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love story in heaven part 13

Heyy guys ridhima is back again….
Thank u all sooo much for wonderful comments….??…..

This part willl contain the entry of two psycho personalities along wid normal tei family…. i.e.
Crazy nd ridhima….. i hope we will nt bore u…. this is wat i m bound to my promise jo maine nashe ki halat mein kr dia…???….( are mazak hai…sachi nasha nhi kiya….??)…
Sorry in advance…..

Here we go

Part 13

The scene starts wid a sound…..aaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! Which can blast anyones ears….. then we can seee two girls lying on the floor…( or can say fallen…)… wid their faces covered wid hairs…. then finally they stood up settlling themselves nd on seeing each other…..they again shouted Uuuuuuuuuuu…..
Girl 1- are wat r u doing here..???? Hw u die???
Girl2 – huhhhh… tere chakar mein ridhi….
Ridhi- hainnn…??? Mana tera naam crazy hai bt why r u talking like this….mere chakar mein matlab…???
Crazy- huhhhhh… tujhe jump krne mein help ki… piche se police aa gyi…they thought i pushed u…. so i was left wid only 2 options ya toh to jump or going to police….
Ridhi- nd u chose first…
Crazy- naaaa…i was tensed nd was moving…suddenly slipped nd…here i m…
Ridhi- chl sun we r here….so lets have some fun….
Crazy- good idea…. w8 who is he…????
Ridhi- aaa…i think yamraj…
Crazy- oooo….chl lets go to himmm…..
Ridhi- na re already he is soo sad nd frustated….
Crazy- tu toh bore hai…yahin ruk main ja rhi hoon…
Saying this she went from their nd reached near yamraj…. she tapped his shoulder frm behind… he turned nd ws lost somewhere seeing her…??….. they both were lost in sme other world…of eyes….
Ridhima was seeing this frm far….
Ridhi- haye o mere rabba…!!! Isse bhi mil gya…ab main kya karoon…lets find smething…
Saying this ridhi..( guys i will write i instead of ridhi…this is sooo ajeeb to wwrite my name..??)…. goes from their….i reached a room…
Where a few ppl were sitting on seeing that my jaw dropped nd touched the ground….wannna know wat i saw…. okk
I saw arjun bijlani, varun kapoor, mohit sehgal, shahid kappor…. sitting on a sofa….??….
I was sooo happy that tym…not able to belive on my eyes… i was abt to faint wen someone holded me from my shoulders…( are waist mein tickling hoti hai…??)….
My eyes popped out seeing that….nd i left the room immediately…
Wiping my unshed tears….

B.g :-
Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalti rhi..
Mujh ko saza di pyaar ki…ki aisa kya gunaah kiya ki lut gye…haan lut gye hum teri mohabat mein…

After sme tym…i saw crazy sitting their her situation was nt less then mee…she was also crying… ( widout tears…??)… i went near her…nd placed my hand over her shoulder…
I ( concerned)- kya hua…???
Crazy – bahut bura…i will tell u in flashback….
******flashback********
Wen yamraj ndcrazy were lost in each others eyes…
Yamraj- i love u..i love u sooo much… i jst wwanted to spend my rest of the life wid u…( crazy felt butterflies in her stomach nd was sooo happy)…mujhe nhi pta kab kaise kahan tujhse pyaar ho gya… bt i m sry meri jaan… plz that was jst a small mistake….
crazy- which mistake..???
Yamraj- seeing towards her…- aaaahhhhhh !!!! Who r u behn ji…..
Crazy-….BEHN JIIIII…..!!! KISS ANGEL SE MAIN TUJHE BEHN JII LAGTI HOON….
yamraj – sry didi g…..actually meri biwi gussa hoke apne mayke chli gyi…toh ussi ki rehersal kr rha tha….
crazy felt as if evrrything is snatched from her….
yamraj- vaise i made u my behn….sooo will u take care of the place in my absence….mujhe apni biwi ko manane jana hai……
crazy nods nd left the place….
********flashback******
I wass continously laughing….hearing all that..
crazy- chleab acha sa bg music de….
i- okkk….bhaiyaa toh band bajjayein…tan na nan
crazy- huhh….apni bari pe tadap tadap chala diya…mere saath dhoka…
i- acha gussa kyun krti hai ruk….
Crazy- aur todhi der ke liye screen bhi chod….
I- huhhh…
Bg :-Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dil Nashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee

Rukhi Rukhi Sii Yeh Hawa
Aur Sukhe Patte Ki Tarah
Shehar Ki,Sadko Pee Main
Lawaris, Udta Hua
Sau Raste
Par Teri Rah Nahi.Eeee

Sau Dard Hain,Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dilnashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee

While this crazy was remembering her flashback ……nd was crying sukha sukha….

After sme tym…
Crazy- acha wapis aa ja..
Ridhi-okkkk…..
Crazy- vaise madam u too look sad….tere saath kya hua…????
Ridhi- u will nt believe….pta hai mainr saare hot hot ladke ek saath dekhe…i was toh jst abt to faint…( haye yeh maine kya bol diya…)….
Crazy- faint …??? Seriously….she started laughing loudly….
Ridhi wss giving her death glares…
Crazy- acha ok ok…chl bta age kya hua…,???
Ridhi- wen i wss abt to faint… then smeone held me from my shoulder…
Crazy- sachi kaun?????
Ridhi- un sab ki biwiyan…( wives…)….crying….
Crazy started laughing loud…..
After 10 minutes…
Ridhi- acha bas kar ab…huhhh
Crazy- re sun…this is very boring….Hell hai…maza toh aa nhi rha…maine socha maza ayega…huhhh
Ridhi- sun na maza krtein hai…. u r incharge of hell…nd maine sun na anita nd uv are here….
Crazy-haww….aur tu mujhe ab bta rhi hai…chl wat r u w8ing for band bajatein hain…
Saying this both left to the place…..

On the other side….

Anita was checking her face everysecond if her make up is okay or nt… uv was cooking smething in his mind…( haan bichare ke pass dimag toh hai nhi…khali jagah ka use bhi toh krna hai…???..)
Twinj were lost in each others eyes…. everything wss silent until two devils have nt reached the place…..
Hawww…..u thought of us as devils…. nt we… two sachi mein devils…( think of jalad in bigg boss…)…
They were having wooden sticks nd swords in their hands….
Devil 1- wat u thought of his place….??? Ur home…no this is nt….do u get that…
Kunj- huhhhh….who will think of this place as home…. hamare ghar par jalad nhi rehte….
vaise i have seen u smewhere…..oo yes o yes….aap toh bigg boss mein ate hoo na…plz mera ko bhi jana hai…. koi jugaad lagaona…
tw hit him wid her elbow….
tw- u cheater…tum mujhe chod ke akele wapis earth pe jana chahte hoo…u r soooo bad…..jao i will nt talk to u….
kunj-( in mind)- siyappa queen toh pehle se hi thi….ab toh drama queen bhi ban gyi…..
that devil was sooo much frustatrd on the kunj was jst abt to hit him….wen the saviours reached the place….
crazy- excuse me….wat r u doing here..????
Devil- who r u to ask???
Crazy- yamrajs sister….nd new care taker…..
Devils left the place being frightened….

now toh i fainted…..seeing zain nd kunj both over their…..

tw- isse kya hua…????
Crazy- huhhh…fir faint ho gyi…leave her….iska toh roz ka hai…pagal hai puri…..
ridhi woke up hearing this…nd said -Silent ho ja..warna main violent ho jaongiiii…..
crazy- han shahid ka dialogue…jiski biwi abi dekhi tune….
i again felt heartbroken nd left the place….nd sat down on a big rock nearby leaving the rest to crazy…..and………….

to be continued……

so sry guys…??? Today very less twinj seens nd all…bt nxt tym pakka i will add themm….aaj ridhi aur crazy ko jhello….
nd also if anyone of u wanted to enter the hell…let me know….
one member can come…..i will choose the one whose comment we will like the most…..???
nd if u dont like this drama then let me know…i will end this soon…..

Love u all….??

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