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Manmarziyan <3 SwaLak SS (short story)

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Manmarziyan <3 SwaLak SS (short story)The journey begins…..In a dark rainy night , I was all alone on the road as my car’s tyre was puncture , in hope of an aid I was praying to god , when I noticed a shadow lurking behind me. A thought came in my mind “Oh No!” This one word only comes when I see his face and listen to his stupid talks. I was not in the mood to see his face , but what can I do if destiny made me his. Yes , he was Lakshya , commonly known as Laksh. Laksh”Senorita , need my help?” I “Mr. Maheshwari , please I want to reach home ,pack my stuff and fly back to India , well I am happy that I will be staying away from you.” Laksh”Senorita , Laksh Maheshwari gets what he wants , and this is the case of true love”Yes , he loved me madly like anything , and I was fed up of his words which only said “I love u , Senorita!!!” Literally , 2 years these 2 years were like hell for me to tolerate this mad person , he knows I am going to get married to Sanskaar when I will reach India , but his madness , Uffff!!!Laksh continues”Senorita , aisay chotay chotay daishon mai aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehtein hain”And the most irritating thing of him was , he keeps on repeating SRK’s line and think himself of Raj from DDLG and me as his Senorita urf Simran. Ugghhhh!!!!Laksh ” Look , at least today accept my love , look you are leaving today, 4rever , I do not care you will be in my life or not , you will be my Simran or not , you marry me or someone else but just say you love me , please…”I know he is mad totally mad , crazy , stupid , idiot , psycho , whatever , but today I did not wanted to spoil my mood by shouting or fighting with him coz this is the last day of mine with him , then I will be free from him , so I was standing quietly and listening to his stupidity.Laksh pulled me closer , and asked me do I love him , I wanted to say no , but something was stopping me to do so, I did not know why? But then I realized I am someone’s fiancee , Sanskaar flashed in my mind and I pushed him. I started walking away , ignoring him. I heard him calling out my name but I had to control on my unknown emotions , which I felt today and what they meant I do not know and actually do not want to know.Laksh”Goooo! But if my love is true you will never leave me , today I am challenging God , My love will win or your commitment which you never madeI turned to reply him back , but was left shocked at seeing the sight , he was pointing a pistol towards himself , leaving me shocked.I shouted “Laksh!!!” , he did not listened and was about to pull the trigger when the emotions which were hidden somewhere in my heart came on my lips. I shouted “I love you Laksh , I love you to the eternity , I love u!!” I broke down into tears , he left the pistol , stretched out his arms, I ran and hugged him , I felt peace in him , I found myself complete that day.Yes , it is my story , my love story , which makes me complete. I am Swara , Swara who came to study Textile Designing in Spain but she did not knew she will find his Prince . That rain made me fall in love with him and the trees of love grow each and every day at the plain of our heart. That rain , that night , that feeling I can never forget.Credit to: Barbie

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29 Comments

  1. Kittu on June 16, 2016 2:16 pm

    Super Awesumm..

    • barbie on June 16, 2016 9:51 pm

      Thank You 🙂

  2. Purvi on June 16, 2016 2:34 pm

    Amazing …… Continue soon…….

    • barbie on June 16, 2016 9:52 pm

      Thank you so much.This is an one shot but i will start a ff if everyone wants

  3. Crazygirl on June 16, 2016 2:39 pm

    Awesome

    • barbie on June 16, 2016 9:52 pm

      Thank YOu <3

    • Angel_Swalakian on June 17, 2016 11:08 am

      wanted to tell u that i have just registered so my name is changed 🙂

  4. Anku on June 16, 2016 2:54 pm

    Its so gud…

    • barbie on June 16, 2016 9:53 pm

      Thank You soo much Anku

    • Angel_Swalakian on June 17, 2016 11:08 am

      Wanted to tell u that i have just registered so my name is changed 🙂

  5. Sparkle on June 16, 2016 2:55 pm

    Wow barbie it was so beautiful. Waiting for the next part. Update soon.

    • barbie on June 16, 2016 9:53 pm

      ITs a one shot but will be back with a ff soon 🙂

    • Angel_Swalakian on June 17, 2016 11:08 am

      🙂
      PS: i have just registered so my name is changed 🙂

  6. Abdul hafiz(uma). on June 16, 2016 3:04 pm

    Awsm.

    • barbie on June 16, 2016 9:54 pm

      Thank u Abdul

  7. sherin on June 16, 2016 3:25 pm

    Its awesome…….thak u so much for swalak….i love them to core

    • barbie on June 17, 2016 10:53 am

      Thank YOu

    • Angel_Swalakian on June 17, 2016 11:07 am

      Thank You SO Much
      PS: i have just registered so my name is changed 🙂

  8. Shona/Laado on June 16, 2016 3:27 pm

    continue…

    • barbie on June 17, 2016 10:53 am

      Thank you shona/laado your ff’s are mindblowing

  9. cute girl on June 16, 2016 4:30 pm

    superbb….

    • barbie on June 17, 2016 10:53 am

      Thank You 🙂 🙂

  10. inu on June 16, 2016 7:15 pm

    lovely ss about swalak.loved it.

    • barbie on June 17, 2016 10:54 am

      Thank You INU

  11. Anu Ann on June 16, 2016 9:21 pm

    Nice dear

    • barbie on June 17, 2016 10:54 am

      Thank You 🙂

  12. priya on June 17, 2016 2:16 am

    nice

    • barbie on June 17, 2016 10:54 am

      🙂 🙂 Priya thank you

  13. alia on June 18, 2016 7:37 pm

    Awesome dear

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