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Home»Fan Fiction»I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 16)
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I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 16)

SabyBy SabyJuly 8, 201649 Comments7 Mins Read
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Twinj were busy kissing each other and bitruti watching them…. 5 min past but they were not ready to giveup…. Now it was a limit… Bitoo cudnt control his anger and he purposely broke the vase which was placed on the table… Twinj were shocked to here the sound and composes themselves…. Twinj notice bitruti… And feels embarrassed…. And twinkle heads to kitchen… 
K: (hesitating) bitoo…. Shruti…kuch kaam tha…. (Bitoo rolls his eyes and leaves to the kitchen) 
S: (giggling) wese wat was going on here…? 
K: (blushing and touches his lips) vo… Kuch nahi…
S: oh my god Kunj uh r blushing…. Itna that uh r looking like a red tomato…. Heheh…. 
K: I just come… (Kunj blushes and heads towards his room… Shruti heads towards the kitchen and gets shocked…. Twinkle is having a cute baby pout and bitoo in amazed to look at the state of the kitchen….
S: (cupping her face) wat is this twinkle? 
(Burst out laughing) don’t tell me…. Hehehe….. Uh don’t know to cook?….
Bitruti laghs were as twinkle pouts…

Kunj’s room
Kunj is facing the miroor and having a big curve on his face… Touches his lips….
Kunj’s POV….
Wat is happening to me? Y I m blushing like a girl? Many girls have kissed me… Wats new in that? But today y I m feeling sumthng strange…? Even I have kissed her so many times but today’s kiss y I m feeling so special….
I didn’t even forced her, just asked her politely and she listened to me… Y? I m not able to understand…

Just then a girl rushes to the mansion… She is Janet….
J: Kunj…. Kunj…. (Yells) every1 comes to hall….
K: y r uh shouting my name?? Wat happen?
J: Kunj the news that uh r married is leaked…. And reporters are keen to know who ur wife is????
S: then what the matter… Its good they shud know that he is not bachelor anymore…. And married to none other then one of the worlds preetyest model Twinkle…. (Winks at twinkle)
B: its good time yaar…. This is a way uh both can tell ur wedding news…. To the world…
K: no…. Not atall
T: but y Kunj? 
K: (cold tone) I m not at all answerable to uh… Do uh get that?
B: how dare uh to talk to her like that?
S: don’t uh guys even try to fight again… V have to manage the situation….
J: ya Shruti is ri8 but how?
K: twinkle go and change ur attire… Wer sumthng casual…. Janet go and tell tell them the news and we will wave from the balcony… 
B: but y waving? Uh can talk to them
K: look bro, I m puzzled at the moment, plz let me handle it my way, janet uh go…
(Both the girls leaves from there….. Kunj is very much stressed… His hand is on his forehead thinking deeply)
S: ways the matter Kunj? Y r uh so worried? 
K: nothing Shruti……

Kunj’ POV:
Wat to do now? How to stop this? How the news of my marriage got leaked? Wat if she also came to know that I m married? How will I face her? I m just so confuse… I can’t even imagine….in wat mess I have been… 
Thankfully she is out of the country… But wat if she returns?

Just then twinkle comes out of the room wearing a long black skirt and white crop top…
S: (whistles) kya baat hai twinkle uh look so s*xy yaar…. (Kunj’s thoughts get disturbed and he is mesmerised seeing her like this)
B: let’s head towards the teracce….
They all head upwards but all the while kunj’s eyes are locked at twinkle…. 
They both head towards the balcony and looks down at the crowd…. There were many ppl waving their hands, whistling, hooting at them…. Kunj holds twinkle by waist and smiles to the crowd and waves his hand towards them…. Twinkle is smiling and holds him by shoulder from aside and gives flying kiss to the crowd…. While bitoo and Shruti gives a thumbsup to each other and winks at twinkle…

