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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»LUCKY CHARM (two shots by angel_pari) (Part-1)
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LUCKY CHARM (two shots by angel_pari) (Part-1)

angel_pariBy angel_pariSeptember 4, 201640 Comments5 Mins Read
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Its a morning…..the fresh bright and new morning with a slight rain and chirping of birds and in that peaceful atmosphere a voice echos in the college of mumbai ”THE MOUNT COLLEGE”

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

(boy was sitting in garden large crowd has gathered around him,,,, his head was down but he slowly raise his eyes)

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

(and he caught the veiw of girl…. A girl in pink top and white tights..she was hugging her books and was looking at him only with a sweet smile….and when wind plays with her open hairs that veiw was enough for boy…most mesmerizing veiw…
Then he walks towards her

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

(and he stops just in front of her and stare at her with full right )

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

(and he sits on his knees before her )
__________________________________
(whole atmosphere has turned very smooth and romantic,,,so every one was dancing and that girl dance with another guy as that boy was holding guitar and standing in center…but their eyes were locked at each other)

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..

(and when other guy spins the girl she just came infront of that boy so he give the guitar to boy and turn his hand around her waist and by other hand he holds her hand and sing)

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu..

(both were lost in each other now…..in deep eyes of eachother)

then whole crowd cheer for the most adorable couple of their clg who has just got engaged last night…..
”SHARMAN”

And by the clap of crowd both came into sences and get apart then both got surrounded by their frnds… Girls surround suman and boys surround sharvan…but their eyes secretely look at each other
suman gestured sharvan to go with his frnds we will meet latter
so sharvan leaves with his frnds enjoying
so does suman leaves with girls…….
___________________________________
half day passed both were busy in their classess it was last class suman was free as her teacher was absent but sharvan was hving class so she thoughtt to wait for him in canteen and on her way she cross sharvan,s class and sharvan caught her as he was sitting in front suman smiles and gives him a flying kiss..sharvan,s eyes got widened and he smiles shaking his head…..
___________________________________
suman is sitting in canteen now holding a cup of coffee with both hands lost in thoughts……
Suman,s pov
it has been two years that sharvan has joined this clg…i never thought that we will be together as a couple…but destiny has written our names together…so we were supposed to be together no matter what….
That day changed my life when i was giving my presentation in auditorium hall and my eyes caught a veiw of a tall handsome guy standing at very last i had never saw him in our clg before. I wanted to look at him for long but then i avoid him and focuse on my presentation……and after presentation when i came out of hall some one called me from back ”suman”
i turned with confusing eyes our principal called me and that same guy was standing with him i walk towards them
”good morning sir” i said
”good morning” sir replied
and he introduce me with that guy meet him.. He is sharvan malhothra….he has studied in london but will continue his course here now he is 2 years senior to u and sharvan meet suman she is one of our intelligent and bright student of our clg…
I smiled and forwarded my hand towards him for hand shake he wrap his fingers around my hand”hello mr,sharvan welcome to our clg u can ask me whatever help u need.. my line was continue when period bell rang…
But after class as i,m getting late i wave my hand and rushed for class but dont know what make me look back at him and when i turned he was still looking at me with slight smile……
That was the first time when i meet a boy who was too calm and quite….

To be continue………..

Sooo how was it????? Arey arey relax i,m not gng to put pause on it as it is short story it will got complete in next shot……
And now the purpose of this story is
that my result of 12th standard are declared and i hv got 96% few marks less thn 1st ahhhhh πŸ™
but still i,m happy….and as my all frnds ask for treat then how can i forget my TU FRNDS so this is a small treat for my TU frnds πŸ™‚
and next part will be a eid gift till then tata πŸ™‚

but i really miss u all πŸ™

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    Enjoy life today? yesterday is gone? tomorrow may never come??

    40 Comments

    1. Maria on September 4, 2016 12:28 am

      Wow!! Amazing!! Eagerly waiting for the next update!! Post it soon! And yeah congratulations… Can we be friends?☺

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 10:47 am

        Hey maria!!!!! Thanku soo much i,m so glad u like it..
        I,ll try to post soon πŸ™‚
        sure i,ll b glad to hv a sweet frnd like u…so in which class u r and from where???

      • Maria on September 4, 2016 12:32 pm

        I’m in 11th std from India, Mumbai! N u?

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 1:59 pm

        I,m from pak… I had just pass 12 and now looking forward to MBBS πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • Maria on September 4, 2016 2:22 pm

        Ohh all the best?

