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MY LOVELY BIWI…AND HER LOVE STORY!!!- swasan FF(EPISODE-23A)

G.ChanduBy G.ChanduAugust 26, 201616 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hiiii….everyone…!! Happy janmastami to you all…!! 😀 😀 Thank you soo much guys for your lovely comments…!! I couldn’t reply to everyone… but still you people are really encouraging…!! This episode is sooo long and boring…!! So.. I made into 2 parts…!! Please gather your patience…!!

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Link to all episodes: Previous Episodes

Link to previous episode: Episode 22

PRECAP: Sanky’s condition…!! swara missing…!!

SANSKAR’S POV:

“Sanskar…!!” My boss shouted at me … snapping me out from my thoughts…!! I have been called into boss cabin…along with my colleagues for discussion about a new project…!!

“Are you listening to me??!! What are you thinking???!!!” he pointed me in the group… for which I felt little ashamed…!! Seriously…I myself don’t know what I have been thinking..!!

Me: “I am really sorry sir…!! I am unable to concentrate…!!”

My boss(seriously): “It’s ok…!! You may leave…!! Meet me after this meeting…!!”

I left from there…without making much scene… and went to my cabin…!! Resting in chair… I started thinking about yesterday’s night…!! I don’t even remember … when we both reached home even…!! We didn’t talk anything… but just left to our rooms silently…!!

I felt little relieved… after yesterday’s night…still there are things that need to be sorted out by talking…!! But…she didn’t even open the door since morning…. to have a single glance of her even…!! I went to office disappointed… as I can’t waste my one more leave like yesterday… after deciding to talk to her in the evening…!!

‘Why this Kolavari kolavari kolavari kolavari di??!!!’ My phone started ringing…!! Since I met her after 7 years… I kept this ring tone… which indicates my state always…!! I must say… hats off to Dhanush Bro…For explaining men love life in one single song…!!

“Hii Ragini…!!” I lifted the call… seeing the caller name…!!

Ragini(angry) : “What is this jiju??!! You told that…you will make me talk to swara di today naa???!! You didn’t call me till now…!!”

Me(realising): “Sorry…!! I forget…!! I am in office…!! You should have called her naa??!!”

Ragini(seriously): “Do you think… I can’t do it…!! Her phone is still coming switched off…!! I called to her office too… and came to know that she didn’t go to office…!!”

Me(worried): “Yaah…!!I know that she didn’t go today…!! But… her phone is still switched off??!! Ok…!! I will make you talk in the evening…!!”

Ragini(sarcastically): “You have said the same…last night I think…!!”

Me(pleading): “My dear… saali…!! Please spare me for now…!! I am very very very sorry…!!”

Ragini(smiling): “That’s good…!!Ok… bye…ttyl…!!”

Me: “Bye…!!”

I cut the call… and started worrying about her…!! Why the hell didn’t she on her phone still??!! I decided what to do next…!! As soon as meeting got completed…I met my boss

My boss(seriously): “So Sanskar… tell me what happened to you??!! Is everything alright?!!

Me: “No… sir…!! Actually I am not feeling well..!! Please can you grant me a leave for today too??!! I want to go home…!!”

My boss(annoyed): “what??!! Yesterday even… you didn’t come to office…!! You are the most talented and hardworking person…!! I never expected this type of behaviour from you…!!”

Me: “Sir… please try to understand me…!! I know you have lot of expectations on me…!! I promise you that I will never disappoint you…!! But… today I am unable to concentrate on my work…!! Even… if I stay also…I won’t be able to do…!! Please…give me permission to go home…!!”

My boss(thinking): “Ok… I trust you…!! I am giving you permission…!!Next time onwards… I want 100% dedication to your work in office hours…!!”

Me(happily): “Thank you sooo much sir…!!”

I immediately left office and went home…!!

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“SWARA…!!!” I have been shouting like anything while knocking her door…!!Why isn’t she opening up??!!

“Swara…!! Open the door…!!” Is everything alright???!! What happened to her??!! Not using her phone… not opening door… this girl has become an alien…!!

“SWARA…!!” Once again I shouted…!! This time I heard door lock opening sound from inside…!! As soon as she opened the door… she crashed on me…!!

