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Love story in Heaven part 9

…Hey guys ridhima is back again….
I m really very sry for making u ppl w8 for soo long… ??… bt i was busy na…nd i love each nd every comment of urs….
Sry for nt replying it individually bt now i will try to reply from today onwards…??….

Amaya- thanks dr…nd i love to read ur comment…?
Ria- i loved ur cment soo much dr… nd thanks for giving rose…u r the first one??… wat can i do for u to return the favour…nd also..yar mujhe ek baat samaj nhi ayu u said u forget wat u was reading??? Sry i m lallu…??

Zikra,sam, twinjfan( tamana), varshini, aastha- thank u all of u for commenting guys…i love u all…muaaaahhhhh..??…
Shreya- thank u soo much dear…nd i love u too… i m glad u liked it…nd also… we r two who r sailing in same boat… i will give u rose…u give me…??
Sasmera- thank u dr….and thanks for bringing a 109 volt smile on my face bcz of ur lovely cmment ….nd i must say ur question was a inteligent one…i will reply it today in the epi…??…
Crazy- i m impressed of myself….maine crazy ko apna crazy fan bna liya…i m soo good…hahhaha….on a serious note thanks dr…. this was really a big achievement as i know tat u r soo much good writer…. love u…

Sayeeda- apko toh kya kahon….ur cmment make me blush everytym….haye…??…
I keep on searching ur cmment…??…. bt seriously… nd really thanks for the appreciation u gave me….nd also i will never be tired of reading ur long cmments infact i wud love to read them….( ab apni tareef toh sabko pasand hoti hai…)..
Fiona- thank u sooooooooo much dr…. i love u… and abt hardwok it gets payed off reading such a beautiful cmment…nd really sry i wss nt able to fulfilll ur demand of posting daily…nd i missd u too…
Panchi- diii mujhe bhi nhi pta aise ideas mere dimag mein ate kahan se hai…??… vaise thank u sooo much for such a lovely cmment…. love u

Dreamer- hehe…yaar dimag hi hai….??..nd really thanks for appreciation… i m glad u liked it…nd also
.Nd also thanks to my silent readers…( if any)..
GUYS VAISE WANTED TO SAY….MERI EK LINE NE MUJHE KITNE SAARE ROSES, CHOCOLATES, HUGS DI NA…I ENJOYED IT A LOT…. I WAS LITERALLY JUMPING READING UR COMMENTS…. THANK U ALL SOO MUCH…

Ab isse pta chl hi gya aap logo..ko ki main kitni badi chatter box hoon…??…
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I m really sry guys on the behalf of my dumbo friend…she posted my os widout my consent…i know i shud have nt posted it as it was nt mine idea…. really sry… even i shud nt hve witten it bt that song is soo magical..tat i was nt able to stop myself….bt my stupid friend got my phone smehow nd she posted it…really sry….??…

Vaise i m inviting u to her funeral…. 2morow…. aftr she cme back from her nani’s place…??..
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Part 9

Here we go…

The scene started where it ends…. after god entering the heaven…. twinj were amazed to see god nd themselves….
( god ka pta nhi…apne aap ko dekh ke zyada shocked the…??)

God- wat the hell is this wat u both have done????
Now twinj were shocked to see his anger….
Kunj- wo….wo…
God cuts him off….
God( dramatically)- shadi kr li aur bulaya bhi nhi..( done wid the marriage bt not called me)…
Twinj were abt to say smething bt on hearing word shadi( marriage)… boths mouth opens wide nd eyes almost popped out of sockets….
Twinj- shadi….????? Kisne ki shadi?????
God-… u both…
Twinj – we??? Wen ??? Where??? Hw???
Twinj see eo in utter shock…nd also like why are u repeating my words look..

God- haan u both… now …. here in heaven….( pauses)…
Nd angel from behind…
Angel- god the last questions answer is left that is how…
God looks angrily towards her…
God- do u know much more than me???

Angel nods no nd goes behind….
Tw- bt god g she is correct….
God- abe koi mujhe bhi bolne dooo.( are smeone plz let me speak)….
Kunj- speak speak….
God was abt to speak smething..bt tw
Tw- ab plz speak smething na…
God( shouts)- oye speaking na firstally u shut up…okk???
Tw jst nods nd kept quite…
God- this garland of rose is given by kunj to u???
Tw nods innocently…
God- u both accepted eo wid all ur will…
Twinj nods…
God- so ur clothes also get changed….
Twinj nod their heads vigrously as children….
Hehe…
God- so this is a sign tat u both are married now… jst think wat is most important in marriage tat pheras, sindoor., exchanging of rings, or signatures in court…. i will say nothing among them…. the most important thing is to find a soulmate… if u find a true soulmate…u may get a lot of troubles in ur life bt u will always gain energy, strength to overcome it….
Wen one is in the problem other one will be always their to handle me… according to me this is the real meaning of marriage… wat u ppl do is also a necessity as it shows tat u ppl are married otherwise itne serials mein itne saare mmry loss hote na toh pta hi na chale ki kaun kiska hai…??….
Jokes apart….it is a custom…so in heaven their is a custom of rose garland which u already did… nd these clothes changed na…it means u r nt the mates for this one or next birth.. it means u r partners in every life… nd marriage in heaven is the most pious one… as it is the place where u will find only good….
Twinj- r u nt angry wid us????

