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Home»Fan Fiction»i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 10
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i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 10

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Hwy guys …today I m not feeling well but I want to give u a long episode today bcz I want to fulfill my promise….u all appraises my ff…..this make me feels that I m a good writer n should give u updates daily…..so let’s start

Sanskar POV

Mom returned with ruhani…..I told her everything ….n as I know she slapped me….huh….she loves swara more than me….so I knew it…..

Mom:- so for this day u bring her here….huh???

Sanskar:- no mom….I get to know it after marriage only….if I prior know this then I won’t marry her…..never….

Mom:- tell me…what’s her mistake….she is the victim….huh her parents leave her….she lives like an orphan…… U gave her punishment without any mistake…..u even forget that she saves ur mom……how can u….? If u forget then I must recall u….

Fb
Ap was returning from mandir when there was some riotic activities took place…….blood …guns n all everywhere…… A bullet shot her…..n no one help her….except our brave swara…..she take her to the hospital anyhow n Ap get saved…..

Sanskar saw her second time there …..he got impressed by this skill of her…….

Fb ends…

Swara is a savior…..n what u did …I m ashamed of u….get lost sanskar….

Sanskar POV

I know swara is innocent but her identity proves her to be a criminal…… I know how I felt when I came to know about this…..after our consummation….my phone rings n KARAN my spy informed me that swara is the daughter of shekhar gadodia….I didn’t believe this….n rush to the orphanage…. N her baba tell me the whole truth….

Fb
Shomi came to the orphanage…. She used to teach the children there…..she tell janki ( Baba’s wife) that shekhar have an extra marital affair with someone ( GUYS I WILL DISCLOSE IT LATER) n thus he leaves them….n also he is a fraud…..shomi ma is a good friend of my mum…..but since I lost my paa shomi maa never came here…..she decided to live in the orphanage only…..
Fb ends

The question came into my mind is that y she leave swara???? There was no need of doing that…..I kept on thinking this…..I never went to my room bcz I know swara is broken n if I saw her then I wont be able to punish her……it’s almost 2 weeks…….I noticed a knock on my study room’ s door…..it was Swara…..she came to me holding my gun in her hand…

Swara:- my father kills ur father….so u can kill me…..take this n shoot me…..since one month m living here like a dead body……plzz sanskar…. I beg u …..fulfill ur revenge…..

I saw her ….she is so weak …pale face…her glow ….is vanished…..she was unable to walk properly…..I want to hold her in my arms….but no i wont do this……
Sanskar:- u want to die so easily…. No dear….I won’t kill u ….u have to live like this…..now get lost……else

Swara:- else what??? U will beat me….then do it….I ready don’t care…..but tell me one thing what’s my mistake…..if m his daughter…..what is my mistake…..??

I pushed her on the floor in anger…. She screams so loudly…..I get worried…..

I took her in my arms …..
I called the doc……doc check her…she is still unconscious

Doc:- Mr MAHESHWARI ur wife was pregnant….

These words just make me feel like a winner…I mean I m going to be a father….I m on the clouds…..

Doc:- Mr MAHESHWARI u didn’t listen me carefully… Ur wife WAS pregnant….. but she lost her baby…..I guess she falls down which leads to her miscarriage…..

I was numb…..I KILLED MY BABY!!!!! How can I???

So guys I hope u would like this epi….i n this epi I show swara n AP’s first meeting…..then I also disclose how sanky know about swara’s identity…..guys….there is a big twist waiting for u…..it will take 2-3 epi to disclose it…..

Precap:- ragini’s entry….

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96 Comments

  1. Riya on June 16, 2016 11:16 pm

    Oommggg 😮

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:34 pm

      Thnks for commenting….

  2. SHAN on June 16, 2016 11:18 pm

    awesome…..very nice

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:35 pm

      Thanks shan

  3. SHAN on June 16, 2016 11:19 pm

    dont make swara suffer more dr…..there s no swaras mistake

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:35 pm

      Ohk shan

  4. vyshu on June 16, 2016 11:21 pm

    feeling sad for swara….nice ep and take care of urself.

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:36 pm

      Ty dear

  5. Pramudi on June 16, 2016 11:21 pm

    Very beautiful
    Get well soon dear. ?

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:36 pm

      Thnqq dear

  6. Priya tripathi on June 16, 2016 11:23 pm

    Awesome feel bad for swara n sanskar how can he punish swara what her fault

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:37 pm

      Thanks for commenting….

