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MAJESTIC AUGUST : JUST FEEL IT – Rikara, Rumya FF- Part 10 { Priveer, Rikara Special}

MAJESTIC AUGUST : JUST FEEL IT – Rikara, Rumya FF- Part 10 { Priveer, Rikara Special}
Happy Miladi Sharif 2 all Ishqies….May Lord Allah shower blessings on each and every one……Hello friends, How are u all ? First of all big apology for not updating ff’s on regular basis….I am facing immense work pressure, health issues and it’s really hard to find time for coming in TU…..My eye pain is reducing now a days so am back 2 office and work…Hence I couldn’t assure u abt next updates in time… But I will try my level best….. Links for the previous ones are here……Pls check out all parts and kindly drop ur views…..I humbly request those who show dislikes may pls point out the mistakes or reason for disliking so that I can rectify mistakes in upcoming updates…..
Part 9 here

@ Oberoi Mansion, Hall { Priveer }
Priyanka : Ranveer, I think u should leave now……[prinku runs her eye sight here and there]
Ranveer : Priyanka……U really want me 2 go ?? [prinku and ranveer stare each other’s eyes]
Priyanka : Ranveer…….I mean 2 say that aunty is alone in home and u should be there……
Ranveer : Haan….[nods his head] U are right, mausi will be waiting for me…….[Ranveer turns 2 leave]
Priyanka : Ranveer…..I am…..I am sorry…….[prinku weeps in tears, ranveer turns his face 2 wards her and raise his fingers 2 wipe her tears]
Priyanka : [stops ranveer’s hand in middle and stares him] Pls allow me 2 cry today, don’t wipe out my tears……It will make me desirable only whereas I am not supposed 2 desire much as it will ruin ur happiness……
Ranveer : Let the desires 2 come , Let the dreams 2 fly and Let the heart 2 express it prinku……I know u will not agree with me now, but I will wait for u……The day when u will really wish 2 make ur dream as true I will be with u 2 hold ur hand and it’s my promise……[ ranveer release his hand from her hold and moves backward]
Priyanka : I will miss u ranveer……
Ranveer : I don’t want 2 miss u priyanka because I love u so much…….
Priveer stare each other’s eyes…..Ranveer slowly walks behind and sits on the jeep……
Prinku : Take Care…..Bye….
Ranveer : U too……Bye….

Prinku stands near the jeep and waves her hand…..Ranveer gives a fake smile with teary eyes and leaves the spot… Prinku bend @ her own knees and burst into tears…..Priveer recalls the moments which they spend with each other…….BGM…. “Ishq Aashiqui Mein
Kuch Log Chhantta Hai
Zakhm Baatah Hai
Unhe Dard Baatta Hai
Thod Deta Hai Khwaab Saare Dekhte Dekhte
Kar De Barbaad Saa
Jo Tu Na Ho Toh Pani Pani Naina
Jo Tu Na Ho Toh Main Bhi Hunga Main Naa
Tujhi Se Mujhe Sab Ataa
Mujh Mein Tu… Tu Hi Tu Basa
Naino Mein Jaise Khwaab Saa…” [film- special 26] plays…..
Scene shifts 2 rudy’s room….. Gauri enters there and finds rudy sleeping on om’s lap…….Gauri smiles and finds om who was falling half asleep……She rushed near him and slowly placed a pillow on his head’s back……Om opens his eyes and finds gauri before his eyes…….”Saathiya” instrumental plays……
Gauri : Wooh….wooh….. Omkaraji……Ur head was abt 2 hit the bed stead……..That’s why I…..placed this pillow behind u……..
Omkara : It’s okay…….[om smiles]
Gauri : By the way how is rudy bhaiya ??
Omkara : He is sleeping like a kid in my lap…..[om waves his hand on rudy’s forehead] U know what gauri in childhood shivay, rudy and I use 2 sleep together….And u know what since rudy was too small he use 2 fight with me if he finds me lying in shivaay’s lap……Some times I wish the return of those sweet childhood where dadi use 2 narrate stories, rudy used 2 show some pranks, shivaay used 2 show dance and I used 2 sketch them in my drawing book…….
Gauri : I don’t anything abt ur childhood…..But what I have seen is shivaay bhaiya, rudy bhaiya and U are like ram, laxman and bharat…..I mean u brothers are always….
Omkara : All for One and One for All……[om slowly placed pillow behind rudy’s head and covers his body with blanket….gauri switches off the lights, rikara leaves]

