MAIN PHIR BHI TUMKO CHAHUNGA (Reprised Version) [SHOT : 4]

Heya Lovely People !
How are you ?

~ NEW ENTRY ~

PRECAP : Kunj and Twinkle’s faceoff. Twinkle’s disgusting comment’s about Aditi and Kunj. Aditi slapping twinkle out of anger.

CONTINUED πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯° ~ NEW ENTRY ~

AdVi went outside toward’s the sitting area where Aditi left Kunj. They looked at Kunj who was sitting on a corner table numb. His eyes held no emotions but they knew well what impact twinkle’s word might have left on him. His insides were once again pierced with thousand needles at a time.

AdVi glanced at eachother and than sighed. When they thought and was determined to bring back their old Kunj to life twinkle had to return back. They walked toward’s him. Aditi kept her hand on his shoulder to which Kunj spoke without even looking at her.

” I am sorry Adu. I am sorry due to me you had to listen those word’s from her. I am sorry I could not protect you from her wrath that’s why I never wanted to come along you. I know I can never be a good omen for you. See I destroyed the happy moment of your Life. “ Kunj ended with tears finally falling down his eyes.

Aditi fisted her hand’s in anger. Due to that woman once again Kunj was thinking low about himself. She wanted to bury twinkle alive that moment but kept a control over her emotions.

” What rubbish are you speaking Kunj. Do you even realize these word’s ? Her words didn’t hurted me at all cause she meant nothing to me and I expect nothing from her but your words are sure hurting me cause you know I just have you , Bebe , Leela Maa and Yuvi in my family and no one else and you saying these word’s are making me feel you considered me nothing in your life. I meant nothing to you. Not even a friend right ? ” Aditi said remorsefuly wiping Kunj’s tear while sitting beside him.

” Areh…No Adu ! I didn’t meant to hurt you. You are one of the best thing’s that happen to me. You are not just my bestfriend but my sister. Don’t ever think like that and in morning you only said right that I should focus on everyone who is by my side rather than anyone else. Then I promise today. I won’t ever let her become a part of my life AGAIN..” Kunj replied with some different glint of emotions.

AdVi were stunned for a while when said that he was finally ready to move on from past. They knew it wasn’t easy for him at all but if he was willing to move on they would leave no stone unturned to help him overcome his pain.

Aditi smiled and hugged him while yuvi whined in Jealousy ” I am also here in case you both forgot “. Aditi chuckled while Kunj pulled him in the hug to. Twinkle just saw Aditi hugging Kunj from far and fisted her hand’s in anger. She didn’t heard anything nor saw yuvi hugging them.

She left assuming everything not realising what damage she caused by her word’s a while ago. The day she might realise them would be already to Late to repent and realise. The day she might have no chance of holding onto him.

Bebe and Leela came that time finding AdVi and Kunj. They were suprised and confused seeing the trio hugging eachother.

” Areh…Tum teeno yahan ho aur hum tum logon ko dhund rahe the ” Bebe said walking towards them.

Trio broke the hug and looked the Bebe and Leela. Kunj looked away and wiped his tears in attempt to hide them from them but who was he trying to hide his pain ?!

His Bebe……..Who had known him since the moment he was born and brought him up.

Or Leela……..Who had bonded so close to him that one would refuse to believe that they were not mother and son but mother-in-law and son-in-law.

Bebe and Leela were worried as they saw his red eyes but before they could say anything Aditi gestured them to not ask anything as of now.

” Uff…..I am tired. Let’s continue shopping some day else. ” Aditi said as she knew it was impossible for Kunj to continue shopping with them.

” Yeah….Even I have my meeting to attend. ” Yuvi replied covering up Aditi.

” Adu you don’t have to stop your shopping because of me. Let’s continue and I had already promised something to you so let’s continue. ” Kunj said as he clearly understood what his friends were trying to do but he wasn’t gonna let them ruin their happiness for his pain.

Aditi and Yuvi were about to deny him but Kunj glared at them and they went quite. They stood up and continued with their shopping. During the whole shopping period Kunj was exceptionally quite which made everyone worried but he just faked a smile everytime Aditi or Yuvi asked ‘ If he was Okay ?! ‘

As yuvi saw Kunj lost and hurt. He knew he had to meet Twinkle. Hasn’t he suffered enough even when he wasn’t wrong. What more was left in him (Kunj) that she wanted..?!

