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manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 12

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Hello guys…thanks all for ur great support n encouragement…let me know ? about this chapter as ur responses are important for me…

Neil dialled ardhika’s no. Many times…but it showed not reachable…so he thought I will tell chasini tomorrow when she will back…nesam enjoyed their moments…sam told we should talk with our parents for proposal…neil replied Sammy are you determined to giv me shock after shock…marriage..yes but before that we should make our Romeo and Juliet together…otherwise I don’t know when my Romeo will become Antonio….sam smiled n said u r right idiot…but I thought might b chasini has some feelings for Arjun but she couldn’t figure it out…Neil’s face brightened n said then we should make her realize that…but Sammy if ur not sure then you know what will happen…sam nodded her head…both smiled n busy with their chit chat…

Here ardhika went for their location… radhika going to enter into the car a bike came at full speed towards her…Arjun saw that…the last accident dancing in front of his eyes…he was scared n pulled out radhika towards him n hugged her tightly…radhika was shocked with this sudden behaviour but she understood…she tried to broke the hug n calmed him down…but he didn’t let her go…rather than she felt he held her much tight as if she would flew away if he let her go…she thought to give up for sometime n stood still…she patted his back…said m fine Arjun..nothing happened to me…after sometime he broke the hug but still held her from her waist…radhika saw tears in his eyes…she stunned…she wiped his tears…arjun cupped her cheek from both side n said r u alright..if anything happened to u…lets go to doctor…he checked her..he said m so scared..u know I can’t afford to lose u again…may b that’ll b my end…radhika was shocked hearing his words…coz he wasn’t lying…more over his vulnerability showed…he was trembling,sweating…she thought how to calmed him down…finally she caressed his face n said Arjun look into my eyes..he did as she said…m here all Fyn n u r with me also..so nothing will happen to me…n I’ll not leave u…ok..he somehow calmed but again hugged her…she’s now reciprocated him thinking this is the only way now to keep him sane…but she was too confused with herself by seeing his new side constantly…a new feeling which was always wondering her…

Mala talking with Riya n sweetly scolding them…so when u all r coming..riya replied after two days…n u should prepare ur hand made dishes to feed us…enormous amount coz we want to have ur food for a year time at once..mala laughed…dadaji took phone n said beta u promised me give a new pair of bridal dress..where is that n where is my bride?? Like dadaji Riya joked dadaji when m here why to search bride…both laughed loudly…Riya told them that saurav planned some surprise for all of us…but he didn’t want to tell me…may b he ll told his both dearest raj n rads…so wait n watch…they go on …..

Radhika told Arjun she will drive n told him to take rest…Arjun’s eyes widen n said like yesterday…she smiled n patted slightly on his cheek…in between Arjun had nothing to do except staring her…he was reminiscing past vulnerable moments but it gave him peace…first time he hugged her…radhika without looking at him said do u wanna make hole in my body by staring like this…he said although the reason was not appropriate but I wanna stare u all my life time…she was numb n didn’t reply anything…after some silence radhika said sorry…Arjun said what did u do?? N why sorry?? Infact m sorry…radhika told him that she was sorry for her inconvenience,the mess she did last night…she said I was out of sense so…Arjun jumped up by listening this…he was mummering to himself what ?? I thought that was a dream..but it was real…wow…radhika never understood this guy now a days…they came near the location..

It was a place near forest which looked like fusion of tradition n modern…they went inside forest….n reached at the proper location…the place had serene,scenic,sublime beauty….radhika stood on the top of water fall shooting the beauty of nature…Arjun took out some photos of her secretly…for shooting the next photo he placed his hand on a tree branches for balance n got injured by thrones on it…he lightly screamed oouch…radhika told him why r u so off minded now…can’t u concentrate lyk before..she took his hand n took out thrones…as some blood oozed out she sucked the bloods…he felt that tingling sensation across his body n again lost…they went here n there n finalized their location…some meters away from the road…

As the day passed sunlight was lil hard for them to bear plus they walked too much…radhika told Arjun to take rest under the tree…both sat down n drank water…the coolness of the wind touched them…radhika was so much tired that after sometime she fell asleep…arjun took her into him n placed her head on his chest n patted her head encircling over her shoulder…now he could feel something…he was gaining his confidence over him…he thought about proposing her but as he promised himself he would take things slowly…its all better for them..

