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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyaan- Rehnuma (Part 3)
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Manmarziyaan- Rehnuma (Part 3)

MeenBy MeenAugust 29, 201652 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello friends……..here is d next part for u all…….thanks for ur lovely comments…..they motivate me a lot…..loads of love……& plz ignore all my typos & grammatical errors……

Enjoy d ride
As soon as nandini left from kitchen….radhika Sat over the corner holding her head….she remembered her mother’s word.

Flashback
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“come-on radhika any how one day u Hv to learn it…thn why not today…..OK fine ,not for anyone else then at least for ur dream boy…u Hv to learn cooking…at least basic chores….”…radhika: no mom…I’m not at all interested in all these…& as far as my Mr. Attitude is considered….he would love me so much that after marriage he would only cook for me daily…” Saying this she winked looking at her mother….
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Flashback ends
A drop of tear rolled down her cheeks… She wiped them off & started to think what to do….she muttured….”now what I’ll do ,I don’t know how to cook….except…paasta, masala Maggie,dry Maggie,onion Maggie &…..nothing…..”…… arjun who was passing by d kitchen chuckled a little hearing her…….. .she kept thinking what to do….suddenly an idea striked her & she called her mother mala….but there was no response……her face sullen a little……she was pacing in d kitchen when she heard arjun talking to some one over d phone…….” Mr. mittal i need all d information within an hour……..i don’t care how u do it….& don’t forget to surf every little detail about d company….do it asap”….arjun smirked a little and went to d hall.…Radhika muttered under her breath “loon……Mr. attitude” Then she thought something for a minute & squealed d next shouting loudly”Google baba”……she surfed on net & thought of making “gazar ka halwa”……
It took her one & half hour….when she finally finished it with the help of Google baba….but when she took a look around….. She was shocked to see whole kitchen was a perfect definition of garbage box…..but she thought after serving everyone she will clean this off….

At the dining table….
Everyone was waiting for her for more than an hour….seeing everyone’s hungry faces nandini thought of checking on radhika herself….then she saw radhika with tray of bowls heading towards them….all this while Arjun was busy over his phone….he didn’t pay any heed towards d scenario thr…..thn nandini asked radhika to serve everyone….as she did ….everyone took a spoon full of gazar ka halwa…… Radhika closed her eyes & prayed to God….” Plz make them love it…plz..plz..plz” …….when she opened her eyes she saw niti ,who was about to speak something….suddenly nandini squeezed her hand….& looked towards radhika all smiling …& said…”it’s amazing…beta…I loved it”….radhika jumped & squealed with happiness & hugged nandini….everyone smiled looking at her….

Then everyone started leaving one by one making one excuse or another…..at last it was only nandini & Arjun sitting there eating “gazar ka halwa”…. Aftr smtime nandini finally gave up & said I’m done….only Arjun kept eating looking towards his phone……suddenly radhika spoke….mom now I’ll taste it….nandini shouted on the top of her voice” no”…..radhika flinched a little….than nandini calmed herself down & said…..I want it all for myself…I’ll tell ramukaka to make something for u…..aftr this she left to her room….in d mean time Arjun also finished his bf & headed to his car …he suddenly stopped when he realised he dropped his phone somewhere…here in d hall radhika was cleaning d table…when she found arjun’s phone over there……she thought of giving it to ramukaka to give d same to arjun…..but later decided to do it herself as she heard car’s horn n no. of time…..when radhika walked towards the front door ,she collided with someone as hard as wall…she closed her eyes fearing to hit d ground…when suddenly she felt an arm holding her waist tightly….she felt as if she was hanging in air….to confim d same she opened her eyes…& found a pair of brown eyes looking at her lovingly……she drowned herself in those pair of brown eyes..creating an eye lock between d two….this continued for 2 minutes…until d phone in radhika’s hand started buzzing….radhika immediately stood straight ..& composed herself ….after which she ran away…giving him a disgusting look……on her way back to hall she kept thinking about halwa & felt so proud of herself….. She thought of tasting her gazar ka halwa…..when she ate a spoon full of it…..she spilled it out…making 100 faces & poking her tounge out every now & then….
She thought how could they eat this crap…..they didn’t even said a word to me….then she went to nandini’s room Sat on her knees in front of her …held her ears & said with tears in her eyes “sorry mom”…….nandini held her up & said ” beta it happens….u don’t need to cry…I’ll make u learn how to cook….don’t worry”…she patted her cheeks & said…” But promise me till then u won’t try to make anything”…aftr this both mother daughter duo shared a hearty laugh…. radhika went to her room & kept thinking why did arjun ate such a lousy halwa…….

