Hey guys…. TASH BACK HERE…..after a long long time I m back with an OS……..it’s on manan again…
See I know I promised u all for a ff BT I m going really busy no a day BT as this story stricken by my head…I thought y not to share it with u…
So let’s start with our OS…ASHQ NA HO….HERE ASHQ means teardrops…so ASHQ na Ho means no regrets..no crying…so sadness….They live together they die together…
Let’s start…
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Two legs are showed walking straight on the sandy n muddy area…his had has a military gun…he has worn a military army uniform…his face is so charming that anyone would fall for him immediately…he looked damn handsome as well as a true military man…
Another man comes-” Manik sir….there is a crossover… We have the mid night shift…n we will go to the area after 2:00 am…till then u can relax sir…”
( so guys he is non other Than Manik…..our Manik..n he is a military man…he is an army person who stands on the border of INDIA every day to save our country…)
Manik nodded in ok…
Man-” ahh..sir..tomorrow u ll be going so happy journey for that..I m sure u wife will be very happy seeing u..”
Manik smiled listening to this n said-” yes mr. Patel…she ll be..as I m going to surprise her….this is very nice which happened with us…I was going to go home after 20 days BT bcoz the area is very calm n polite here..so general manager gave me holiday for more 10 days n I ll be going tomorrow… I m really happy”
Mr Patel smiled n went…
Manik stood whole night on the border sincerely observing n looking forward after every place like a true army man….
The next day…..
Manik came our of the train in his military uniform only…
It was manali…
The place was very cold BT it didn’t disturb Manik from observing around…
Manik’s P.O.V
ahh….this feels sooo fresh…though it’s cold here BT nothing can stop me from loving this place…..the air here has a different vibe..a positive n enthusiastic vibe..the air which always reminds me about her…her fragrance…how beautiful she is….
How innocent and cute she is….uff Manik….whenever her face comes in front of me..I m like hhhhhh…..uff…I m dyeing to meet her…haven’t seen her since 6months… My girl I m coming…
END OF P.O.V
Manik runs towards the taxi stand n takes a taxi….
He asked the driver to drive fast as he desperately wanted to reach his home…
He finally reached there….it was a small but beautiful cottage type house….
Snow had fallen on the roof n in the garden area of the house…
The same old red vintage car was parked in the parking area of the house…
Manik thinks..- she never learned driving….uff…dadu’s car still looks so new…
Manik walked towards the door….
Manik thought to ring the door bell BT then he thought not to ring it n secretly enter the house n surprise….
Manik walked in his room n saw the girl( his wife) folding clothes…
He was about to hug her from behind when she suddenly turned around…
Girl ( very excitedly) -” MANIKKKKK…..!!!”
Manik was shocked as to how did she know that I was there n she turned around..
Manik-” Nandu….this is not fair…How did u know that I m here”
She instantly hugged Manik…
She was in tears by now…
Manik-” hey hey hey…plzz don’t cry…I m here na…then…stop crying…”
Nandu-” hmmmm”
Manik-” aacha u didn’t answer my question till now…how did u know that I m here”
Nandu (cutely) -” maniiikk…I m ur wife not girlfriend..I know each and every thing about u…ur touch ur feel…ur air…I feel everything…subha se hi I was feeling something….an un explained feeling…like I was really happy since morning..I somewhere had a feeling n vibe of yours coming near me..come to me…n see…u came..”
Manik was like ‘ aweee’ on her cuteness….
Manik-” so my wify knows me in and out Haan….”
Nandu-” aacha…how did u get home early..?? U were about to come after 20 days na??”
Manik-” vo the area was very calm..so no wars or disturbing things..so my head officer allowed me to come home early”
Nandu-” NOTHINGG…VO NA…I…I…ITS ALL MY CREDIT…I WISHED TO AAIYAPA THAT U COME BACK EARLY SO HE GRANTED MY WISH OK!!!”
She was so cute this tym that Manik kissed her on her cheeks….