Alas ! She didn’t knew he was just a dark hollowed soul with no hope to get a chance at happiness.

Kunj was lost in his own thoughts. A delima that had put him between either or never.

His love was overpowering his pain but he knew it was never ending !

She wasn’t ready to give him a chance to explain himself.

He was a culprit in her eyes without a trial !

Irony was………..He was innocent yet he was a culprit !

Irony was when he wanted his family ~ mother , father and his brother to believe him they once again left his side and blamed him instead.

Irony was when he thought love of his life , the reason of his existence would believe him ~ She gave him the death sentence !

She gave their relationship a death sentence.

Now this life was nothing but just a mechanical schedule for him.

He wakes up every day wishing that just for once she would believe him.

Comeback one day and say ‘ I am ready to give you a chance. ‘ but he knew now it was getting out of hands.

Heck…………He didn’t even knew if that day would arrive before he take his last breath.

All he could see afar in his future was just pain and loneliness………..nothing else !

He decided !

He decided to move on but when he did he didn’t knew he had lost that right long back.

Their was something that would forever hold him back !

According to hin reason was different but reality was other way around!

Every moment of his life came with a realisation for him that he might once again face something like past if he would even think to proceed with his life normally. He had left everything to fate.

He didn’t knew how far will he be able to go but he just knew that he will go as far as his life takes him. He have no desire to live or wish for anything but was living just for those who loved him selflessly and stood by his side in those dark moment’s of life where his family and love left his hand.

Amidst this all ‘ FATE ‘ had binded him with a responsibility long back that he was yet unawared of but soon he had to face that responsibility too willingly or either unwillingly. Their was no way he could turn away his face from it.

But that path was going to be much more painful and shattering then what he was facing now. He was to undergo another life shattering moment’s that might break him , hurt him but might eventually heal his wound’s. If not heal those untreated wound it would atleast become the solace for him.

A little light of hope who had taken birth the day his inner self died completely will now embrace his life to revive him.

Thus he decided to move on but when he decided he didn’t knew he had lost that right long back.

Their was something that would forever hold him back !

” Love and Life has always been unpredictable. They are meant to have happy moments but before that some has to walk on the path of thrones. Some walk to bear the punishments of their doings and some people have to accept that as a part of their life………….!! “

Unfortunately Kunj’s only crime was he loved her more than himself and expected those people to believe him who never stayed by his side.

Whatever life brought to him he has has to face and continue walking on the whatever path his destiny mends for him.

On other hand twinkle reached home. Her insides burned with anger as she remembered Kunj hugging that unknown girl (Aditi).

Sometimes misunderstandings leads to broken relationships……………..but sometimes along misunderstanding ignorance leads to a distorted destiny and a forever scar.

Betrayal shatters any individual but giving a chance to know truth depends upon a person.

TRUST : It takes years to build , seconds to break and forever to repair..

Morning turned into Afternoon as AdVi , Bebe and Leela searched through perfect dresses for every wedding ritual. Kunj walked along them and suprisingly participated even though a little bit but helped suggesting them.

AdVi smiled as they saw Kunj involving himself in little thing’s. They wished to see the old Kunj back. Even though his broken pieces can never be mend but he can start over again.

As they were about to end their first round of shopping Kunj received a message of an important meeting rescheduled.

” What happened Kunj ? ” Yuvi asked as he saw Kunj staring at a message on his phone.

” Uh…It’s a message of rescheduled meeting with Mehra Industries. It’s tommorow by 10:00 am. ” Kunj replied as he went through details.

Yuvi hummed in response and they went ahead with shopping. They had their lunch in a nearby restaurant and then continued. It was almost 7 at night when they decided to continue shopping some other day.

They reached home. Yuvi and Kunj went in study room to discuss about the meeting’s while Bebe, Leela and Aditi prepared dinner.

Soon they had their dinner while Kunj barely had anything and left with the excuse of being tired but he was actually tired………..tired of this painful life.

As Kunj’s body fell against the mattress of his bed he felt his body ache. It ached from the sternness he wore everyday , the exertion of keep going on. He was tired , his eyes were heavy yet sleep was far away from those beautiful longing orbs.

