Oh god….guys m writing it again…..shit……its really boring to write again the same thing…..but ….its ohk…..
Guys….m sorry m unable to reply some of u…..so sorry….but thanks a lot all for the comments
Epi starts…
Laksh:- Mr MAHESHWARI Congo u r our partner now….for this project…
Ragini was little bit upset……but swara…….Congrats him…..they shake hands…..
Let’s start the meeting…..ragini was representinh some ideas…..but laksh try to do some masti…so he disapproved her reforestation…..
Lakah:- use ur mind…..oh I forget…u font have it…
Sanskar smile…..
Ragini:- what???
She throw the pen on him…..laksh swara n sanky get up
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Raglak involved in a fight…..ragini punches him…
Swara hold ragini n sanky hold laksh……
Lakah:- u should learn from Swara…..she never punches bhaii….
Ragini, swasan both fell sad….
Swasan look at eo….
Saw dard hai
Saw raahtein
Sab mila dilnashin
Ek tu hi nhiiii
Swara:- back to work….
Swara shouted….
Just the mahira enters the room…..
Swara:- u here….? How
Mahira:- relax mom…
Sanskar look at mahira….n get imotional…..
Swara:- relax…..u r asking me to relax….
Laksh:- doll its not good….u came here alone….very bad….
Mariha:- no no…not alone…driver uncle brought mW….
Swara:- driver ki kher nhi aaj
Ragini:- baby…sit in Mumma ‘ cabin we r coming…..
Mahira:- who is this uncle ???
Swara:- none of ur business…
Mahira:- dad u tell mW….
Sanky ( she call lucky her dad)
Laksh:- he is
Swara:- sanskar MAHESHWARI….. Our business partner…..now happy….leave
Mahira:- wait….na….uncle r u married???
Swasan:- what
Mahira:- if u r not then…marry my maasi…..u look good…..so I was thinking of…
Laksh:- what?????
Ragini:- shutupp
Swara:- mahira leave…….now shouted
Sanskar:swara don’t shout…..she is a kid….
Swara:- I will shout on her….I will slap her…or beat her…..u stay out of this…….
Swara holds mahira’s hand n leave …followed by ragu…
Sanlak look at eo….
Fb
Sanskar calls laksh…
S:- once …only once…I wanna see mahira…plz
L:- ohk…done…..
Fb ends
Sanky:- ty…..
L:- its ohk…..
S:- sw call u dad…?
L:- hmm…just for her……m her dad….just for her….
S:- hmm…I should leave….
Laksh ask ragini to join him n mahira for shopping……n they went to the mall…..
Ragini:- n swara..?
L:- she has to read some files….so…
Swara”s cabin
Sanky sit on couch n swara on her seat…..
Sanskar look at her….n smiles…
Monologue
Swara I know u r very strong……u can face anything….the pain that I gave u…..is something…..that is un forgivable….. N m not asking u to come back…bcz kavita n ayaan….is there ….they r my responsiblity……..but still I wanna spent my most of the time with u n mahira….so that I can have some more wonderful memories with my Jaaan…….
Swara:- Mr MAHESHWARI if u have any doubts then u can make it clear…..
Sanskar:- yes on page no. 4 its mentioned that we will us some raw mat….but these r very costly…n etc…etc….
Swara:- one min
She sat beside sanskar n start explainig him…….sanskar lost in her face…….suddenly the lights get off……
Swara:- what happen to the light now……??
Sanskar lights up his lighter…..
Swara:- lighter….?
Swara thought:- sanskar kbse lighter rkhne lage…..??
Swara try to move but she slips ….n falls on sanky….they both r on the floor……
The lights get on…..n swara gets up n go out…..in embarrement
Outside….its night
Swara:- sit….this car is punctured…. All the tyres…..how???
Sanskar:- mai chhod du???
Swara:- 7 saal phle chhod chuke ho……
Swara try to call the driver but all in vain…..
She goes to the mainroad…n look for auto…..but some guys start teasing her……
Sanskar came there……n beat all if them…
Sanskar:- sit in the car….
Swara: ignores…but he hold her hand tightly…n make her sit in the car…….
Swara looked at her hand…….n Sanskar looked at her……..
Fb
Laksh ask the driver to brought mahira to the office…n also to puncture the tyre….n ask him not to attend swara’s call……
Sanskar start the car……swara look at Sanskar injured hand….but doesn’t react…….
Swara think:- his hand is injured……oh god….
Swara:- stop the car……
Sanskar stop the car……she take his hand n tie her hanky on it……
Sanskar looked at her….
Fb
When sanskar was throwing swara out…….her leg get injured……sanskar notices it….but stop himself….. ROM helping he…..he continue to pulling her on the floor…….causing more pain to swara….n her blood strain….fell on the floor…..
Fb ends….
Swara get out of the car…..n start moving…..
Sanskar follow her n hold her…….
N it start raining……
Precap:- swara crying badly……n questioning sanskar……..
Guys now how many want swasan scenes…..n romance….romance means…..one sided romance……
53 Comments
nice
Ty s
Ty s….
