Heya Lovely People !
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I am back with the third episode of this FS ?

Continued ??

As soon as Aditi announced and confirmed her and yuvi’s wedding venue Bebe and Leela rejoiced with happiness and excitedly started discussing about the rituals. When Aditi once again spoke.

” And today we all are going for my wedding shopping including you Mr Kunj Sarna ” Aditi said with authority as she saw he was about to make some reason to avoid it so she already warned glaring him while Kunj just gulped in fear and nodded his head in yes.

Bebe , Leela and Yuvi giggled seeing Kunj’s helplessness infront of Aditi. In last few years she was the only person who had dared to challenge the authority of ‘ THE GREAT MR KUNJ SARNA ‘ and even won over him when comes to agreeing him on her terms.

Soon the breakfast was wrapped with Kunj barely eating anything to which everyone sighed in dismay but never left the hope to revive their old Kunj back.

Soon everyone got ready and left for ‘ BLUE INDIGO MALL ‘ happy and excited to shop for AdVi’s wedding. Kunj decided to separately took a car for himself , Bebe and Leela to give AdVi some much needed privacy.

But more then spending sometime with eachother AdVi bickered whole ride on the smallest thing’s with Aditi turning her face to other side angrily. As soon as the reached mall and get off car both AdVi started complaining about eachother to Kunj like nursery kids. Kunj slapped his forehead with sigh seeing both acting like kids. Who would say they were about to get married ?

But wasn’t his and twinkle’s relationship same like AdVi and at one point where all they did was bickered at every small thing with eachother yet cared for eachother. All that bring to him was painful memories that pierced his soul.

Kunj gulped his pain inside himself like every other time and decided to mask his emotions for the sake of his bestfriends who were about to step into new chapter of their life and expected his presence along them.

They walked inside the mall with AdVi still bickering over something while Leela and Bebe trying to mend thing’s between them. Kunj sighed and walked behind them. He wished for them to have all the happiness in their life which was snatched from him.

They first walked toward’s the designer section for AdVi’s wedding dresses. Leela and Bebe were helping AdVi select their dresses but all the while Kunj was staring at them from a little far. It was not like he didn’t wanted to be a part of their happiness but he was to afraid that his presence might snatch their happiness.

His eyes have frozen over like the surface of a winter puddle, robbing them of their usual warmth. He’s in there but it’s like he just took a huge step back from life. He wanted to console himself that everything will be okay. But his inner self is shattered badly.

His insides are too damp with uncried tears. He always had pain inside, but now its visible on his face. He was badly broken inside out. He could do nothing but see his life shattering each day to unrepairable extent.

His presence screamed to come at life but his past pushed it away everytime. The darkness around him was suffocating for others but the only possible way of his survival. Thus he was to afraid to live like before again.

Every moment of his life came with a realisation for him that he might once again face something like now if he would even think to proceed with his life normally. He had left everything to fate.

He didn’t knew how far will he be able to go but he just knew that he will go as far as his life takes him. He have no desire to live or wish for anything but was living just for those who loved him selflessly and stood by his side in those dark moment’s of life where his family and love left his hand.

Amidst this all ‘ FATE ‘ had binded him with a responsibility long that he was yet unawared of but soon he had to face that responsibility to willingly or either unwillingly. Their was no way he could turn away his face from it.

But that path was going to be much more painful and shattering then what he was facing now. He was to undergo another life shattering moment’s that might break him , hurt him but might eventually heal his wound’s. If not heal those untreated wound it would atleast become the solace for him.

A little light of hope who had taken birth the day his inner self died completely will now embrace his life to revive him.


After a head aching two hours of meeting and negotiating with client’s regarding their demands twinkle finally came to terms with the client’s she was here to deal with regarding a project and signed the deal.

Once the meeting was over and clients left twinkle to asked her personal assistant to make arrangements for deal and contract papers.

Twinkle finally stepped out of the luxurious conference Hall of the mall and heaved a sigh of content and relief. Her one task and reason to be here was complete and now the only left and most difficult task of cracking the international deal that could straightly changed the destiny of any company who cracked this deal by hundred folds.

But the difficulty and only obstacle was she had to face the great ‘ KS ‘ whom she had heard alot about but never saw. She was completely unaware of who he was ? From where do he came from suddenly and established himself to this extent where he became the strongest competitor amongst everyone else.

