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Luv’s 1st sec..DevShi-4

HarSHaNBy HarSHaNAugust 10, 2016Updated:August 10, 20165 Comments3 Mins Read
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Pre:”I m not Dev”..A man who looks like Dev said with a evil smile..Mohan takes the Conch n throws for attacking tat man..The new man looking the Conch’s coming in spinning mode..n smiles..

Now….
A short FlashBack of Prev Epis:
Dev tells about the first meet of Sona in Himalayas while she save the foreign girl..Mohan,the HorseMan called by people bcoz of coming in white horse..He is Sona’s bro n very powerful one..Dev comes to meet Sona..bt he goes..A man who look like Dev enters the house..n finds the secret 7..Mohan realised tat ………

Now………Frndzzz….
Mohan throws towards the man who look like Dev..
The man(evil smile) seeing the Conch’s coming..

Outside of the house..People feel the strong breeze ..of Air..

Bt didn’t feel someone is entering Mohan’s house..

No damages in doors…Entering invisibly…

Bt Mohan catch tat Who is entering…

A voice only comes in loud…”7..U know tat now..U want to know the secret”(Pre:Mohan’ s bracelets count is 7)..

Sona (shock):Dev….(while hearing)..

The man(?smile): “Welcome,my Brother”…

Dev comes visible n his eyes full of angry…

Dev (in loud):”Welcome to our Hell”..

Mohan (smilesheroic)….n sees Dev…

Loc:….A place Under Mohan’s house……..
A big room…
A dollar which has silvermade moon n a locket on its end is in hanging mode in the shelf slowly oscillates n the locket opens….
……
……
“Tok Tok”Sound in my back head..I m turning n Surprised……

Dev:”Hey Bro..What is Thiz..I m a Luv king like tiz Mohan….”(seeing Mohan)

Mohan(nods his head):S..

Me:”Bhaiyaa..Trying to made a mysteric story with help of U,Mohan n Sona”…

Dev(zooming eyes):”Where is Luv’s 1st Sec?”

Mohan:”I think U say about “Where is DevShi?”

Dev:”Mohannnn…”

Me:”Bhaiyaa..Just wait..Ur heroic scene is coming”

Mohan:”I think It ‘ll be beginning of luv”…

Me:”Crctly said,Bhaiyaa..Let’s see what happen now”…

Now in ff….
The locket opens in chain ..A very small flower looks like fresh from the lock flies towards Up..
It comes in spinning n reachez Mohan…

Dev:”If U r fast,Just try to chase us before the flower is entering the Conch”(seeing the man,actually his brother)..

Mohan catches the Conch n strts opening it…n also throws the flower to Dev…
While Dev touches the flower, his fingers r strted changing like a firing hand….

Bt the flower is not burning…Dev sees the flower stalk’ s end (a stick like structure for a flower)…It seems like a lock n also needs a key Too.

Dev’s bro still arrested in before Mohan as a Statue..Trying to move…Bt failed…

Dev’s bro escaped by a second of disappearance n goes to own place….

Mohan(thinks):”We ‘ll not make U escape..Giving a chance of living only”

Dev (Thinks):”I want to see Sona again like my Luv now..I want My luv’s 1st sec”…

Dev’s eyes remembering the first meet with Sona…
Dev (in mind):”KShi..”
N sees Sona
….
Sona(hypnotize):Is there any magic from Dev?”

Hope U like this frndzz.. Tanq for reading n write ur thoughts after reading. ..Tanq

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    5 Comments

    1. Manya on August 10, 2016 3:25 pm

      superbbbbb☺☺

      • HarSHaN on August 10, 2016 10:41 pm

        Tanq Ayushi?

    2. Esme on August 10, 2016 7:52 pm

      Dev’s line-i want my luv’s 1st sec……awesome line n awesome writer

      • HarSHaN on August 10, 2016 10:43 pm

        Tanq Esme…

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