Later on his way to office arjun was smiling thinking about radhika……..her smile,the way she was praying,her chirpiness…..everything…….he wondered what is it in her that doesn’t allow him to hate her…………the more he tried to hate her ,the more he ends up falling for her again & again…as soon as he reached his cabin….he was greeted by amaal …his P.A ….then amaal forwarded a box towards arjun all smiling…….he asked ,what is it for????? amaal replied all smiling… sir today my brother got blessed with a beautiful daughter……arjun congratulated him…& gave him a day off……looking towards d box arjun said with fake anger…” only sweets….”…..when he opened d box…….he started laughing madly……& murmured……” gazar ka halwa……. not again”……amaal was taken a back….he wondered what happened to arjun…but he ignored it……

on the other side radhika was sitting on her bed watching her family album……when she came across a photo of her with someone who was pulling her hairs……she brushed her fingers over the picture and muttered ‘miss u sam……i miss u so much ”……..she wiped her tears flowing down her eyes , smiled a little & said…”when u ll know ur radio is married that too without your consent….ull kill me….” then she came across a picture of a guy ,pulling her ears…..she chuckled a little looking at d picture..& muttered……”my rasgulla…..plz come back soon……..ur chashni is missing u badly”………

she quickly averted her gaze from the picture when she heard nandini …’may i come in beta’…………she smiled a little ,went to d door, held nandini by her hand …..& made her sit on d couch & said” mom …….u don’t need to ask for my permission….u can come in whenever u want to”…nandini saw tears in her eyes…..she kept her hand on radhika”s forehead & asked in a caring tone” radhika….r u all right??”….radhika nodded…………..then nandini asked her ”is everything all right between u and arjun ? if anything is bothering u …u can tell me…..i’m a ur mother more than ur MIL ”…..radhika kept quiet for few minutes…..then muttered…”mom ,everything is alright…….dont worry….& if there would be anything…ill surely let u know…..now plzz smile….”……nandini blessed radhika & left saying her to call arjun & tell him to be here at sharp 7:30….without fail…..or ill not leave him……listning this radhika chuckled a little……

Radhika: “now what to do…..i don’t want to call him”…….she keep on pacing in her room all worried…… she picked up her phone to dial his no……but thn she realised she don’t have his no…..when she unlocked her mobile a message popped up…” this is my no. ,in case u need anything..give me a call………arjun…”……she quickly dialled his no. thinking he will definitely scold her for yester night & for todays amazing gazar ka halwa……..as she had seen her father doing same with her mother….for little little things….she soon brushed her thoughts off ,waiting for him to pick up d phone….as soon as he did…………she blurted out in a single breath” this is radhika here…mom told me to call u…she asked u to be home at sharp 7:30…”…before he could speak a single word she hung up the phone on him…………after seeing the line dead , he muttered …”what d f**ck……..how could she????”

PRECAP- Arjun locked radhika in a passionate embrace

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    52 Comments

    1. amita on August 29, 2016 5:23 pm

      superb meen lovely chappy…..will be waiting for next one……

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:18 am

        thank u amita…….glad u liked it

    2. jewel on August 29, 2016 5:27 pm

      thank you for fast update meen…. this story is really interesting… waiting for the next….

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:19 am

        will update soon jewel….thanks a lot dear…

    3. starz on August 29, 2016 5:32 pm

      super dear …the precap looks interesting…eagerly waiting..loads of love

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:20 am

        thanks starz……loads of love…

    4. subha on August 29, 2016 5:53 pm

      amazing……….really interesting…………

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:21 am

        thank u dear….keep motivating subha…

    5. Alice on August 29, 2016 6:30 pm

      Loved it.Amazing update.Waiting for the next one.

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:21 am

        will update soon alice…….thanks a lot….

    6. Sammy on August 29, 2016 6:52 pm

      cute , sweet , beautiful chappy

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:22 am

        thanks a lot sammy…..ur comment means a lot dear…..

    7. jnana on August 29, 2016 7:00 pm

      Wow…. Just wow….. The last part was hell superb…. Google baba didn’t help her poor radhika….. I don’t know still what arjun has to see in his life….. Epi was good…. Tc…

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:23 am

        hahaha………thank u jnana…..i’m glad u liked it…keep commenting…

    8. S.v on August 29, 2016 7:01 pm

      this was cute and awesome lovely one meen next one is really curious update soon

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:24 am

        thank u so much s.v……….thanks a lot…….plz keep motivating

    9. nitu on August 29, 2016 7:21 pm

      hey wow such an amazing update eagerly w8ing for nxt dear
      srsly i luved ur ff alot

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:25 am

        thank u so much nitu……….will update soon

    10. aalia on August 29, 2016 7:21 pm

      Too interesting yar plz update the next one soon plzzzzzzz. …..God bless u

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:26 am

        thanks a tonn aalia……will update soon….take care…

    11. Kavina on August 29, 2016 7:27 pm

      Loved it

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:27 am

        i’m glad u loved it kavina…..thanks a lot

    12. Gauri on August 29, 2016 8:44 pm

      Thanks was beautiful meen 🙂

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:27 am

        thanks gauri…….loads of love….

