Fan Fiction

Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 47)

Im back..as i said wth regular updates…suggestions r welcum..ignore typos….criticsm accepted…luv u all..bye….pls batana zaroor,how is the update….so that i will feel happy to see the effort i take being reciprocated…this story is gonna end in max 7-8 parts nd after that for another story i have two ideas one is a historical one nd the other is supernatural lyk vampire nd werewolf stuff…so pls do comment wat kind of story u want to read,so that i can go with majority or even any other kind or type of story u want to read also do let me know ,so that i can write after this….
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On the cliff:
Evry1 is stunned wth sudden sound of gun…manik lukd at nandini..she is lukng at manik…raghav is smiling evilly nd cabir is totally blanked out…
just then raghav fell on his knees leaving nandu nd manik ran 2wrds her nd hugged her as tight as he can…ayush came frwrd nd it is revealed that he shooted raghav on knee nd he fell down..ayushgrab raghav by his collar nd strtd beating him nd evry1 else also arrived there..manik is lukng at nandini who is in tears…he saw the wound on her hand nd cupped her face..

manik:u r fyn ryt?”he askd worriedly on wch she nodded her head in yes nd he again hugged her…but then he saw raghav who is getting beaten up by ayush,cabir,abhi nd dhruv but still that jerk is laughing…manik hand over nandu to mukti nd came 2wrds raghav….his eyes spitting fire,he can burn tghe whole world even if he witness a small scratch on nandu nd here raghav hurt her so badly..then how can he bear it…
manik:u shouldnt have involved nandu in this…”he said in anger nd punched on his face wth immense force..then he fell down on the ground..
By the time manik came 2wrds raghav…ayush,cabir,dhruv nd abhi stood in side nd let manik take the charge..

raghav:ha….beat me how much ever u want…”he said wth a smirk..his whole face is smeared wth blood but still he is retorting back..manik is hell angry..he lukd at nandu who is wth mukti nd lukng at him only..but then his eyes fell on her wound on the arm nd he is furious now..he witnessed the knife near raghav ‘s car…he came nd picked it up…evry1 lukd at manik wth horrifyng face as now wat he will do….

On the other hand:

the person who is partner of raghav is pacingin living area”y is this raghav not picking up my call..hope he ist in any prblm”..the person is hell worried…Then that person called sum1 nd finalised sumthng really imprtnt nd sat on the sofa…
“u became a big thr on the faceeat to me…i need to sort out u frst…”the person said wth a smirk

Back on cliff:
manik strt approachng 2wrds raghav nd bent down infront of him…while raghav being a real moron smiled as if manik is gonna feed him wth luv nd care…
raghav:do watever u want manik but i will destroy u both”he said while wiping off blood around his mouth frm his palm…
now its time for manik to smile evilly..
manik:u seriously think i will leave u…u cant harm us ….u have already ruined a lot..now i wont let u harm anyone..”he retorted back grabbing his collar…he then saw nandu again nd then turned 2wrds raghv
manik:u shudnt have hurt her…”with this he cut near raghav’s wrist with the knife and raghav hissed in pain..

manik:it pained ryt….even nandu also faced this pain”he then punched hard on his face…stood up nd strtd kicking in his stomach..he is totally out of control..so cabir,ayush,abhi nd dhruv ran 2wrds him..
cabir:manik leave him….he ll die ….leave him..”he grabbed manik’s hand nd tried to stop him but he is really aggressive..
ayush:raghav….b4 i arrest u…..tell me y have u killed bade papa(manik’s papa?)”he asked the most imprtnt ques on wch rghav strtd laughing madly still on floor…..
raghav:bcoz i hate raj malhotra…i hate him to the core..he destroyed my lyf…he destroyed evrythng around me”he shouted in utmost anger nd hatred while evry1 lukd at him curiously..

