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Home»Fan Fiction»i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 4
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i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 4

administratorBy administratorJune 6, 201692 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hello guys on 1st epi I got more than 100 comment… But these r decreasing I guys….many of u are not liking ….but its ohk….I will end it soon….

Swara POV

I wake up but I didn’t find sanskar there …..I knock the door of washroom…. But he was not there…..I took my clothes n go to washroom……I undress my self n took the shower….I was just thinking of Sanskar….. His care….his support shows that he is a very kind person but then I remember our wedding n last night too……which shows he is just a gangster…… Ufff all thought were revolving around me…..huh……its an half an hour I keep on thinking on the same thing….I switch off the shower n wear my clothes…..its a grey n pink suit….I came to check out where is sanskar without wearing any accessories… Or my sindoor……I was walking here n there then I went to some hall …I came here first time….I saw Sanskar doing fighting practice….. He was shirtless….he is hot…I murmur …..I keep on looking him…..he noticed me…n came towards me…..I was shivering…I lowered my face…..he smiles ….he pulled me towards him…..SANSKAR I said……he kissed me n wish me gud morning….. I too said gud morning….. He cuts his finger with a glass ….I get concerned…..he fills my hairline with his blood……I love to see ur hairline filled with sindoor. ..so never forget it…..he say politely…..sorry ..I said…..he was about to kiss my lips but I turned….he kissed my nape….n whispers:- u r my queen…….suddenly ruhani came there n we both were embarrassed…..

Ruhani:- ohoooo romance…

Swara:- hmm ruhani….u didn’t get ready for school…? Come I will make u ready…..n Sanskar…. U too get ready…..

Sanskar:- ohk…

Ruhani:- Chachi….u won’t help Chachi to get ready…..?

Swara:- he domt need my help…he is big na….now come…..

Sanskar POV
Ohio my swara is blushing…. Her this skill kills me……she looks at me before leaving with ruhani…..she always lowers her sight in front of me…..my cute doll….n this pink n grey suit is increasing her beauty…. Huh….this girl will kill me one day…..I get ready for office…..n I saw her running begin ruhani…..

Swara:- ruh …baby…plzz stop m tired….plzz drink ur milk……

She looks like a kid now…..running laughing… Playing like a small child….she was about to slip but I hold her at right time…..her eyes were closed in fear…..I was just smiling seeing her beauty …..she slowly opens her eyes…..n we share a cute eyelock…..
Carefully…I said…..she just nods n say me ty….I caught ruhani…n she make her drink chocolate milkshake ……
I m getting late…..I m leaving…. I said

Swara:- but bf..?

Sanskar:- I will eat in office….

Swara:- no….sit n first do bf n then go….

Sanskar:- are I will…

Swara:- I said do bf….
She orders me…..I can’t believe anyone can order me…..but I loved it…..she is behaving like a typical wife. …well I follow her order n eat my bf quietly……n mom n ruhani was teasing me….huh….
So guys its all about 4 episode…..plz plz support me…

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92 Comments

  1. Sree on June 6, 2016 3:41 pm

    Ur eps r getting more sweet and cute??? post nxt soon

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:26 pm

      Ty sree

  2. Kanak on June 6, 2016 3:42 pm

    Wow…..what is the story behind making a gangster ????

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:27 pm

      Ty kanak….n the secret would be reveal later on

  3. Rosey on June 6, 2016 3:43 pm

    It’s good

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:28 pm

      Ty rosey…..

  4. swans on June 6, 2016 3:43 pm

    awsome..plz dont end soon..its interesting

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:31 pm

      Thnqq dear

  5. Surbhi on June 6, 2016 3:46 pm

    No way…I commented in all episodes but just now as I checked I found that Telly updates has not posted even I of my comments…sorry you felt sad but please…please don’t end it…I really love your ff…even my little sister loves them…but most updates I don’t let her read as she is just five and I don’t want to expose her to even small romances such as kissing on the cheek…hope you understand…

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:30 pm

      Ty dear…..I m sorry …I thought that many people are not liking it….so I thought to end it….but sorry I hurt u…..ty for supporting…

  6. MM( Menaz) on June 6, 2016 3:47 pm

    It’s nice dear plzz continue it…..

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:32 pm

      Thnqqq menaz

  7. Zzzzz (Charming).... on June 6, 2016 3:47 pm

    Nice….

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:32 pm

      Thank dear……

  8. Madhu on June 6, 2016 3:50 pm

    Awww !!! Cho cute of Ruhani.

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:33 pm

      Ty madhu

  9. Lucky on June 6, 2016 3:52 pm

    Amazing

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:33 pm

      Thnqqq lucky

  10. harshitha on June 6, 2016 3:52 pm

    I am a silent reader but I read all ur episodes In one go I just loved ur ff and story line ❤❤❤❤❤

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:34 pm

      Thanks harshitha….

  11. Ankita on June 6, 2016 3:52 pm

    How can you end??? I have been a silent reader. Less comments don’t mean that readers don’t like your ff…many of us are silent readers, we don’t comment as we are multi tasking, I read ffs while eating my food, so you can’t exactly comment and read all thousand FFs on tu…it’s a request please yaar don’t end this ff

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:35 pm

      Ty ankita…..n sorry for hurting u….

  12. Sanju on June 6, 2016 3:53 pm

    Awesome waiting for the next part post it asap???????