  7. cutiie on June 16, 2016 11:23 pm

    Unite swasan sson

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:38 pm

      Thanks cutie….keep commenting

  8. cutiie on June 16, 2016 11:23 pm

    Nice

  9. L Khan on June 16, 2016 11:23 pm

    Nce

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:38 pm

      Thanks dear

  10. Swasan on June 16, 2016 11:24 pm

    Nice….hope sanskar realised his mistske

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:40 pm

      Ty swasan

  11. Anu Ann on June 16, 2016 11:27 pm

    Nice dear… Hope in future you’ll give lengthy updates

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:42 pm

      I guess its long…..but I will try to give more lengthy next tym

  12. Rosey on June 16, 2016 11:28 pm

    wow shockig but short
    plz i request plz yar write longer

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:43 pm

      Oh dear…I thought it is lengthy but ohk…I will write big one

  13. Shifa on June 16, 2016 11:28 pm

    Nice

  14. Meher on June 16, 2016 11:28 pm

    Noo this should not have happened.. . Now sanskar will feel guilty… He should feel guilty bt not in this way…

    He should feel guilty for hurting swara…

    But an innocent life got lost cz of his stupid anger.. .

    Hope he soon get some senses

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:44 pm

      Thanks Meher…

    • anu on June 17, 2016 12:59 pm

      meher where is ur ff’s why ur nt updating..

  15. navi on June 16, 2016 11:31 pm

    Wow superb.. bt last thing… omg she lost her child… ok waiting for d suspense… nd thnks for update..

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:45 pm

      Thanks navi

  16. Sahrani on June 16, 2016 11:32 pm

    Omg it was too good
    I liked the twist
    You never fail to surprise us

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:46 pm

      Thanks sahrani….

  17. Priya on June 16, 2016 11:33 pm

    So sad for swara

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:47 pm

      Thanks dear

  18. swarna on June 16, 2016 11:33 pm

    My god. Wat will b the reaction of swara when she will know abt her pregnency n miscarriage. Pls upld next part soon.

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:48 pm

      Ty swarna

  19. Ariba on June 16, 2016 11:33 pm

    Really nice n thanks 4 posting ❤❤

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:48 pm

      Thanks dear

  20. anu on June 16, 2016 11:34 pm

    nice update but bad happening in swara life… oh god swara lost her baby… ragini entry…. intresting… nw hw vl swara react to this news of pregnancy…….

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:49 pm

      Tysm anu

  21. maryum on June 16, 2016 11:37 pm

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:49 pm

      Thanks maryum

  22. Seeba on June 16, 2016 11:39 pm

    Its high time…now swara should be strong and brave…its time for sanskar to suffer….

    • mystery on June 16, 2016 11:50 pm

      Thanks seeba….u r right now sanky should suffer

  23. kumu on June 16, 2016 11:45 pm

    nyc..

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:15 am

      Thnq

  24. Bebo on June 16, 2016 11:45 pm

    hey … Hlw
    M new here …….
    nice episod n i reallyliked it….
    eagrly waiting fr the next….. 🙂

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:15 am

      Thanks bebo

  25. Radhika on June 16, 2016 11:46 pm

    Omg….wow..pls update nxt one tmrw..awsm..

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:16 am

      Thanks radhika

  26. tvisha on June 16, 2016 11:51 pm

    awesome… post soon plzz

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:17 am

      Ty tvisha

  27. neha_priya on June 16, 2016 11:52 pm

    Wow sanskar be proud of you first you treated swara badly for the mistakes which she never did and now great now keep that sin with urself for killing ur own child…. Awesome great…..

    Make him pay badly and now this time swara should hate him…. Feeling very bad for swara what’s her mistake that she’s suffering soo ????

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:18 am

      Thanks dear

  28. kaynatk01 on June 16, 2016 11:55 pm

    awesome yr but upset seeing swaras stage

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:18 am

      Ty dear

  29. hadi on June 16, 2016 11:58 pm

    Feeling bad for swara but sabky k sath theek hua to hurt someone child is so easy but to see hurt our child is so much painful n more males do the same thing to their wives as they don’t care about them but for their daughters they always like no one dare to touch them but they should think about others daughters I really don’t satisfied with all this revenge game yr what’s mistake of swara in fact she was suffering from childhood as to be orphan is soo mich suffering n now sanskar is also torching her so what’s her mistake n now I think swara should not forgive him for at least 1 month as he punished her for 1 month so she has to punish him for equal period thanks for uploading waiting for next

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:20 am

      U r right hadi…..