Nandu-” aacha chalo…aab ye uniform utaro n go freshen up…waire bhe even though u love navy n I too love it BT I done like this uniform…coz it always reminds me that u ll go after some days…”
Manik-” awe…ok my jaan…I ll not show this to u anymore….till one month…I n u..together in eos arms…k”
Nandu-” yup” happily…
Manik freshened up n came out wearing a black jeans and a white shirt with black blazer…he gelled his hair perfectly n he was looking as usual dangerously handsome n exotic…he looked so nice that any girl would skip a heart beat looking at him…
Nandu wore a black plain bt beautiful on her saree…the saree hugged her body very perfectly..n she was looking eternally beautiful in that black saree…
She applied lil makeup n she was looking breathtaking….
Both went for a dinner and enjoyed a lot..they danced…had fun…
Days passed…..
Only 15 days were left for Manik to go back…
Nandu was living her life to the fullest forgetting the days left as she didn’t want to be sad….
Manik too didn’t care about the world now as his world was in her n he was living it happily….
Manik n nandini went out for a party….
Nandu wore a dark maroon saree and applied the darkest Shade of maroon on he lips…and not much makeup…she looked soooooo hot that Manik’s jaw dropped in amazement…..
Manik too came wearing a red shirt and a black blazer with black pants…he looked equally hot and mesmerising….
Both went to the party…they enjoyed a lot…
Both came home tired….
To throw away the tiredness both decided to take a shower…BT the question comes who will go first…
Manik-” ah…Nandu I m going to take shower n then u can go…”
Nandu-” no Manik.first I ll go then u go…”
Manik-” aree par…let me go I m more tired…”
Nandu-” no na Manik plzz…I m more tired”
Manik-” BT u can go to the other bathroom also na…in the guest room”
BT Nandu was rigid
Nandu-” oh…so u can also take bath there na…goo”
Manik is no less rigid..now he had to win the battle…
Manik-” no…see…I have come after so long to home..so let me take some liberties na…u go.”
Nandu-” ooooho…. Now emotional torture Haan… I won’t take it.. Come out from my washroom..”
Manik-” it’s my washroom”
Nandu-” no..mine..”
Manik-” no mine…”
Nandu-” no mine….”
Manik thinks-” ah….if I start arguing with her na..then I ll die coz she is very good at it BT i wanna take shower here only…hmmmm”
Then suddenly Manik gives an evil smirk….
Manik takes the towel and his clothes and was about to go in there washroom..
Nandu started pulling the door as if Manik closes it then she will not be able to enter…
Manik-” Nandu…now I got ur intentions…”
Nandu lil confused-” what intention??”
Manik pulled her in the washroom with him n locked the door of the washroom..
Manik-” this is what wanted na…ipu wanted to take bath with me na…ok..no problem”
Nandu was red like a tomato…
Manik turned on the shower…
Manan were in the shower…getting wet….
Manik kissed Nandu’s neck…Nandu moaned slowly….
Manik kissed her all over her neck and nape…he kissed her forehead,then eyes,then nose,,,and then came near the lips…Nandu due to proximity closed her eyes tightly…
Manik kissed her lightly…first it was a slow kiss…BT slowly it turned into a passionate one…Manik’s hands were moving shamelessly over the wet saree of Nandu…her hands flowed into Manik’s hair and one on his chest….Manik was shirt less and that made the scene even more hot….Manik slowly bit her lower lip asking her the permission to enter her mouth..she gave him the authority and then his tongue danced with her tongue in sync….Nandu was now going breathless so Manik left her unwillingly as he didn’t want to….
Manik now kissed her neck and then harshly gave a love bite to her jst to show her that she ll always be his…always…
She moaned in pain BT pleasure….
Both looked at eo and then separated…they came out of the washroom…
Both sleeper in eo’s embrace….
Many days passed…it was only 8 days left for Manik to go…n now Nandu was going sad day by day….
Manik n Nandu’s as in room…Nandu’s as feeding him while Manik was busy in his phone…
A phone came….
Manik picked it up….his face suddenly changed the expression and became sad…
Manik walked out of the room…Nandu was wondering what is wrong…
Manik on phone-“sir…plzz try and understand…how can u call me before..by holiday isn’t over…”
The officer said something on the Phn..
Manik-” ok sir….work comes first….I know…u all need me and I ll be there…don’t worry..I won’t let any one hurt INDIA till I m here..ll try my best to save our country sir… JAY HIND SIR…”
Manik disconnected the call….