“Swara…!!” I shouted worriedly… while holding her…!! “Hey…open your eyes…!! What happened…???!!” I started speaking worriedly patting her cheeks…!! OMG…!!She became unconscious and her body is burning…!! I immediately carried her in my arms and placed her gently on bed…!!

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“Nothing to worry about Mr.Sanskar…!! Your wife has been physically and mentally stressed…!! And she doesn’t have any energy left in her body…seems she hasn’t eaten anything since 2-3 days…!! Make her eat some light food when she gains consciousness..!!Give these tablets after that food…!!” Said the doctor…!!

Me(concerned): “Is there anything else doctor??!!”

Doctor(smiling): “Just take care of her… give her complete bed rest for today…!!That’s it…!!”

Me: “Thank you doctor…!!”

I paid his fees and he left…!!

I sat beside her bed…and changed the wet cloth on her forehead…!! I started starring her again as usual…!! She is looking so adorable in her sick sleep too…!! I held her checks and started speaking in my mind…!!

‘You know what… After falling in love…you have become the reason behind my smile and my tears too..!! I know things are not right between us…!! But I promise you that I will set everything alright…!! I just want you to be happy always…and I can do anything for that…!! You want to enjoy each and every moment of your life right??!! I will fulfil this wish of yours…!!’

POV ENDS…!!

PRECAP: Part-2 coming soon…!!

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    16 Comments

    1. Soujanya on August 26, 2016 8:27 am

      Awesome

      • G.Chandu on August 27, 2016 3:28 pm

        Thank you soujanya…!! 😀 😀

    2. Rekha on August 26, 2016 8:39 am

      Awesome…

      • G.Chandu on August 27, 2016 3:28 pm

        Thank you rekha…!! 😀 😀

    3. Kakali on August 26, 2016 8:47 am

      Sooo good n cute..loved it..

    4. chanu on August 26, 2016 9:14 am

      hi chandu!!!!
      thank u 4 such a wonderfull epi drl.
      its like a morning treat 2 me.is this epi big? i dnt think like dat.. even if u write 3 tyms bigger than this ill surely enjoy it more.
      & dnt dare 2 call ur story boring bla bla bla ok!? i ddnt gv that right 2 any1 nt even u. so if u talk like dat u cn c real me. 😉
      cmng 2 this epi i lv da sankys pov like always. bt 2dy i felt poor swara. she cnt even express her feelings. she ddnt eat 4m 2dys?? 😮
      hw sad & guilty she is. sanskars ringing tone is hillarious. he he seriously? 😀

      hey i dnt want my sanky 2 give up. he shd try 2 impress her. bt also i want a selfless lv like if she is hpy then i am hpy wala lv. bz f that swara will be impress automaticaly. 😉 😛
      so choice is urs. thum kuch bi liko mai kushi kushi parlethi hu. par mare sanskarko aur dard math do. 😉 (my hindhi is so weak dnt know if it is right or wrong. i learn hindi by watching films) so dnt bother my wrds.
      plz uplode nxt part asap.

      keep writing
      be happy always 😀 😀 😀
      love u <3

    5. anu on August 26, 2016 10:27 am

      nice

    6. SHAN on August 26, 2016 11:52 am

      Wow very nice

    7. niya on August 26, 2016 12:22 pm

      nice

    8. Astra on August 26, 2016 2:37 pm

      Happy krishnastami to you too chandu…. It was a nice sweet episode… Liked it…
      Why dis kolevari di…. Hahaha…. I love that song too….

    9. vyshu10 on August 26, 2016 4:47 pm

      awesome….awesome. Loved it…..plz plz upload d next part asap

      • G.Chandu on August 27, 2016 3:30 pm

        Thank you soo much vyshu…!! 😀 😀

    10. praju on August 26, 2016 6:09 pm

      nice

      • G.Chandu on August 27, 2016 1:53 pm

        Thank you Praju..!! 😀

    11. Vidhi on August 26, 2016 6:48 pm

      Nice

    12. mica on August 26, 2016 9:38 pm

      Chanduuu!!!! the whole of today ff.. this is the one which make me cry !! i dunno why huhuhu
      luv it soo much

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