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Making you mine (Kaanchi ) OS

Neha7873By Neha7873September 14, 201715 Comments7 Mins Read
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It was an unusual Sunday.Unusual because,no-one was in the house except for Sanchi . Kabir was gone to the hospital. Kusum was out to her friend’s house and Ishpragveer were out for shopping.

As for Sanchi,she was alone in the vast mansion,which happened to be her in-laws house.She was getting bored to the point that she started cleaning the already neat bedroom,

“Everyone had to go today.It is almost evening now,but no-one is bothering to come.”she muttered while dusting.
 
“Someone is in a complaining mood today.”Kabir
 said,holding her by her waist from behind.She shuddered at first,but soon relaxed.

“Don’t talk to me.”Sanchi spoke angrily, trying to get free from his grip.

“I’m sorry.It was urgent so I had to go.Though I’ll make up for it,now.” his reasoned.His voice,husky.

“Don’t even try.Everyone will come anytime.”She again tried to free herself.

“For your kind information,everyone went to our farmhouse and before you ask why,let me tell you,I tricked them.We’ll join them tomorrow morning.And yes,I’ve already thought of the explanation that we’ll give them.”said Kabir,inhaling her fragrance.

“But why?”Sanchi asked.

“Simple!I wanted to spend some alone time with you.Now if your question is over,can I continue?”he asked,turning her towards him and tried to kiss her.But she pulled away from him.

“No!”She said,taking steps backward.

“Yes!”he took steps towards her.
 
Kabir caught the  pallu of her saree,when she was about to run.
.
Labon ko labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao
 
He slowly went near her,wrapping the pallu over her.
 
Labon ko labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao.

 He slowly went near her,wrapping the pallu over her.
 
Labon ko labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao.
 
 He engulfed her into his arms
 
Todh do khud ko tum
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein.

 He turned her to face him.Placing a kiss on the corner of her lips,he moved to her neck,slid his index finger on the side of her neck and took in her scent.Her scent never fails to evoke passion in him.No matter how many times he took them,he still couldn’t get enough of her sweet scent.
 
Tere ehsaasson mein bheege lamhato mein
Mujhko dooba tishnagi si hai,

 Sanchi,again tried to run but collided with the dressing table and dropped  some items from it.Kabir left a chuckle at her attempt.She was indeed,a chalti-phirti disaster.But with her cute antics,his mechanical life,came to life.
 
Teri adao se dilkash khatao se
In lamho mein zindagi si hai

 He went near her and caged her in his arms.Kabir took her right hand and placed it on his chest,on top of his heart. and placed her left hand on his right shoulder while he hold her by her waist with his both hands.
She lowered her gaze,shyly.
 
Haya ko zara bhool jao

 With the help of his index finger,he raised her view to meet his by keeping it under her chin.
 
Mere hi tarah pesh aao
Kho bhi do khud ko tum
Raaton mein meri
 
They moved in a sync for a little while,as if dancing.
 
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein

 He leaned forward to kiss her,she closed her eyes in anticipation.
 
Labon ko labon pe sajao,
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao

Now it was his time to tease her.Sanchi opened her eyes when she didn’tfeel his lips on hers.She saw him looking at her with a smirk and it frustrated her even more.She tried to walk away due to anger but Kabir blocked her way.He again leaned forward and rubbed his cheek with hers.A ticklish sensation took over her mind when his stubble came in contact with her skin.
 
Tere zajbaaton mein mehki si saason mein
Yeh jo mehek sandali si hai
 
 He straightened himself to match with her level.Closing his eyes,he touched her forehead with that of his.
 
Chehre se chehra chupao
 
They intertwined their fingers.None spoke a word..Both Kabir and Sanchu could here each other’s throbbing heartbeat and gasps. Silence talked for them.
 
Seneki dhadkan suno
 
They both opened their eyes after a while.She saw her smiling face in his blue eyes.
 
Dekhlo khud ko tum
Annkhon mein meri
Annkhon mein meri
Annkhon mein meri
Aankhon mein
Aankhon mein meri
Aankhon mein meri
Aankhon mein meri
Aankho mein
 
He finally kissed her,cupping her face in his hands.Passion,love,longing,desire all were in the kiss.
 
 
Labon ko labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao.
 
 
With a swift move,Kabir swept her off  her feet and moved towards the bed..Placing her ever so lightly,he inclined over her,tracing her lips with his fingers.He kissed her neck and nibbled her earlobe.She exposed her neck inviting him.He started kissing her shoulders.Kabir licked the corner of her mouth,while Sanchi slipped her hands under  his shirt.An electrifying wave passed through his body.He started undressing her while her hands worked unbuttoning his shirt.
 
Kabir kissed her all the way down to the arc of her back,sending a shiver down her spine.He kissed her now bare legs working up from her ankels,licking the behind of her knees.He continued kissing her up to her chest.He brought his mouth closer to hers and erased the gap between their lips.Sanchi moaned against his lips,as his hands rested on her collarbone when they parted.
 