Manik turned around n saw Nandu standing there…she had tears in her eyes…
Manik-” Nandu….”
Nandu-” it’s ok Manik…I know our country needs u….I know….don’t worry..mein reh lungi….u remember what I said na….work comes first….then me…country comes first..then me…ok”
Nandu ran and hugged him…
Manik too hugged her…
Both had an intense hug..the both had pain and emotion in their eyes…
Nandu-” y do u have to go early?? Hmm…VO…toh– t–the– pla–c–e- WA–was calm -na–” her words almost broke in the end….
Manik-” lagta hai…that calm place was a sign of the upcoming storm which we didn’t notice….they have invaded the border…the kargil war is up…n I have to go..”
Manik also broke at the end..he didn’t want to go BT had no choice as his country is his life..fron childhood he always wanted to be an army person…and he fulfilled his wish…Nandu’s as his childhood love and he married her….
He wanted to save his country…..
( A/N- guys I hope u know about the kargil war….this is dedicated to the ppl who fought in that war….this is what happened with many families who’s ppl were in that war….if u guys don’t know..then google it and see…n even if u don’t then it’s ok..coz the story is on manan n not the war… So u ll understand the story)
Manik carried her in his arms and took her to his room…
Manik made her lay on the bed….
Nandu was continuously looking deep into his eyes..or we can say that she was reading him…what he was thinking…reading his mind….she could see sadness in his eyes,sadness of separation, immense love for her….
Manik was about to go when she held his hand…
Nandu-” Manik…”
Manik didn’t turn as he was on the urge of crying and he did not want to show his tears to her…
Nandu-” Manik…..jaan”
Now a long tear escaped from his eyes…
Manik turned to face her….
She did not do anything for sometime…she jst saw him…she was learning what he is thinking in his mind…
Manik looked at Nandu..she too was jst about to cry…
Nandu opened her arms widely and signed him to come and be in her embrace for the night….
Manik quickly went and hugged her…They both fitted in eo’s arms like two puzzle pieces…jst so perfect….
Nandu-” Manik be mine for tonight my jaan….”
Manik smiled at her though his eyes had pain and it was clearly visible in his face…
Both kissed eo passionately…at first it was a passionate kiss BT soon turned into a wild kiss…the kiss which showed pain…pain of separation…that was the kiss which had a feeling that they ll never be able to be like that together again……tears with the love is such a good pair to go with…the same happened with them….
Both were fighting to dominate eo…both were taking in all what both had in them…
Manik was sucking her in him and same with Nandu….
They separated…..
Manik-” jaan….pata Nahi kyun…I don’t know y..BT I m feeling that different feel….pata Nahi y BT I feel that we r being separated….I don’t know y…I never had this feeling before BT now I have..I have went through many wars BT this one is scaring me…y??”
Nandu-” shhhh….(she keeps her finger on his lips) no…aaise mat Kaho…( Nandu too had that feeling of separation BT she didn’t show it to Manik) we will always be together..ok…we can never separate…coz our heart is together forever…our soul is together forever…HAMESHA! Ok…so even if we get separated now…we will still be together….n don’t get scared of anything…u remember what I told u na…A REAL ARMY PERSON IS NOT SCARED OF ANYTING…NOT EVEN DEATH… Ok…so this is to only a stupid war..nothing else…jaan..keep hope and trust…everything will go right..”
Manik looked at her deeply…he was so spellbound end by her words…he saw so much truth and innocence in her eyes….
Manik-” jaan….I don’t know wether I ll return back or not…BT I want to make a “NISHAN” of our love…so can I love u??”
Nandu kissed him softly and that for him meant a yes….
Both celebrated their love…the whole night….
They kissed eo..hugged eo….
They moon and stars were also happy by their togetherness….
The wind blew…. Making the night even more romantic and emotional….
Next morning….
Nandu is ironing Manik’s uniform….
She is wearing a patiyala..and is looking pure Punjabi kudi….
Manik came and hugged her from back…
Nandu turned and faced him..she gave him his uniform…
Manik-” I don’t want to go…”
Nandu-” BT u have to go….country comes first..INDIA COMES FIRST…OK”
Manik nodded in yes….