After sometime he heard someone was screaming for help…he startled n thought who might b …he didn’t want to leave radhika but as situation calling he placed radhika head on their bag n move to the direction from where the sounds coming…not too far he saw some people beating a person badly as a girl screamed for help..one person held her hand tightly…seeing him the girl begged him save us brother plz…Arjun told them to leave them…they told him to mind his business…eventually he was in fight with them…when a person going to hit on his head with stick from backside radhika stopped him saying u 6 people against one that is not fair n u attacked from back…how cowardly…those goons were passing some slangs seeing her…Arjun’s extra protective instincts were on…he warned them not to blurt out anything against her..otherwise the result would not be good…but they ignored him n again started their filthy banters…he beat them black n blue…but soon two of them captured him n one went toward radhika n other tried to hit him…that was the limit…radhika couldn’t tolerate now…she punched the man coming to him so hard n kicked the one who tried to hit Arjun…more than others Arjun was in shock seeing her in action…they both taught the goons a good lesson but Arjun got hurt from a knife when one person tried to stab radhika…when the goons ran they said we will not leave u…we will back with other peoples…

The couple come to them n said thanks bhaiyya n bhabiji…radhika was going to say something stopped by Arjun…he said its k…but why did they harm u…the couple said they were in love but as their religion were different their parents didn’t agree…so they decided to ran away to Mumbai…but before they could say anything more some voices disturb them from far…radhika held Arjun’s hand tightly n said to all time for run now…they ran like mad out of the forest…on the way Arjun only looked at radhika who held him tight took him toward light,peace…he now understood the meaning of his dream….

They came out forest n moved into car…radhika drove like before anybody could trace them…when goons came back they found nothing…the couple said them thank u,said bhabi u r really a power pack…but u don’t seem like that..they bid their good bye n said we’ll meet in Mumbai…radhika standing there all emotional n wiped her tears she marked her palm covered with blood…but she didn’t feel anything…she took arjun’s hand n dragged him to near by hospital…after the bandage done she gave a good scolding to him…how r u so careless…if something happened to u what ll i do…how can I give answers others…etc…she went on…Arjun listened her silently n enjoying her previous chatterbox nature…doctor came there said u both are really something…last time madam was injured n Mr mehera was so scared n this time opposite…they both looked on…

When they returned Arjun stared her with questioning eye…she said what…he said what extra things u learnt as m getting shock after shock…ur driving,action,scolding,n what else…she laughed n said it was needed a girl for sure…n while m at Oslo saurav taught me all this as he can’t bear me in weak form…first time Arjun was jealous of saurav but thankful to him…coz now he was also at ease by seeing her strength…but he wanted to teach her those things by himself…radhika said I knew everything except kick boxing…Arjun’s face brightened…he thought something was left for him…he said I’ll teach u..they smiled looking at each other …They reached at hotel…radhika pulled Arjun for dinner…she fed him with her hand as his were injured…for the first time he was enjoying being injured…he got all her attention…she took care of him…before entering into their room they wish good night to each other…time passed…both tossing n turning on their bed thinking about each other…both were happy from inside…more to Arjun thought he get his life back…he should utilize those time before she went back to Oslo again..n he to London again….all he wanted to get her back with full of her liveliness n charm…he happily looking at her photos….

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M sorry guys…it was quite ardhika chapter as situation was like this…n don’t mind me …i m a complete action suspense freak…so it came out naturally…

Precap: Secret revealed …radhika was shocked

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41 Comments

  1. Anu on March 28, 2016 4:19 am

    Awesome

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 10:49 am

      Thanks Anu..tc??