Twinkle decided to go and get some clothes for herself as she was asked at the last moment by her company to attend this meeting take up on this deal so she had less time to pack anything properly for herself but more than that her main focus was ‘ HIM ‘ who would surely be in grumpy mood all ready to pounce on her like a little wild cat and give her a hard time to convince ‘ HIM ‘ after all he was another *sigh*.

As much as she wished , she wanted to forget him forever after what he did but it was impossible. Everything about him was now around her in another younger version of ‘HIS’

Twinkle walked toward’s some best designer sections to look at some good clothes for herself and afterwards walked toward’s a men shopping area where from a toddler to an adult all sizes were available. She chose to shop on ‘ The Denims ‘ where from toddler to adult everyone’s clothing was available.

So she got herself on mission to buy some good clothes for him though it was sometimes really difficult to please his choices. He was self obsessed just like him.

On other hand Kunj and Yuvi decided to shop some casual clothes for themselves and let the three ladies take their own time selecting their thing’s. Yuvi dragged Kunj along him to ‘ The Denims ‘ unaware of the storm that was igniting in their lives which was about to hit them.

Twinkle was looking for some nice shirts. She had to always a one size bigger for ‘ Him ‘ cause he was much taller than his age mates after all this was in his genesis. Yuvi was standing a little far from her but did saw her.

Yuvi looked around for Kunj. He was nowhere to be scene. So he called out for ‘ Kunj ‘. As soon as name ‘ Kunj ‘ hit twinkle’s ear drums. She froze in shock , her heart was beating like it would jump out of her ribcage any moment. She felt unknown emotions embracing her but why was she reacting this way ?

It wasn’t necessary that he would be her Kunj right ? She turned around to see but all she saw was a yuvi’s back facing her and he was holding phone to his ears. She could not recognize.

Twinkle shrugged her thought’s and turned around to go for billing and payments when she bumped with a hard and tall figure. Thing’s fell from their hand’s and without looking at her man mumbled a ‘ Sorry ‘ and picked her and his thing’s while twinkle stood stunned realising who the person was. It was non other than Kunj.

Kunj stood up and when his gaze fell upon the person that he bumped into. He stood stunned but his face expressionless. All those memories of her harsh word’s and insults hit his ear drums like rocks.

At that time Aditi came from behind finding Kunj and yuvi. As she didn’t realise twinkle’s presence due to Kunj standing in between them. She casually went toward’s him and tapped his shoulder and turned him around.

” Mr Kunj Sarna. Where were you ? I was finding you and your idio…. “ Aditi stopped in middle as she finally noticed twinkle looking at them and then at Kunj whose face was expressionless but eyes held pain.

Aditi’s face turned red in anger seeing twinkle and she was about to burst out on her when Kunj held her hand and softly said to not make any fuss ” Let’s go Adu ”

” But Kunj…… ” Aditi tried continuing but stopped seeing Kunj nodding his head in no.

Aditi fell silent but glared twinkle angrily. She held Kunj’s hand and was about to go when twinkle held them back with her disgusting taunt throwed at them.

” Woah Mr Kunj Sarna ! You found another sl*t for yourself. ” twinkle taunted seeing Aditi holding Kunj’s hand and taking him from there.

Kunj stopped dead in his track. Tears formed in his eyes and hurt was apparent on his face but he didn’t turned or reacted but Aditi completely lost her temper seeing Kunjzs hurt face and listening to twinkle’s disgusting word’s.

So without caring for where they were or how many people were watching them she slapped twinkle hard across her face not once but twice stunning everyone and shocking day lights out of twinkle.

” Mind your tongue Ms Twinkle or else I know how to cut that into pieces and feed them to dog’s. Even they won’t want to eat that disgusting tongue of yours. How low will you stoop to disgrace a person who loved you Haan. ” Aditi said with utter disgust and anger toward’s twinkle.

” You……How dare you slap me ” twinkle started but was interrupted once again by receiving a slap by Aditi.

” I can do and say zillion other thing’s to a disgusting woman like you but I don’t want to spoil my mood when i am shopping for my wedding. So be in your limits or else next time I will chop your tongue and feed that to you itself “ Aditi replied with anger and then holding Kunj by his hand took him out from the shop leaving behind an embarrassed twinkle whom everyone was gawking as if a cartoon.

