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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyaan- Rehnuma (Part 5)
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Manmarziyaan- Rehnuma (Part 5)

MeenBy MeenSeptember 1, 201652 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello everyone…..im back…..i loved all ur comments so much…..thanks a tonn for loving this ff……well i have not read other ff on manmarziyaan that much….but im a big fan of…….blue,gauri,sammy,sathya,dipika,myra & s.v……..so guys plz keep on updating……
plz ignore all typos & grammatical errors………

enjoy d ride
Radhika looked straight at arjun & said…”rule no 1……u’ll be sleeping on d couch & i’ll take d bed….”….to which arjun said……”no……i won’t sleep on couch…..thts not fair…I’m not used to it………& why would i…its my room…& i love my bed…….moreover its u….who is having problem in sharing bed….not me….so….” …radhika now stood straight & kept her hand over her hip…& muttered in a firm tone…”what do u mean…..haan….how could u even think that ill share bed with u…..disgusting….”…she turned her face saying so….now arjun replied with full attitude ”….ohhh come on….dont be a drama queen…..im just saying that u’ll sleep on ur side & i’ll stick to mine’…..now radhika started thinking..seeing this arjun smirked a little & muttered “…..ohhhh now i get it..…u r afraid that u won’t be able to control urself…”now radhika’s face frowned….she replied immediately…..”ok fine,i’ll take d left side….near d window….now she raised her left eyebrow ….& said….one more thing I’m not afraid of anything……u better remember this…”..hearing this arjun chuckled a little…& said…”here comes d rule no 2. i don’t like my room all messed up….pointing towards d towel on bed……so….”before he could complete radhika took d towel in her hand & hide it behind her….to which arjun raised an eyebrow & muttered “good”………radhika:. ’rule n0.3…….i’ll be d first one to use bathroom in d morning………& i don’t want any argument over this…”…..
arjun: ”fine……rule no 4…….now arjun thought for a second & said….u should never touch that box…pointing towards a small box kept over d cupboard…never means ….never,,,”
radhika: ”ooooohhhhh….what is there in d box?”……..she chuckled a little & said…..”may be love letters….”..
now expression on arjun’s face changed to that of anger……he some how controlled himself & said……”nothing important….just few pictures of urs doing that crazy booty step…”saying this he laughed out laudly….seeing this…radhika poked her tounge out & muttered….”whatever…. kadwa karela…”
arjun: “what …wht did u just say?”
radhika: ” nothing…last but not d least….u shouldn’t touch me unnecessarly…….i mean..she stammered a little then muttered…….dont take advantage of living in same room…”….saying this she started looking here & there…..at this arjun smirked a little & said…”anything else…..?” now radhika thought for a second keeping her index finger over her chin & other hand on hip…..& muttered d next ” nope…..”…

