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love u till my last my last breathe (episode 6) by mehak

mehakchalagBy mehakchalagMay 2, 201734 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello everyone! i m back with my next episode.i m really sorry for late episode actually my 11th class started so not able to write it regularly.but when i got time surely upload next episode…..sorry that i can’t reply to all comments.thank u so much for valuable comments.
Here’s next part-6 of my ff “love u till my last breathe”.
next morning mr.rathore comes to OM with anika.
Mr.r-where r u shivaay?
All members come to hall .
Tej-now what happened angad?why u disturb us daily?
Mr.r-oh!u are saying this u know what i am very busy person.if any person wants to meet me will wait for one week.i am not intersted to talk with u.i just come here only for my anika.
Shivaay-what happened mr.r?
Mr.r-take this divorce papers.
Shivaay-whose divorce papers?
Mr.r-your and anika divorce.i want that anika will give divorce to u.i can’t left her here where her killers r live.
Shivaay-what r u saying your daughter is fully safe here. anika tell him.
Shivaay looks at anika.anika can’t handle all this she run out of OM.shivaay follows her.mr.r is also going to follow her but omru stops him.
Om-why r u doing this mr.rathore u know they love each other.
Mr.r-i don’t think shivaay loves her.i know how he marry to anika.

Here shivaay follows anika.she runs on road. one truck is coming from other side.thank god shivaay saves her.
Shivaay-r u mad?why r u behaving like this?
Anika-what will i do shivaay.i can’t live without u.
Shivaay-fir bhir anika agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh.
Anika(crying)-main kya karu shivaay ek taraf aap jisne meri haar takleef main mera saath diya hain aur ek taraf woh jinhone mujhe janam diya jinki wajah se main yah ho.
Shivaay-anika decision tumhara hoga yeh tumhari life.tum meri jhansi ki rani ho .kamjor nhi ho tum.right.(anika nodes)tumhara decision joh bhi ho anika main tumhare saath hamesha rahoga.
Anika-ok shivaay i will take my decision lets go back.
They both go back to OM.

Mr.r-why r u go like this dear?if something to u so.
Anika-dad i m sorry.i can’t give divorce to shivaay.i can’t.
Mr.r-what r u saying anika.
Anika-Yes dad i m saying right.Shivaay is the person who always support me.He always there for me if i am in problem.He always save my life.He take shot for saving me. he is the person who accept me in front of whole that i m her wife.He is the person who stay away my fear of darkness.he always care me.infact today he again save my life.So,how can i leave him now after having my family back.dad,agar mere paas dil h toh dadhakta sirf shivaay ke liye h.he is my strength.
Mr.r-and me anika?
Anika-dad i love u.but u can’t try to search me once that i m alive or not.no infact u leave india.how can u do this dad?if u search us i can’t live the life orphan.dad,plz try to understand tej uncle and shakti uncle can’t do this.
Mr.r-i know that is my mistake but that incident is happen becoz of them.no anika u want to choose between me and shivaay.
Anika-ok dad i will choose shivaay.
After saying this anika leave hall and goes to shivaay room.mr.r starts crying.shivaay goes near him to console him but all goes in vain.
Mr.rathore-don’t touch me u r the person who takes my anika away from me.i never forgive u never.

He goes from OM.omru tells shivaay that he will go to Anika.shivaay goes to his room.he sees anika sits near poolside area.she is crying.but after seeing shivaay she stops crying and behave like she doesn’t get affected.
Shivaay-anika.
Anika-yes.shivaay.why r u shocked.i m fine.
Shivaay-no i m not shocked i m happy as well as sad.your dad get hurt very much.
Anika-i know shivaay i hurt him but shivaay i know when he gets to know real truth he will forgive me.shivaay i live with him one day i observe he is very nice and He really loves me so much.but ?
Shivaay-i know anika what u r trying to say.its ok i can understand.
Anika-thank u shivaay.
Shivaay- for what?
Anika-for supporting me always.
Shivaay-toh tadibaaz anika mujhe ohh sorry tadibaaz anika singh rathore mujhe sorry bol rahi h.
Anika-main sirf anika aur anika hi rahogi.ok
Shivaay-really.u r also not ASSO .
Anika-yes i m not ASSO and neither ASR.
Shivaay-ok anika.sirf anika.
Anika-yes.shivaay u know what janam mujhe unhone diya h lekin jeena Maine aapse aur sahil se sikha h.
Shivaay-sach.waise tum om banti ja rhi ho.
Anika-kyu?