He came out wearing his cloth…
Nandu came towards him…caressed his name on the uniform…
Smiled….she had tears BT also a smile of proudness…
She made him wear his army cap…
He smiled at her….
Both sat in the taxi and took off for the train station….
Nandu-” Manik..sing for me na…so long I haven’t heard ur song…”
Manik-” ok…! As u say love”
He sings…
( guys first of all plzzzzzzzzzzz don’t skip the lyrics as it is the best…plzz read the lyrics coz it says what actually Manik wants to say to Nandu…plzz read the lyrics…plzz and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz my personal request to plug in the song while reading..if u do as I say..u ll get the most out of it..and u lll literally cry reading this part..so plug in the song…)
O yun na lamha lamha meri yaad mein
Hoke tanha tanha mere baad mein
Naina ashq na ho( ASHQ means teardrops)
Maana kal se honge hum door
Naina ashq na ho
Naina ashq na ho…
He turned towards Nandu and cupped her face and sang….
Main na lauta aane waale saal jo
Meri wardi bole mera haal toh
Naina ashq na ho
Yeh samajhna, main hoon majboor
Naina ashq na ho
Naina ashq na ho..
They reach the station…both walked hand in hand…
They reached the platform….
Manik kneeled in from of her and sang…..
Beete huey lamhon ke taare ginunga main
Aake tujhe khwaabon mein tere milunga main
Jab kabhi halki halki barkha aaye
Jab kabhi dil bhi yunhi bhar sa jaaye
Jab kabhi halki halki barkha aaye
Uss pal jhonka ik banke aaunga main
Us pal zulfe palke daaman chhu jaaunga main
O teri choodi nagmein gaaye jo mere
Teri palkon pe ho saaye jo mere
Naina ashq na ho
Aansu karte humein kamzor
Naina ashk na ho
Naina ashk na ho..
Nandu cried a loud and hugged him…he wiped her tears and sang…..
Tere liye saansein aaye
Teri liye jaaye, jaaye re.. jaaye re…
Tere liye saansein aaye
Teri liye jaaye, jaaye re.. jaaye re…
Rabba…
Rabba bairi se bichode jaane kisne banaye
Haaye re, haaye re, haaye re.. doori tadpaaye
Mere baad chaahe aaye yaad meri
Naina ashq na ho
Naina ashq na ho
Naina ashq na ho…
Ashq na ho ho ho ho..
His train came….he was about to go..when Nandu made him turn and face her….
He looked at Manik from bottom to up as if she is seeing him for the last time….
O Likhi khat mein maine tujhe baat jo
Sona rakh ke takiye tale raat ko
Naina ashq na ho
Ye judaai bhi hai dastoor
Naina ashq na ho
Naina ashq na ho..
Manik quietly turned and went in the train wiping his tears and so did Nandu….
Main na lauta aane waale saal jo
Meri wardi bole mera haal to
Naina ashq na ho
Ye samjhna, main hoon majboor
Naina ashq na ho
Naina ashq na ho…
Days passed…5 months passed….every day Nandu had the fear of loosing Manik and so did Manik…
They couldn’t contact through phone in army BT the only possible way was by letters…
Nandu vomited one day and so she went to checkup….she went out of the hospital and was very happy…she wrote a letter and posted it….
After around 3 months Manik was in his camp..the war was still on BT he was out of the war zone for now….
( ok guys..I know the kargil war was for 2 months BT in my story imagine it for 10 months….)
he got a letter….he was about to open it BT then a commando came…
Man-” manik..u r needed in the area..u need to go…go fast…”
Manik couldn’t read the letter so he put it in his pocket and went on the war zone….
Manik was fighting and firing harshly to save his country….
He was all for his country that time…..
Manik went forward firing the opposite person…when suddenly he went and hid under a rock to change his bullet…he took out his bullet and started firing again…BT soon he saw that the letter which he got is on the sandy surface of earth…he saw that…he wanted the letter…and and and…..
He was shot by the opposite team….
One bullet hit him in his stomach….he cried out in pain…
He ran and hid behind a rock….
He again saw the letter on the ground…
He anyhow went and took the letter and hid behind the rock…
Again one bullet hit him…blood started oozing out…
Manik Was literally dying….he held his stomach and his hand was red with blood….