…as soon as radhika turned around to leave…….arjun screamed on d top of his voice……..”lizard………..”……hearing this radhika closed her eyes & screamed “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah…….” & jumped over arjun….keeping both of her leg around his waist ….hugging him tight………muttering…….”save me….plz..plz…plz…plz…plz…it will kill me…” …due to sudden force of her…..arjun stumbled a little…& fell on d bed with radhika on d top of him……feeling her so close to him arjun tightens his grip over her waist & starts moving his hand inside her top …..making her shiver with his touch…he started feeling her curves….due to which radhika clutched his shirt tightly…..& a gasp escaped her mouth….now arjun’s gaze shifted towards her red juicy lips……mere thought of capturing them were turning him on…..her scent drove him more crazy…..all this while radhika kept her eyes closed feeling him with his each warm breath ….seeing her like this arjun realised she is not ready for this yet…..he caressed his tresses with his fingers & asked her in a caring tone…”r u ok?”….she simply nodded…clutching his shirt more tightly….now run smiled a little & said…”it’s gone….”……radhika slowly opened her eyes….& looked straight in his eyes…& muttered “what????”….arjun chuckled a little….& said…”lizard…..its gone….”…….realising there position radhika stood up with a jerk….composed herself….looked here & there searching for lizard…& muttured “must have ran away…fearing a bold girl like me…” listning this arjun raised an eyebrow……& said sarcastically” yes….offcourse……u were so brave…i mean….i was amazed seeing how u handled that dangerous lizard….hats off….really”….at this radhika poked her tounge out ..curled her lips a little & muttered…..”whatever…”…seeing this arjun pulled radhika to himself with a jerk & whispered over her lips……”don’t do that again….it won’t be good for u”….now radhika gulped in fear & asked innocently…”what did i do…”…..arjun looked at her like a hungry lion & whispered…”that thing u do by curling ur lips & poking ur tongue out every now & then…don’t do that again…otherwise”……he now smirked a little & said…”otherwise…..it won’t take u more than 1 or 2 days to get pregnant with my baby…..”…..hearing this radhika’s eyes grew wider & her heart skipped a beat…..she started sweating profusely…….seeing this arjun smiled a little & moved back…….radhika quickly ran towards window…..took a deep breath ,composed herself & said…..”u devil…..how dare u…….”….seeing him coming towards her…….she quickly muttered…..”arjun…just now u broke rule no. 5……..remember no touching….”…..now arjun muttered in a firm tone…”really?????..what about u then…?”….
radhika: what about me????
arjun: “u were d 1 one to break that rule….”
radhika: “what rubbish….”
arjun: ”so who was that ,who jumped over me saying lizard…lizard….save me…plz..plz…plz….& what d hell was that…..it will kill me…..crap…”
radhika:”excuse me…how dare u ….& for ur kind info…..lizards are really dangerous…….”
arjun…..;”i believe u…..i totally do….lizards surely are dangerous……..but not as dangerous u….”… he started laughing & muttered…”chipkali……”
radhika: “hahaha…..so funny….& see who is saying this…..kadwa karele himself…..”…saying this she chuckled a little….
arjun: now smirked a little & said “how can u say I’m kadwa karela without even tasting me once…..at least try me once then…..saying this he winked at her…”
radhika; “u r so dead today Mr. arjun mehra”….saying this she grew a pillow towards him….which passed beside him…without touching him…
now arjun started laughing holding his tummy & muttered “u missed d golden chance baby…..now come ,its late…u should sleep”
radhika: “u don’t need to tell me what i hv to do & what not….i can take care of myself…….”she said this in a single breath while placing all d pillows between them as a wall…..& muttered again…”even ur single nail should not cross this wall let alone ur hands….& its a warning…….u hv no idea how cunning & dangerous i could be”
arjun: “ohhhh….well i do hv a clue about ur bravery….i hv seen that poor lizard “saying this arjun chuckled a little…..
at this radhika again curled her lips & poked her tongue out saying..”whatever”……..as soon as she realised what she did……she fully covered herself with blanket & muttered “bad night & salty dreams…”
hearing this arjun smiled & whispered to himself…”super cute…” saying this …he turned d lights off & slept ….

at midnight around 3:30….arjun felt some weight over his left arm….he turned d lights on….& a sweet smile came on his face when he saw radhika sleeping holding his tight….that too throwing all d pillows away….he caressed her face….& turned d lights off ….pulling her more to himself…….just then he heard his phone vibrating…….he thought…”who must be calling…at this time….”….his face face frowned seeing rana’s call….he quickly grabbed d phone…came out of d room & said….”what happened…is everything alright there?…..speak dammit….is he alright?”…….

PRECAP- Radhika’s dream & Neil”s entry

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    52 Comments

    1. S.v on September 1, 2016 9:08 pm

      Meen the rules always rocka and the purpose of these rules is to break them coz thats the real fun. Bagvan chipkali always the love guru of ardhika. Just remembered the chipkali time in the original series. My fav scene of ardhika. This was so cute and they always make pillow oillars but ends up hugging and sleeping each other. Thats the true cuteness of ardhika. Hey thanks dead that u have ready ff. Love u so much and whats thw dream that is botheringy radhika ?? When arjun is here why fear ?? Wow dimple king neil’s entry lovely waiting for the next update. Love u lods.

      • S.v on September 1, 2016 9:10 pm

        Argh this auto correct is actually auto wrong I was typing dear but came out to be dead.