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:36 pm

      Ty sanju

  13. kumu on June 6, 2016 3:54 pm

    nyc epi..plz dnt end it so soon..plz continue..:)

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:37 pm

      Thnq kumu…

  14. Meher on June 6, 2016 3:55 pm

    Yeah itz osm…

    Itz cool that swara can order a gangster…

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:38 pm

      Thnqq meher

  15. Samvrita on June 6, 2016 3:55 pm

    The episode was nice.. I loved it…

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:38 pm

      Thanks dear….

  16. kanika on June 6, 2016 4:03 pm

    Nice

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:39 pm

      Thnq kanika

  17. thamiazh magan on June 6, 2016 4:03 pm

    hey… dont think people lost interest… those who started reading will continue it even without reading. im telling this, coz am also this category.

    • thamiazh magan on June 6, 2016 4:04 pm

      sorry.. that should be “without commenting”

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:40 pm

      Tysm…..magan

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:43 pm

      But actually if people didn’t comment then ihow I came to know that u r liking it or not

  18. tasi on June 6, 2016 4:05 pm

    I’m a silent reader n l like ur ff alot so plz dnt end it sooon plzzzzz it is a humbel request

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:45 pm

      Tysm ….but dear…if u will always be a silent reader then how I will came to know ur reaction…… So plzz comment

  19. Divyarani on June 6, 2016 4:09 pm

    Sooo romantic…little long uhh nxt tym…

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 5:59 pm

      Tysm dear…

  20. Ayesha on June 6, 2016 4:10 pm

    I love ur ff..continue…dont end it soon

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 6:00 pm

      Ty ayesha

  21. Jiya on June 6, 2016 4:11 pm

    Awsm bt short
    cute swasan

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:09 pm

      Thnq jiya

  22. shan on June 6, 2016 4:12 pm

    its awesome dr…..but dont end it soon…..pls

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:10 pm

      Thanks …

  23. Radhika on June 6, 2016 4:16 pm

    Sooooo short…. Nt awsm….. I’m loving it…. Now upload atlast 2 more episodes today…plssssssssss

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:10 pm

      Thnq radhika

  24. soujanya on June 6, 2016 4:30 pm

    awesome….but give a big update next time……

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:12 pm

      Thnqq

  25. fouz on June 6, 2016 4:45 pm

    dr don’t wry abt no of cmmnts.think abt ur regular readers nd silent readers

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:12 pm

      Ty dear

  26. Aradhya on June 6, 2016 4:56 pm

    awesome loved it but it is short

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:13 pm

      Thnqq aradhya

  27. aaryan on June 6, 2016 4:57 pm

    loved it please continue. awesome. please make it longer.

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:14 pm

      Thanks dear…

  28. meeeeeeeeee.. on June 6, 2016 4:58 pm

    i really love your ff. please post longer ones. please post next part asap

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:15 pm

      Ty dear…..

  29. Areeba nasir ishaqui on June 6, 2016 5:05 pm

    No plz don’t end it? its getting interesting day by day ???? but plz try 2 make it long sometimes

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:17 pm

      Ty areeba…

  30. mou on June 6, 2016 5:16 pm

    awesome. plz continue

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:18 pm

      Thanks mou

  31. Anu Ann on June 6, 2016 5:20 pm

    Solo sweet and cute episode.. BT make it lengthy

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:18 pm

      Thanks anu ann

  32. Richa on June 6, 2016 5:30 pm

    Awesome dear..But dont end this soon..Pleaseee . Make it more longer dear..

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:19 pm

      Thnq richa

  33. Shree on June 6, 2016 5:42 pm

    It was awesome dear..nd yeahhh…plsss dont stop it near future.. I love reading it

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:20 pm

      Thanks shree

  34. navi on June 6, 2016 6:14 pm

    Arey mystery dnt do diz… jst strday i started reafing u ff.. nd im comenting.. plz dont worry abt comments…. many are here reading it daily nd commenting…
    bt im angry on u… u gv such a shrt update.. expecting nxt1 big…. and today chapie ws suprb..

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:21 pm

      Ty navi …..

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:28 pm

      Navi my name start from M = real name

  35. Niku on June 6, 2016 6:14 pm

    So cute n nyc

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:21 pm

      Thanks niku

  36. anu on June 6, 2016 6:26 pm

    awesome.. swara order sanskar.

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:22 pm

      Thnqq anu

  37. Shagun on June 6, 2016 6:30 pm

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:24 pm

      Thanks shagun

  38. Amaya Rishi Mathur on June 6, 2016 6:37 pm

    Plz don’t end…m a silent reader…requesting u don’t end

    • mystery on June 6, 2016 7:25 pm

      Tysm amaya

  39. sanya on June 6, 2016 7:04 pm

    Dhamki de tu ho plzzzzz continue

    • mystery on June 7, 2016 12:09 am

      Dhamki….nhi nhi

  40. Priya tripathi on June 6, 2016 8:42 pm

    Awesome mystery love this episode n don’t stop this maybe they will read n didn’t comment

    • mystery on June 7, 2016 12:10 am

      Thanks priya

  41. aanya on June 6, 2016 10:14 pm

    Superb and plz don’t end it soon

    • mystery on June 7, 2016 12:14 am

      Ty dear

  42. ahana on June 6, 2016 11:30 pm

    awsm

    • mystery on June 7, 2016 9:59 am

      Ty dear….

  43. meena on June 7, 2016 12:04 am

    Its awsome

    • mystery on June 7, 2016 10:00 am

      Ty meena

  44. Tooba on June 7, 2016 12:10 am

    Superb yaar it’s mind blowing

    • mystery on June 7, 2016 10:00 am

      Ty tooba

  45. mystery on June 7, 2016 12:14 am

    Ty ahana

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