Whenever he closed his eyes he could only see her face in his memories. Her beautiful eyes that always made his heart raced whenever he looked into them. Her laughter still echoes in his ears which once used to be his happy solace. Her smile that always made his heart jump in joy.

Everything about her was still afresh and unscathed in his memories just like her harsh accusations that ripped his soul apart. That shattered his inner self.

His inner turmoil killed him everyday. A realisation that she hates him made him feel dead. He died everyday. Every single day……!

But what about her ?

She suffered each day because of her anger , hurt , ego and misunderstanding. She was the sole reason of her own and his miseries.

Kunj didn’t knew when sleep took over him but a different feeling engulfed his broken form. It was as if something was calling out from him in near future.

β€’β€’ BLUE HEIGHTS APARTMENT β€’β€’

As Twinkle was here for a bit longer stay she rented out an apartment. She knew it was no longer easy for her to adjust in a single hotel bedroom. She had HIM along her.

The reason of her existence in last five years. The only one for whom she gathered herself after Kunj’s betrayal.

The one who was to bring alot of happiness to their lives but one truth shattered their reason of happiness. It broke them apart.

Everyday when she tried to forget his betrayal , forget him. There was a truth that hit her hard on her weakest point every single day.

Every single glance of HIM made her realise that she can never forget him.

Every time she remembered that day ~ The day that brought out his betrayal. She felt her inside bleeding.

She loved him so much yet what she was rewarded in return was his betrayal.

Even if she wanted to give him a chance there was prove infront of her site. Those pictures……..that video !

How was she to deny them ?!

Can’t she deny them ?!

But can’t she give him a chance to provide his side of story ?!

But No! Her ego , her hurt , her anger made it impossible for her to give him a chance.

She could not get those pictures and video out if her memories.

So how could she give him a chance ?!

She would never forgive him.

β€’β€’ NEXT MORNING β€’β€’

(PS : Coming scenes are going to be simultaneous. I have used two different colours to make it easy for you guys.)

Kunj woke up as his usual routine with a headache but just like any other day gulped two pain killers and get himself working.

There was nothing new to his schedule but today something seemed different to him. A different kind of aura in his surroundings that were attracting him.

β€’~β€’~β€’~β€’

Under the blanket on the sports bed layed a small petite figure covering himself with a blanket.

To other it may seem that he was being lazy but how can he be when everything about him resembled his father!

His every habit just like his!

He was just teasing his mother and no sooner she was here to wake up her son.

” Sparsh get up. It’s already to late. Mama needs to go office. ” Twinkle said pulling the duvet revealing a petite yet good built figure under the blanket.

β€’~β€’~β€’~β€’

Kunj was getting ready for a meeting. He was dressed in a black tuxedo that hugged his tall built frame at the perfect places as he got ready for his meeting.

His tousled dark brown hair, which was thick and lustrous fell on his forehead making him look more charming and appealing.

His eyes were a mesmerising deep brown orbs, flecks of golden light performed ballets throughout. His face was strong and defined, his features molded from granite. He had dark eye brows, which sloped downwards in a serious expression.

β€’~β€’~β€’~β€’

Sparsh raised from the bed smiling sheepishly. His little eyes were same mesmerising deep brown orbs with flecks of golden light as if performing ballets. They held a naughty shine that once use to exists in those beautiful brown orbs of Kunj.

His small tousled dark brown hair, which was thick and lustrous fell on his forehead making him look more cute and adorable.

A playful smile adorning his chubby red cheeks yet the innocence same as his father apparent on his face.

His features had striking resemblance to Kunj. One that no one can deny.He was a miniature version of Kunj. Be his features , be his strong and bold appearance , be his habits everything resembled his father.

As he was dressed in his casuals. He looked more cute and adorable.

Everything about him was so like Kunj that no one would be able to recognise the real Kunj if not the difference in their age and heights but one was sure that in future their would be another Kunj.

Screen split on Kunj and Sparsh Faces.

Eeeeeeee……!!

So Mr Little Kunj Sarna has already made an appearance 😍

Did you people liked Sparsh Entry ?!

