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Home»Fan Fiction»Our Love Story – Twinj tale (Part 5)
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Our Love Story – Twinj tale (Part 5)

Jiya_AniBy Jiya_AniAugust 4, 201632 Comments5 Mins Read
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Our Love Story (Part-5)

Hey guys remember Sarah is alive but is in Coma.

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“I Love someone else”.. The words of Kunj were now echoing around..
Maira, Riya and Kshitij were looking at each other and then to Kunj..then Kamal Shankar (Sarah’s father).. all were perplexed!!..
Riya was like No !..
Maira was like.. Means The Kunj Sarna is in Love and she even doesn’t know!!!
For once Riya’s eyes fell on Samar..He was Smiling!..

” You Love someone else?!!”..Kamal repeated his words..”Who is she?.., why isn’t she with you?..”…he continued..
Kunj sat on sofa with glassy eyes…increasing everyone’s curiosity and making them a bit emotional.
“Tell…me son..what happened?.. Why are you both not together.. I have the right to know on behalf of my daughter.. Tell me”.. Kamal said.

” I love her..unconditionally… incomparably …I met her for the first time when we 4..(Samar, Kshitij, Riya and Kunj)..were in Bern, Switzerland ..3 yrs back for a concert …

Flashback (no.2)-

The scenery of the world’s one of the most beautiful cities is shown…Bern in Switzerland
(Bern-)
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Its the time of morning.
The music starts to play in BG (The shimmer of Sindhu…plug ur earphones to get a proper feel and imagine what I am imaging and writing).

A flower shop is shown and then its interior is shown-
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.. A girl setting some of the flowers in a vase is shown ..wind starts playing with her hairs..from the window …she smiles ..her soft pink lips are shown.. .keeps a book on the reception..
The cute girl comes out of a flowers’ shop..
She takes her purple cycle with flowers in its basket and starts cycling..

She was wearing –
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Her eyes big beautiful brown eyes are shown..she takes a turn she is cycling on a road with Maple and Flamboyant trees on both the sides..the red- yellow leaves of maple and the red flowers on the green leaves of flamboyant were like welcoming her ….the breeze was flowing making her silky-soft , half brown hair flying.. Her lips are shown smiling..

She passes a fruits shop where a lady in her 40’s was setting the fruits to sell them..
“Good morning Anna “.. The girl said picking a small strawberry basket cycling…” morning TWINKLE “..the lady replied with a smile…
The girl is shown cycling further….Her face is shown ..she is none other than our beautiful heroine..TWINKLE TANEJA…
She now passes by a park where many children are playing… They all wish together..
” morning Twinkie”..”morning.. “..she replied …while cycling further she came across an old couple ..the lady was miffed with her husband… She gave the old man some flowers and singnalled him to give them to her. …the lady smiled getting those flowers.. Twinkle smiled and cycled further…

She came to the main road.. She took a turn ringing her cycle’s bell…but ….

BANG…she hit with a black Mercedes…” Aaaaaa”..she screamed.and broke its headlight as the driver applied break on time..a man in coat came out of another car was moving along with the Mercedes behind it and stood…..She fell..her cycle was damaged..
Just then a strongly built guy came hurriedly out of the Mercedes . he was wearing-
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He was wearing shades..he saw her collecting her things still falling on the road..he helped her in that…he sat to pick her things and they both approached her diary together.. (Things fell from her purse)..they looked at each other…The guy was lost in her..(the tuning.. dere na dere na..of ishq Bulava plays in BG) ..She picked it…while picking she kept on babbling.. He got up handing her things to her and lifting her cycle.. Apologized…
” what do you think of yourself “..Twinkle said
” I am so sorry miss..I will pay for the damage “..he said..
” oh ..thank you so much for your kindness Mr….But I can handle that..You Richies can you see and drive.. What if some infant would have been there..But I don’t want to waste time on you …I am getting late..leave my way”..she said .
“Okay listen..If you are getting late then my driver will drop you wherever you wish..and I’ll get your cycle repaired..”.. He suggested..
Twinkle found him a gentleman so she agreed and asked him to give the cycle where his driver will drop her.. The man singnalled his bouncer and he took the cycle and went to get it repaired…The Guy made Twinkle sit in his Mercedes and left in another car (which was following him )..as Twinkle reached her destination which was actually a studio she came out of the car , thanked the driver and asked him to thank his boss also..he left she turned and found posters of a Rockstar there..
” Why do I feel that I have seen him somewhere “..she said to herself..
She entered the studio and again there she saw some hoardings of the same..
” Oh My!”..she exclaimed with surprise..
“God Twinkle you are such a fool..You met him and made him get your cycle repaired!.. What would he be thinking of you..”..she thought.

” Miss Twinkle.. You are the next..best of luck”..a girl said calling her name out…
“God save me..”.. She breathed

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Hellllo beauties… Sho sorry for such a short and boring update… I would try making the next long enough but I am really busy now…

Do comment pleaaaaaseeeeeee..