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 10:07 pm

        Thanku sooo much πŸ™‚

        but hey r u also beinteeha fan????

      • Maria on September 4, 2016 10:32 pm

        Yes you also?

      • angel_pari on September 5, 2016 12:03 pm

        Yup me as well πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • Maria on September 5, 2016 12:20 pm

        When u post the next part please inform me! And yes when will u post it?

      • angel_pari on September 5, 2016 1:47 pm

        Ammm next part i,ll try my best to post soon.. And if not 15/16 sep pakka :)…and will surely inform u…..

    2. Nikita on September 4, 2016 12:35 am

      Di..!! Wow..
      I mean it was so beautiful..
      ‘Tere Sang Yaara’ hayye..
      Amazing one..
      Post soon..
      And 96% are not that bad.. Hum toh utne 8th mei bhi nahi la pate, you brought in 12th.. Congatulations..!!
      Post soon
      Love you !!
      Nikita πŸ™‚

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 10:49 am

        Hayeeee!! I was missing these sweet cmnts thanku sooo much nikki love u πŸ™‚

    3. Fatarajo on September 4, 2016 1:25 am

      amazing yaar i loved it nikita πŸ™‚

      • Fatarajo on September 4, 2016 1:25 am

        I mean pari πŸ˜›

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 10:50 am

        Thanku soo much farin (i,ll call u farin coz i lov ur name)

        i,m glad u like it πŸ™‚

        lots of love

    4. Zainab on September 4, 2016 2:02 am

      Okay so first of all I can’t get over this sweetest thing I’ve read so far. This shot was truly amazing. I loved it to every bit of it. And then there was tere sang yaara… Ahh I love that song. Really enjoyed reading this. Waiting anxiously for the next shot. ?
      Secondly congrats for such an amazing result ? And thank you for the sweetest treat πŸ˜‰
      Btw where are you from and what’s your age (if you don’t mind telling that)??
      Loads of love. Take care and please post soon ??

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 10:55 am

        Hey zainab!!!
        Omg thanku soooo much for such a sweet cmnt….i,m glad that u like my small treat πŸ˜‰

        well i belong to pak and i,m 17yrs old just passed 12 now looking for MBBS πŸ™‚

        WBU????

      • Zainab on September 5, 2016 12:34 am

        Oh wow great.
        I’m from Pakistan too and I’m 17 years old too xD
        I’m in alevels final year πŸ™‚

      • angel_pari on September 5, 2016 12:04 pm

        Ohhhh from pak πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ nyc to meet u and A levels…great!!!

    5. Fatimagulesarfraz on September 4, 2016 2:09 am

      Hey pari api !!!!
      Well first of all many many manyyyyy Congratulations for ur success ????????✨✨???✨??✨??✨?✨??????????????✨✨✨???????✨? May Almighty Allah grant u success in the yrs to
      come ??? ..
      Anddddd the shot … it was ammmmaaazzzzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnnngggggggggg ????????????
      Don’t hv enough words for ur praise .. seriously !!! Short of words .. I mean how can u .. not only u bt all the writers .. how can u all guyzz write sooooooo well .. if I intend to write this kind of story .. then it will take one year to think nd write such stories .. Seriously !!! m not joking at all … u guyzzzzzz r just amazinggggg .. Hats off to u guyzzzzzz … huge round of applause for u all ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
      Ooops I think mera comment zyada lamba ho gyaa ?? ..
      So in short u r jusssst amazing ??
      Love you ?????
      Post next shot soon ..
      Take care ..
      Nd best of luck for ur tests r exams that u r giving ..
      ??????

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 10:58 am

        Awwwwww my sweetoooo

        missed u yar!!!!

        And firstly sorry as i could not reply to ur cmnt on pre post..,,,.,,,

        thanku soooooo muchhhhh ur cmnt has taken me to cloud 9 (ahahaha i know now u will say that there is no cloud 9 but some how i manage to reach there πŸ˜› )

        and thanku sooo much for wishes stay blessed πŸ™‚

    6. Rukhsar on September 4, 2016 2:18 am

      First of all to congrats for ur result pari btw 96% is very excellent u r such a genious yarr and the ff was epic too good i really like it

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:00 am

        Thanku sooo much naina for ur wishes and cmnt….i,m glad u like it

        lots of love πŸ™‚

    7. sona on September 4, 2016 4:31 am

      Hey..pari…congratulations…yaar….?????????????????
      Lo….Teri..meet ki khushi mey..treat meru taraf sey bhi..????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
      And ha..tof fees bhi..????????????????????????????????
      ??????????????achi lagi..????
      And about..the part of two shot…its..so nice..simple and sweet like you???