God- no my child.. hw can a father be angry wid his own children for long… he can be rude to make his children on right path… bt if they r on right path nd also are happy then i m no one to take away their happiness… i know i give pain to u ppl… bt widout getting pain hw will u know the importance of happiness… saying this god came in front of them d put his hands on their heads nd blesses them….
(GOD IS GREAT… ??)….

Twinj see eo in extreme happiness….nd then they hugged god….( Kya ?? Kya ?? Kya??… bt ab toh yeh ho gya….yaar vaise kitne daring hai yeh dono…)…

Then they took blessings of everyone in heaven all shower their love on them in the form of flowers…. our twinj were having a 100 V smile on their face…almost giving the ad of colgate…hehe..??…

Then all leaves from their… only twinj nd god are left…
God – so know u r married so next is tat…
Kunj cuts him off – honeymoon… ( he smiled ) while tw narrwed her eyes…
God- yeah honeymoon bt the honeymoon of heaven is quite different one…
Kunj-( not in senses)… – honeymoon mil rha hai na that is enough…..
God- ya bt ur honeymoon is to hell….
Kunj came back to earth….sry sry heeaven?…
Kunj- kya?????

God- haan…actually u both married so u have to pprove urself capable of eo…
Kunj- is it a test???
God – ya a sort of…
Kunj( making a crying face).- aap test lete thakte nhi…( dont u get tired of taking tests).. u behave like those teachers who enters the class wid surprise tst as a substitute to the absent teacher… hamesha khushi mein test ghusa dete ho….( almost crying..??)…
God – plz dont emotional blackmail me…u have to give the test means u have to….
Tw- okk baba g jaisi thohadi marzi( as ur wish)….

Then twinj left the place…
kunj was looking sad…
tw – its ok kunj… we will pass it nd also… we will be able to spend tym na so chill…
kunj- wat chill tw…u know in my life their is no romance….
tw- as if u r having life??? ??
kunj- okkk even my soul…see i thought of pre marriage romance bt meri shaadi ho gyi mujhe pta hi nhi chala.. nd honeymoon toh is unique to the hell…huh…( he pouts)…
Tw pecks his pouted lips…kunj gets shocked bt then happy nd forgets eveything…. they both went to their respective room nd dozes off thinking of eo…

@ Earth….

In the taneja mansion…
leela, usha nd yuvraj were sitting in the hall…
Yuvraj- aunty g yeh kaise ho gya..i mean kunj or tw…jab mujhe pta chala i came here…( nd cries)..
Leela- pta nhi puttar mere hasde khed de parivar nu kidhi nazar lg gyi….( dont know puttar.. whose black eye disturbed my house…?)..

Yuvraj- everything will be fine aunty..u dont worry i m here na ur child, ur son… both leela nd usha kept their hands on yuvi’s head nd blesses him….
They talk for smetym… later uv excuses himself for using washroom… he went to tw’s room…
He locked the room… nd went near her table…
He opened the drawer and take out dairy from their nd opened the diary… he took one photo out of it nd smiles evilly….

That picture was pf twinj…. he took out the lighter from his pants pocket… nd brought it near the pic…. the picture catch fire… nw kunj’s photo was burned… he tried to estinguish the fire bt it ws too late…tw’s photo also burned along…
Uv- see heree also i tried to burn him bt u get burned along wid baby… and in reality also… u know i cant see u wid him… i will make u minemmm i will cme to heaven to meet u bby…

( abe muli hai kya….i will cme to heaven ….mujhse permission li kya??? See i m incharge so i will think…..)….

To be continued…

So guys how was the epi??? Do u liked it ..???
Nd shud i give permission to uv to cme to heave??
Do leave ur valuable cmments…

Guys plz can u give a short intro of urself in the comment box…actually i love making friends… so i wanted to know abt my new family only if u r ok wid it..
nd also last tym plz give ur ids all who gve their ids before bt i didnt contacted them… sry guys i m very sry…. i was busy wid studies nd also i m a lazy head…toh hope u will understand it…
Nd also who wnted to give cn give…nd who are nt comfortable giving their ids bt still wantd to contact me then tke mine

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U guys mst be thinking ki yeh bandi mana kr ke fir bhi post kr deti hai….. bt wen i m in extreme tension then my hands automatically starts typing…so as a result a torcher cme dor u ppl….

Love u all??

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