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Home»Fan Fiction»Maheshwari & Oberoi (Part-1)
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Maheshwari & Oberoi (Part-1)

ManasviBy ManasviJune 3, 201760 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello guys..
Thank you so much for your response on the CS..
Link to the CS: character sketch

So, here is the first chapter.. Hope you all will like it..
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A big villa is shown.. It is written Maheshwari Villa on it.. Let’s peep inside..
A man in his early thirties in a black formal suit was sitting on his breakfast table.. At that time, one girl in a white dress came there and sat..
Man: Ani.. Did you saw for any job??
Anika: Yep Sanskar bhai.. I had applied for the interview..

Sanskar: Ohk.. Where is Somu?? Sleeping??
Anika: Yep bhai.. This girl can never wake up early..
Sanskar: Let her sleep.. She might be really tired.. Moreover, it’s Sunday today.. So leave it..
Anika: Okay.. Btw yes.. Today is Sunday.. Where are you going??
Sanskar: I have an important deal..

Anika: Best of luck..
Sanskar: Chal.. I’m going.. Bye..
Anika: Bye..

Scene shifts to another mansion:
A girl in a formal outfit and a boy in a gym outfit were sitting on the couch..
Girl: Where is Shivaay Bhai?? He took a lot of time.. (she says looking at her watch)
Boy: Dii.. Just chillax.. Bhaiya might be busy in setting his hairs.. He is SSO..
Girl: Rudra..!!
At that time, Shivaay in a formal outfit came down..
Shivaay: Swara, ready??
Swara nodded..
Shivaay: Let’s go..
Swara: Hmm.. (to Rudra) don’t waste your whole day.. Do study too..
Rudra(saluting her): Yes ma’am!!

Swara smiled and left from there..
Shivaay and Swara sat in the same car.. Shivaay was driving an Swara was sitting beside him..
Shivaay: Swara.. Forget everything..
Swara: I want to meet her..
Shivaay: Do you think she survived??
Swara: I have a feeling that she is alive.. She is alive.. She will return for me.. I’m sure..
Shivaay: I hope you meet her soon..
Swara smiled and they both went to their company..
At Karma Industries:
Sanskar was working.. At that time, his PA entered..
PA: Sir.. Today, the Oberois are going to come..
Sanskar: Who will handle the deal??

PA: Sir, Miss. Swara Singh Oberoi and Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi..
Sanskar face hung down hearing the word ‘Oberoi’..
His PA went.. Sanskar murmured, “Oberois are coming..!!” and a smirk was playing on his lips..

At 4:00 p.m. (Meeting time)

Sanskar was sitting on his chair waiting for the “OBEROIS” to come.. At that time, Shivaay and Swara came in..
They got seated.. Sanskar saw them.. He passed a smile..
Shivaay: Hello Mr. Maheshwari.. I’m Shivaay Singh Oberoi and she is my sister Swara Singh Oberoi..
Sanskar: I’m Sanskar Ramprasad Maheshwari..
Hearing this, a frown formed on Swara’s face.. She composed herself soon.. But Shivaay noticed it..
The meeting went nicely.. The Oberois and Maheshwaris were now business partners..
Sanskar: I was thinking to throw a party declaring our deal.. What say??

Shivaay: Well, I was thinking to do the same..
Sanskar: Okay.. The party will be arranged on the day after tomorrow.. I will send you the cards, so that you can send them to your officials..
Shivaay: Thanks..!!
Sanskar: There is nothing to say this..!!
Both SwaShi came out and sat in their car..

In the car:
Swara was driving and Shivaay was sitting beside her..
Shivaay: What made you frown in his name??
Swara: I have heard this name, Ramprasad Maheshwari!!
Swara: I don’t know but I feel that he was mom-dad’s close friend.. You can say, a family friend..!! I don’t remember everything but getting these flashes.. I don’t know what will happen to me..!!
Shivaay: Don’t worry.. I will solve everything..
Swara: I hope so..!!

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At Maheshwari Villa:
Sanskar came at the villa.. He directly went to their study, where Ram was reading some files.. Sanskar entered in the study..
Sanskar: Dad.. I met someone today..
Ram: Ohh.. Who??

Sanskar: The Oberois.. (smirking)
Ram: Sanskar.. Leave them now, Sanskar.. Ani is happy with us..
Sanskar: No dad.. I won’t leave them soon..
Ram: Do you think it will st everything right?? Sanskar, Ani is happy with us.. She don’t even know about them.. Why to disturb her..!! She will be more sad after knowing about them..
Sanskar: I know that Ani will be disturbed.. But people should get he punishment they deserve..
Ram: But how will you do everything?? Only as a business partner, you can’t do anything..
Sanskar: (smirking) I know how I will do it.. Saying so, he kept a photograph of Swara on the table..

The screen ends on the smirking face of Sanskar and the smiling photograph of Swara..!!
Plzz comment down your reviews..

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    60 Comments

    1. Sus on June 3, 2017 11:40 am

      nyc dear

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:23 pm

        Thnks dii..!!