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:03 am

        Hey sona di!!!!!!
        Thanku sooooo much πŸ™‚

        awwwwww such a sweet treat loved it πŸ™‚
        and i,m glad u like the part πŸ™‚

        love u

    8. Ariana on September 4, 2016 7:53 am

      Awwwwwwwwwwwww…Sooooo cute shot. The starting till ending was amiable. Just loved it beyond words….Sooo romantic…The guitar nd flying kiss were extra masala to spice the environment up. UHHHH it was fabulous. Wonderful…..Waiting for next part.
      Now, come to reality away from fiction. Congo girl!!! U Made it. 96%!!! See u r sooooooo smart nd awesome. Bight girl keep rocking hard. Stay blessed forever nd keep treating us like this. Keep partying nd enjoy!
      Love u alllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooottttttttttttt
      Huggies nd kissies
      muuuuaaaahhhh
      Take care
      Byeee

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:06 am

        A big huggy to u too sweet heart!!!!!!!!!!

        Awwwwwwwww thanku soooooooo much i,m glad u like my small treat!!!!!
        I,ll post soon πŸ™‚

        and thanks alot for wishes lov u loads and loads πŸ™‚

    9. Laddoo on September 4, 2016 8:59 am

      Pari di!!!
      OMG!!!
      This was beautiful….and my fav song!!!
      I loved this so much!
      And congratulations…96%!!!????????
      No worries di…if u get less than 1st rank…rank is not imp…u worked hard is imp…
      And now u will go to college??????
      Dnt wry…u will top in ur entrance test…
      I loved it
      I loved it
      I loved it so much…..
      Love uuuuu….????

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:10 am

        Omg!!!!!!
        Doll such a sweet suprise πŸ™‚

        and thanku sooooo much for wishes..ahhh yeah i hv to top in entrance… and i,m glad u like the part πŸ™‚

        lov u loads take care πŸ™‚

    10. pretty preeti on September 4, 2016 10:19 am

      Di it was. Supzrbbbb
      I loved it
      It ws took nice di lekin how r u
      Song tooooo gooooood
      96 % wow superb Congo di
      Itna nice gift thnx
      Hme bule nhi very giood
      Lenin aglA itni der bad
      Chal koyi na
      Now my gifts??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
      Love u https://www.google.co.in/search?q=bracelets&hl=en-US&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiz_Oa-n9rOAhWLu48KHVWkBOgQ_AUICQ#imgrc=lJqstU7mGlttkM%3A
      Ur gift
      Love uuuuuuuuuuuuu

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:13 am

        Below reply is for u

    11. Y.balamirra on September 4, 2016 10:52 am

      Nice epi
      congrats for 96 % in 12

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:19 am

        Thanku sooo much dearie

        i,m glad u like the part πŸ™‚

        stay blessed

    12. WeirdSister on September 4, 2016 10:52 am

      Wow…congratulations angel….!!!
      96%…that’s too good…
      U had worked so hard..so this was surely bound to happen…all d best for d upcoming exams…luv uuuu!!
      Coming to d epi..
      It was very sweet nd romantic…
      Loved it..
      Eagerly waiting..
      Plz plz post soon…
      Hugs nd kisses..
      Best wishes..
      Love u loads nd loads..
      ????

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:22 am

        Awwwww thanku sooooooooooo much ws for such a sweet wishes a tight huggy from my side too…love u πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        and i,m sooo glad u like the part i,ll post soon πŸ™‚

        take care πŸ™‚

    13. angel_pari on September 4, 2016 11:13 am

      Me fyn preeto!!! How r u….

      Awwwwww thanku sooo much for such a sweet gifts loved thm…. And love u loads my sissy πŸ™‚

      i,m glad u like the part πŸ™‚

      • pretty preeti on September 4, 2016 11:25 am

        Hey di me fine
        Love uiuuuu
        Enjoy
        College.me ho gyi meri sissy

    14. LogaMegan on September 4, 2016 11:57 am

      Hey pari awesome ep dr loved it
      Eagerly waiting for the next part so pls post soon
      And also pls post ur ff’s next part waiting for it
      Love u

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 2:00 pm

        Hey loga and megan….

        Thanku soooo much i,m sooo glad that u like it..i,ll try to post soon

      • angel_pari on September 4, 2016 2:01 pm

        And ff too

        lots of luv

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