      • Meen on September 1, 2016 10:04 pm

        Thanks a lot s.v…I love ur comments…. They motivate me a lot…..& I agree with u…auto correct is actually auto wrongwrong…I’m ready fed up with tht….love u…keep updating & reading….muuuuhaaa

    2. jewel on September 1, 2016 9:23 pm

      i was waiting for this from yesterday. nice chapter meen. really cute one. and who is that person about whom arjun talking to rana…. is that neil…post next soon

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:00 pm

        thanks for waiting darling…..it means a lot to me…..will update next tommorrow….loads of love…keep reading

    3. suga on September 1, 2016 9:44 pm

      It’s cute as heaven 🙂 god I was laughing like anything 🙂 these two are really cute together in ur ff 🙂 loved it meen 🙂 awesome one 🙂

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:02 pm

        hey suga…first of all thanks for commenting..im so happy u liked my ff…keep commenting….love u…stay blessed

    4. neetz on September 1, 2016 9:50 pm

      Wow cute cute cute cutness overloaded ..loved the epi dear..post sooon

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:03 pm

        thanks a lot neetz…will post next tommorw….till then keep smiling…love yaa

    5. Brin on September 1, 2016 9:55 pm

      Outstanding episode, eagerly waiting for the next update, you nail it, well done. 🙂

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:04 pm

        hey brin….im sorry i didnt mentioned ur name above…i hv read all ur ffs….& a big fan of urs……thanks u for updating & reading….loads of love

    6. nitu on September 1, 2016 10:16 pm

      fantastic episode meen
      u nailed it. luved the nok jokh between ardhika reee
      it was super cute and super fun reading ur update
      i enjoyed reading a lot
      luv u dear bye tc
      will w8 for nxt update

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:05 pm

        thnks nitu…im happy to c u comment…& hope to c u on next one toooo…..loads of love…

    7. Alex on September 1, 2016 10:50 pm

      Aewsom…really enjoyed a lot…love u loads for such amazing update… Post next one so

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:06 pm

        hey alex….thanks dear…..im glad u enjoyed this one….keep reading loads of love….

    8. Alex on September 1, 2016 10:52 pm

      Loved it amazing epi…waiting for next post soon

    9. KK on September 1, 2016 11:09 pm

      Omg…cuteness overload….Arjun is in deep love but poor man can’t even express it…

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:07 pm

        hey kk…yes u r right poor arjun…..but he has got a lot more to face….love yaaa….keep reading

    10. myra on September 1, 2016 11:37 pm

      Ufff….this is killing me…..meen dear, your writing is so addictive….just grabs all the attention to itself…..i was happily diving myself in and it just stopped ? ……and the quick updates just really keep you connected with the story…….and ardhika moments are toh always welcome ❤
      Meen sweetie, what did rana call about?….please update quick…..signing up for more ardhika…
      You know meen, i do really get so attached to some ff or writing but rehnuma was just different…..i mean,my joy today seeing it posted was entirely different…it even surprised me myself…
      Love you dear…take care and update soon….maybe a bit longer one next time…maybe? ?

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:09 pm

        thanks a lot myra…..ur comments are really precious to me………& right now im on cloud 9 after reading ur comments….loads of love……keep readinng…..& posting….

    11. Gracy on September 2, 2016 1:46 am

      Meen..the episode was awesome as usually..am loving Arjun’s naughtiness and radhika’s reactions to it,it’s great .beautiful work…much love

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:11 pm

        thanks a tonn gracy……happy to c u cooment……will update next one tmmrw…..till then keep smiling

    12. jnana on September 2, 2016 2:59 am

      Yipeee!!! Neil is entering??? I’m dancing now….. Epi was super cute just like her…..

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:12 pm

        yes jnana….neil is entering……but his entry may not be d one u expected….so be ready……loads of love………keep smiling

    13. Aasthu on September 2, 2016 10:12 am

      The rules are really cute and also Rads’s reaction on hearing the word “lizard”…….I’m excited to read the next update as it has Rads’s dream and also the entry of Neil……..chechi one doubt: Will Neil’s entry be a hindrance to ardhika’s love story?????? Does Rads know Neil??????? Will there be Sam’s entry as well after a few chappy’s???????????