It took alot of time for me to compile perfect words to show Kunj ~ Sparsh striking resemblance πŸ˜…

Are you people excited for what’s coming next ?!

Do you think sparsh is gonna mend the paths between Twinj ?!

OR Story will take another turn ?!

PRECAP : Behind his smile is a hurting heart ,
Behind his laugh he is falling apart.

Let’s meet KS 😜

PS : Sorry for disappearing suddenly but had some personal problems and then a long much needed family vacation and Ramzan came along. So didn’t had time to post.

I am back and having vacations so posting often won’t be a problem but Ineedproper response 😏

Will be continuing INTEQAAM soon πŸ˜›

And…………I have something specialcoming up next 😝

About previous stories I would prefer postingreprisedversion as it would be quite difficult for me to catch on the old version and write both reprise and old one together.

Trust me you guys are gonna lovereprised versions more. Basic plots are mostly same but there are alot of new interesting elements πŸ€—

~ NEW COVER. ~

Ciao gente bella a presto ❀

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30 Comments
  1. Finally you are back
    I was missing your ffs so much
    Wow simply awesome dear
    The whole episode was fantastic
    Totally speechless after reading it..
    I really feel bad for Kunj because he is suffering without any mistake ..
    Wish he becomes normal soon.
    And junior sarna is soo cute ☺️
    Amazing name Sparsh..
    I just hope for the best for all of them..
    Please post sooner next time ..
    And really waiting to read your other stories also…
    Post soooooooooooon… please

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      Glad you like Junior Sarna’s Entry and name 😌 Will post soon ❀

  2. TSY

    Nice episode
    So when are you comming back
    With the next shot
    Waiting egarly
    Bye

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      I am coming back ‘Soon’ 😜

  3. Finally.. you post this story i was eagerly waiting for it…and finally today my wait is over πŸ˜‚

    Loved this part alot especially junior Sarna’s entry😍 akhir kaar junior kunj sarna ki entry ho hi gai…kitna wait krwaya hai is ne πŸ˜…

    Felt really bad for kunj he is suffering without any mistake 😭 even twinkle to is suffering but she herself is the reason of her and kunj’s pain and sufferings 🀧

    I really love aditi’s character the way she handel and understand kunj ❀️ just love her appt and yuvi bebe and Leela too…

    Can’t wait to know how will kunj and sparsh meet and what will be their first reaction after seeing each other’s carbon copy πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Post soon ❀️

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You Maham ❀
      Just imagine Junior Kunj Sarna faces of The Kunj Sarna 😜 It’s going to be fun πŸ˜‚πŸ˜†
      Aditi is my favourite too ❀😌
      Will post soon ❀

  4. Lovely epi
    Post soon

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀

  5. Finally….u r back …
    Aggh i was missing your ff so much ….dude ….aisa mt kiya kr yr ….
    Shot was simply amazing….
    Poor kunj suffering too much because of his luv ….
    & junior sarna aahan …i m sure he gonna mend his parent’s relationship….
    Atleast twinkle should give him a chance yr …not fair …afterall she luv him…
    Post next soonest…
    Waiting for other ff as well….

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      Sorry for making you guys wait but I could not manage timings due to some commitments πŸ˜… Will post soon ❀

  6. Awww 😍
    Lil Mr Kunj Sarna is so cute 😍
    Finally the Junior Sarna is here 🀩
    So excited to read more about the story 😍
    Poor Kunj 😭 He is suffering so much without any mistake πŸ˜–
    My heart aches for him πŸ’”
    Twinkle doesn’t deserves him πŸ˜’
    She should give him one chance atleast πŸ™„
    Oh I can’t wait to read the reaction of Senior and Junior Sarna when they meet πŸ˜‚
    It would be cute ? emotional ? Or funny ?
    I want to know πŸ˜ƒ
    Post soon

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      Face off between Junior and Senior Sarna tends to bring in alot of 😜
      Will post soon ❀