    2. fenil on June 3, 2017 11:58 am

      Great
      Suspense
      Can’t wait for next

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:24 pm

        Thnks Bhaiyu..!!
        I hope you are liking it..!!

    3. Sagithya on June 3, 2017 12:11 pm

      It was nice…. Waiting for the next one.. post it soon

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:25 pm

        Thnk you so much..!!

    4. Lauren on June 3, 2017 12:13 pm

      Fantastic…. waiting for your next updates…..plz post soon…

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:25 pm

        Thanks a lot dii..!!

    5. Jannatul.Nayma09 on June 3, 2017 12:34 pm

      Awesome
      Update soon

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:26 pm

        Thnks dii!!?

    6. Asfa123 on June 3, 2017 12:44 pm

      Nice epi….. waiting for next

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:27 pm

        Thnks..!!

    7. Vidhi on June 3, 2017 12:45 pm

      Waiting… I think sanskar will bring marriage proposal for swara…
      Update soon dear ??❤❤

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:27 pm

        Thnks a lot Vidhi..!!
        You will get to know soon?..!!

    8. Aashi26 on June 3, 2017 1:01 pm

      Fantastic manu di (can I call u that) revenge and suspense loved it….post next soon…

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:29 pm

        Aashi, actually I m only five months older to you?(I checked your profile), so it’s upto you what you want to call me..
        Btw thank you sis..!!?

      • Aashi26 on June 3, 2017 8:35 pm

        i guess i should have checked ur profile…..so i will call u manu….

    9. Brahmi on June 3, 2017 1:06 pm

      Amazing!

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:30 pm

        Thnks dii..!!

    10. sanu on June 3, 2017 1:21 pm

      Nice dear…. Continue soon…i ddnt read the charectr sketch so i hve little doubt….i’ll read that n and aftr that i’ll leave my comment

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:30 pm

        Thnks dii..!!

    11. fffan1234 on June 3, 2017 1:26 pm

      Nice start..

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:31 pm

        Thnks..!!

    12. sneha on June 3, 2017 2:29 pm

      Awesome

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:32 pm

        Thnk you..!!

    13. meera_s on June 3, 2017 2:59 pm

      very interesting..continue soon

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:32 pm

        Thnks you Meera dii..!!

    14. kanfi on June 3, 2017 3:18 pm

      Awwsmee update..
      Loved it

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:33 pm

        Thnks Kanfi dii..??

    15. Kumu on June 3, 2017 3:29 pm

      Interesting..continue soon..

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:33 pm

        Thnks Dii..!!??

    16. Banita on June 3, 2017 3:50 pm

      Ausm….

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:34 pm

        Thnks..!!

    17. Maheera on June 3, 2017 3:57 pm

      Oh my god Swara and Shivaay sibling awesome m hooked up?

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:34 pm

        Thnk you so much Mahee dii..!!

    18. anu on June 3, 2017 5:54 pm

      nyc

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thnks Anu dii..!!

    19. Ankita27 on June 3, 2017 7:29 pm

      Amazing update

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 8:37 pm

        Thnks Ankita dii..!!

    20. alekhika20 on June 3, 2017 8:22 pm

      Nice update

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 9:47 pm

        Thnks..

    21. Seebu_s on June 3, 2017 9:06 pm

      loved it dear

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 9:48 pm

        Thnks Dii..??

    22. mahisha on June 3, 2017 11:25 pm

      awesome dr
      continue soon

      • Manasvi on June 3, 2017 11:36 pm

        Thnks Mani dii..?

    23. mahisha on June 3, 2017 11:26 pm

      awesom
      continue soon

    24. gayathri.visu on June 3, 2017 11:33 pm

      Wow! Awesome dear…

      • Manasvi on June 4, 2017 8:07 pm

        Thnks Gayu dii..!!

    25. Simi on June 4, 2017 5:48 pm

      Loved it ?

      • Manasvi on June 4, 2017 8:08 pm

        Thnks..!!

    26. Febi on June 4, 2017 7:15 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Manasvi on June 4, 2017 8:10 pm

        Thnks..

    27. rockingangels on June 4, 2017 10:23 pm

      Nice story baby sisy…

      • Manasvi on June 4, 2017 11:37 pm

        Thank you so much for giving it a read, dii!!?
        Hope you will like the further episodes too..!!

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 12:03 am

        Obviously I’ll love it silly…

    28. neha on June 5, 2017 9:04 am

      good going..it is interesting…!

      • Manasvi on June 5, 2017 10:08 am

        Thnks..!!?

    29. TanuLaksh on June 5, 2017 3:43 pm

      Amazing and very interesting … continue soon dear …

    30. Neha-17 on June 6, 2017 6:08 am

      Such a fabulous fusion! Loved the update.
      Wow, Anika has a bro like Sanskaar and Shivaay a sis like Swara..
      The party will be amazing
      Post the next soon
      Manu, nice idea.,.looking forward to it

    31. vyshu10 on June 8, 2017 6:17 pm

      Awesome…did swara hit anika with car or something?

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