Twinkle awkwardly looked around and then turned around to go but was met by yuvi who was standing behind her and witnessed everything and glared at twinkle.

Aditi once again came back and this time said to yuvi ” Oye ! Idiot have you planned to stay here for rest of your life. Ya iski Aarti utarni hai “ said last line glaring at twinkle while yuvi gulped his saliva in fear and silently followed Aditi like a Kid who follows his mother after getting scolded.

AdVi went outside toward’s the sitting area where Aditi left Kunj. They looked at Kunj who was sitting on a corner table numb. His eyes held no emotions but they knew well what impact twinkle’s word might have left on him.

AdVi glanced at eachother than sighed. When they thought and was determined to bring back old Kunj to life twinkle had to return back. They walked toward’s him. Aditi kept her hand on his shoulder to which Kunj spoke without even looking at her.

” I am sorry Adu. I am sorry due to me you had to listen those word’s from her. I am sorry I could not protect you from her wrath that’s why I never wanted to come along you. I know I can never be a good omen for you. See I destroyed the happy moment of Life. “ Kunj ended with tears finally falling down his eyes.

Aditi fisted her hand’s in anger. Due to that woman once again Kunj was thinking low about himself. She wanted to bury twinkle alive that moment but kept a control over her emotions.

” What rubbish are you speaking Kunj. Do you even realize that ? Her words didn’t hurted me at all cause I expected nothing from her but your words are sure hurting me cause you know I just have you , Bebe , Leela Maa and Yuvi in my family and no one else and you saying these word’s are making me feel you considered me nothing in your life “ Aditi said remorsefuly wiping Kunj’s tear while sitting beside him.

” Areh…No Adu ! I didn’t meant to hurt you. You are one if the best thing’s that happen to me. You are not just my bestfriend but my sister. Don’t ever think like that and in morning you only said right that I should focus on everyone who is by my side rather than anyone else. Then I promise today. I won’t ever let her become a part of my life AGAIN..” Kunj replied with some different glint of emotions.

AdVi were stunned for a while that he finally was ready to move on from past. They knew it wasn’t easy for him at all but if he was willing to move on they would leave no stone unturned to help him overcome his pain.

Aditi smiled and hugged him while yuvi whined in Jealousy ” I am also here in case you both forgot “. Aditi chuckled while Kunj pulled him in hug to. Twinkle just saw Aditi hugging Kunj from far and fisted her hand in anger. She didn’t heard anything nor saw yuvi hugging them.

She left assuming everything not realising what damage she caused by her word’s a while ago. The day she might realise would be to Late. The day she would have no chance of holding onto him left.


Pens down for the third shot ❤

Sorry for disappearing for like almost two week’s without an update but my mom was severely ill. So being the eldest daughter I had to follow her duties along my schedule and taking care of younger sibling’s is never an easy task ?? They are such a trouble maker ? They have so many tantrums to throw ? Nevertheless here is the update

How was it ?

Do you liked Aditi shutting of twinkle from saying more disgusting word’s ?

PRECAP : New Entry ?

*Someone’s special requests will be added in next shot ?? Okay that someone is you Ms Taani ?*

If any other reader’s have request they can make other than this ‘ Unite Twinj Soon ‘ cause this ain’t happening any soon *Tight Smile*.

Wait for the thing’s I have planned and enjoy the story as it proceeds ?

Thank You Everyone ??
Thank you for your unconditional love and support ❤ Can’t thank you all enough ❤?

Ciao gente bella a presto ?❤?
Lots and Lots of Love ❤❤

  1. Muhammad Murtajiz

    Amazing episode dear post soon

  2. Awesome episode ?????? twinj scene’s ??????? please please please make them together soon ????????? please please post soon ????? and yes appii please post soon friendship and love.,.. please post soon ????