In afternoon
Kunj is in his office working and he gets a video call.
(in the call) 
K: ha maa… kese ho aap sab
B: maa k bache, bebe dikhai nahi de rahi tuje?
K: arrey bebe, me aapko kese bhul sakta hu
B: bas kar ab maske marna
U: kunj puttar twinkle kesi hai, tumlog gaye tabse tune hum mese kisise uski baat nahi karvayi, bas tuhi baat karta hai…. Vo thik to hai na?
K: (hesitation) h…a.a… 
B: (cutting him) chupkar usharani, tuje kya lagta hai, mera kunj puttar apni motguui ka dhyan nahi rakhta hoga, raaj kar rahi hogi teri twinkle vaha, haina puttar?
K: ha…a be..be
U: na bebe vo leelaji ne bhi kabse usse baat nahi ki to vo zarasi bechain ho rahi thi islia. Vese to muje bere betye pe pura bharosa hai.
B: acha sun kunj… agle hafte teri ladli behein aa rahi hai honeymoon k liye or vo bhi tere ghar.
K: (shocked) kya? Kyu?
B: arrey aese kese saval puch raha hai tu?
K: nahi bebe, mera matlab hai honeymoon k liye yaha mere ghar q?
U: arrey kunj humne unko vohi samjaya, lekin dono ki zidd hai kunj bhaiya or twinkle se milna hai… bas bichare luv or khush bhi kya karte to maan li unki baat…. 
B: haa to bas yehi batane phone kiya tha, chal rakhte hai
K: thik hai 
U: or sunnn, twinkle ka dhyan rakhna, vo teri bivi k sath kisi ki beti bhi hai. Chal rakhte hai bye.

Kunj disconnects the call and starts thinking…. And recollects wat usha said and how he actually treated her. and soon he remembers something…

Kunj’s pov:
All the while I had a talk with bebe and maa, they no were mentioned to be away from twinkle. According to twinkle and shruti bebe only instructed then y didn’t she warned me,? as I know her she never forgets anything….. this is a tray and I know who the player…… I m not gonna leave uh today. Just wait for me darling…… smirks

Meanwhile,
Twinkle comes to meet bitoo and shruti but servents tell them they are out for some work and will come in sometime. Till then twinkle admires there house…. The house or I can say the big massive banglow was just amazing afterall they are the best weeding planners and has good taste in decoration and interiors….. twinkle was roaming and admiring the place wen she came acroos a room and she was attracted towards the room as it was too attractive. The room was having a disney look. There were cartoons painted on the walls and had a soft furry bed at the centre of the room. He recalls something but she is not able to remember anything. She remembers some blur images…… 
FLASHBACK––––––––
A SMALL BOY AROUND 4 YEARS IS TALKING TO HER MOM, AND CARRCESSING A SMALL GIRL’S HAIR…. SHE IS ABOUT 3 YRS OLD.
BOY: MOM WEN I WILL GROW BIG NA THEN I WILL BUILD A BIG DISNEY CASTLE FOR MY ANGEL…
MOM: ACHA, SHO NICE. AND WILL ANGEL LIKE IT?
BOY: (TO THE SMALL GIRL) ANGEL UH WILL LIKE NA?
GIRL: NO
(BOY GETS DISHEARTEND… AND MAKES PUPPY FACE… WHILE THE GIRL SMILES BRIGHTLY)
GIRL: I WILL LOVE IT…. (BOY GETS SMILE ON HIS FACE AND THEY BOTH HUG TIGHTLY)
FLASHBACK ENDS––––––––––

Twinkle feels dizzy and not able to understand wats happening with her. she leaves from there and comes to her house. 
––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––

So sorry guys…… Plz forgive me….. Wanna tell uh all 1 thing…. As uh guys know I m in cllg… And has many projects to deal with…. There are 7 projects of each subject was busy in DAT only…. Plz understand guys I m busy… And will b able to post 3 times in a week and if I can___ I will surely post more asap as I get time….. Plz support me….???
Love uh all so much….. Plz understand my prblms………

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Saby

    ?A talkative girl in search of ears to hear,?? ✒️A writer in search of readers to read,✉️? ?A full-time daydreamer, ?A believer in self?