Shivaay-itne bhari bharkam(heavy weight) dialogue bol rhi ho jaise mere paas dil h toh par dhadakta sirf shivaay ke liye h aur abhi tumne jo dialogue bola woh.
anika-(after remermber what she said )ha woh dad ko apki importance batane ke liye bole tha.
Shivaay-sirf usliye bola tha?
Anika-ha sirf usliye bola tha.
Shivaay-nhi mujhe laga ki tumhe mujhse pyaar ho gya h u know na ki shivaay singh oberoi ko dekhkar har kisi ko pyaar ho jaata.
Anika-main un ladkiyon ki tarah nhi ho.
Shivaay-phir kaisi ladkiyon ki tarah ho.
He goes near her.and pilled her on the wall.
Anika-cheapde kahi ke.(she pulled him away)
Saying this she leaves from there.shivaay smiles.

precap-shivaay’s b’day and romance becoz i write 2-3 episodes with full of pain so i decide to write next episode with full of romance and humour .

how’s that everyone .plz tell m i right or wrong.plz comment.ignore grammatical mistakes.bye.

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    Big fan of ishqbaaz specially SHIVIKA.. LOVE NARBHI'S MASTI.. Crazy fan of NAKUL MEHTA..

    34 Comments

    1. CrazygirlS.P on May 2, 2017 8:03 pm

      Superb

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:23 am

        thank u crazygirlS.P..

    2. Sairan on May 2, 2017 8:07 pm

      Superbbbbb episode

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:25 am

        thank u sairan..

    3. nikita_jai29 on May 2, 2017 8:08 pm

      It is awesome dear… Eagerly waiting for the next update please post ASAP dear…

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:26 am

        thank u nikitajai..all the best for your exams..

    4. alekhika20 on May 2, 2017 8:34 pm

      Superb updt

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:27 am

        thank u alekhika..

    5. Aditi on May 2, 2017 8:43 pm

      Awesome…

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:27 am

        thank u aditi..

    6. Vanshika on May 2, 2017 8:48 pm

      Nice update.

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:28 am

        thank u vanshika..

    7. Ayissha on May 2, 2017 8:53 pm

      It’s awesome…..But translate in English also……I only know very little bit of hindi…. Eagerly waiting for next episode

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:29 am

        thank u dear..i will translate in english..

    8. preethi on May 2, 2017 9:06 pm

      pls write in english

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:31 am

        thank u dear for reading.i will post in english.

    9. Arthi on May 2, 2017 10:24 pm

      Nice one dr…..

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:33 am

        thank u arthi..

    10. Dhar on May 2, 2017 10:29 pm

      Awesome episode ??

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:34 am

        thank u dear..keep reading..

    11. Banita on May 3, 2017 1:53 am

      Superbb!!!!

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:35 am

        thank u dear..

    12. Niriha on May 3, 2017 10:26 am

      Awesome…

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:35 am

        thank u niriha..

    13. lisaaa on May 3, 2017 1:15 pm

      awesome.. plz give in english

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:36 am

        thank u lisaaa…

    14. gayathri.visu on May 3, 2017 3:26 pm

      Very good decision. But I don’t like one dialogue. When Anika says Shivaay is her strength then her dad asked what about him?? Like seriously from which way he is Anika’s strength? Sorry dear if my comment hurts u. But its true. Waiting for next part.

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 11:37 am

        thank u dear..no problem dear infact thank u for telling me my mistake..

    15. tania on May 4, 2017 2:47 pm

      Nice one,,,,,,,,,

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 3:41 pm

        thank u tania..

    16. Ahsana98 on May 4, 2017 4:03 pm

      Mahek sorry for the late comment .It’s was an emotional episode dear. Finally anika choose shivay over her Father. Anika is Right ,she can’t live without shivay .But for anika her parents is equally important. I Hope her Father realize the truth behind the accident and realize as shivay s love towards anika and accept shivay as his SIL .And Best wishes for your plus one .And come back if you get time .I also going to leave TU because of my semester exams. I come back after June last so I really miss your ff .If you post your ff please pm me the link if you have no problem.

      • mehakchalag on May 4, 2017 7:03 pm

        i always love your comment.thank u so much di if u have no icall u di and i will post link to u..thanks for your wishes and all the best for your exams..

    17. Ankita on May 4, 2017 9:08 pm

      Superb update..

      • mehakchalag on May 5, 2017 5:34 pm

        thank u ankita..

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