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Home»Fan Fiction»MY MAFIA KING- AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE…..#Spoilers
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MY MAFIA KING- AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE…..#Spoilers

MeenBy MeenMarch 6, 201728 Comments3 Mins Read
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Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii everyone……missed me???????? ….yeah??????…..but not more thn I did…….I missed u guyz so much……I didn’t wrote anything from nearly one & half month…..it feels shit…….I so badly wanted to write…..but there was something holding me back…..& this training….. Anyways I won’t give u excuses……just know tht without u all there was a void…..Myra,Jess,gauri,sathya,Astha,Roma,sulbi,ana……this one’s for u…….

RADHIKA’S POV……

……….I followed d loud voices….& thn I heard tht dangerous tone..”find her moron…..look around…..I want her back…..did u heard….I want her back at any cost……now Stop looking at me stupids….go & look for her……& yes….if u want to live don’t come back bare hands…..”…..suddenly my feet halted & my breath hitched….this voice……without thinking anything I start moving towards d source of voice….& thn my feet as if of there own stopped looking at d person right in front of me….a gasp escaped my lips….& a hot tear rolled down my cheek ….there right in front of me was standing d person whom I thought was in love with me….d one whom I trusted…..d one who gave up on me so easily…..before I know …his name escaped my mouth in a small whisper…. “Saral…” ……in a sec he turned around ….d moment his eyes fell on me….they widened…& he stopped dead in his track…before I could understand anything……he came to me in 3 long strides & hugged me tightly……for once I was shocked….but then slowly everything came back & another lone tear fell down my cheekd….suddenly I felt weird…. So weird….something inside me yelled to move back….to move away….as if it was wrong……but just when I was abt to move….something happened….it was as in a flash….a hand came from somewhere & pulled my arm with a jerk moving me away from saral….I looked up to see who it was….& thn as if everything froze…….a diff feeling build up inside me….d moment d dark eyes filled with unknown fire met mine…..I felt scared….of something I didn’t knew….his eyes bore in to mine forcing mine to look down…..before I could even breathe I was thrown away harshly on someone….another hand held mine….this hold was firm & tight but unlike d one before……as soon as I understood why was happening I tried to wiggle my arm out but d hold got tighter & tighter….looking up my actions suddenly came to hault there…. Neil was standing looking in front with a dark look….his hand holding mine tightly….he didn’t even looked at me once…..it felt like he is diff…..like he wasn’t d same Neil……slowly his eyes met mine…..there was something in thm ……anger?????…..without thinking anything I silently looked down….looking around I spotted kabir ….his expression were almost same as those of Neil…..suddenly I felt something & turned around…..my heart started beating faster thn ever…..I could feel a pair of dark eyes on me….I gulped down…..how ever hard I try I couldn’t make myself to look at thm……again……I started digging my nails in my palm unconsciously…… There was silence…. Silence before d upcoming storm…..

Hope u liked it…it would take a little time to b back in d form……love u all

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    28 Comments

    1. Tappi on March 7, 2017 12:02 am

      OK the sneak peek was great ,…….
      But waiting for the real updates please write soon .,…..Please .

      Are you updating tomorrow,…it will be exciting…..

    2. Brin on March 7, 2017 12:11 am

      Interesting concept, I’ll be waiting for this story. 🙂

    3. Anu on March 7, 2017 12:26 am

      i am a silent reader but i love ur ff please update it by tomorrow after that i will not be able to read because of my boards exams.But truly love ur ff and ya i should be extra long

    4. Aana on March 7, 2017 12:30 am

      Di… ..Hw r u??? where werewere u????aapko pata hai I am waiting fir u since so long…I badly mussed u nd mafia king…..plzz plzzz aur tym ab mat lagana . plzz post soon….plzzz plzzz….nd ….leave it….

    5. Sulbi on March 7, 2017 12:31 am

      Meen…after a long time… am soooooooo happy to see this…. seriously darling my nerves are getting week… am tempting to read it more and more…. i am really starving for this…. its short but outstanding… am soooooooooooooooooo curious to read more…. am like a hungry lion if you feed me with ur ff i will be eating alot till my eternity…. am so addicted darling…. and thank you soo much for this post…. eagerly waiting…. when you are free update it dear…. missed you alot… tc and love you aloads darling…. muuuuuuaaaahhhh… stay happy 🙂

    6. jabbo on March 7, 2017 12:34 am

      missed u soo much meen…..i was waiting for ur updates….plzz post soon…..can’t wait anymore….