ayush:but y do u want to harm nandini bhabhi..she is ur real neice ryt..?”he said while handling manik as he is about to hit raghav..
For the frst tym…raghav changed his xpression …he lukd at nandu who is lukng at him wth enormous xpressions in her eyes…his eyes froze on her…
raghav:even b4 her mom nd dad took her,i took her into my arms immediately after she is born ..never in my life i thought i will hate that bundle of joy in my arms that day..never have i ever thought…she lukd like an angel…lovely angel…”a lone tear escaped his eye nd evry1 are shocked but 1 person is totally blanked out nd thats nandini..
nandu:then y u wanted to kill me?”she asked keeping all emotions a side..
raghav lukd at her nd said her wth totally anger again”bcoz u are wth HIM…”he said pointing to manik who is glaring at him….raghav continued”bcoz u r wth my enemy’ son…i killed raj now only manik is left nd i wont even leave him”he said while trying to get up but ayush kicked him on the stomach….
nandu who is standing in a side felt dizzy nd mukti got scared nd shouted..”manik….nandu” nd evry1 turned to nandu’s side..manik ran 2wrds her nd cupped her face b4 she fell..
manik:nandu..wat happned?u r fyn ryt?”he asked worriedly..she opened her eyes wth great difficulty nd gave a weak smile to him..she is abt to say sumthing but saw raghav pointing gun 2wrds manik nd nobody else witnessed it as evry1 had their backs to the side of raghav nd she is horrified…b4 raghav could shoot she pushed manik a side nd the bullet hit her right a few cm s away frm her heart nd evry1 is stunned,shocked..manik is on the floor..he is dumbfounded witnessing wat just happened…
she lukd downwards..plaaced hand on her stomach…her eyes became teary nd her vision blurred..
manik:nandu………………”he shouted her name helplessly in shock nd pain nd all others r horrified..b4 she fell down..he ran upto her nd tuk her in his arms nd spoke”nandu…wat have u done….?”he is totally in tears…
nandu:ma…ni…k…voh….”she is badly in tears..b4 she could utter anything..she closed her eyes nd he is hell scared

manik:open ur eyes…nandu…pls…dont do this to me…pls open ur eyes..”he said patting her cheeks..evry1 r lukng at them wth tears nd raghav strtd laughing”manik u lost…”he said…then manik lukd at him wth anger filled eyes,ayush is beside him nd b4 anyone can register manik shot raghav nd he TOOK HIS LAST BREATH…
Ayush:manik bhai….”he shouted turning around in disbelief..
manik:i wont let anything happen to my nandu”he said absent mindedly nd ran wth eher in his arms intot he car nd put her head in his lap…cabir sat in driving seat nd drove as fast as he can nd all followed him leaving ayush alone there..he called police nd thought”bhai wat u did wasnt ryt but i wont let u behnd bars…”nd he also drove to the hospi..

city hospi:
manik is running maniacally taking nandu in his arms…he is stopping the blood flow wth her dupatta..doctors came nd he unwantedly left her hand..manik sat there totally lost,then cabir came nd manik couldnt take it anymore nd strtd wailing lyk a small baby….nd all others thought y this always happens to manan only(bcoz i write it lyk that..)nd we cant see manik lyk that again..

then doc came nd said Mr.Malhotra Am sorry…”hs words made manik freee in place…doc continued”v can save actually only one of them…..”this made manik confuse…doc again said”v can either save the mother or the baby..i.e if she wants the baby now..she will have complications with her life later during the delivery or u can abort the baby nd we may try to save her…the bullet is close to heart nd the fact thatshe is pregnant is making her difficult to take her breath..”manik fell down on the floor unsure of wat to say not knowing that nandu is pregnant…cabir said”nandini is pregnant..”lukng down unsure of wat to say…
manik said the doc”try …to…..save…her…..nd

…the…baby…..”stammering,shivering badly tears brimming out…
all asked him where he is going,he said he needs sum alone time..he saw a temple,sat there nd shouted”y ?y have u done this?…”lukng at god..”dont v deserve to b happy nd yelled lukng at lord krishna’s idol…oh god…pls…let her b safe nd i know im selfish to ask this but let the baby also b safe otherwise wo tut jayegi…tut jayegi…”now i understand y was she so happy strday nd wat she wanted to tell me..”he strtd recalling their night convo…
FLASHBACK:
after talking wth raghav..nandu is very worried so she called manik on a video call..
nandu:manik evvrythg will b fyn ryt..?”she said lukng at him
manik:princess..evrythg will b fyn..trust me..i wont let him harm us…mani prmise..”he said just like she used to say nandu prmise….
nandu:i luv u so much..”she said happily lukng into his eyes..he saw sum shine in her eyes
m:u r glowing…im this far frm u then wat’s the reason..”he said lukng at her ,she smiled more broadly nd caressed her stomach but manik is busy in watching her face nd he didnt notice it..