  7. Vibhu

    Hey hey,
    You won’t believe, it’s just yesterday that I was thinking about you and infact I did msg you on your other ID “Aamna2640” to continue this story.
    And I’m so happy that you Posted. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
    Kunj’s condition broke me down too. 🀨
    I just hope all his problems end up soon & he too get some peace & happiness in life. 😘😘😘
    Do make ‘Sparsh’ and ‘kunj’ meet soon! ❀️❀️
    Loved his entry. 😘😘
    There’s a suggestion too!
    You can do one thing. Just take two stories at a time and complete them first.
    And don’t start any new story until you complete these πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
    Well, everyone had to do others works in life too. So I won’t blame you for posting it this late. But it’s just that it’s been long since then I have been reading this story (both old & reprised versions), so focus on completing these old stories first! πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
    JUST A SUGGESTION 😁
    I hope you won’t mind.
    And I hope you had great Ramzan too! ☺️

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You Vibhu ❀
      I did received the mail about your message on my previous I’D but could not login due to certain problems 😴☹
      Kunj and Sparsh would meet soon but not before a ‘Dhamaka’ 😜
      Yeah…………I am not starting a new story any soon. Infact not before I wind up ‘INTEQAAM’. It’s just due to certain commitments I could not manage time ☹
      I love your suggestions and I look forward to them!
      I have no plans for new stories except ‘ONE SHOTS’ or the ‘Previous Stories’.
      Ramzan was great and totally filled with happiness ❀ A sort of best one to complete whole family 😊 Could not be more blessed than this 😊 I hope you were good to all this while ?!

  8. Muhammad Murtajiz

    Welcome welcome welcome…..
    Ek taraf kunj ko twinkle k liye tarpa rahi ho aur yahan hame khud k liye kunj ki aur hamari haalat same hai… 😒😒😒😒😒
    Wese hi hum ro rahe hain aj Ka update read Kar k aur Rona aagaya… 😒😒😒😒
    Well today’s update was amazing…
    Ab please post

    Whenever you get time…. aadat ho gayi hai naπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Hehehehehehe sorry!
      Tbh I cry more than you guys when I write this story ahead and sometimes wonder how did I get courage to make my ‘Kunj’ cry but nevertheless it’s becoming the closest story to my heart I have ever worked on!
      Will post soon ❀

  9. Looks like someone is back with a power pack.
    Oh my God the way you wrote kunj’s pain was so adorable that it touched my heart.
    Twinkle you gonna regret baby.
    Sparsh entry was superrrr sweet & of course he is gonna mend twinj’s path together.
    Excited for inteqaam as well.Keep writing & smiling always.Thankyou for the link.

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
      Oh! Kunj’s pain make me cry but a story has to go on πŸ˜…
      Let’s see if Junior Sarna mends the path or brings the spark 😜
      Welcome Sumo and Thank You for commenting ❀

  10. amazing episode dear please post soon

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      Will post soon 😊

  11. MinionπŸ’•

    Wow amazing story !
    Too much emotional and heart breaking πŸ’”πŸ’”
    Feeling bad for Kunj 😭😭😭
    Sparsh entry is cute 🀩🀩🀩

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀

  12. Secret Admirer

    Favourite episode 😍😍 Finally junior sarna is here πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰ so excited to read about sparsh and hope he makes everything fine between Twinj 😊😊 please post on 9 July it’s my birthday πŸ™πŸ™

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Hey!
      Sorry I missed it ☹
      A very ‘Happy Birthday’ ❀
      Have blessed year ahead 😘
      Lots of Love ❀

  13. Fantastic update πŸ‘πŸ»
    Post soon

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀

  14. Me_rp_27

    Off finally u posted….
    Amazing epi….
    So emotional it was…
    Poor kunj suffered without any mistake…
    That soul is totally broken from inside…
    Arey twinkle was at a situation where she couldn’t think bt his family who lived with him for so many years also didn’t trust him…
    Twinkle also suffered bcz of her own deeds…
    so little sarna took the entry….
    Waiting for next part…
    And plz post other ffs also asap….

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      I agree Twinkle was in a vulnerable state but five years has passed with Kunj suffering πŸ™‚
      Let’s see what happens 😜

  15. Emotional episode 😭😭
    Felt bad for Kunj πŸ˜”πŸ˜” He is suffering so much without any mistake πŸ˜–πŸ˜– He deserves happiness and not this much pain 😭😭 Baby sarna is here 😍😍 post soon please 😊😊

    1. SplutterOfTheDevil

      Thank You ❀
      Let’s see what’s planned for Kunj 😜

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