    49 Comments

    1. Sameera on July 8, 2016 6:05 am

      Wow saby nice epii is kunj having a affair who is she he is thinking about ?hope suspense will be clear soon??? superbb do cont whenever u get time love u ??

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:19 pm

        Tysm sam?
        I cant tell uh who is she…. But the it will be surely revealed after few episodes…. Its another mystery….
        Stay tuned darling?
        Lots of love???

    2. Sara on July 8, 2016 6:33 am

      College comes first…even though it will be hard for me to wait for ur episodes I understand ur situation. I am also going through the same….but anyways loved this episode and OMG KUNJ IS BLUSHING!!! YESSSS!!!!

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:22 pm

        Tysm Sara?
        If uh guys support me, I will surely do my bes? Love uh for ur supporting words…?love uh dear

    3. Fan on July 8, 2016 7:01 am

      Awesome epi saby..

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:22 pm

        Ty fan?

    4. Kavina on July 8, 2016 7:39 am

      I loved it

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:22 pm

        Ty kavina?

    5. Ria on July 8, 2016 8:03 am

      It was Amazing..so many mysteries to be unfolded.. who’s Kunj’s she? What is Twinkle thinking about? Why does she have a blur image of the past? Hehe.. I’ll wait for you to reveal everything.?

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:27 pm

        Tysm ria?
        I m glad uh r loving the track of mysteries?
        Love uh dear??

    6. Romaisah on July 8, 2016 8:04 am

      Heyy saby loved this epi year so many mysteries n so many unanswered questions … Btw if u guys have time i have started writing a ff ‘My heart beats for only you’ plzz do support me saby i will be honoured if u read it 🙂

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:28 pm

        Tysm romaisah?
        And I will surely read ur ff….
        Can’t promise… Uh but trust me sumhow I manage to write mine ff so I can surely take tym out to read urs….?
        Love uh darling and all the very best with ur ff??

    7. Zaku on July 8, 2016 8:09 am

      Kunj……:p
      Epi was amazing !!!!!
      Post sooooooon when u r free….
      SUSPENSE????????

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:29 pm

        Tysm zaku?
        I will post asap?

    8. misha on July 8, 2016 8:30 am

      lov yooooooooooooou

      you are great no no super great
      but plz atleast try to post every day
      plz plz plz
      love it

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:30 pm

        Tysm misha?
        Love uh tooooo darling?

    9. SidMin on July 8, 2016 8:56 am

      Loved the episode and want to know who ‘she’ is ?Waiting for the next episode loved it and take your own time .

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:31 pm

        Tysm sidmin?
        I will post it asap?

    10. Purnima.agrawal30 on July 8, 2016 9:41 am

      Nice and awesome epi…kunj ka affair h kya…???nai nai esa ni ho skta…..

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:32 pm

        Tysm purnima? for commenting
        And and and don’t wrry…. Hai ya nahi I can’t say…..
        But but but doesn’t matter after all heroine to twinkle hi hai????

    11. Priya on July 8, 2016 9:45 am

      Mindblowing..
      Tumhare FF ke bina guzara nahi…just loved it..
      Waiting for the next episode eagerly……
      Plz plz plz update it soon..

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:34 pm

        Tysm priya?
        Mere ff se zyada…. Mein aaplogo ke in pyare comments ki dewani hu….
        Mera toh in comments k bina guzara nahi?????

    12. chehak on July 8, 2016 9:47 am

      Omg its amazing. … kunjc she twinkles bkur images nd then she feels dizzy. Awesome…… loving it ♥♥♥♥ dnt know how to express.my feelings….
      nd will eagerly wait fr ur ff

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:36 pm

        Tysm chehak?
        I m glad uh liking the track….??
        And I hope now uh don’t have any more requests of changes needed in my ff….
        If uh think uh can feel free to tell me??

    13. loveleen on July 8, 2016 10:16 am

      oye itna sara suspense….omg omg….ab i m eagerly waiting fr nxt part….

