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Home»Fan Fiction Original»I LOVED YOU ONLY AFTER YOU LEFT ME -4
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I LOVED YOU ONLY AFTER YOU LEFT ME -4

PrincesskrishaBy PrincesskrishaAugust 8, 20172 Comments3 Mins Read
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Girls POV

We walked into classroom, smiling n lost in other’s thought.I stole secret glances of him.I want to spend more time with him,but how could I ask him??I was biting my nails ,it was my childhood habit .I do it when I am nervous. He asked me are u still feeling hungry??I asked him why r u asking like that.He said that I have been eating my nails as I had no food n laughed at me. I replied with sacrasm very good joke,do you expect me to laugh.I went to classroom n smiled remembering his cute smile,I don’t know why I feel his teasing special.I am not sure of what is happening with me.But I let it happen as my heart says so…

Suryas POV

She was so cute,she was biting her nails aww she looked like a baby.I teased her,she’s more beautiful when she’s angry.I don’t know why I’m letting her in my life.I feel she’s so special to me or exactly to say my heart.I didn’t even let any girl near me.but,she even kissed me.I smiled reminiscing our kiss.I patted my head n walked in,when someone blocked my way.It was Jane.she was about to put her arms around me.when someone hugged me n my heart skipped its beats,as it was her.yes ,she hugged me.I closed my eyes .

Ennai kollathey thalli pogathey
Nenjai Killathey kanmani……..plays

She slowly releases hug n Jane gave her a angry look n went away.She asked me,whether we could go for an date??I was shocked.what datttteeee??????

Girls POV

I saw Jane moving towards him,I immediately hugged him to show that somehow he belongs to me.is it so???my mind questioned ,I snapped out of it.I asked him for a date, he was looking at me with shock .I thought he’s going to say no.when I turned back ,he suddenly pulled me n encaged me between him n wall n asked really.I was able to feel his hot breath over my hair.I nodded yes.He gave me a lopsided smile n said yes, I would love to ho out with you.

Surya POV

I was in state of shock when she asked me for an date.Her face fell, seeing me not reacting,so she turned back,I pulled her n enclosed her n said I would love to go with her.she smiled at me….

En kanavinil vantha thevathaiye
Kan vizhipartharkul poguriye

Nan thedi thedi thaan alaizhanchiten
En devaidhaya kandu pudichitten

Naan mulusa ennai than koduthutaen
Ada unna vangiten……

Thanks guys for all ur support.pooja I too don’t know,where tu publishes this.Girls name I’ll try.thanks for all ur support. Keep supporting guys.

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    2 Comments

    1. Tania-the fairy on August 15, 2017 12:59 pm

      Soo much late.I thought u will not post it.It was awesome.update till end.Give a name to the girl.want to know what happend with them.Fantastic,awesome..
      U r a nice writter…

    2. Tania-the fairy on August 15, 2017 1:01 pm

      Krisha continue this..this is amaizing.

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