n:u r ryt here wth me manik..so close to me…i can feel u..”she xclaimed..
m:wo to am always there wth u…”he said lovingly nd she smiled broadly as only she knows that their symbol of love is inside her..
n:manu…once after evrythng is sirted out…i have to tell u onething”she said cheerfully nd he is totally confused wth her sudden happiness
m:u seem to b very happy..tell me na…i cnat wait…”he said in an impatient tone…
n:oho…have patience my dear..i will tell wheni will meet u..”she said totally in stubborn attitude nd he made I-AM-ANGRY face on wch she chuckled
m:tell me na..”he said lyk a baby nd she admired his babyish face nd then chchahi called her nd she cut the call
manik self:
had hai yaar…this girl doesnt have chintha about pati at all(worry abt husband)…nd saw her pic on his laptop nd said”always smile lyk this nandu” nd slept off…
flashback end
manik is still sitting on the temple floor nd yelled at god”wat is the mistake of that small life….y r u planing of snatching it from us?wat may i say to nandu…”nd again thought no manik..u cant fall weak..u shud support nandu…so he left temple wth swollen red eyes

city hospi:manik reached nd evry1 stared at him..but he chose to b quiet…
he asked cabir:is nandu fyn…”,then cabir was abt to say sumthing but manik signalled stop…nd proceeded towards the doc,then doc came nd said”congo….Mr.malhotra ..actually we kind of saved both..ur wife nd baby..”manik was shocked wth hapiness….then doc continued”v thought of aborthng the keeping mrs.malhotra health in mind but the feotus reached a state where v cant abort it(imagine..i dont know much abt it…)..so if v waanna save mrs.malhotra v shud even save the baby…but keep in mind dont let her stress herself as she still have the complications for her delivery…but v have to let this be lyk this for mrs.malhotra’s health..nd v removed the bullet….she is out of danger nd baby is fyn too…but remember as i said the complications exist…so take care of her……
manik came out of shock nd ran towarda cabir nd all his frnds nd shouted to all of them “cabir…abhi..dhruv….

nandu is fyn…nd my baby is fyn toooo,…..”he jumped in xcitement….all of the other frnda were also shocked nd were happy nd jumping…cabir spoke”hey….im going to be mamu…nd my sis is fyn…”nd abhi followed him…then cabir asked the obvious ques”but waat abt the complications?”,then manik repeated wat all the doc said nd all of them decided to take utmost care of nandu….
He went to i.C.U,nandu slowly opened her eyes nd asked him “how is my baby?”,he said evrythng wat doc said nd she is discharged after sumdays….manik said evrythng to nyo nd chachi nd chachi regeretted slapping him but he denied saying she has that ryt…
2 months passed away…
In this two months ayush discovered that raghav isnt main plotschemer nd tried to find the person who is behind all this……otherside fab-5,navbhi r taking care of nandu…nd nandu is fed up of all these nd showing lots of tantrums…in the meantime,ayush nd all said maniik about his hallucinations,their doubts,dementia drugs..harshad trying to prtct manik vch shocked manik to the core..then manik said”but i never tuk drugs…”.cabir said”v know that…now v need to fing who is behind all these…”..manik is wth this tension..seeing hsi tensed face nandu asked wat happened but he diverted it tactifully….

otherside the person thought “its tym to make a big wound to u manik malhotra….”wth utmost hatred…Otherside the person reached nandini’s room,grabbed the pillow nd lukd at nandu fr sumtym….the person is about to place pillow on nandu’s face,but sum1 held the hand in middle nd the person is shocked to hell…
nd it was ayush who stopped the person..but wat he found in front of him left him shocked nd baffled….
ayush:u wanted to kill manik nd nandu bhabhi..”he said in a disbelief…following ayu evry1 came nd were shocked..manik saw the person’s face..he moved backward nd hit the table,a vase fell down nd for that sound nandu also woke up…
manik:AAP…”he said totally out of his senses….
So,who do u think the person is……
socho……..ill reveal in next update that’s tmrw…
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pls comment atleast for my effort…this is by far the biggest update i have ever given i guess…luv u all.bye…comment who u think the person is…..the nearest guess will get the update dedicated to them in the next epi…nd a surprise is waiting for them…nd ya all the ppl who already read in watpadd didnt want the baby to die ,so i change dthe plot a bit nd let the baby live….

Praha

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