I LOVE U TO THE SQUARE OF INFINITY (Intro)

Hey here it is my second ff.My first
ff is LOVE OR ATTRACTION still that ff
is going on but i want to write one
more ff.So i write this ff.If u want
to read my first ff go and check browser.
Plz comment if you like this ff or not.

HERE the intro

A big mansion is shown one person
runs inside the mansion and the scenerio
was shocked to that person.There are two
bodies lying on the ground.
The person went towards that bodies
and cries miserably.I will not leave
anyone who is the reason for your death.
I will punish that person who was the
reason for your condition.The person
then went outside and call someone
but when the person return the mansion
got shock.There was full fire all around
the mansion.The person cries miserably.
The person said definetely you
got punishment.I will not kill you
so easily.I will kill you second by
second.I will find your weaknesss from
that i will torture you.You will curse
yourself for your birth.

In other side A man laughs evilly and
said to himself there is no one defeat
me.I am the number one business tycoon
in the city.I am the great Sanskar Maheshwari
got success.There is no one dare to come
near me.No one dare to black mail me.Because
i have no weak point.I must say Mr.Rathore
if you accept my deal then maybe today you
will be alive.I feel sad for you.
There is no one stop me.

After sometime sanskar was driving car
and suddenly some truck came near the car
and hit that car.Sanskar was lying unconciuosly
with the pool of blood.After seeing the scene the
person smirked evilly.There is lonely road.Everytime
sanskar come along with his body guard but today he
came alone.There is no one in the road to help
him but there is a girl who passing the road with her
repaired scooty see the sanskar.

EVERYBODY HAS A WEAKNESS
YOU JUST HAPPEN TO BE MINE

PRECAP:
Revealation of the person and the girl.

Guys done with the intro plz comment
whether i will continue or not.