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Home»Fan Fiction»i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 11
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i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 11

administratorBy administratorJune 20, 201650 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hello everyone…

Sanskar POV
Mum curses me…..she slap me repeatedly…. She broke down…..I killed my child….huh….how I will face swara…..its an hour she become conscious …..she ask mom not to cry…..mum put her head on swara ‘s head n then go to her room……I sit beside swara….she looked at me….

Swara m sorry….I said

She looked me surprisingly….. I told her about her miscarriage…… She was sitting like a lifeless statue……she get up n go out of the room….followed by me…..I can understand her pain……i try to hold her hand but she slapped me…..

Swara:- don’t u dare ….I hate u…I hate u a lot…..u blo*dy gangster….. U r just a killer…..u kill innocent people…n today u killed my unborn baby……how could u….?????

I was silently listening her….

Swara:- I curse the day when I marry u…..I hate u……

She slapped me repeatedly…… She falls on the floor……mom took her to our room…….I deserve more punishment… ..I took my chabuk n start beating myself……I remember each day when I hurt swara……

New York
A girl is shown in a black top n red long skirt…..she was chilling out in a disco …..just then her phone rings…..

Girl:- yah mom…….

Mom:- where r u ?

Girl:- m in party….I told u na..

Mom:- but its 1am….come back now

Girl:- Ohio ….Abhi to party shuru hui hai…

Mom:- I said came now…

Girl:- ohk…mother India…

She cut the call…n inform her friends about her mom calling her….

Vicky:- plzz give me a break…..ur mom is typical Indian mother…so old fashioned…

Girl hold his color n say:- don’t u dare to utter anything against mom….she is my mom….the best mom…..

Vicky:- ohk …sorry sorry ….RAGINI’ s MOM IS THE BEST

YAAH THAT WAA RAGZZZ

ragzz:- better…..bye guys….

Vicky:- her mom is her life….

India
Sanskar POV
Laksh:- what the hell u did Sanskar…… R u mad…..????

Sanskar:- I know ….kill mW yrr

Lakah:- u know what u deserve this….u punish swara…for what….??? Just bcz she is SHEKHAR UNCLE’S daughter….ur stupid anger took ur baby away……huh….its ridiculous….. U deserve this……I want to meet swara…now

We both went to my room but swara was not there I looked in washroom…laksh check balcony……I checked whole house…..I ask mom…..she told that she went to kitchen to bring food n milk for swara…..

Where is swara??????

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50 Comments

  1. navi on June 20, 2016 1:24 am

    Mystery bck aftr long tym….
    Superb part… asusal small chapie…
    wr is swara did she leave…..!!!
    Waiting for nxt part

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:50 am

      Thanks navi….n I know I give small updates …sorry for that…so sorry….n about swara u will know in next epi

  2. Sahra on June 20, 2016 1:32 am

    I really like your ff they are to good
    Please can you do longer ones

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:51 am

      Thanks sahra…..keep commenting dear….n I will try to give longer epi

  3. maryum on June 20, 2016 1:45 am

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:52 am

      Thanks dear

  4. Rosey on June 20, 2016 1:47 am

    Great I think swara goes from sanskaars house

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:52 am

      May be or not……it would be disclose in the next chap

  5. Ariba on June 20, 2016 2:02 am

    Nice one but its too small?

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:53 am

      So sorry dear.,…I will try to update long …..

  6. shubhangi on June 20, 2016 4:15 am

    Finally u posted dear please post next part soon???

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:54 am

      Thanks shubhangi…..dear I will post next chap asap

  7. kaynatk01 on June 20, 2016 4:31 am

    nice but plz unite swasan soon

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:55 am

      Yah dear…..I know we all can’t see them apart….

  8. Shagun on June 20, 2016 7:10 am

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:56 am

      Thanks shagun

  9. Soujanya on June 20, 2016 7:41 am

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:57 am

      Thanq soujanya

  10. barathy on June 20, 2016 8:00 am

    Plz post next part soon

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:57 am

      I will update asap

  11. SHAN on June 20, 2016 8:22 am

    awesome…..

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:58 am

      Thanks shan…

  12. aanya on June 20, 2016 8:35 am

    Superb plz upload soon

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:58 am

      Thanks aanya….dear I will update soon

  13. deeksha on June 20, 2016 8:59 am

    Nice one…. Ragini’s entry……. Update soon

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 10:59 am

      Thanks deeksha…..

  14. Meher on June 20, 2016 9:05 am

    Omg!! Where she went ?

    Hope she is fine ?

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 11:00 am

      Thanks meher…..n dear I love ur ffs….I comment by different names….

    • Meher on June 20, 2016 3:52 pm

      Awww thanku so much dear ?

  15. Anu Ann on June 20, 2016 9:16 am

    Nice one but too small

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 11:01 am

      Thanks anu ann ….I will try to give a big chap

  16. vyshu on June 20, 2016 9:40 am

    oh god…did swara leave?

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 11:01 am

      Dear u will came to know in next epi

  17. Afra on June 20, 2016 10:08 am

    Nice

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 11:02 am

      Ty afra

  18. Sweetie on June 20, 2016 10:49 am

    Nice one..Now where did swara go??

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 1:59 pm

      Ty sweetie

  19. s on June 20, 2016 11:26 am

    nyc

    • mystery on June 21, 2016 12:38 pm

      Thanks dear

  20. Radhika on June 20, 2016 11:42 am

    Awsm bt too small…

    • mystery on June 21, 2016 1:48 pm

      Thnq radhika

  21. MOU on June 20, 2016 1:12 pm

    awsm….but where is swara???

  22. Fatima on June 20, 2016 1:29 pm

    Awsome as always ? plzzzzz post soon dear ?…….

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 2:01 pm

      Thanks dear…:-)

  23. miss.murty on June 20, 2016 2:30 pm

    superbbb yaar i love this ff

    • mystery on June 20, 2016 5:21 pm

      Thanks dear…keep commenting

  24. anu on June 20, 2016 2:59 pm

    mnice where is she went….

  25. divya on June 20, 2016 4:44 pm

    hey upload soon I wanna know where is swara???

  26. Sree on June 20, 2016 6:25 pm

    Very nice dear . Rags entry was nice.
    Waiting for nxt ????

  27. Prakriti on June 22, 2016 11:28 am

    Wow Dear just Superb….
    Ragini’s entery was awesome

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