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:37 pm

        Tysm loveleen?
        And janeman kya kare hum bhi toh ek suspense hi hai….?
        Stay tuned……

    14. twinjfan (tamanna) on July 8, 2016 10:26 am

      ohhho too much suspense…n who is kunjs she??amazing.. try to cont asap…

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:38 pm

        Tysm tank?
        Will post soon…. Plz stay tuned

    15. shreya098 on July 8, 2016 10:57 am

      itna saara suspense saby….kunj’s “she”,twinkle’s blur images..
      superb episode…
      just loved it???
      can understand ur situation saby…
      koi na itne ache ff k liye thoda wait to banta h….(though its difficult)… but I understand ….cllgs hectic life..

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:40 pm

        Tysm shreya?
        For commenting?
        For understanding?
        For ur words?
        For ur love?

    16. simran on July 8, 2016 1:00 pm

      Amazing dear loved it

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:41 pm

        Tysm simran?

    17. dharti on July 8, 2016 1:15 pm

      Superb yaar

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:41 pm

        Tysm dharti?

    18. Sayeeda on July 8, 2016 3:12 pm

      Kya tarref karun tumhari ….tarref toh unki hoti hai Jo tareef ke layak ho ..lekin aap neiin toh tarref ko bhi piche chod diya ….Jo shaks tarref ke bhi zayada deserve karta ho usse main kya bolun ….
      Bas itna hi keh skti hoon …
      ” Itni si baat hai ; mujhe tumhare ff se beintehaa pyar hai “”…

      loved ur episode to the core

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:43 pm

        Ty ty ty ty so much sayuuuu?
        Jaan hai yaar tu toh…..?
        Itne laad me mat chada muje…..
        Mein bigdi hui bachi hu…. Demanding ban jaugi…… Just kidding??
        Love uh dear so much???

    19. baby on July 8, 2016 3:28 pm

      saby wow amazing yr 2day i cme 2 no dt u r a di 2 me so di u r amazing luving it pls post asap u cn

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:49 pm

        Tysm baby?
        And I wud like to know how did uh realised it today?

    20. Shamz on July 8, 2016 6:11 pm

      Hey Saby,
      Amazing episode…..
      Loved it to the core……
      I know I didn’t comment on ur last episode as I was really busy…..do pardon me for late comment….

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:51 pm

        Tysm shamz….?
        And its all ok dear….. Uh didn’t commented
        Uh did today it matters me?
        And suna nahi kya k frndshp me no sorry….
        Oh god ty toh muje bolna hi padega???
        Loveuh???

    21. sujina on July 8, 2016 7:50 pm

      i’m so much eager 4 d suspense 2 be revealed…kunj blushing was mindblowing…:-D

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:52 pm

        Tysm sujina?
        I guess uh r new reader… Or new commentor….?
        Welcome to my imaginary world?

    22. Shan on July 8, 2016 8:00 pm

      One more twist in the middle… why kunj is really hesitates to reveal about their marriage…. snehal… its really amazing yar… love you a lot snehal..

      • Saby on July 8, 2016 10:56 pm

        Tysm shan for ur comment?
        And I guess uh have done a quite research to know me….??? Itne eager the to know about me??
        Just kidding dilpe mat Lagana…. Jalli hu thodisi….??

    23. Danu on July 8, 2016 11:09 pm

      Saby it was realy awesome wat if twinkle gets to know kunj having affair

      • Saby on July 9, 2016 7:37 am

        Tysm danu for commenting?
        And we need to wait for that……
        Stay tuned

    24. sidmin lover on July 9, 2016 2:16 am

      Nice epi but smthng is fishy kunj is havng afair plz dnt separte twinj in ur ff

      • Saby on July 9, 2016 7:39 am

        Tysm sidminlover?
        Dnt wrry dear…. No1 cn seperate twinj…. ?
        Just go with the flow

    25. zayb_zikra on July 10, 2016 9:37 pm

      Sabyyy diii m really sorry for commenting late….???
      Plzz do understand ws nt in mood r cn say ws depressed….???
      Ok epi ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it….
      Feels good wen I read ur ff…?????????
      D

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