  3. WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What just happened?!!! :O
    Shuru se shuru karti hoon! I loved the scenes between AdVi and Kunj because they are so cute! This brings a light shade to this story. The way you described his present state was very well written. <3 And Oh! Twinkle ji aa gayin. * Eye roll* WAIT!!!!!!!!!! Who's he???!!! *Eyes popped out* Is he……………………………………….Is he Twinkle and Kunj's……………………son?!
    OH GOD! Ab toh aur siyappa! *Screaming!* Ab kya hoga?! :O I can well foresee the stuff and all the possibilites…… know! (You know,what I know! 😛 ) Ah man!! Till the time I was recovering from this mini shock, TwiNj takra gaye. :O
    Is she the same woman whom Kunj loved like mads?! How could she say so!? If I were there in your story I would have just……..Put here whole life in front of her opened like a book to show the sins she did and they way she was before! Ayi badi bolne waali! HUH
    ADUUUUUUUU! She was the best today! Haye! Kya thappad mare hain! <3 I loved that scene the most! (You obviously know why! 🙂 ) Woh hai na ki shareef ki sharafat ka faida nahi uthana chahiye…….jis din woh sharafat chod de , kayamat aa jayegi! It was sort of that! Hahahaha
    Mera Kunj……………………………. 🙁 Today she gave a tight slap to their once upon a time relationship,their love. God! Can she use her pea sized brain for once……she is thinking so low of him and Adu!

    Well! I am excited for the next part , you know! Kaafi kuch pata chalega!
    Aur yeh kya……….Saat-ghaat/kichdi pak rahi hai , Taani ji aur aapke beech? Hahahaha
    Chain nahi hai inhe bhi.
    *Runs away!*

  4. Please can you post tere sang yara have been waiting for it since ages.

  5. Amazing epi…
    Today aditi had done great job….
    No body has right to say anything wrong to anyone till u know the whole story ….
    Post other ff soon …

  6. Awesome part..
    Loved it.. especially kunj Aditi’s bond❤️ they are so cute ?
    Or bapre ye Aditi kitni dangerous h bechara yuvi kese rehta hoga isk sath ? or kitna jhagarte hn ye dono ? inhe dekh KR to koi nhi keh sakta k in dono ki boht jalde shaadi hone wali h or woh bhi love marriage ? but they are so cute ?
    Or twinkle ke bare me to Kya hi kaha jae ? itni ghatiya soch kabhi kabhi to doubt hota h k Kya ye hoi twinkle h jis SE kunj NE itna pyar Kia or Jo khud bhi kunj SE itna pyar krti thi or aaj ushi kunj k bare me khud itni girl hoi baat bol rahi h? bas itna hi bharosa tha isko apne kunj PR Jo ek jhatke me khatam hogya sirf kuch pictures ko dekh KR or un dono churailo ki baat phir isko bharosa tha jo hamesha SE hi just bol KR planning or plotting KR k inki life me problems create krti rehti thi? or isne in dono ki baat KR bharosa KR Lia PR kunj PR nhi Kia..huhu..and I really love the scene where Aditi slapped her woh bhi ek bar nhi teen teen bar?? bcz isne baat hi esi kahi thi k thapar to parne hi the.. or bechara yuvi twinkle ka gussa Aditi ne us pr nikal diA???

    Wese to mujhe first part me hi laga tha k ye Jo HIM hai na woh zaror twinj is beta hoga or aaj Mera woh doubt bhi saying nikla..ab to dekhna h k jab kunj ko pata chale ga apne bete k bare me ?

    Can’t wait for the next part..plz post soon ?
    Or Tere sang yaara bhi jaldi post KR Dena?
    Or wait nhi ho Raha??

  7. Vibhu

    Ahhhh … Twinj’s face-off finally ????
    Its amazing yaarr
    I hate twinkle for her comment today!
    Oh god .. stupid girl?
    Aditi did absolutely correct by slapping her .. I think she deserves more for all that she did.
    Ofcourse .. I’m glad that Lil Mr. Sarna has joined our FF … Hahahaaa .. I’m looking forward to read his scenes!
    I support kunj’s decision. He should move forward in life. Now, I want twinkle to suffer just as Kunj did.
    She should get to know about kunj’s innocence and then let her regret!!!
    How I wish to see her pleading to Kunj for forgiveness!!!! ???
    Can’t wait to see her reaction when she’ll know who the ‘KS’ is ??
    And yes… Take your time with twinj reunion coz you’ll make it much better then any of ours imagination.
    Ofcourse, I want some intense sense of Kunj in which Kunj saves twinkle from goons or something and even show her attitude ??
    Let The “New” Kunj Sarna show some attitude and all yaarrrr.! Let girls drool over him all again. Let twinkle be jealous of seeing Kunj showing “Zero” interest in her. !!
    Okay I’ve said enough
    Take care of aunty and ofcourse siblings are very irritating at times. PS: I’ve 3 ??