  2. Brin on March 28, 2016 5:37 am

    I love the way Ardhika are showing concern for each other. To day episode was fantastic, waiting for the secret to be revealed and why Radhika is shocked.

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 12:55 pm

      Omg…always waiting for ur comment…my reply didn’t posted…don’t why…but u r a very big support for me from starting of my ff…thank u very much…luv u…tc? ?

  3. Hayathi on March 28, 2016 7:02 am

    Radhika shocked but whg

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 10:51 am

      Thanks hayati for ur response every time…luv u…tc?

  4. Sathya on March 28, 2016 8:13 am

    Hi Rosie dear…. how are you? i m missing u all… :-(. so now come to ur chapter.. its so awesome n cool dear. i m sooooo happy to see radhika in chanti avataar… like arjun even me too get shocked seeing her action n. kicks…. its fantastic. seeing arjun’s care n affection, radhika’s heart started melting… hmmm very very cute n lovable one.

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 10:54 am

      Hiiii sis m also missed u n ur update…glad to see u here again…how was ur vacation with ur family?? I guess too much fun…radhika in action…i always prefer girls to b strong n independent…thanks a ton for liking this…..luv u…tc??

      Update ur ff soon plz plz

  5. Gauri on March 28, 2016 8:34 am

    Loved it Rosie…but what about Rajiv…I am curious now 🙂

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 10:58 am

      Thank u ? very very much gauri…about Rajiv just wait a lil bit…m making u curious…omg…luv u…tc??

    • Gauri on April 1, 2016 5:17 pm

      When are you posting next chapter

  6. Sv on March 28, 2016 8:41 am

    Im super happy . U rocked. Rads power packed and poor arjun didnt have much to teach her . Lol i loved it . Super awesome love u dear .bear kisses and hugs.

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 11:02 am

      Yipee sv..we both r action maniac…thank u very much…bear hug…loads of luv…tc ??

    • Sv on March 28, 2016 11:56 am

      yup we are twins i love u sisyy

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 12:56 pm

      What about ur ff…when will u update…luv ya…tc??

    • Sv on March 28, 2016 2:55 pm

      uploaded it waiting for tellyupdates to update. love u too take care

  7. maandey on March 28, 2016 9:11 am

    Rosie….m very happy with this…..I always enjoy when a female beat goons….just like NH10 Movie…anushka sharma

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 11:04 am

      Thank u very much maandey…I didn’t see nh10 .. But I liked girls in action…luv u…tc..? ?

      Update ur ff soon..plz

    • maandey on March 28, 2016 3:17 pm

      Whenever u hot a chance do watch it……..u will definitely enjoy it

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 3:54 pm

      K…definitely…thank u ?

  8. Dhara on March 28, 2016 9:29 am

    Radhika is back with a bang.

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 11:05 am

      Thank u very much Dhara…yes radhika will b a power pack…luv u…tc? ?

  9. Bhabya on March 28, 2016 9:54 am

    Amazing episode. But what is the suspense. Please write soon. I luved the action moments.

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 11:07 am

      Thank u very much bhabhya…btw u listened the song?? Wait a lil bit…u ll know the secret..its simple …glad u liked action moments..luv u..tc ? ?

  10. susi on March 28, 2016 10:19 am

    As usual amazing update , its very very interesting, and eager to wait next update dear….tc…

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 11:10 am

      Thank u very much Susi for regularly appreciating…waiting for u…will try to update soon…think about secret…luv u..tc? ?

  11. Shree on March 28, 2016 10:56 am

    Rosie dear!! Oh my baby!! That’s so cute!! Their concern for each other and wow action sequence.. Too cute.. Radhika scolding Arjun!! Hahahahaha…

    Loved it Rosie!! I just loved it!!

    Post soon.. Love you ??