Scene shifts 2 om’s room
Rikara arranges the bed and stare each other’s eyes..
Omkara : I hope rudy gets fine tmrw……
Gauri : Everything will be fine, omkaraji……After all u and shivay bhaiya will be there…..
Omkara : Yeah…..Nothing can break shivomru………
Gauri : It’s so gud 2 see ur strong brotherhood which makes me 2 feel jealous or sometimes makes me 2 miss some one who was…….[ gauri gets emotional and thinks abt her lost sister]
Omkara : Gauri!!! Gauri, what happened ?
Gauri : Nothing……
Omkara : Gauri we share one room, we share same bed and we have 2 travel together a lot as we are married couple……So I think u can share ur pain with me only if u wants……Pain is my companion and I am related 2 it ….May be that’s why I am telling u 2 open it…..But it’s strictly ur wish… But one thing I want 2 say that don’t think that u are alone….
Gauri : [stares om’s eyes] After coming this home I started realizing values of relationships…… The most surprising thing which I find here is ur brotherhood…….Whenever u tells me abt shivay bhaiya and rudy bhaiya I will start thinking abt my elder sister…..
Omkara : Sister !!!!! But gauri, ur mom told that u are her only daughter……
Gauri : Haan…….I am her only daughter,but she didn’t give birth 2 me……..
Omkara : What ???
Gauri : Anu didi……My elder sister…….I don’t remember her exact name, but I use 2 call her as anu didi and She used 2 call me as chutki…..We were staying together and one day some one pushed my didi and stolen me from her hand…….I cried….”Didi….Didi” But she was also so small and she was helpless……..The man who took me was like raakshas and he tried 2 tie my hands with rope….But I bite his palm and when he screamed loudly, I ran in high speed….But he was behind me and finally near the barely shivji’s mandir I find a caring hand which made me 2 hide behind him and it was none other than Pandit Laxman Sarma, my pitaaji…….The whole barely gathered there for this mad chirayya and that raakshas went back…….I got a new world there and I became barely’s dabang chirayya gauri kumari sarma…….But my didi……I don’t know what happened 2 her, I don’t remember where we stayed together and how much pain she would have suffered in her life……..I am scared of those dark memory, omkaraji……My anu di…….My anu di…..[gauri gets emotional]
Omkara : Gauri!!! [om holds gauri’s face in his palms and wipes her tears] Ur anu di is here only……
Gauri : Ji!!!
Omkara : U loves anika bhabhi so much , won’t u ??
Gauri : Haan…..
Omkara : So just think that anika bhabhi is ur anu didi …….Okay ?? Bhabhi always calls u as her little sister ….
Gauri : I know , but she is my bhaunjai…..
Omkara : Tell me one thing , u calls rudy as bhaiya, shivay as bade bhaiya then why can’t u call anika bhabhi as didi ??
Gauri : But u calls her as bhaunjai only…..
Omkara : Let me like that……I just want 2 say like our brotherhood it will be so nice 2 see sisterhood also…..I mean just imagine like shivomru if anika bhabhi and gauri joins then how could be that bond ?
Gauri : Anri…….But u brothers are three, I wish if rudy bhaiya also gets his right life partner….. So that we sisters be just like u three brothers……
Omkara : I hope his love angel will come back soon…..
Gauri : Love Angel!!!!
Omkara : Time will tell it…..gauri……
Gauri : Omkaraji!!! Some times I find much difficult 2 understand u and ur words…….But I knows that the intensity of ur feelings, emotions are true and I can find it in ur eyes……And….
Omkara : [interrupts] And what u find in my eyes ?
Gauri : I find an innocence in them which will makes me 2 feel that I am married 2 a pure hearted person …..I find the flames of pain in them which will makes me 2 understand how deeply he is affected from his own life experiences…..And some times I find his few drops of tears which he use 2 shatter in lonliness tells me the conflict of his heart……But sad thing is that I am not able 2 heal them…….
Omkara : But u are able 2 realize them very well……After shivaay, if any one has find it then it’s u only……
Gauri : After spending time with u I think I have started learning the language of ur silence also…… [Rikara stare each other with wet eyes and smiles]
BGM….”Jo naa keh sake tum, jo naa keh sake hum, kehane lagi donon se who khamoshiyaan …oh saathiya…..” plays……
Omkara : May be……After seeing ur charming eyes, I find them as inspiring for my painting…… I want 2 sketch it in my canvas……..[Om touches her eyelids and runs his fingers through her cheeks, gauri shuts her eyes quickly and lost herself in that moment]

Om moved from the bed and picks brush for painting……He gently lifted gauri’s chin and stares her closed eyes….Omkara : Gauri!!! [gauri slowly opened her eyes and stares om’s mesmerizing eyes before her….Om smiles….]
Om again turned back 2 his canvas and starts painting gauri’s beautiful eyes on his eyes…… Om was looking again and again on her eyes, while gauri was not mature enough 2 face that graceful glance again and again……She shyly bowed her eyes down…..Om nodded his head with a fair smile and moved near her…..Gauri’s heart beat went up, she tightened her fingers on the blanket of the bed…….Om sat beside her and gently whispered…..”Gauri!!!! U won’t like my painting ? “
Gauri : Omkaraji…….Don’t think so……..Wooh……aap….. I mean u said it all of a sudden and I …… was…….
Omkara : Fine……I will make it later……..[om turns 2 put the brush back in the stand, but soon gauri holds his hand]
Gauri : Pls….continue it…….I want 2 see how ur art is witnessing my eyes……
Omkara : Why ??
Gauri : Because ur art depicts ur heart’s thoughts……..
Omkara : Really !!!
Gauri : Wooh….Wooh…..[ om stares gauri, gauri finds hard 2 hide her feelings from omkara]
They share an eyelock……… BGM…“Mann yeh sahib ji
Haan karta bahane
Naina nawabi ji
Na samjhe ishare
Samjhe ishare
Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere
Bhayo re saibo
Dheere dheere” plays…..

PRECAP : SOFT WIND OF LOVE HAS WAVED NOW, BUT HIDDEN STORM IS NOT READY 2 GO….HOW FAR LOVE WILL SURVIVE …….FIND IT??

Renimarenju

Sun always rises and spreads light, but sun flower expect sun to lime light and may be sun is not able to do it. But sun will show care through twilight.True love will succeed

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