Saanchi pulled Kabir for another kiss, and ran her fingers through his thick,black hair,while his hand moved between her legs.She bit her lips as he whispered”I love you.”in her ear.Feeling his hot breath on her skin,she explored his back.
After teasing each other some more,Sanchi felt his warm body against her.She cried out of joy,when she felt him inside  her.The feeling was so intense that she thought she would explode.She screamed his name.,when she reached her climax.
 
Later,they lie in the bed with her atop him under the blanket.He pushed a strand out of her face.and planted a soft kiss on her nose.She giggled in response.
 
“Kabir,what will we tell the family members when they will ask why were we late.?”Saanchi asked,hiding herself in the crook of his neck.
” The truth.We’ll tell them that we were busy making out.”Kabir replied,hugging her tight.

“Shameless and Cheap!”She slapped his arm “What will they think.?”

“Language Sanchi And besides what’s so cheap in it?From when making love to your lawfully wedded wife bacome a  cheap thing?”he asked,rolling his eyes.

Sanchi looked at him with wide eyes.She couldn’t believe Kabir kapoor was talking to make their private moments public.

“What?If you are too shy to tell them then I’ll.I’ll tell them that I was busy making you mine and so we got late.”He winked at her with a devilish smile.

That was when she understood he was joking.”Don’t worry,I’ve the idea to cover for it.”He continued.
 
Shaking her head,she took her earlier position. Snuggling into the crook of his neck again,she hugged him tightly.He too,wrapped his arms around her petite waist securely.
 
They both drifted off to sleep in each other arms,with their rhythmic heartbeat singing lullaby.

The end .
____________________________________
Since you all wanted a second part of ‘my longest night ‘ with kanchi consummation, I’m really sorry to say it was a one shot . But I wrote this to fulfill your requests and especially Tia ; thanks for commenting ,that really means a lot . Although I’m not a good writer ,but still I try to write . Thanks to all of you who showered your love. From tomorrow, I won’t be able to post anything till 25th . So I thought to write another for advanced sorry .

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    15 Comments

    1. Tia on September 14, 2017 4:32 pm

      Thank you so much dear…. i was imagine kabir and saanchi with each moment… kaash show mein bhi yesa kuch dekhne ko mile… and u r amazing writer… luv u

      • Neha7873 on September 14, 2017 5:36 pm

        Thanks Tia ! Glad you liked it ..feeling blessed

    2. RuCh23 on September 14, 2017 5:37 pm

      Neha please don’t make me angry by saying that you’re not a good writer ??? you my dear are an amazing writer I don’t know anyone who can discribe every small detail like you and as always this os was mind blowing ???

      • Neha7873 on September 14, 2017 5:41 pm

        Thank you so much Ruwani …also read Romantic punishment if you are 15 +

    3. riyarocks on September 14, 2017 6:09 pm

      Omg Neha dear, I can’t stop myself from blushing all the time I went through this update…….omg…u left me speechless………luv u loads…….

      • Neha7873 on September 14, 2017 8:06 pm

        Thanks a lot Riya… luv u

    4. Divya on September 14, 2017 6:23 pm

      Awesome super fabulous fantastic

      • Neha7873 on September 14, 2017 8:06 pm

        Thanks Divya

    5. Amnaa on September 14, 2017 8:04 pm

      It was just awesome…. Loved it very much

    6. anu on September 14, 2017 9:36 pm

      So so adorable,amazing,superb,awesom……….real me kanchi ka pair dekhbe mile ae na mile……..those story sundar hum logo ko i mine kanchi fan logo ka dil me thora sa dukun mukta hae………..thanks a lot all ff and os writer………?????

    7. Abhilasha on September 14, 2017 9:54 pm

      Wow yr really superbbb Ur way of expressing each and a every detail is incredible….. Really dear u r a brilliant writer and it to learn alot!

    8. niyaaa on September 14, 2017 9:59 pm

      M just speechless dear my silent tell u that u r amaz dear…dont call urself a bad writter ok post nxt one when u free

    9. Ashnita on September 15, 2017 1:21 am

      wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more

    10. AnahitaAnnie on September 15, 2017 8:05 am

      Another beautiful OS. Neha u truly are now turning to be a OS queen. I love the way u write and ur plots are very well throughout. Plus, seeing Kabir in this way was unique and of course very creative. U definitely have an amazing penmanship. Will miss ur writing until 25th. Oh and another thing… Don’t call urself a bad writer ?. U are very very good. So be proud of urslef!!! Anyways, will miss u a lot. Try to come back sooon..?

    11. Moonlight25 on September 15, 2017 11:56 am

      Neha dear, it was a an excellent OS…yoi described everything so well…i loved it…amazing dear…i was blushing while reading it….love you dear

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