    13. Jessie on August 29, 2016 8:46 pm

      Meen.. this is superb.. I loveeeee d back 2 back updates..keeps me connected..Google baba..lol tats so sweet of Arjun 2 give a hint.. sweeto Arjun.. Nandhini is all good.. wow..! C’mon Rads… let ur hubby sol something.. very much curious 4 nxt chappy..
      Neil is d Rasgulla ri8..?loads of love dear.. whn is nxt one..

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:28 am

        hey jessie……thanks a lot……..will update soon dear

    14. Brin on August 29, 2016 8:53 pm

      Awesome episode, the precap is interesting, waiting for the next update. 🙂

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:29 am

        thanks a tonn brin…..

    15. neetz on August 29, 2016 11:44 pm

      Lol that was a fun filled.epi..loved it dear…post soooon

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:29 am

        hey neetz….thanks for ur lovely comment…

    16. rossy on August 30, 2016 9:35 am

      Interesting n beautiful

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:30 am

        thanks a lot dear…..keep motivating…..loads of love …

    17. Sweetie on August 30, 2016 1:39 pm

      Haayee!! I’m so in love with this story.. 😀 Love you loads and keep smiling.. 🙂

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 2:00 pm

        thanks a tonn sweetie….keep loving..& supporting

    18. Aasthu on August 30, 2016 3:54 pm

      Hey Meen…..I liked it as usual…….but isn’t Rads hatred towards Arjun baseless???? When’ll she realize that Arjun is her dream boy???? one doubt: isn’t she having those dreams nw???……… so u r of my sister’s age…..do u mind if I call u Meenu chechi ????that’s my sis’s name……..and chechi means di in hindi………in wich sub did u graduate????? I’m a 1st yr UG student………we both are of same category…..hehe…….bye……..love u…..TC…..

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 5:21 pm

        hii cutie pie…..obviously u can call me chechi…..i completed my UG with mechanical…….regarding radhika’s hatred towards arjun…….yes there is a reason behind that…..which will soon be disclosed……loads of love darling …..take care….

      • Aasthu on August 30, 2016 5:44 pm

        do update soooooooooooon…………..bye………..love u…….tc Meenu chechiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

    19. Aadia on August 30, 2016 5:50 pm

      Hi Meen, iam commenting here for the first time..i read every part now only..the concept is really awesome..poor Arjun,why Rads have this much hatred ? He is really a nice guy.Google baba part was nice..eagerly waiting for next part,.As aasthu said ,I also like to call you Meenu as it is more sweet name…Can I?

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 8:55 pm

        Off course aadia….baby there surely is a reason why radhika hates Arjun this much……u’ll get to know it soon……till then loads of love & keep commenting

    20. manha on August 30, 2016 6:08 pm

      it was awesome chappy. Radz antics. Fb was cool. radz in laws great they are. I loved nandu making radz comfortable. Arjun n radz scene superb. Last scene phone call. Too gud. Now lets see what the great arjun mehra will do.

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 9:06 pm

        Haha….thanks for loving this………hope to see ur comment in next tooo….loads of love…….take care…..

      • Aasthu on August 30, 2016 10:04 pm

        Manhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu when’ll u update dear????????

    21. myra on August 30, 2016 10:09 pm

      woahhhh……the eyelock and now passionate embrace…..uff! …..and the halwa scene had me in splits, literally. good job…..you keep me hooked on….am loving it….and your quick updates just make me all the more happy! update soon….take care 🙂

      • Meen on August 30, 2016 11:03 pm

        Hey Myra….m happy to c ur comments……without ur comments my update is incomplete

    22. Roma on August 31, 2016 9:21 pm

      Wowwww meen…it’s really superbbbb n beautiful story n lovely episode. …I loved it to the coreeeee. ..gajar ka halwa…lol…so funnyyyy. ..loved phone call from rads…lol…you’ve veryyyyyyy good sense of humor. ..keep it up honeyyy. .love you loads. .muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug

      • Meen on September 1, 2016 9:57 pm

        Thanks a lot Roma…..I’m glad u loved it…..plz keep commenting….

    23. _Ritu on September 2, 2016 1:14 pm

      Interesting dear..curious for nxt..

      • Meen on September 2, 2016 9:33 pm

        thanks tonn ritu……i hv already posted it….loads of love

    24. R on September 6, 2016 12:09 am

      Don’t u think u r making a beautiful girl look mean…ahh just kidding …great the way u describe the eyelock scene…awesome..looking forward more scenes in such minute details…

      • Meen on September 6, 2016 1:36 am

        Hmmmm…..well to be honest……I am really happy to c ur comment……feeling like I’m on cloud nine…aaaaah just kidding……loved ur comment

    25. Ak on September 7, 2016 10:25 am

      I like the Google baba part
      Nice ……take care..

    26. Meen on September 7, 2016 12:39 pm

      Thnk u…..thnk u…….y sb aapki hi den h….hehe…loads of love….& thanks for supporting

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