  8. Vibhu

    Please do post ‘Friendship and love’ and ‘Tere sang yaara’ next ..

  9. Fantastic update ?
    Update next soon and also update tere sang yaara

  10. Amazing shot di ❤❤❤❤ This episode made me cry for Kunj ????? twinkle is doing wrong by hurting Kunj ???? she should not be forgiven easily ???? post soon plz plz plz ??????

  11. Amazing shot.. Loved it dear.. Twinkle’s behaviour with Kunj is so bad… she would regret what she says…. I hope their son can change Kunj and bring happiness to him ? post soon..

  12. Wow nice episode ???
    Story is getting interesting now ???
    Twinj’s son will sure bring alot of twist ???
    I hope he will make Kunj happy and back to old self to ??? He is suffering so much and twinkle is making it worse with her return ????
    She should suffer and regret after knowing truth ???? and yes please make twinkle jealous with girls running behind Kunj ????
    Post soonest plesse

  13. Amazing

  14. Another mindblowing fantastic shot ?❤
    It was amazing and a beautifully written ❤?
    Argh ? I am hating twinkle ?
    If this woman can’t trust him she can atleast keep her mouth shut ?
    Moreover who gave her the right to criticise other woman’s character ?
    She deserved more than just three slaps ?
    Aditi was bang on ???
    I loved her ❤ and I wish that ahead to she will shield Kunj and give twinkle some good lessons ?
    That woman has lost her mind completely ?
    Whatever comes in her mind she keeps saying ?
    I am so excited to that what twist Little Sarna’s entry bring ??
    By the looks of story by now it seems Little Sarna is Xerox copy of his father but it would be interesting to see that when the Big Sarna and Little Sarna meets what twists are gonna come ??
    I am already having my wild imaginations but I know yours will be best ?❤
    Now coming to that Ms basher ?
    Ms writer you don’t need to pay attention to her at all ?
    That insane is simply jealous of you and nothing else ?
    We know that whatever you plans for this story will be the best so keep going on cause we will always be there to support you ?

  15. Secret_Admirer

    Aaaaaaah !!!!! It was just amazing ????
    I am left speechless ?
    I am crying ? Why can’t twinkle stop hurting Kunj ?
    Why can she trust Kunj ?
    Is she blind to see his condition and suffering’s ?
    If he would have cheated her then should not have get married to other woman or left her Long back ?
    I seriously don’t want twinkle to be forgiven easily ?
    She should suffer and regret her each word ??
    Kunj is right ! He needs to move on ?
    This woman don’t deserves him ?
    But then I feel bad for that poor little child who will suffer solely cause of his mother and her stupidity ?
    Post soon !
    And bruh I am waiting for tere sang yaara ? post soon ?

  16. Amazing episode ??
    Loved this episode ❤❤
    Twinkle is disgusting ??
    How can she use these b*t*hy words ?
    She deserved those slaps Infact much more ??
    Aditi gave a good piece of mind to her ??
    I am liking her character alot ??
    She and yuvi are so cute ??
    Poor yuvi had to take her scolding’s cause of twinkle ?? I felt bad for him but it was cute ??
    Please post TERE SANG YAARA ????

  17. It was amazing dear ??
    Loved the shot ??
    Felt bad for Kunj ??
    I can’t see him like this ???
    Please make everything fine not as in Unite Twinj soon but Kunj deserves happiness be in it any way ???
    Please give him deserved happiness ???
    Post soon ??

  18. Superb ?
    I am speechless ??
    This episode ended me in two twisted emotions ?
    Anger and Disgust for twinkle ??
    Kunj ?? Why he is suffering so much ??
    I was almost crying seeing him so hurt and on top that twinkle’s word ??
    She needs to keep her mouth shut ??
    Post soon ?

  19. SSK

    Superb, this repised version is so good to read.
    The character of Twinkle, am not liking it and the way Aditi treated Twinkle was well deserved.
    Character of UV and Aditi is really adorable.
    Felt really while emotional while reading the episode.
    Loved it 🙂

  20. OMG ? What an amazing episode ?
    It was mindblowing ?
    I loved Aditi the most in this episode ?
    Those slaps ? Twinkle deserved them ?
    Waiting for the new entry but I guess it’s none other than twinj’s son ?
    Post sooner

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