Priya and Sidhanshi ….Thank you soooo much darlos for commenting ..keep commenting..

Love you all…??

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    32 Comments

    1. kruti on August 4, 2016 6:58 pm

      Shreyaaaaaaaa……..u described the things so well
      Amazing epi ………can’t wait for d nxt one

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 3:14 pm

        Thank youuuuuu..di
        I will try not to Make you wait ..I hope I get time soon..
        ??

    2. Priya on August 4, 2016 7:18 pm

      hey lovely..the episode is as lovely as ur name
      waiting for the next part

    3. Shatakshi on August 4, 2016 7:35 pm

      Wow shreya
      Thank god I read the earlier episode
      Omg it was so beautifully described
      Loved it to the core
      I hope u r not still miffed with me
      Love u❤❤

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 3:30 pm

        Thank youuu di and don’t worry I am not miffed with u ..akhir candy kabhi sugar se gussa hoti hai kya??

    4. Bhumika12 on August 4, 2016 7:38 pm

      Awesome Episode meri jaan …….

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 3:35 pm

        Thank you so much Darling

    5. Angita on August 4, 2016 7:41 pm

      Great…I’m sure that its gonna be interesting
      Superb shreyuu
      Loved the old couple wala scene and the cycle wala scene
      Images to
      Loads of love

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 3:53 pm

        Thanks angu..I am glad that you liked what I wanted to show…

    6. Aishwarya.twinjfan on August 4, 2016 8:17 pm

      Shreyaaaaaaaa
      Kitne dino ke baat…tum bhi na
      U cud hv uploaded early i am waiting for ff from a long tym.
      Btw i missed u?bt nw u r back?????☺

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:10 pm

        Hey aish..I post quite regularly..with the delay of a day or two that too coz I write 3 ffs of Twinj..may be you missed my post..try reading them..or should I send you links..
        Thanks..
        Love you

      • Aishwarya.twinjfan on August 5, 2016 6:45 pm

        Sure di
        I want name of the ff if u can pls send me the links also

      • Lovely on August 7, 2016 10:26 am

        Hey aish..sorry for late reply.. Busy noon yaar..links for kabhi..abhi names lelo
        Yehi hai Ishq
        A Tale of OBSTINANCE and LOVE

        Google kar Lena..
        Thanks

    7. Sayeeda on August 4, 2016 8:46 pm

      To good episode ….amazing episode Shreyoo….

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:25 pm

        Allle my Sayoo …first I thought that akhir sayoo ka comment itna short!!!..main sapna dekh rahi hoon kya??…
        But I got to know that you met with an accident… please take care. ..agar aap kuch epis main comment nahi karogi ..toh bhi chalega.. But please don’t stress your hand..I won’t mind at all if you don’t comment.. Take proper rest..have things which can give relief to you jaise for me ice-cream …jab main injured hoti hoon..jaise abhi..I am sitting with a sprain in my leg???…hehe..I get injured quite frequently..like last week my right hand was suffering from strain…hehe..aise main ice cream khate hi mazaa aata hai…try kar ke dekhnaaa…..
        Get well soon..and yes injury hai ..Chalo jaayegi..aur naa jaaye..toh..
        Uda Dena????…dhichkiayon..
        Thanks for commentingcommenting

        Love you???????

      • Aishwarya.twinjfan on August 5, 2016 6:48 pm

        Aww sayu di
        Get well soon nd post ur epis quickly.
        Waiting for them.
        Luv u????

    8. bulbul23 on August 4, 2016 9:17 pm

      Superb superb superb it was lovely just like u

      And amazing episode pl pl pl post soon

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:28 pm

        Awwwwww…thank you soooo much

    9. Monica on August 4, 2016 9:54 pm

      It was amazing.. Continue soon x

    10. baby on August 4, 2016 10:54 pm

      oh god amazing lovely dear sooooooooooo sweet episode d description d pictures evrything was jst amazing post nxt asap dear n get well soon

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:41 pm

        Hey babes..thank you soooooo much

    11. sarswati suryawanshi on August 4, 2016 11:02 pm

      can anyone tell me why ff are not being uploaded? what is the problem…

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 3:16 pm

        Hello Sarswati…Its the change done by the site that from now only registered members will be able to post …
        So if you wish to post then get registered.. Then login before you submit..
        Regards

    12. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 4, 2016 11:53 pm

      awesome amazing

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:57 pm

        Thanks puru

    13. Romaisha on August 5, 2016 2:11 am

      Amazing epi yaar enjoyed it loads ✌✌✌

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:55 pm

        Thanks

    14. Sidhanshi on August 5, 2016 9:04 am

      Lovely episode

    15. Jisha on August 5, 2016 1:07 pm

      Wow shreya… sweet n cute episode…ur description were superb…

      • Lovely on August 5, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thanks di

    16. dreamer..arundhati on August 5, 2016 2:16 pm

      Wow shreyu osum

    17. sujina on August 6, 2016 3:12 pm

      cute epi n plot is so cool n do post asap…wai8in 4 twinj meeting n yes moments..

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