Manik opens the letter….
He read–” Manik..jaan…..a good news for u….I am pregnant……u got a sweet as son or daughter….yeah..happy now…u got ur NISHAN….soooo….now naming ll be of my choice…ok….so I thought….y not to keep his name….MANAN??? Haan..nyc na…
Uff I know u didn’t get it…ok I ll explain…
See NANDINI AND MANIK….
MANIK Ka ‘MA’ and NANDINI Ka ‘NAN’ so MANAN….
How’s it….I know nyc….if u like it..then jst close ur eyes in assurance..ok…”
Manik blinked his eyes….and smiled….
Letter—-” Manik…jaan..even if u don’t come back na..then also I ll be with u only..n remember to serve for ur country till ur last breath…ok…I LOVE U MANIK….I LOVE U….
And now don’t become emotional…aur child’s name will be manan only..it suits girl and boy both….so. Sach chalo…..bye…..fight till ur last breath…I know u ll…love u
—– your Nandu”
MANIK-” I LOVE U TOO NANDU…VERY MUCH..”
Manik held the letter…he kept it close to his heart and jst closed his eyes lying behind the rock..he was in immense pain….tears were continuously falling from his eyes….
On the other hand….
Nandu had the labour pain….
She went to the hospital….
She got the delivery done…
Doctor-” mam…I m sorry..we tried to save him..BT we couldn’t…we couldn’t the embrical cord was around his neck which made him loose breath….and he went..”
Nandu rushed in the room…
She held her son and kissed his forehead…she was in tears….
Here Manik closed his eye…BT then he suddenly opened his eye…he remembered…
Nandu’s words…FIGHT TILL UR LAST BREATH MANIK….
He took his gum…he still had the letter in his hand….he started firing shouting Nandu’s name and started walking towards the opponent…he killed many ppl BT also he got many bullet shorts on him….
He fell on his knees…he fell on the ground….he took Nandu’s name…
Manik-” N..NA..NAN..DU…”
He took his last breath and went away from the earth forever to heaven…
Here Nandu…cried…she hit his child on the place of the heart and suddenly he started breathing…he started breathing….
Nandu was stunned…she called the doctor…doctor checked her son…
doc-” madam…it’s a miracle…I don’t know how..BT he survived…congratulations”
Nandu smiled and said one word-” Manik…”
Nandu got the news that Manik died…she was called for the funeral…
She cried a lot BT then she wiped her tears and smiled…
Nandu went and saw Manik’s body…he still had the letter in his hand….
Nandu-” ah….Manik…I love u so much…I guess….he remembered my words…fight till ur last breath…hmm….and he gave his life to our son..our MANAN…..”
She wiped her tear and went away….
Nandu stood in front of a bridge….
Nandu-” Manik…I LOVE U SOOOO SOOO MUCH…… And I m sure ke MANAN will be exactly like Manik…”
Nandu jumped off the bridge smiling whole heartedly….
It’s shown heaven….
MANAN are together in heaven…smiling laughing….living happily in heaven….
On Earth…
A boy in shown walking through the sandy area in that same army cloth…
He goes to a lady..
Boy-” dadi….what was the need to come…its not a safe area..go home…”
Dadi-” MANAN beta…I jst came to inform u that it’s ur dad and mom’s funeral day so puja is kept at home…do come on time…ok”
MANAN wiped his tear-” yeah..dadi I ll come…and I love my mom and dad… And I want to be like my dad…I WANT TO FIGHT TILL MYNLAST BREATH”
Dadi smiled and both hugged….
THE END….
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So guys…howzzzz it…ok.ok..ok…don’t kill me that I killed MANAN..BT trust me there love was so strong that they went to god also together…their death also came together..and this is the power of love…..n plzzzzz jst think about the story and then comment..plzz I don’t want Gallies….as I didn’t seperate them..they were together in heaven also…so plzzzzz be happy and not sad….
Nnnnnn plzzzzzzzzzzz❤️??????????????????? comment coz I have done a lot of hardwork..it took me whole 1 day to write this story..plzzz comment….
Till then…
#stayhappy
#lovekyy
#lovemanan
#keepsmiling
#manantogetherforever
#hamesha