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Home»Fan Fiction»Loving you was red……… Prologue
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Loving you was red……… Prologue

crystalariyaBy crystalariyaMarch 16, 201717 Comments4 Mins Read
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hello everyone, i knw i’ve an on going story but i couldn’t help but write another one, i assure you all that I’ll update both the stories , till now enjoy this one here is the plot with some twist & this is a taarey, swaron & shivika story as my dear friend mahira suggested i should write this one so i’m here & hope you guys also like it…………….

Have you ever felt???
Like drowning under the pressure of holding the things in place
like you were the only one in the battle….
Trying to keep all the relations in place
like holding on a broken glass
Paying a total one sided effort in maintaining the relations
And watch all of it crumble & shatter in front of you
yet you try to hold on the broken pieces
To play the happy & easy going person
When everything is destroyed…….
And one day it all breaks
you are forgotten like a thin layer of air
Like you never existed………………
And then finally to let it all go at once
Instead of crying & cursing & feeling miserable
You feel relieved
Like you can finally breathe
And be what you are for once……………..

plot

somewhere in goa

A girl POV

you thought, i didn’t deserve you because i wasn’t cool enough, i wasn’t a dancer, i was a nobody, you said you loved me but you always misunderstood me, i was always a secondary option in your life, our love was not enough, our love couldn’t hold for long, in my total one sided effort to hold our relation in place it broke somehow at last you labeling me as a clingy person, i hope you’re happy with your dance & friends now, your first priority, your first love, don’t think i hate you or something cause i’ll always love no matter how much you hurt me, you will always be my prince charming & i’ll always wish for your welfare but i will never be a part of your life again, i’m tired of fighting & for once i wanted to fought for but no you always misunderstood me, but don’t worry i’m contend & happy with my life & don’t want to change…………….

end of pov

somewhere in Mumbai ,

a girl was entering a mansion with happy & shy smile playing on her lips, she was so happy today, she got whatever she wanted in her life, her love, a loving family to call hers, caring friends & what not, that’s the benifit of being only daughter of a rich industralist, after all she was Anika Rana no oberoi now, it all come as a gift to her, making her believe in god more strongly, but she was unaware of the storm waiting in her life, she was unaware of the destruction it will cause, she was unaware that her world is going to change for once & all now she was unaware of everything………
how suddenly her world crumbled & she got blamed for something she could never think of doing, the sin she never commited but the punishment she got, even her love with whom she was in relationship since 2 years & married for nearly one year , refused to believe & trust her & all she could think was maybe she never deserved it all, even her family turned their backs on her & no body was their to support her & she couldn’t know what to do anymore, she felt afraid & alone & most of all she felt her love was not enough ……..

this story is about diff people with diff personality diff worlds but similar pasts, similar pain……….

so how is it everyone, pls share your reviews.

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    17 Comments

    1. nikitajai on March 16, 2017 1:20 am

      Interesting one dear… Plz continue.

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:44 pm

        thanks dear i’ll update soon

    2. Quinn on March 16, 2017 4:51 am

      Very much interesting ……pls post n waiting for the story……☺

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:44 pm

        thank you so much , i’ll update soon 🙂

    3. Lilly on March 16, 2017 6:19 am

      Interesting epi…plzz continue…

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:43 pm

        thank you, i’ll try to update soon

    4. shuklarashi on March 16, 2017 8:44 am

      Awesome

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:11 pm

        thank you 🙂

    5. Shrutika on March 16, 2017 8:54 am

      Interesting.

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:07 pm

        thanks a lot 🙂

    6. Shivika1233 on March 16, 2017 9:39 am

      Interesting

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:04 pm

        thank you dear

    7. MahiraKhan on March 16, 2017 10:59 am

      Superb Prologue Akansha…
      I’m eagerly waiting for this and other ff…
      Prologue is superb with mystery…
      Continue soon…

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 6:02 pm

        thsnk you so much Mahira & this one is specially for you 🙂

      • MahiraKhan on March 16, 2017 6:19 pm

        Thanksss for dedicating it to me….

    8. Nita D on March 16, 2017 2:50 pm

      Wow what a start….the introductory lines are awesome….. there is still some confusion but I guess that’ll be sorted out as the story unfolds…..
      Eagerly awaiting the next part…..

      • crystalariya on March 16, 2017 5:58 pm

        thank you , i’lll try to sort out every confusion in the next part

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