ aradhika moments r awesome?? loved irritated arjun ?? he s always cute in dat way?loved it ??

    • Ritu on May 31, 2016 1:54 pm

      thnx dr..and yeah irritated Arjun is a treat to watch..love u..take care

  31. Disha on May 31, 2016 1:04 pm

    just one word fabulous..a cute os..and sorry for a late comment

    • Ritu on May 31, 2016 1:55 pm

      thnx dr..and no need of sorry..take care

  32. Roma on June 1, 2016 1:20 am

    Wowwww ritu…..my darling. ..I loved it loved it loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …you nailed it my honeyyy. ..it’s the sweetest story ever…foodie rads n depressed arjun….lol…it’s must say you have very optimistic thinking n positive lively attitude. …it’s really superbbbb n I’m glad very impressed with your flawless talent….very interesting n inspiring story….life is like ice cream enjoy it before it melts….loved this line to the coreeeee. …..it’s giving us hope n power to fight with your hurdles in life….you’re amazing my lovely friend. …keep it up honeyyy. …write more stories like this…..this story gave me new hope n strength to fight against the odds….love you loads my sweeeeeetheart. ..
    Muaaaaahhhhhh. ..: 🙂 😉 🙂

  33. baby on June 1, 2016 10:44 am

    loved it..awesome…

  34. Ritu on June 2, 2016 12:38 pm

    thnx dr for such an amazing comment..u guys are superb..always motivates and support..I m really glad to have u all as my friend..love u..take care

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