Fan Fiction

Manmarziyan 2 states chap 29

Hiee all im Sv back here with the masti ride of 2 states… guys one thing…we as a writer are just writing the ff just for ur encouragement and that encouragement is through ur comments… it is just few seconds of u guys comments which makes us feel high…im just asking a small comment from my silent readers… can u do this to me ?? love u all…

Enjoy the ride…

All started for the treasure hunt… but they never knew they have a secret admirer society… yes ronny and his friends over listened the conversation made by the executive committee… nothing much ardhika nesam and karssie (karthik and jessie)… so ronny and his team by name abishek, pradeep and one more his name is Logu (full name logesh but called Logu).

They are the gang who were listening to the speech of the executive committee meeting… Ronny wanted to have a close watch of what are they doing and for that he made Abishek to keep the watch on them and he also instructed not to say about this to anyone…

After few days…..

Ronny ; did u find what are they upto ??

Abhishek ; Yes i came to know about their operation X…

Pradeep ; who is sick and why is operation X (within his giggles) cant they find what treatment is going through ??

Ronny looks to Pradeep and slaps….

Ronny ; so what are they upto ??

Abishek ; i wont say that to u..

Ronny ; why ??

Abishek ; because u asked me not to say so i will not say that to u..

Ronny bangs his head hard… as the world finest idiots were joined hands and he never knew he was the finest…

Ronny ; i will kill u i was the one who asked u to keep the secret and now i am asking u so u can say it…

Abhishek ; so i can say this u will not say me not to maintain…

Ronny ; i will not ask to maintain the secret so pls say me…

Abhishek says what is the secret is…. (they were confidential and so i dont know what they are speaking….)

The D day….

All were ready for the treasure hunt…

All came to Arjun’s house and from there they are taking 3 bikes to the destination…

Sam ; dont forget to take the compass…

Neil ; why are u asking about compass are we gonna do some geometry ??

All freezes and looks at him… (BGM dannn dannnn dannnn)

What ? All asked unanimously….

Neil ; ya are we going to do some geometry….

Jessie bangs the knife which she had… and said ; aint i said u should never open ur mouth ?? Neil nods… SO why did u do that ?? Neil gupls…

Jessie ; guys will u ever feel once neil is dead ??

Arjun ; nope…

Radhika ; Never…

Sam ; i will cry for few days and move on…

Neil ; what the ?? what did i say ??

Jessie ; thats it u r finished mr Neil malhotra… saying so she takes the knife and runs behind him and he took a run and the others finished the final packing…

Sam ; Karthik call them we have to start…

Karthik ; sorry sam i have only one life and i already made a sacrifice of loving her and not another sacrifice of loosing my life….

Both Neil and Jessie came in and Babu bhaiyya was like torn poster as they made him as the football and played well..

Babu bhaiyya ; Arjun pls take these 2 out of the house now else i will not live my life…

Karthik pulls Jessie by her elbow and Neil starts with sam and Ardhika were also ready..

Arjun, Sam and Karthik were driving the bike and few yards back there was an dabba tinkering car which followed the 6…

After few hours of drive all were taking some rest and there was a suspicious wall and slowly Radhika was walking and touches the wall and she screams…..

Arjun as a hero goes in a slow motion with spreading his hand wide while taking every step… Neil walks over him and looks at him from the back and gives a thu look and touches the wall and he too disappear….

Sam pushes Arjun and pulls jessie with her and tha tha also passes through the wall and all fall and land over the other world… It was a parallel world of the present world but it was the past world means they have traveled to the past…

All were wearing saree and dhothi and they were typical ancient attire…

Neil who looks at radhika shouts and she at once closes his mouth as she was looking like a woman with her ancient attire…

Neil ; radhika u look like a girl…

Radhika ; and u look like a boy neil…

Neil ; and why did u spin yourself with 16 yards of(he was making round in his hand) u know this cloth.

Radhika ; argh neil look at urself for god sake… he turns and looks at his self and screams…

A big beard a turban and he was looking like an ancient person…

Neil ; what is this ?? (in a panicking voice).

Arjun ; that is supposed to be a beard… And then all looks at each other and finds that they were all having big beard and all were wearing ancient attire and also the girls were wearing all jewelry and they were looking like girls… well that was the point…

Radhika ; tha tha ?? tha tha ??

Tha tha ; i am here radhika…. saying so he comes out and they almost fainted…. he was like a hulk man… he was young handsome and the sight will make the heart to skip the beat….

Radhika ; tha tha ??

Tha tha ; yes radhika….. it is me……. Arneil karthik fainted… they were looking early 30ies and he was young 20ies

Doctor…. doctor…. a voice came… they all look at the out and found a woman calling some one…

Arjun comes there and she speaks to him,

Lady ; good morning professor…

Arjun ; haa?? professorah ??

Lady ; yes sir u r our professor… sir i want doctor….

Arjun ; doctor ??

Lady ; yes sir doctor… just then neil comes with the others…

Lady ; pranam doctor….

radhika and tha tha jerks…

Arjun ; what happened ??

Radhika ; paati arjun…

Arjun ; yaar she looks young dont call her paati…

Radhika ; dai loosu she is our paati… he at once jerks and looks at the woman yes she was paati… all turn their face to see thatha and he was looking at her with mouth wide open and tongue out like a stray dog and saliva was flowing like an open dam…

Others ; eeeeeeuuuuu with a disgusting face….

Tha tha ; hey baby (winks) so what do i need to do ?? (again winks…)

Arjun (husks) ; why is he winking ??

Radhika (husks back) ; he is correcting paati arjun…

Neil ; still same lady cant he find someone better ??

Dang…… there was a sound….

tha tha banged saral with a biiiiiiggggg plate and the sound was echoing the whole city…

Paati ; ooh my hulk pls dont hit the doctor….

Ardhika ; Doctor ??

Nesam ; Doctor ??

Kareesie ; Doctor ??

Neil ; oohh yes i am the doctor…come on miss i will make sure that the patient is fixed…

Paati ; fixed ??

NEil ; a bbb bbbb cured cured…

Paati ; ooh cured ok pls come sir pranam professor.. pranam pandit ji…looking at karthik and pranam handsome hulk and he winks and kisses her in the air and seductively speaks ; bye angel…. she waves her hand and leaves there and tha tha was waving keeping his hand up and all the time winking and kissing on the air…

Radhika had enough… she pulls him by his elbow and shouts…

Radhika ; tam – uun manasula enna nenachutu irukka periya azahganna ?? yov nee kezhavanya mela pona kezavan inga vandhum mavaley unnoda manmada leelai vidalala ??

Eng – what are u thinking of urself a big handsome hulk ?? listen u are an oldie gone oldie. Even after this u r not stopping ur manmada leela (manmadan the god of love leela is his plays) right…

Tha tha ; ooh stop speaking like an old lady let me enjoy with my love…. saying so he jerks radhika and goes behind paati in the crowd…

Radhika shouts in frustration…

Precap – all comes to know who is the patient and then treatment time masti…..

Thats it for today…. how is it ?? was it funny enough ?? can u pls share me ur views pls…. love u all stay blessed and always smile…

S.v

I have a very bad habit of laughing at serious situations - Bunny (Me ofcourse).... you guys can check my works in wattpad... my wattpad id is SvShri....

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