    7. anu-annie on March 7, 2017 12:45 am

      God! Meene is it really you? I cant nust believe. I have been gone for more than two months but i guess u have been long gone. Honestly i have missed Arjun and his Regina. But this spoiler has me in flr it. I have my exam in the morning but i was just savouring the feel of this amazing story. And i am craving flr more. But i do understand where u r coming from. Sometimes its diffucult to pen down something even after being we versed. Some things happen but u no v should never let the bad memories get to us. And the good memories v can savour as we want but lingering on to them and not looking at present isnt a good choice. Okay so i should shut up with my pep talk. It wasn’t probably related to what u faced.

      And i just blabbered a lot. I wanna read the next part soon. Pls.

      Take care. Smile. Love. And be happy.

      Loadsa love. Te amoro.

    8. Jenny on March 7, 2017 1:24 am

      Please update the actual episode soon meen
      … Pretty please

    9. aalia on March 7, 2017 1:55 am

      I’m a silent reader but telling u seriously really love ur update something different something which makes me wait till this 1 n half month again n again check the page…..May GOD BLESS U ……..n plz upload tmrw if u can then mine board exams have been stating I won’t be able to read it so plz upload. …….if u can than….love ur update n the writer too till infinity.?

    10. jewel on March 7, 2017 2:05 am

      meen, where were u?? missed the mafia king badly….. after reading this i can’t wait for the chapter any more…. plz,plz meen update soon….plz…

    11. parul on March 7, 2017 6:10 am

      omg i missed u n ur ff so much just amazing spoiler dr

    12. moni on March 7, 2017 10:23 am

      missed ur ff ver badly. Nice spolier. waiting for actual fun. 🙂

    13. arti viswanathan on March 7, 2017 10:40 am

      Welcome back meen darling… About this episode superb,excellent,nice,good, fantastic,awesome,fabulous,outstanding episode…… I loved it dear….. I liked all the scenes….. I know who saw radhika and her heart started to beat fast… It’s our arjun right…… I missed ur written update meen dear……. Tc loads of love to u from me and teddy hug to u …… Will be waiting for next episode……

    14. RITWIKA on March 7, 2017 12:11 pm

      I missed u n ur story sooooooooo much DI(hope i can call u DI..)……i missed arjun n his Regina sooooo much……plz post the cappy soon…..i can’t wait after reading this spoiler…… Plz post soon….

    15. Bhargavi on March 7, 2017 1:50 pm

      After a long time you have written a spoiler. Waiting for the whole update…

    16. ayishaa on March 7, 2017 6:04 pm

      i really love ur story ??? plzz next post soon

    17. likii on March 7, 2017 8:02 pm

      Meen. ..was waiting for this so badly. …finally u updated but d spoilers. ….pls pls update d next chapy soon. …pls pls n abt dis 1,amazing loved it

    18. Meenakshi on March 7, 2017 8:28 pm

      Meen it was superb cant wait update soon

    19. Kavina on March 8, 2017 3:45 am

      Loved it

    20. Farjana on March 8, 2017 4:16 pm

      Hi meen… missed u so much n our dear mafia king also… I was jumping up n down when I saw ur update… looks like u had a Writers block..we all understand n pls come back to form… abt ur update, y everyone is angry even ever cool Neil n kabir… I’m wondering on what could have happened? Pls update soon…

    21. Devika on March 9, 2017 10:37 am

      Please post soon dear

    22. maddy on March 10, 2017 7:50 pm

      hello..dear..thanks for the spoilers…waiting eagerly for the update dear..

    23. Sara on March 10, 2017 11:45 pm

      don’t make us insane please update

    24. vahini on March 11, 2017 10:58 pm

      Plzz update soon

    25. swati on March 11, 2017 11:16 pm

      hi i m a sulent reader.Please update the chapter today as our holy gift please

    26. swati on March 11, 2017 11:17 pm

      sorry it *silent*

    27. Roma on March 15, 2017 1:18 am

      Awwwww…meeeeennnnn….my lovely princess. …u came bak….I missed u soooooo muchhhh my sweeeeeetheart. …..n this spoiler is sooooo tempting. ….I’m just so eager to read more n more n more……come back soon with an outstanding update. ..as always….I’m hope whatever hurdles u r facing right now…get resolve soon n you get your peace of mind….n lovely smile on your beautiful face….keep it up honeyyy. …I’m love you soooooooo muchhhhhh. …muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hugssss ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ ;* 🙂 ;*

    28. Anu on March 19, 2017 8:59 pm

      Please dear just tell us when will u update now its become quite impossible to hold our ccuriosity.please……update by 22 march please its a request.

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