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Home»Fan Fiction»Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaungi (kanchi ) Episode 14
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Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaungi (kanchi ) Episode 14

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 24, 2017Updated:September 24, 201710 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam Ashnita as u know. I have a good news iam not going anywhere. I will continue writing .Actually I got a leave

But iam confused should I end all ff and start new one.
Or
Continue this and bring 2 new one.

Do comment and clear my doubt. And iam sorry in advance u will get to know when u read this.

Episode starts

Kanchi and trio came to Fiji in their private jet. They landed in Nadi International Airport.

Laksh – bhai we reached fiji

Kabir – yes

Sanchi – we dnt know anything about this country.

Veer – yes bhai

Robin – and no one knows us and bhai dnt take gun. It’s not allowed in this country. They will sue u

Kabir – OK

Laksh – bhai we came fiji but I wish I could meet Ashnita.

Just then they here a girls voice and they turned around gets shocked to see.

A girl with open and long hair with simple makeup and heavy ear ring wearing jeans and top with heels .

Laksh and Robin gets shocked and their mouth was open .Laksh was just looking at her. Bg plays

Dekha tuje yaar dil me baji guitar. (From Apna sapna money money )

Kabir asked boys to close their mouth. They closed their mouth.

Girls cums running to Kabir

Girl – wow Kabir malhotra

Looking to everyone – sanchi, Veer, pragya ,Robin and Laksh.

They gets shocked. Looking with eachother.

Girl – iam ur big fan.

Kabir – OK but who r u how u know our names.

Girl – wat u dnt know me. I will kill u guys

They r looking at her with blank expression.

Girl – ok enough iam

Laksh – u r my dream girl.

Girl – wat

Laksh – nthing

Kabir – so u r

Girl – iam ur writer Ashnita.

All – wat

Ashnita smiles – yes it’s me.

Laksh forward his hands – iam Laksh naam to suna hoga.

Ashnita – no Hahaha just kidding.

She shakes hands with Laksh. Ashnita to Kabir.

Ashnita – actually u guys dnt know about this country. So iam ur guide.

Laksh – yipeeeeee it means u will stay with us.

Ashnita – yes Laksh OK it’s night now. We can’t travel now. So I booked raffles gateway of fiji for staying. It just opposite side of airport. Cum

She goes and just then stopped as Laksh was still holding her hands.

Ashnita – Laksh can u leave my hand

Laksh – sorry Ashnita pliz dnt kill me

Ashnita – i will think.

They reached gateway. Ashnita gave their rooms key to them. Kanchi in one room. ,veer Robin and Laksh in other room and pragya and ashnita in other room.

In kanchi room

Kabir – i will sleep on the bed and jhansi ki u sleep on the sofa

Sanchi – u sleep on sofa and I sleep on bed

Kabir – I’ll sleep

Sanchi – ok wait we sleep together in bed

Kabir – no

Sanchi – u r scared or u couldn’t control urself.

Kabir remembered sanchi dance.

Kabir – OK u sleep on bed I sleep on sofa.

Sanchi nodded and Kabir slept on sofa.

Let’s check in boys room

Veer – oh shutup Laksh

Laksh – bhai she’s so hot

Robin – yes Laksh she is so beautiful.

Veer – Robin u too

Laksh – fiji is really a beautiful country and people r nice here.

Veer – OK sleep now.

They slept

In girls room

Ashnita – pragya

Pragya – yes

Ashnita – tumari shadi ho gayi

Pragya – jese tum nhi jante.

Ashnita – sorry yaar actually I was busy.

Pragya – i know

Ashnita – ok sleep now.

They slept

In the morning

In kanchi room

Kanchi were sleeping just then someone knocked door. Kabir woke up and opened the door.

Kabir – ashnita u here

Ashnita – yeah where is sanchi

Sanchi came

Sanchi – Ashnita

Ashnita – actually do you guys want to visit Nadi temple.

Kanchi- off course

Ashnita – ok so be ready it’s 3am now we will leave at 3.30 and after that we leave to Suva.

Kanchi – ok

Ashnita left and went to boys room. She gets shocked to see them. She closes her eyes and shouting.

Ashu – Laksh can u wear ur ur shirt.

Laksh – Ashu open ur eyes and look at me.

Ashu – iam not interested to see u shirtless

Veer – ashu he is wearing shirt already pliz close ur eyes.

Ashu – ok guys be ready we r going to Nadi temple. Let’s meet outside.

Trio – OK

After sometime

Boys r waiting for girls.

Kabir – Y girls always late

Laksh – bhai they r beauties they have to look gud because we r charming and they should match us.

Girls – oh really.

Boys turned back and saw girls in kameez. They couldn’t take off their eyes from them.

Ashu – it’s late we have to leave now.

After sometime

They reached nadi temple. They all prayed Kanchi and praveer tied thread to peepall tree .

Laksh – pandit ji can we tie this too

Pandit – yes but only if you want to get married.

Laksh – yes pandit ji I want to get married .

Pandit – so u can tie.

Robin tied thread and after that Laksh tied but thread was short so Ashnita joined her thread and Laksh tied it.

They eat Prasad and they were happy.

Ashu – we should plan something for kanchi.

Laksh – yes ashi but everything is in ur hands.

Robin – Laksh is right

Ashnita – ok ill do something. Now let’s go to Suva City


Precap : Trip to Suva City.
Kanchi dance and Ashi ,Robin and Laksh nok jok.

(Sorry I included my name in this so that I can explain about each and every trip )

Bye take care
Keep smiling

Regards
Ashnita

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NeonNinga

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    10 Comments

    1. shreya on September 24, 2017 5:41 pm

      continue this and bring 2 new Also

    2. Khamoshi on September 24, 2017 6:28 pm

      Ashnita… u are amazing.. hapoy to see ur name in this ff.. i really enjoying Fiji imaginary trip.. plz continue this and bring 2 more..

    3. riyarocks on September 24, 2017 6:40 pm

      hehe………so nice yaar………..luv u dher saara………..

    4. anu on September 24, 2017 6:42 pm

      Nice episode…….

    5. Dhruti on September 24, 2017 7:21 pm

      so ashu finally u r in ff superb he he he
      but yaa it was nice and sweet ff, mind blowing one update next one soon….

    6. Anee on September 24, 2017 7:37 pm

      wow ashu dear amazing dear…u rocked

    7. Abhilasha on September 24, 2017 8:00 pm

      Ashi dear it was really so sweet …..loved it…….and u included itself too….gr8…..nice……..and do as u wish!!

    8. niyaaa on September 24, 2017 10:58 pm

      Finally u r in ff hehehe m just waitting for it actually tumse behter fiji ki sheir i mean kon ghuma sakta h hmein u r good writter gud friend nd guide too hehehee amaz i think tumhe iske sath sath do naye bhi shuru krne chahiye aisa mujhe achcha lagega per mujhe pta h ki tum itne sare ek sath handle kate tired ho jaogi so m intzar karungi pehle ye ff end ho phir new start krna per iska matlab ye nahi ki ye jaldi end kar do no way ….btw epi mindblowing awsome super duper fadoo aag laga di…nd ashi r really hot… Post nxt asap

    9. Amnaa on September 25, 2017 12:54 am

      Its amazing

    10. Jessicca on September 30, 2017 7:46 pm

      Ashu it was superb… What an idea sir jeee… Hehhehe.. Loved it… Amazing.. Keep going dear… Louts of love and hugs to you??❤❤

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