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 11:13 am

      Omg…my lil energy booster…waiting for u…thanks a ton ? dear…I’ll post soon…but what about u…u left ur story or too busy…luv u…tc??

    • Shree on March 28, 2016 11:26 am

      I’m trying.. Lo no I didn’t stop.. No mood.. On top of it, hectic schedule.. College is a literal pain

      I’ll try posting by this week

      Love you ??

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 1:17 pm

      K…then …m waiting…luv u choti…tc? ?

  12. subha on March 28, 2016 2:24 pm

    amazing episode yaar……..i love it…..radhika fight scence….scolding scene super….. totally ardhika part super…….precap interesting ……….please update soon ……tc

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 2:42 pm

      Thank u very much ? subha for liking it…radhika fighting scene…will update soon…luv ya…tc? ?

  13. sundari on March 28, 2016 3:16 pm

    super

    • rosie on March 28, 2016 3:53 pm

      Thanks sundari…glad to see u again..luv u..tc??

  14. feby on March 28, 2016 11:19 pm

    wow…an action thriller episode….nice one… i loved it….
    well…iam back after enjoying like anything with cousins and relatives….going to my native church during such great occassions wid relativs and cousins was a different experience for me which i loved it….at the same time i missed my reading habit for some days…hahaha….how r u rosie di…???? fine na??? did u enjoy ur holiday????

    • rosie on March 29, 2016 6:03 am

      M Fyn my lil darling…missed u too much…glad u come back…hope u enjoyed ur time fullest…seems like u r very happy ?…b always like this…god bless my dear…n thank u very much ? for liking it…luv u..tc? ??

  15. feby on March 31, 2016 12:44 am

    ya…i enjoyed my time to the fullest…only to end up wid my terrible crash course…..ye sunke acha laga ki aap mujhe miss karne lage…haha…koi nahi…mae tho hamesha ready hu comment karne keliye…par aajkal bohut bz ho gayi entrance coaching ke vajeh se…isliye late ho gayi reply dene me….. love u too……
    omg…i forgot i typed in hindi….sry…it came out in flow…i always talk in hindi wid my friends as i am more fluent in it than my mother tongue and i just finished talking wid thm…i hope u dont mind it and iam lazy to type back in eng…so pardon dear sis….

    • rosie on March 31, 2016 11:20 am

      No my darling…i knew Hindi very well…so crash course…i just wish u ll successful in each n every aspect of ur life…god bless u my lis lovey sis…n remember always chill…coz u r so small n delicate now…don’t take any tensions regarding study…it will go smooth eventually…so u not to worry about that…god I wish I could see u…pat u on ur head ….luv u my dear…tc??

    • feby on April 2, 2016 11:10 am

      di…u cant evn imagine how iam lacking confidence day by day seeing the tough competition around me….sometimes i feel as if iam nothing before thm..and whn i say tis ,my parents ask me one thing… “u where the person who used to win in everythng u challenged and how did tat change in tis one year” iam not able to answer tis question…. actually iam not able to rise from the place i have fallen…. i dont know how to tell tat also…evn my whole family is looking upto me and if i fail…tats it…end of evrythng…..to avoid such irritating stress i come here and read the ffs so tat i can relax a bit…

  16. Roma on April 1, 2016 10:04 am

    Awesome, wowwww Rosie, my lovely friend. ..it’s really superbbbb n mind blowing. Ardhika filled episode. ..I just loooooooooooooooooovvvvveeeeeeeeddd it…..first ardhika hug…wowwww n his love n concern for her n his deep fear of losing her… then the action of arjun n shocking rad skills. …power pack…very interesting. ..now arjun will teach rads kick boxing. ..that will be really amazing. …me too action freak. …just loved this fabulous episode n lovely story. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • rosie on April 2, 2016 4:14 pm

      Surely darling…thanks a ton ?…hope many people like action…i miss u on the time of post.. That ‘s all..it would be very supporting if I find u at time…u liked this chapter it made my day….thanks a lot dear..lov u…tc??

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