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Home»Fan Fiction»Mahi Ve !! (a game of love and obsession) by Abhilasha shot 4
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Mahi Ve !! (a game of love and obsession) by Abhilasha shot 4

AbhilashaBy AbhilashaOctober 10, 201722 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys …….first of all a very very very big wala thank you for ur Sweet comments ……I m on 9th cloud reading cmnts of u guys!!
Sorry for being late but my lots of work was pending due to leave!! So just got busy in finishing that!
Well let’s move to story!!
Kaira’s haldi and sangeet ceremony went well ……..
Sanchi was completely broken …..
Sanchi’s pov- why god why……if my love was not meant to be complete then why I fall for him……I lost my love and friendship too…..she cries bitterly !
Ishagya comes there ……
Trio hugs and cries!!
Isha- sorry sanchi we didn’t understand ur feelings and behaved like others ……sorry!!
Pragya- kasam se yar hamari buddhi ghaas charne gye thi be Jo tume akela chord diye…..ab maaf krdo be!!
Sanchi- no guys don’t say sorry ……friendship rule no sorry and no thank you!! Aur mene kam hi aisa kia ta Jo ma…???….
Ishagya- mafi k layak nhi ta!!
Sanchi- exactly!!
Trio laughs!!
Isha- OK did u eat anything?
Sanchi- wo umm….no
Pragya- oh gr8 even I m feeling really hungry ….let’s eat something!!
Isha- I will make something!
Sanpra- noooooo!!!!!!we had very bad experience of spring roll!
Isha- I was just kidding……I have already ordered Chinese food!
Sanpra- hashhh!!
Trio had dinner and ishagya left no stone unturned to make sanchi feel better!!
On the other hand!!!
Mira was restless!!
Mira’s pov- god plzz help me …..I know what I have done is really punishable but I was left with no other option ….I was 16 yr old when I first met kabir …….for him I was frnd but he was my crush and then became love !! I proposed him in college but he wasn’t ready and now when he finally agreed for marriage I can’t let him go!! Sorry sanchi I hope u will understand me!

Kabir’s POV on other hand-
I really don’t know what’s going on in my life ……..I m really feeling bad for sanchi……..but what she did was not right ……but…..oh god plzz help me!! But I have to be strong after all I am marrying mira and I have to do 100% with this relation!!
Next day!!!
Preparations were on full zeal in rathore mansion!!
Mira was getting ready in her bridal attire!!
Mira to herself- after a long wait of those years ….kabir is going to marry me!
On the other hand in kapoor mansion-
Kabir – I m marrying to my bestie but love… I don’t know I would ever love her ……..no kabir u have to do that!!
In mathur mansion-
Jaya- sanchi beta maintain urself …….he is not in ur destiny now forget him if u want to be happy!
Sanchi- maa I promise you that I will forget him but today I have to go there ……..plzz let me go ….I will give up my feelings in that fire of their marriage!
Jaya- but…
Ishagya- aunty plz let her complete her wish ….
Jaya- OK go but sanchi don’t do anything for which anyone ha to repent!
Trio leaves!!

In rathore mansion!!
(For marriage I have included a guest couple rivanya from naagin ….shivanya- by mouni Roy and ritik- by arjun bijlani)
Rivanya- welcome everyone so here presenting our couple of tonight kaira in bride an groom attire!
Kaira came downstairs!!
Shivanya- so my friend mira has finally got someone that too so handsome.
ritik- haww so mean shivanya ….u r praising another man that too in front of ur husband.
Shivanya- oho Mr jealous ……don’t act so innocent ……..I saw u flirting with many girls.
Ritik- OK leave it …..its wedding of our besties!!
Kaira exchanged garlands and sat on seats!
Rivanya- so for now let’s have some Amazing dance performances.
Family of kabir and mira danced!!
After that lights went off !!
Spotlight falls on stage ! A girl in blue gown with black mask over her face is seen standing on stage!
Music plays-
Dard bhara dil mein itna ke
Rone ko dil karda
Tere bina bejaan sa ab toh
Hone ko dil karta

Tujhe chaha Rabb se bhi zyada (x2)
Phir bhi na tujhe paa sake
Rahe tere dil mein magar
Teri dhadkan tak na jaa sake

Judke bhi tooti rahi
Ishqe di dor ve
Kisko sunaaye jaa ke
Toote dil ka shor ve

Maahi ve mohabbatan sachiyaan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae
O mahi ve mohabbatan sachiyaan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae

Kismat de maare asi ki kariye (x2)
Kismat de maare ho asi ki kariye
Kismat te kisda zor hai

Mahi ve mahi ve
Mahi ve mahi ve

Dard bhara dil mein itna ke
Rone ko dil karda
Tere bina bejaan sa ab toh
Hone ko dil karta

Waqt ka karam hai ke tu
Baitha hai mere roobaru
Hai ishq kitna tujhse
Lafzon mein kaise main kahun

Ik nazar tu dekh le vas meri ore ve
Kisko sunaaye jaa ke
Toote dil ka shor ve

Maahi ve mohabbatan sachiyaan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae
O mahi ve mohabbatan sachiyaan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae

Kismat de maare asi ki kariye (x2)
Kismat de maare ho asi ki kariye
Kismat te kisda zor hai

Maahi ve maahi ve
Maahi ve maahi ve

Tujhko bana kar zindagi
Maine toh har pal saas li
Tu faaslon pe hai toh
Door dil se dhadkan hai kahi