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:14 pm

        hey cutie pie…….love u…& thanks a lot….will update next part soon…………& i must say…..u r super curious to know everything….right?????…..loads of love …..keep smiling

    14. Gauri on September 2, 2016 10:30 am

      Loved it Meen The rules are really cute 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:15 pm

        thanks for commenting gauri……loads of love…& post crossroads soon……keep smiling

    15. Priya on September 2, 2016 12:22 pm

      Awesome episode ……….. Loads of hugs and kisses for this episode ………. Love you ……tc

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:16 pm

        thanks priya….ur comment make me feel so good….as if i hv earned a reward or something…..keep reading & smiling….loads of love

    16. Sweetie on September 2, 2016 12:43 pm

      Really cute rules and that cutie cute scene of lizard.. 🙂 Haayee!! How I love that.. 😀 Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:17 pm

        thanks a lot sweetie………& thousand hugs for such a lovely comment……loads of love…keep reading & smiling

    17. Mini on September 2, 2016 2:38 pm

      Loved it … Plz update the next one soon..

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:18 pm

        hey mini …thanks a lot…will update next tmrw…loads of love….

    18. Jessie on September 2, 2016 4:00 pm

      Hey meen.. this is so sweeeet… gosh… I laughed like mad.. hahah rules n ardhika.. lol.. lizard ban gaya cupid.. I read it twice.. was laughing 4 each line..Arjun ban gaya radz ka deewana.. !! Eager 4 neil’s entry.. felt sad tat am catching ur update late.. full of Ardhika spl.. wow!! Eager 4 nxt update.

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:19 pm

        thank u so much my dear jessie…..right now im all smiling seeing ur sweet comment….keep reading & smiling darling…loads of love

    19. Roma on September 2, 2016 6:14 pm

      Awesome wowwww meen my dearrrr….mind blowing update. ..loved all the rules n humor…arjun is very naughty. ..rads so cute….lol…I just loved that lizard scene. ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug 🙂

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:20 pm

        hey roma…..so hv completed other 4…..nice to c u here….loads of love…keep reading darling

    20. subha on September 2, 2016 6:19 pm

      amazing…………..

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:22 pm

        thanks subha….i want ur comment on next one also…it inpires me a lot….loads of love

    21. Kavina on September 2, 2016 7:33 pm

      Loved it

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:23 pm

        kavina…….im so in love with ur..”loved it…”….loads of love…keep reading

    22. zaara on September 2, 2016 9:55 pm

      Where is next part meen??…we r waitngg

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 10:36 pm

        Hey zaara….will update it today only…I Hv completed it just now…

    23. Aadia on September 3, 2016 7:27 am

      Hey Meenu..its just awesome.how cute they are together?this story is really unique…
      and i write two ff’s here.if you have enough time please read’My love,with spaces in togetherness’and say your opinion..

      • Meen on September 3, 2016 9:14 am

        Of course baby …….I would love to read them….thanks a tonn for ur lovely comment……well now I’m gonna read ur ffs first…..thn anything……loads of love…muuuuha

    24. _Ritu on September 5, 2016 10:52 pm

      Meen it was beautiful….ArDhika were hilarious today 🙂 their rules..lol… Nd Lizard scene.. 😉 😉 it reminded me of MMZ scene in d show….fabulous epi dear…bt Neil’s entry is surprising…is here Sam too…will read d nxt nd den comment..loads of love 🙂

      • Meen on September 6, 2016 1:44 am

        Thanks a tonn ritu…..keep reading….loads of love

    25. R on September 6, 2016 12:41 am

      Out of the box…awesome…there a lot of cute exchanges between the two..great the way they r fighting…cuteness overload…
      Great work…njoying alot…??

      • Meen on September 6, 2016 1:27 am

        Dekha…..baat h kya…..akhirkaar likhne wali Teri hi to best frnd h…..hehehe…..BTW thanks a lot…..for reading this …..

    26. Ak on September 7, 2016 10:55 am

      I like the rules
      I wish aise rules mere naseeb me bhi ho
      Life me much to exciting hoga
      God bless u meena
      LOL

    27. Meen on September 7, 2016 12:18 pm

      are….waah …dekha maine kitna mst idea diya tujhe………….thank u so much akash for reading……aur haan aise din bhi aayenge….hehehe….loads of love

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