  30. thamiazh magan on June 17, 2016 12:04 am

    its so cruel of Sanskar. but expecting to see a changed one afterwards

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:20 am

      Thnqq dear

  31. ria on June 17, 2016 12:11 am

    How will swara react when she will come to know that the guy who married her killed her child. Superb Nice

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 12:21 am

      Thanks ria

    • little princess on June 17, 2016 1:07 am

      How could sanskar behave like this…its rediculous… Feeling really bad for swara…why is she punished for her father’s deeds…all these years she suffered alot as a orphan..and sanky’s punishment was more than that…she tolerated everything… But now this miscarriage…omg how will she tolerate the fact that she lost her baby n one who is responsible is her own husband whom she loved alot…she wont be able to accept it…she will be completely broken…sanskar is now at guilt that he killed his own child…its his punishment for what he did with a pious soul…let him also suffer n understand swara’s pain and he should change into a good man and love her as before… Later swara should also forgive him and move on.
      I really wish to see swasan together…and later they should be blessed with a child again…just love ur ff…keep on entertaining us with ur wonderful ff…eagerly waiting for next part..

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 8:08 am

      Tysm little princess….

  32. Divyarani on June 17, 2016 12:51 am

    Now it will b more interesting..swara ws punished widout hr mistake…but now it is crime which is made by da grt ganster huuu sanskaar who kill his own child…now who is actual culprit my swara or dat idiot sanskaar{ sryy but i cant take his torchur anymore towards my swara }is dis calld luv..huuu i want swara to punish sanskaar badlyy…

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 8:09 am

      Thnks dear…

  33. meena on June 17, 2016 1:04 am

    Its awsome feeling bad for swara

  34. Vaikha on June 17, 2016 7:20 am

    I felt sooo bad for swaras condition.. Now swara will not be able to forget what sanskar has done.. Pls dont create more rift btwn them.. Whats that new twist?? Ragini??? Dont make her fall in love and all such bakwaas drama with sanskar.. Unite swasan soon.. Hope it will a swasan ff only..

    • Vaikha on June 17, 2016 7:22 am

      Ooh forgot to say.. U are doing an amazing job.. I love ur ff.. But pls try to give lengthier updates.. As u mentioned this one was not a lengthier one.. Just a normal one..

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 9:58 am

      Ohk dear

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 9:57 am

      The twist will be revealed later only…..don’t worry

  35. Avan on June 17, 2016 8:25 am

    Omg…..Miscarriage … How can sanky bear this.?? N thanks for long one…please try to update regurly…today’s chappy was nyc

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 9:59 am

      Thanqq dear…

  36. Purvi on June 17, 2016 8:49 am

    Swara is suffering without her mistake…… Y miscarriage yaar???? Feeling sorry for swara……

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 9:59 am

      Thanks for commenting

  37. Sweetie on June 17, 2016 9:22 am

    Nice one.. 🙂

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 10:00 am

      Ty sweetie

  38. Soujanya on June 17, 2016 9:30 am

    Awesome…..

  39. Fatima on June 17, 2016 9:50 am

    Awsome as always ??…..but feeling bad for swara ☺️☺️……omg miscarriage I don’t know what ‘ll swara do after knowing dos ??……hoping for best……….but sanky y r doing lyk dis wd swara …….she is suffering a lot yaar ??…..well sanky pta nhi tra Kya hoga???……well i m so happy that u gave a lengthy epi ☺️☺️……thankz for the long part dear ………plz update soon ….bcuz I can’t live without ur ff ???………Plzzz come back with ur sweet Mrs. Maheshwari ??…….

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 10:01 am

      Ty Fatima……tysm

  40. aanya on June 17, 2016 10:23 am

    OMG superb

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 1:56 pm

      Thanks aanya

  41. deeksha on June 17, 2016 11:46 am

    Feeling bad for swara… Want to see swasan scene…..

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 1:55 pm

      Ty deeksha

  42. Sree_deeksha on June 17, 2016 12:00 pm

    Awsome one

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 1:41 pm

      Thnks

  43. Jenisha on June 17, 2016 4:05 pm

    I am feeling sad for swara?….. Hope sanskar behave good with swara and she doesn’t come to know about her miscarriage otherwise she will be broken….. Plz update soon….

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 8:15 pm

      Thnq dear

  44. Sree on June 17, 2016 4:55 pm

    Oh god????. I never expected this. Poor swara. Hope sanskar will behave properly now. Waiting for nxt dear.???

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 8:16 pm

      Thnqqq sree

  45. Shagun on June 17, 2016 5:09 pm

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 8:18 pm

      Thnks shagun

  46. Rekha on June 17, 2016 8:33 pm

    Nice but feeling bad for swara and waiting for the twist

    • mystery on June 17, 2016 10:58 pm

      Thankyou rekha

  47. Jenny on June 17, 2016 11:33 pm

    Hey nice episode u rocked Teena :-* :-* :-* :-*

  48. Jenny on June 17, 2016 11:34 pm

    Hey nice episode u rocked Teena

    • mystery on June 19, 2016 11:07 am

      Ty jenny

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