Wow… Nice…. Ya please give swasan romantic scenes….
Thanks tamanna….
Awesome…. Seriously dr i didn’t think u will bring kavita track and separate swasan…. I thought they will be happy….. But now i don’t want swasan…. I m really angry on u dr for this separation….
So sorry shan……so sorry…don’t be angry…
No one tum na itni achi character k band kun Baja diya I love sanskar character in your story but now I hate him just because u made him bad :'( :'( :'(
Dear….I can only say sorry for that
Its awsome plz unite them sooooon plz plz
Ty dear
Nice..!!
Ty rupa
Not liking it
Sorry dear
please swara don’t forgive this sanskar !
i don’t want any romance of swasan… it’s so pain to remember swara condition, huhuhuhu
Thanks mica
wow confromtation part coming
Ty dear
Amazing
Thanks
First time commenting how can we expecting romantic scenes first we don’t want swasan as kavitha said there is no difference between kavitha and sanskar
Sanskar betray swara and his own daughter for his son how can he first he have to tell swara and then both have to decide what to do but I don’t want swara to forgive sanskar never ever pls show women power they are not toys
Thanks dear
Awesome…cute…
Ty rekha
Nice yar
Ty dear
Awesomee!!!!
Ty arunika
Awesome
Sorry to say but the track is getting boring it’s not Gud
Awesome
Awesome dr but m feeling bad for swara n hell angry on sanky n kavitha.
I don’t want any romance between dem… hez still thinking cavity n aayan r his rspnsblty n u r showing dere romance uurrgghhh…. n how can laksh help him after all dis.. nobody has brain in dis ff… n dis punishment u r giving 2 sanky dat hez spndng tym wid swara?? Sorry if i hurt u bt m upset wid dese changes of ur story y u chnged it… now plz give sum brains 2 laksh n dun unite swasan
Agree with u..sorry if i hurt u mystry
ha.. yups rite Arshaanya.. he think that cavity and her son is his responsibility, but what bout swara and her daughter….mahira is his own blood too, cavity just blackmailing him to marry, but did she ask sanskar to be rude to swara ? to give soo much pain to swara ?
stupid ever sanskar.. i can’t imagine the person who declare to the world that he loved swara soo much able to give soo much pain just for a blackmailing without any effort to short the problem and give less pain to the loved one…
sorry Mystery, for blabbering, take it +vely, you can see that your ff eat our brain for sure hehehehe
Thnx kritika n mica i compltly agree wid u dis ff is srsly eating r brain ??
I don’t want swara to forgive Sanskaar….. And update soon….. Sorry for not commenting on the previous ones… I was busy with my brothers wedding…..
And why is laksh helping Sanskaar?????
Nice one
Awsm..
No romance so soon!!
Thanks deeksha….arshaanya….maja6….soujanya…..L khan…..renu……
Many of u r not liking the current track……..but no problem…bcz….I will try to make it gud for all the readers……
Deeksha…the reason ….y lakah is helping sanky wud be revealed in the next epi…..
Sorry if i hurt u ? bt swara hs gone through lot of pain in ur ff… first from her so called parents dan sanskar… watever maybe d reason laksh shud not help sanskar… i knw he knws d truth of cavity still he shud not hlp him… he has seen swaraz suffrngs… plz show swara as a strong women n sanskar shud go through same pain as swara even more… n plzz its a req dun unite dem.. y olwayz girls has to suffer plzz
Nice part. Precap seems emotional.
superb….reveal d whole past soon. What was kavita’s plan?
no yaar.. he wants her to be happy but again he think bout kavita nd ayan.. no i m not liking it.. please dnt show swara frgvng him soon.. what shomi did with swara sme he doing with his child… not liking story
No Romantic Scenes Di…Please let Sanskar suffer means Dont let himspend time with Mahira because he is only responsible for it..Dont you think that Sanskar ke maaje hi maaje hai…
Office main Swara and Mahira and in Home Ayaan and Kavita…Please make him suffer like a hell…
I want swasan one sided romance but plz make swara punishing sanky ….. I mean to say swara ignoring sanskaar but sanskaar trying to talk to swara ….. like this I kniw this all is happening but I want swara punish sanky more …. and Is aayan is really sanky ‘s son or kavita’s plan to live with sanky ………. ?????????? And epi was as usual awesome …. ???
I don’t want swasan as a couple in the end
Swara has gone through a lot of trouble
Mahir a should through sanskar out
Raglak r good
Plz dr dont want swasan in this ff…..make new entry fr swara or make her move on in her life alone……
Plz dont want to see swasan romance…..
Want to see sanky suffer without swara…..
Plz dr…..dont unite them…..epi was superb…..except swasan scene…….
amazing..but finish kavita’s charachter soon n unite swasan ..
how u r goining to justify the title of the story if u seperate swasan in the end and if u make them again pair then this will be injustice with swara and mahira…
Interesting yaaar… Bt don’t want swasan romance and plzzz don’t want swara to forgive him easily