Na rahe tanhaiyon ka hai jo daur ve
Kisko sunaaye jaa ke
Toote dil ka shor ve

Maahi ve mohabbatan sachiyaan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae
O mahi ve mohabbatan sachiyaan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae

Kismat de maare asi ki kariye (x2)
Kismat de maare ho asi ki kariye
Kismat te kisda zor hai

Mahi ve maahi ve
Mahi ve maahi ve

Dard bhara dil mein itna ke
Rone ko dil karda
Tere bina bejaan sa ab toh
Hone ko dil karta (x2)
Performance ended girl was revealed to be sanchi and kaira were shocked to see sanchi !!
Sanchi- best wishes to u both.
Kabir and mira were upset.
Marriage was done with all rituals. Sanchi put a bracelet gifted by kabir in fire after marriage.
Sanchi to kaira- I will never come in ur ways…..congrats u both and I will try my best to move on.
Kaira were surprised.
Sanchi left from there .
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Precap- a girl is seen playing with small children in an orphanage home.
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Sorry guys if it was boring because today it was more of pov’s and please don’t throw rotten tomatoes or sandles on me for kaira’s marriage as a twist is waiting.

Keep smiling!!

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    22 Comments

    1. Neha7873 on October 10, 2017 7:34 am

      It was a realization epi … I mean loved the povs of Mira and kabir … update soon

    2. Kajal on October 10, 2017 7:54 am

      U know this is fab as fab. I m crying and regret over cheating and ego of Laura. Pls. Be update regularly I eagerly waiting 4 this.

    3. Priyanshipp on October 10, 2017 8:12 am

      Oh God kaira ki shaadi. Oh no. But I m waiting for ur twist nd turns. Luv u dear.

    4. Sanjukta on October 10, 2017 8:46 am

      Kaira married toh hw it would become a Kanchi ff…?? uff….lots of suspence…dnt delay…

    5. Ruhanika188 on October 10, 2017 8:51 am

      Kaira ki Shaadi.. feeling bad for Sanchi. Anyway excited to read the next part. Update soon. Love u!!

    6. Khamoshi on October 10, 2017 9:05 am

      Abhilasha…we don’t have fear about Kanchi as u r there…hehe
      Amazing episode.. post next soon dear.

    7. yaashi23 on October 10, 2017 9:39 am

      Wow dear amazing,superb fantastic mindblowing ,out of box performance .. luved it to the core dear… i was expecting this song,when u said sanchi’s performance in precap.. i hope kanchi reunite in future.

    8. Niyati on October 10, 2017 9:41 am

      Abhi di…..hum kanchi ke liye bilkul bhi paresha ha…. i know u mend everything very soon….btw episode is rocking especially i like the song mahi ve….u say it’s boring,…..galti se type kar diya aapne…..it’s not boring…it’s rocking didu…..do update soon &lots of love to u sweetie.

    9. Palak.Sharma on October 10, 2017 9:50 am

      Oh no Kaira ki shaddi. Maybe with your leap things will get better. Feeling so bad for Sanchi. But this was great writing wise. Couldn’t ask for anything more, just perfect. you nailed it abhilasha

    10. RuCh23 on October 10, 2017 9:56 am

      Awesome epi ??? I know we don’t have to worry even if they did got married coz Abhi’s the author ??? and somehow we’ll get an amazing story with lots of twists and turns ??? luv u loads dear ???

    11. niyaaa on October 10, 2017 10:46 am

      Hey abhi amaz fadoo epi dear nd rahi baat sanchi ki to tum ho na sab sambhalne ke liye hehehe.. Intersting to read further epi post nxt asap.. Tc dear

    12. riyarocks on October 10, 2017 10:58 am

      Abhi dear…..my frnd cum sis cum mentor……I know, even if kaira got married, but also u’ll surely end it with kanchi in the end…..anyways……coming to the episode, this episode is beyond beyond beyond my words………u r such a flawless witer………..a big waala jaadu ki jhappi & luv u dherrrr saara………..

    13. Tumpamoni on October 10, 2017 11:01 am

      Amazing,epsd..

    14. Trisha139 on October 10, 2017 2:13 pm

      Superb yr

    15. Dhruvi on October 10, 2017 2:26 pm

      No di..it was not boring at all…it was d best!! Feeling bad 4 sanchi but at last they will unite….keep it up….lots of hugs

    16. Amnaa on October 10, 2017 5:55 pm

      Update soon…. Amazing

    17. Dhruti on October 10, 2017 8:56 pm

      it was superb ff cupcake not a boring ff………it was bestest ff……….but bad for sanchi i hope ok i know you will soon unite kanchi and mira’s real face come out in front of kabir soon…..finger crossed…….update next one soon………..

    18. Divya on October 10, 2017 10:26 pm

      Awesome super fabulous feeling sad for saanchi

    19. Moonlight25 on October 11, 2017 1:47 pm

      It was a great epi…just loved it….?????❤❤

    20. anu on October 11, 2017 2:53 pm

      I am feeling really very sad

    21. anu on October 11, 2017 2:54 pm

      But episode is superb yaar

    22. Jessicca on October 14, 2017 5:07 pm

      Abhilasha it was fabulous… Marvelous… Brilliant… Amazing.. Loved it to the core ❤ Superb

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